1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions
   

• 
  
  Fine!

1. 00:49:070 (4) - This slider should be ended at 00:50:070 - , so that it can keep the consistent with 00:46:403 (1) - .
2. 01:10:403 (1) - Highly recommend adding finish to the head of slider, the music has stress here (´・ω・`) .
3. 03:31:736 (1) - ^^^^^^
4. 03:42:403 (1) - ^^^
5. 01:20:736 (3,1) - I feel like mapping here such as this... just because I want to click something which is on long white ticks such as 01:21:070 - .
   
6. 01:55:736 (3) - Also I would like to add finish to the 3 points of 01:55:736 (3) - , it makes good sense for me xD.
7. 03:05:070 (1) - It looks not so great to me... You do not need to keep the spacing 1.20x in the whole map, I suggest using 1.5x for this part mapping.

1. 00:13:069 (4,5) - Why (4) is in 1.21x spacing but (5) is in 1.35x spacing? I guess it should be keep the same spacing.. :<
2. 00:15:403 (3,4,5) - Okay, it seems that it's on your purpose.. But I really do not like such this arrragement.
3. 00:32:403 (6) - Missing clap?
4. 01:03:403 (3,4) - I think a 1/2 slider is enough to map here, it is no need to change it into a note and a slider instead. (Three 1/2 sliders sounds good to me xD)
5. 01:05:070 - Q.Q Why not put something here? You just use a slider to make a passing. It's no problem if here is only vocal, but in fact it has also an emphasis, so I may choose to put something on the long white tick and not use yours.
6. 01:37:070 - ^^
7. 03:26:236 (2) - ^^^
8. 01:06:236 (5) - Move it to x:428 y:288 （这样斜着头看会更顺眼.-.）
9. 02:10:236 (4) - Hmm... Remove the whistle which is on the head of slider?
10. 03:05:569 (2) - It looks not so great to me... You do not need to keep the spacing 1.20x in the whole map, I suggest using 1.5x for this part mapping.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Raaaaaandom mod!

1. Red - Important or Issue
   
2. Blue - You'd better fix them
   
3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]

• 
  
  Fine!

[Normal]

1. 00:49:070 (4) - This slider should be ended at 00:50:070 - , so that it can keep the consistent with 00:46:403 (1) - . ok
2. 01:10:403 (1) - Highly recommend adding finish to the head of slider, the music has stress here (´・ω・`) .
3. 03:31:736 (1) - ^^^^^^
4. 03:42:403 (1) - ^^^ ok
5. 01:20:736 (3,1) - I feel like mapping here such as this... just because I want to click something which is on long white ticks such as 01:21:070 - .
   well I think this one is fine :3
6. 01:55:736 (3) - Also I would like to add finish to the 3 points of 01:55:736 (3) - , it makes good sense for me xD. yeah
7. 03:05:070 (1) - It looks not so great to me... You do not need to keep the spacing 1.20x in the whole map, I suggest using 1.5x for this part mapping. well I think they are fine..not so weird imo

[Hard]

1. 00:13:069 (4,5) - Why (4) is in 1.21x spacing but (5) is in 1.35x spacing? I guess it should be keep the same spacing.. :<
2. 00:15:403 (3,4,5) - Okay, it seems that it's on your purpose.. But I really do not like such this arrragement. well..yeah
3. 00:32:403 (6) - Missing clap? nah it is on purpose. the music is silence here
4. 01:03:403 (3,4) - I think a 1/2 slider is enough to map here, it is no need to change it into a note and a slider instead. (Three 1/2 sliders sounds good to me xD) not sure about this now.. I will keep it in mind
5. 01:05:070 - Q.Q Why not put something here? You just use a slider to make a passing. It's no problem if here is only vocal, but in fact it has also an emphasis, so I may choose to put something on the long white tick and not use yours.
6. 01:37:070 - ^^
7. 03:26:236 (2) - ^^^ yeah I will try to change these
8. 01:06:236 (5) - Move it to x:428 y:288 （这样斜着头看会更顺眼.-.）well...fine for me currently
9. 02:10:236 (4) - Hmm... Remove the whistle which is on the head of slider? I think the slider fits pretty nicely here
10. 03:05:569 (2) - It looks not so great to me... You do not need to keep the spacing 1.20x in the whole map, I suggest using 1.5x for this part mapping.

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Excellent!! w
妮妮好棒 曲子也好听w！

• Useless Green line

1. Fine.
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
2. 找不到槽点
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
3. 没问题

• 
  
  Useless Green line

1. 没问题
   
   
   Rhythm
   
   
2. 01:49:403 (5,6,7,1) - 5和7的位置调了调感觉能好些。
   
   
   
   
   Sound Effect
   
   
3. 声音太小了......

