Gloria Guard wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]

00:28:889 (3,4,5) I suggest this rhythm. Uhm, I want to create a variety of rhythm too. Using that freaking rhythm all the time will make the diff feel monotone. The rhythm doesn't feel wrong at all anyway.

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01:08:603 01:08:603 (1,2,3,4) This does not fit the rhythm to the beat
i recommend rhythm

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01:43:175 (1) This is spin end why 01:43:175... this part end sound 01:44:318 It has something to do with the previous mp3 lol. Fixed.

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi :3

M4M as requested in-game.

[General]
Try with an offset of 1451 (-10), sounds more accurate for me. Nice , fixed >w<
Rest looks fine.

[Easy]
00:08:318 (4) - *nazi* 1 grid left. lol fixed
00:26:604 (1,2,1,2,1) - This part is a bit repetitive to me, maybe replace 00:31:175 (1,2) with something like 00:22:032 (1,2,3) ? change in last
00:51:175 (2,3) - Maybe this is just me, but I think this would look better as this, I think actually it looks a bit sharp.

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change in other way as i can
01:11:746 (3,1) - In this part I felt the flow was too harsh, maybe make something like this? (3) is in x:200 y:84 and (1) in y:132 y136.

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same as above :3

[Hard]
00:35:175 (4,5,6,7,1) - I think this part could follow the shape of 00:33:175 (1). Nice idea! :3
01:28:175 (6,1) - This looks a bit sharp imo, try making this flow a bit smoother. err, it's okay imo
Oh well, there are many sounds of piano not mapped, but if they were, the gap between Normal and Hard would be too hugh.

That'd be all from my part, nice song and map :3
Good luck with this o/
Actually I feel bad as you modded 6 diffs and I just 3, so feel free to ask me for a mod whenever you want. it's okay, your mod is good and my mod is bad =w=

Updated

DakeDekaane wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]
I'll just put some suggestions to lower a bit the difficulty in some parts, I felt it a bit high considering the BPM.
00:12:032 (2) - You could remove this, as I think you're following vocals most of the time. Done.
00:16:032 (2) - Maybe this too, but it fits with vocals, so feel free to ignore this one. Yeah, definitely not this...
00:21:746 (2) - I'd remove this, the next part is full of objects and there should be at least a little 1/1 break, and this is the only place I could find. This spot just "demands" to be mapped orz
00:42:032 (3,4) - I think this could sound better if you do (3) a 1/1 beat slider and put (4) in 00:42:889, like here, you could also joint (4) and (5) into a slider.
Did the second.
00:59:460 (2) - Consider adding a note here, sounds a bit empty in comparison with 01:18:603 (2,3,1) Following the louder instrument here.
01:18:603 (2,3,1) - Also here. Uhm?

1. Hinsvar's Normal has different preview time. Please fix this, it's unrankable.
2. Same, Hinsvar's Normal has different video lead-in, also fix this.

1. AR -1 for better spread? Normal has AR 4, so it will be good idea to decrease this diff AR by 1.
2. 00:24:308 (2) - Please reduce this slider length by 1/2 because there is no heavy beat on 00:25:450 -, it's kinda awkward to hear. Following the music is more important than having different rhythm.
3. 00:35:736 (3) - Same as above case, please reduce this slider length by 1/2 too.
4. 01:32:879 (1) - Nazi, but can you move this slider end point to 172 200? Blanket will be more good if you do this.
5. 01:38:593 (1) - New combo bug, add nc here please.
   The rest is pretty good. Good job :3

1. Don't forget to fix those unrankable stuff that i has mention in general section~
2. 00:28:879 (5) - This slider end doesn't follow the music properly imo since there is no strong beat at 00:30:022 -. It will be nice if you remove the repeat of this slider, and then add circle at 00:29:736 - and 00:30:308 -. This rhythm fit the music perfectly imo.
   Nice, i can't found anything besides that stuff. Great job~

1. 00:00:889 (1) - Unsnapped circle ><
2. 00:01:175 (2) - ^
3. 00:26:593 (1) - I think finish is more appropiate compare to whistle at this slider start. It will keep finish consistencies too~
4. 00:45:450 (3) - Whistle at this slider end? Feels empty there.
5. 01:13:165 (2) - I feel this part is quite empty because there is no whistle here. How about adding a whistle here and then here 01:13:736 (4) - at sldier start and 01:14:308 (1) - slider start too? It's good to hear imo.

