Izumi wrote:

star!~

THX >A<

Hi there! As requested, I'll mod your map

[LV.5]
(Doesn't look like a Level 5 to me. Looks more like Level 7 :p)
00:03:786 (3786|6) Delete this note.
00:04:586 (4586|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:04:786 (4786|4) Move to 1st column.
00:06:786 (6786|5) Move to 5th column.
00:06:986 (6986|0,7286|6) Delete these notes.
00:07:586 Try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:10:286 (10286|6) Move to 3rd column.
00:11:886 (11886|0) Move to 5th column.
00:13:386 (13386|0,13686|6) Delete these notes.
00:13:986 Same? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:14:986 (14986|2,15286|2) Delete these notes.
00:15:086 (15086|4,15386|4) Move to 4th column.
00:22:386 Add note in 7th column.
00:42:586 Add note in 6th column.
00:43:586 (43586|1) Move to 1st column.
00:43:586 (43586|5) Move to 7th column.
00:56:586 (56586|6) Delete this note.
00:59:586 (59586|5) Move to 5th column.
00:59:786 (59786|0,60086|6) Delete these notes.
01:02:986 (62986|0) ^
01:06:186 (66186|6,66486|0) ^
01:07:786 (67786|0,68086|6) ^
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) ^ (These ones don't even match the song at all)
01:36:386 From here, I noticed and realized that these patterns are literally a copy & paste without any variations. While this is acceptable in Easy charts, repeating this more than four times can get extremely repetitive and boring. Please arrange your patterns from here onwards to make it different from the rest of the chart.

[LV.10]
HP Drain +1
00:09:586 Add note in 4th column.
00:12:886 (12886|4) Delete this note.
00:43:786 (43786|1,43986|2,44386|2,44586|1,44986|2) Move right by one or two columns.
00:45:586 (45586|4,45986|4,46586|4) Move to 2nd column.
00:45:386 (45386|5,46186|5) Move to 4th column.
00:50:186 (50186|5,50386|4,50786|4,50986|5,51386|4) Move left by two columns.
01:15:886 Add note in 4th column.
01:17:486 ^
01:21:986 Add note in 1st column.
01:51:086 Add note in 2nd or 4th column.
01:51:086 Add note in 1st, 2nd, or 4th column.
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

[LV.16]
HP Drain +1 or 2
00:09:586 Add note in 4th, 5th, or 6th column.
00:24:786 Add note in 4th column.
01:21:986 That's odd... The previous diffs had a Break Time at this point... Why isn't there one here?
01:26:786 (86786|6,86986|5,87186|4,87386|5,87586|4,87786|6,87986|5,88186|4) Delete these notes (unless you're gonna chart the rest of the melody before this part)
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

I don't have much time for now, but I will mod your last chart/diff sometime later. Hope this helps though!

LV.24
02:01:989 - 7 notes

Lv.16
Mind all 2x speed changes, a bit unreadable.

Lv.10
00:54:886 - the two speed changes here is a bit unreadable as in a normal diff. The same for other 2.0x sv changes.
01:10:786 - A sudden slow down.

Lv.5
Speed changes are not suitable for easy diff, I'd like you remove them all.

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! As requested, I'll mod your map

[LV.5]
(Doesn't look like a Level 5 to me. Looks more like Level 7 :p)
00:03:786 (3786|6) Delete this note.
00:04:586 (4586|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:04:786 (4786|4) Move to 1st column.
00:06:786 (6786|5) Move to 5th column.
00:06:986 (6986|0,7286|6) Delete these notes.
00:07:586 Try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:10:286 (10286|6) Move to 3rd column.
00:11:886 (11886|0) Move to 5th column.
00:13:386 (13386|0,13686|6) Delete these notes.
00:13:986 Same? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:14:986 (14986|2,15286|2) Delete these notes.
00:15:086 (15086|4,15386|4) Move to 4th column.
00:22:386 Add note in 7th column.
00:42:586 Add note in 6th column.
00:43:586 (43586|1) Move to 1st column.
00:43:586 (43586|5) Move to 7th column.
00:56:586 (56586|6) Delete this note.
00:59:586 (59586|5) Move to 5th column.
00:59:786 (59786|0,60086|6) Delete these notes.
01:02:986 (62986|0) ^
01:06:186 (66186|6,66486|0) ^
01:07:786 (67786|0,68086|6) ^
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) ^ (These ones don't even match the song at all)
01:36:386 From here, I noticed and realized that these patterns are literally a copy & paste without any variations. While this is acceptable in Easy charts, repeating this more than four times can get extremely repetitive and boring. Please arrange your patterns from here onwards to make it different from the rest of the chart.

[LV.10]
HP Drain +1
00:09:586 Add note in 4th column.
00:12:886 (12886|4) Delete this note.
00:43:786 (43786|1,43986|2,44386|2,44586|1,44986|2) Move right by one or two columns.
00:45:586 (45586|4,45986|4,46586|4) Move to 2nd column.
00:45:386 (45386|5,46186|5) Move to 4th column.
00:50:186 (50186|5,50386|4,50786|4,50986|5,51386|4) Move left by two columns.
01:15:886 Add note in 4th column.
01:17:486 ^
01:21:986 Add note in 1st column.
01:51:086 Add note in 2nd or 4th column.
01:51:086 Add note in 1st, 2nd, or 4th column.
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

[LV.16]
HP Drain +1 or 2
00:09:586 Add note in 4th, 5th, or 6th column.
00:24:786 Add note in 4th column.
01:21:986 That's odd... The previous diffs had a Break Time at this point... Why isn't there one here?
01:26:786 (86786|6,86986|5,87186|4,87386|5,87586|4,87786|6,87986|5,88186|4) Delete these notes (unless you're gonna chart the rest of the melody before this part)
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

I don't have much time for now, but I will mod your last chart/diff sometime later. Hope this helps though!

thanks for your mod

woc2006 wrote:

LV.24
02:01:989 - 7 notes

Lv.16
Mind all 2x speed changes, a bit unreadable.

Lv.10
00:54:886 - the two speed changes here is a bit unreadable as in a normal diff. The same for other 2.0x sv changes.
01:10:786 - A sudden slow down.

Lv.5
Speed changes are not suitable for easy diff, I'd like you remove them all.

开源哥你的图没更新吧，我早就把LV.24那个七键全压改了……

bubbled

Nice map! Ranked~

Congratz~

Congratz \:D/

I haven't finished my mod yet :/
Oh well, congrats anyway :p

Congrats.

when will someone make 5k maps ;_;

LoliFlan wrote:

when will someone make 5k maps ;_;

Why don't you make one yourself?

Congrats to the mapper btw.

Andrea wrote:

Why don't you make one yourself?

Because I map too slow xD.. Plus playing my own maps is boring LOL.

Serious issues here...

• Inconsistent speed changes in LV.16 and LV.24, LV.16 is a lot harder than LV.24
• LV.5 and LV.10 have break time, otherwise don't

~LV.10~
01:52:586 (112586|6) - wrong rhythm, should be at 01:52:686


Speed-change gimmicks also kill the fun, because the gap around those parts aren't consistent. See image below (LV.16 at 00:54:786 - )
It's annoying when you can't guess the rhythm by just using sight reading and you also need to remember exactly where and how the speed changes in each part.

DJPop wrote:

Serious issues here...

• Inconsistent speed changes in LV.16 and LV.24, LV.16 is a lot harder than LV.24
• LV.5 and LV.10 have break time, otherwise don't

~LV.10~
01:52:586 (112586|6) - wrong rhythm, should be at 01:52:686


Speed-change gimmicks also kill the fun, because the gap around those parts aren't consistent. See image below (LV.16 at 00:54:786 - )
It's annoying when you can't guess the rhythm by just using sight reading and you also need to remember exactly where and how the speed changes in each part.

fixed

but I need someone help me unrank my map

Unrank due to serious issue as I mentioned in p/2354573

And mapper decides to unrank this map to fix them.