Heanday wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]

First play Sounds good !

00:05:450 (7) - NC Why should I? I'm following how the stanza goes. I'm only applying NCs every beginning of a stanza here; I'm not gonna follow the vocal.
00:06:022 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:14:593 (4) - NC ^
00:15:165 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:26:593 (1) - Rework curve of this one, just a lit How should I rework it? I don't see any reason why should I do it.
00:47:165 (4) - Same here ^
01:05:450 (4) - ^ ^

Miya wrote:

General

1. Hinsvar's Normal has different preview time. Please fix this, it's unrankable. It's from Xinely's side actually; her diffs' preview point is unsnapped.
2. Same, Hinsvar's Normal has different video lead-in, also fix this. Done.

Normal

1. Don't forget to fix those unrankable stuff that i has mention in general section~ lol
2. 00:28:879 (5) - This slider end doesn't follow the music properly imo since there is no strong beat at 00:30:022 -. It will be nice if you remove the repeat of this slider, and then add circle at 00:29:736 - and 00:30:308 -. This rhythm fit the music perfectly imo. Made a slider instead, but yeah, should be similar.
   Nice, i can't found anything besides that stuff. Great job~

Miya wrote:

Hi~

General

1. Hinsvar's Normal has different preview time. Please fix this, it's unrankable. it's my fault, unsnapped in easy and hard, so fix in my diff about preview time
2. Same, Hinsvar's Normal has different video lead-in, also fix this. he is baka ``

Easy

1. AR -1 for better spread? Normal has AR 4, so it will be good idea to decrease this diff AR by 1. yes
2. 00:24:308 (2) - Please reduce this slider length by 1/2 because there is no heavy beat on 00:25:450 -, it's kinda awkward to hear. Following the music is more important than having different rhythm. okay
3. 00:35:736 (3) - Same as above case, please reduce this slider length by 1/2 too.^
4. 01:32:879 (1) - Nazi, but can you move this slider end point to 172 200? Blanket will be more good if you do this.lol fixed
5. 01:38:593 (1) - New combo bug, add nc here please.done
   The rest is pretty good. Good job :3

Hard

1. 00:00:889 (1) - Unsnapped circle >< done ><
2. 00:01:175 (2) - ^ ^
3. 00:26:593 (1) - I think finish is more appropiate compare to whistle at this slider start. It will keep finish consistencies too~ but easy and normal don't use finish, just want consistency :3
4. 00:45:450 (3) - Whistle at this slider end? Feels empty there. add in (4)'s head due Heanday's mod :3
5. 01:13:165 (2) - I feel this part is quite empty because there is no whistle here. How about adding a whistle here and then here 01:13:736 (4) - at sldier start and 01:14:308 (1) - slider start too? It's good to hear imo. fixed but 01:14:593 - remove whistle due i hate whistle and whistle again, seems "tukang parkir" /runs

Besides those unrankable stuff, i think the map is very good. Fix those, and i'll be glad to recheck this :3 thank you :3

Thanks 4 mod Miya and Heanday (i forget which i fixed but useful mod Heanday

1. Just notice, offset -10 please. Current offset is a bit late.

1. 00:17:593 (1) - Ups, didn't notice this, this spinner have 1/4 distance is that is too surprising for easy diff. Please make this spinner start at 00:18:022 - but land on the same time, 00:19:736 -.
2. 00:35:736 (1) - Forgot to add finish and whistle and clap at this slider start, repeat, and end? ><
3. 00:37:736 (1) - Same, this spinner should start at 00:38:022 - but end at 00:40:308 - .

1. 01:39:879 (1) - Make this whistle volume 10% too like other diff?