Will do a full mod when I have time.

While you are at it can you fix the timing slowdown changes at 01:10:786 - for the slowdown parts?
01:13:536 - This speedchange does not go with any note aswell
I found it really annoying that the speeddown is actually happening before the end of the hold note and i thought it was a bug at my first play.
01:36:386 - Same here. The speedup to normal tempo is happening before the end of the hold note. Such speed changes should allways happen at the major beat of the song.

Hanyuu wrote:

While you are at it can you fix the timing slowdown changes at 01:10:786 - for the slowdown parts?
01:13:536 - This speedchange does not go with any note aswell
I found it really annoying that the speeddown is actually happening before the end of the hold note and i thought it was a bug at my first play.
01:36:386 - Same here. The speedup to normal tempo is happening before the end of the hold note. Such speed changes should allways happen at the major beat of the song.

No change

thx

• Mania maps shouldn't have break times. It's also told in AiMod.
• Set preview time at 00:55:986.
• Set audio lead-in 2000
• Use sound mods in LV.24 as a guide when fixing other diffs.
• Part of MP3's name is missing, change from "Mermaid girl- MIX-" to "Mermaid girl - Festa Mix -"
• Tags: change from "19" to "19th", remove "ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK"
• Use timing below:


~LV.5~
○ Don't use any speed changes in this diff.
○ HP 5
00:43:586 (43586|5) - remove
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) - ^

~LV.10~
○ Don't use too much speed changes in this diff (Slow part at 01:10:786 is allowed).
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:086
00:39:186 - add a note
00:48:986 (48986|2) - move to 00:49:086
00:49:186 (49186|0) - remove
00:55:586 - use only 1 long note
00:56:986 (56986|5) - remove
01:14:986 (74986|6) - ^
01:15:086 (75086|4,75286|4,75486|4) - remove
01:15:986 (75986|4) - move to 01:15:886
01:17:586 (77586|2) - move to 01:17:486
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 3
01:36:986 (96986|5) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|2) - move to 01:51:086
01:57:586 (117586|2) - move to 01:57:486

~LV.16~
○ HP 7
00:10:886 (10886|1) - move to 00:10:986
00:12:486 (12486|3) - remove
00:49:186 (49186|4) - ^
00:58:386 (58386|4) - ^
01:04:786 (64786|0) - ^
01:14:852 (74852|4,74919|5) - 1/8 snaps, not 1/6
01:32:386 (92386|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:486 (92486|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:586 (92586|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:686 (92686|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|6,93586|6) - move to lane 6
01:38:386 (98386|4) - remove
01:44:786 (104786|0) - ^

~LV.24~
○ HP 8
Sounds:
00:03:586 - crash
00:09:986 - ^
00:11:586 - ^
00:13:186 - ^
00:13:986 - ^
00:14:786 - ^
00:16:386 - ^
00:22:786 - ^
00:25:986 - ^
00:26:786 - ^
00:27:586 - ^
00:30:786 - ^
00:37:186 - ^
00:38:786 - ^
00:39:186 - ^
00:39:586 - ^
00:40:386 - ^
00:41:986 - ^
00:42:386 - ^
00:43:586 - ^
00:49:986 - ^
00:51:586 - ^
00:51:986 - ^
00:52:386 - ^
00:53:186 - ^
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:386 - ^
01:02:786 - ^
01:06:786 - ^
01:09:186 - ^
01:12:386 - ^
01:15:586 - ^
01:18:786 - ^
01:19:586 - ^
01:20:386 - ^
01:21:186 - ^
01:32:386 - ^
01:33:186 - ^
01:33:586 - ^
01:42:786 - ^
01:48:386 - ^
01:49:186 - ^
01:55:586 - ^
01:59:586 - ^
02:00:386 - ^
02:01:186 - ^
Notes:
00:03:186 (3186|1,3236|2,3286|5,3336|4,3386|1,3436|2,3486|5,3536|4) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:10:886 (10886|0) - move to 00:10:986
00:15:586 (15586|3) - remove
00:19:986 (19986|2) -
00:20:786 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
00:22:986 (22986|5) - move to lane 7, add note at lane 5
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:286, lane 4 or 2
00:28:186 (28186|2) - move to 00:28:086
00:28:286 - add note at lane 3
00:29:186 - good place for speed changes
00:30:386 (30386|6,30436|5,30486|4,30536|3,30586|2,30636|3,30686|4,30736|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:46:436 (46436|5,46486|4,46536|3) - remove, not fit to anything
00:56:036 (56036|5,56086|4,56136|3,56186|2,56236|3,56286|4,56336|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:14:911 (74911|5,74911|1) - remove, not fit to anything
01:15:986 (75986|5) - remove
01:17:586 (77586|0) - move to 01:17:686
01:20:986 (80986|3) - move to 01:20:686
01:20:986 - add note at lane 5
01:21:086 - add note at lane 4
01:32:586 (92586|5) - remove
01:34:436 (94436|1,94486|2,94536|3,94586|4,94636|3,94686|2,94736|1) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:35:086 (95086|6) - end at 01:35:286
01:35:686 - add note at lane 4, shouldn't ignore the sound there
01:35:786 (95786|5,95786|1) - end at 01:35:986
01:43:386 (103386|0) - end at 01:43:586
01:44:786 (104786|3) - move to 01:44:886, lane 3 or 1
01:49:586 (109586|3) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|4) - ^
01:52:186 - add note at lane 6
01:52:786 (112786|1) - remove
01:53:586 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
01:55:986 (115986|6) - remove
01:57:586 (117586|3) - ^
02:00:986 (120986|2) - move to 02:00:886
02:01:086 - add note at lane 3


Too much syncing issues, why is this mapset got ranked in the first place ...

EDIT: Didn't blame the mapper though

lol this dude got told by DJPop omg

DJPop wrote:

• Mania maps shouldn't have break times. It's also told in AiMod.
• Set preview time at 00:55:986.
• Set audio lead-in 2000
• Use sound mods in LV.24 as a guide when fixing other diffs.
• Part of MP3's name is missing, change from "Mermaid girl- MIX-" to "Mermaid girl - Festa Mix -"
• Tags: change from "19" to "19th", remove "ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK"
• Use timing below:

Timings

386,400,4,2,0,30,1,0
9986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10086,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10286,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10386,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10719,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
11586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11686,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
11886,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11986,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
12319,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
12386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
29186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
54786,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
54919,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
55319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55586,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
70786,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
72386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
73986,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
74786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
93186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
95986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
96119,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
96386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
121586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
121719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
121986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0

~LV.5~
○ Don't use any speed changes in this diff.
○ HP 5
00:43:586 (43586|5) - remove
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) - ^

~LV.10~
○ Don't use too much speed changes in this diff (Slow part at 01:10:786 is allowed).
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:086
00:39:186 - add a note
00:48:986 (48986|2) - move to 00:49:086
00:49:186 (49186|0) - remove
00:55:586 - use only 1 long note
00:56:986 (56986|5) - remove
01:14:986 (74986|6) - ^
01:15:086 (75086|4,75286|4,75486|4) - remove
01:15:986 (75986|4) - move to 01:15:886
01:17:586 (77586|2) - move to 01:17:486
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 3
01:36:986 (96986|5) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|2) - move to 01:51:086
01:57:586 (117586|2) - move to 01:57:486

~LV.16~
○ HP 7
00:10:886 (10886|1) - move to 00:10:986
00:12:486 (12486|3) - remove
00:49:186 (49186|4) - ^
00:58:386 (58386|4) - ^
01:04:786 (64786|0) - ^
01:14:852 (74852|4,74919|5) - 1/8 snaps, not 1/6
01:32:386 (92386|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:486 (92486|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:586 (92586|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:686 (92686|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|6,93586|6) - move to lane 6
01:38:386 (98386|4) - remove
01:44:786 (104786|0) - ^

~LV.24~
○ HP 8
Sounds:
00:03:586 - crash
00:09:986 - ^
00:11:586 - ^
00:13:186 - ^
00:13:986 - ^
00:14:786 - ^
00:16:386 - ^
00:22:786 - ^
00:25:986 - ^
00:26:786 - ^
00:27:586 - ^
00:30:786 - ^
00:37:186 - ^
00:38:786 - ^
00:39:186 - ^
00:39:586 - ^
00:40:386 - ^
00:41:986 - ^
00:42:386 - ^
00:43:586 - ^
00:49:986 - ^
00:51:586 - ^
00:51:986 - ^
00:52:386 - ^
00:53:186 - ^
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:386 - ^
01:02:786 - ^
01:06:786 - ^
01:09:186 - ^
01:12:386 - ^
01:15:586 - ^
01:18:786 - ^
01:19:586 - ^
01:20:386 - ^
01:21:186 - ^
01:32:386 - ^
01:33:186 - ^
01:33:586 - ^
01:42:786 - ^
01:48:386 - ^
01:49:186 - ^
01:55:586 - ^
01:59:586 - ^
02:00:386 - ^
02:01:186 - ^
Notes:
00:03:186 (3186|1,3236|2,3286|5,3336|4,3386|1,3436|2,3486|5,3536|4) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:10:886 (10886|0) - move to 00:10:986
00:15:586 (15586|3) - remove
00:19:986 (19986|2) -
00:20:786 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
00:22:986 (22986|5) - move to lane 7, add note at lane 5
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:286, lane 4 or 2
00:28:186 (28186|2) - move to 00:28:086
00:28:286 - add note at lane 3
00:29:186 - good place for speed changes
00:30:386 (30386|6,30436|5,30486|4,30536|3,30586|2,30636|3,30686|4,30736|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:46:436 (46436|5,46486|4,46536|3) - remove, not fit to anything
00:56:036 (56036|5,56086|4,56136|3,56186|2,56236|3,56286|4,56336|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:14:911 (74911|5,74911|1) - remove, not fit to anything
01:15:986 (75986|5) - remove
01:17:586 (77586|0) - move to 01:17:686
01:20:986 (80986|3) - move to 01:20:686
01:20:986 - add note at lane 5
01:21:086 - add note at lane 4
01:32:586 (92586|5) - remove
01:34:436 (94436|1,94486|2,94536|3,94586|4,94636|3,94686|2,94736|1) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:35:086 (95086|6) - end at 01:35:286
01:35:686 - add note at lane 4, shouldn't ignore the sound there
01:35:786 (95786|5,95786|1) - end at 01:35:986
01:43:386 (103386|0) - end at 01:43:586
01:44:786 (104786|3) - move to 01:44:886, lane 3 or 1
01:49:586 (109586|3) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|4) - ^
01:52:186 - add note at lane 6
01:52:786 (112786|1) - remove
01:53:586 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
01:55:986 (115986|6) - remove
01:57:586 (117586|3) - ^
02:00:986 (120986|2) - move to 02:00:886
02:01:086 - add note at lane 3


Too much syncing issues, why is this mapset got ranked in the first place ...

EDIT: Didn't blame the mapper though

Fixed,thx

Nothing changed...?

oh wait please
General
Title should be "Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX-" (Unicode "Mermaid girl -秋葉工房MIX-")
Artist should be "Remixed by DJ Command" (This is how it appears in IIDX)
Source should be "beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle"

DJPop wrote:

Nothing changed...?

I already fixed some notes,and some hitsounds

I think my patterns already good,unneed any pattern suggestion

sorry~~

Frans Niko wrote:

oh wait please
General
Title should be "Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX-" (Unicode "Mermaid girl -秋葉工房MIX-")
Artist should be "Remixed by DJ Command" (This is how it appears in IIDX)
Source should be "beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle"

OK,fixed thx~~

anyway i'm seriously about the source you must fix the source too

remove 19th on tags

good map

Sync wrote:

good map

Thanks

Having this in my queue. Will mod this as soon as possible.
Let's get it back to the level it deserves~

Double post, yo!

[General]

Wrong artist: Artist should be DJ Command not Remixed by DJ Command, lol
Put cream puff into the the tags, since they are the artists of the song.

[LV 10]

Let's fix the barlines from 00:10:036 to 00:12:186



01:10:786 - 0,75x is enough
01:12:186 - remove green line
01:13:586 - remove green line
01:13:986 - x0.75 here
01:14:386 - remove green line
01:15:586 - move green line to 01:14:986
01:14:786 (74786|4,74986|5,75086|3,75186|1,75286|3,75386|5,75486|3) - this could increase the readability of the speedup: http://puu.sh/3Vsdj.jpg but pretty much optional

01:21:986 - do you really want to leave this section empty? this is so unneeded ;_;


[LV 16]

Same barlines as in Lvl 10 please!

patternwise everything seems fine to me
just the break-time is a bit sad and should be mapped ;_;

[LV 24]

Same barlines as in level 10 please! (except 00:54:786 to 00:55:136 and 01:33:186 to 01:36:386)

01:36:136 - move greenline (1,33x one) to 01:36:186

same issue with the break, patterns are fine.

This should be all. Poke me, if you need help applying and/or if you have done everything~

Loctav wrote:

Double post, yo!

[General]

Wrong artist: Artist should be DJ Command not Remixed by DJ Command, lol
Put cream puff into the the tags, since they are the artists of the song.

[LV 10]

Let's fix the barlines from 00:10:036 to 00:12:186



01:10:786 - 0,75x is enough√
01:12:186 - remove green line√
01:13:586 - remove green line√
01:13:986 - x0.75 here√
01:14:386 - remove green line√
01:15:586 - move green line to 01:14:986 √
01:14:786 (74786|4,74986|5,75086|3,75186|1,75286|3,75386|5,75486|3) - this could increase the readability of the speedup: http://puu.sh/3Vsdj.jpg but pretty much optional × so hard with beginner >.>

01:21:986 - do you really want to leave this section empty? this is so unneeded ;_; but,this is LV.10,not LV.24


[LV 16]

Same barlines as in Lvl 10 please!

patternwise everything seems fine to me
just the break-time is a bit sad and should be mapped ;_; I don't know how to remove break time

[LV 24]

Same barlines as in level 10 please! (except 00:54:786 to 00:55:136 and 01:33:186 to 01:36:386) this is LV.24,Another diff,I think this is enough

01:36:136 - move greenline (1,33x one) to 01:36:186 √

same issue with the break, patterns are fine.

This should be all. Poke me, if you need help applying and/or if you have done everything~

Thanks,Loctav

Your speedups are broken. I don't try to enlighten them, but to fix them. The map has been unranked because of these broken speedups, so I hereby recommend you to fix them accordingly to my mod or else I can't help anymore
Also you didnt fix anything, lol

Without providing me reasons why you denied to change anything at all, I must abandon this map and cant offer any support.

Excellent beatmap.

The artist is Remixed by DJ Command actually.
http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/Mermai ... oubou_MIX-
http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/71663 Track 18, Disc 1.

Sadly I can't find any gameplay videos. Not even on Niconico.

"Remix by xxx" is a popular title in some IIDX songs, for remixes of remixes, or something.

MMzz wrote:

The artist is Remixed by DJ Command actually.
http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/Mermai ... oubou_MIX-
http://www.konamistyle.jp/item/71663 Track 18, Disc 1.

Sadly I can't find any gameplay videos. Not even on Niconico.

"Remix by xxx" is a popular title in some IIDX songs, for remixes of remixes, or something.

fixed

Thanks~~

Rebubbled.

I hope I don't get in trouble for rebubbling a o!m map lol. Just a quick artist change. :p

Reranked.

Congratz!

Gratz!!!