JoJo wrote:

板凳
妮妮鬼畜发自真心

1. 没问题

1. 虽说BPM比较低，但是因为重叠和排列原因感觉AR8很舒服吧
2. 00:12:236 (2) - 因为是2个重音，所以感觉用2个note按着很带感
3. 00:13:069 (4,5) - 感觉有点快的吧，大概用一个来回slider从00:13:070 - 到00:13:403 - 再返回来不错
4. 00:14:903 (2) - 也可以不变，多点节奏的变换大概吧
5. 00:15:736 (4,5) - ^
6. 00:23:070 - 这里大概有个音吧，建议去掉00:22:903 (2) - ，然后00:22:403 (1) - 做成来回
7. 00:23:236 (3) - 蓝线其它感觉好快，掌握不了这节奏，因为要说节奏的话是从00:23:570 - 开始，人声的话从00:23:403 - 开始，所以建议remove，然后就在00:23:403 - 下个note就行了
8. 00:24:236 (6) - 白线上有个节奏，建议remove就直接在白线上放个note
9. 00:47:569 (4,5,6,7) - 红线起头比蓝线起头好
10. 00:55:569 (4,5,6) - ^

Rewrite wrote:

[Normal]

1. 没问题

[Hard]

1. 虽说BPM比较低，但是因为重叠和排列原因感觉AR8很舒服吧
2. 00:12:236 (2) - 因为是2个重音，所以感觉用2个note按着很带感
3. 00:13:069 (4,5) - 感觉有点快的吧，大概用一个来回slider从00:13:070 - 到00:13:403 - 再返回来不错
4. 00:14:903 (2) - 也可以不变，多点节奏的变换大概吧
5. 00:15:736 (4,5) - ^
6. 00:23:070 - 这里大概有个音吧，建议去掉00:22:903 (2) - ，然后00:22:403 (1) - 做成来回
7. 00:23:236 (3) - 蓝线其它感觉好快，掌握不了这节奏，因为要说节奏的话是从00:23:570 - 开始，人声的话从00:23:403 - 开始，所以建议remove，然后就在00:23:403 - 下个note就行了
8. 00:24:236 (6) - 白线上有个节奏，建议remove就直接在白线上放个note
9. 00:47:569 (4,5,6,7) - 红线起头比蓝线起头好
10. 00:55:569 (4,5,6) - ^

1. 00:36:736 (2,3) - 3/4的位置比較奇怪, 在36:736開始3/4折返slider, 38:070放圈不是比較合音樂嗎
2. 01:03:736 (x) - 下note
3. 02:18:403 (x) - 下note
4. 03:11:070 (1) - 移掉new combo flow比較好
5. 03:25:736 (1) - 我看到的時候讚嘆了一下, 前面KIAI都沒擺這裡擺了正好, 或許可以做點SV上的小變化

1. 主歌的部分, 由於打了比較自創的節奏和一些slider造成白線上沒object的情形, 造成你whistle有點亂, 沒有2/4白線可能性的時候, 我建議都移到跟鼓重疊:
2. 00:26:403 (4) - 移到尾
3. 00:31:736 (4) - ^
4. 00:37:070 (4) - ^, 這個甚至可以砍了只在37:236下圈, 因為37:403才有鋼琴, 可以讓人了解到slider在做什麼
5. 第二段沒鼓了, 維持原樣或把whistle都挪後一個藍線都可以
6. 副歌沒問題
7. 03:12:403 (8) - 可以開始clap
8. 03:26:236 (1) - 值得new combo的程度
9. 03:35:736 (5) - 把finish換成whistle, 或者前面的KIAI對應的把whistle換成finish

loveFantasy wrote:

隨機路過 一些建議

[Normal]

1. 00:36:736 (2,3) - 3/4的位置比較奇怪, 在36:736開始3/4折返slider, 38:070放圈不是比較合音樂嗎 嗯是
2. 01:03:736 (x) - 下notek
3. 02:18:403 (x) - 下notek
4. 03:11:070 (1) - 移掉new combo flow比較好k
5. 03:25:736 (1) - 我看到的時候讚嘆了一下, 前面KIAI都沒擺這裡擺了正好, 或許可以做點SV上的小變化 Normal不太习惯做sv change啊

整個來說, 3/4分配不均而且下的比較太隨興了一些, 尤其vocal切分音多副歌的3/4 bass又很明顯, 可以考慮KIAI內下一些的 嗯啊确实总是基本想到哪摆到哪了

[Hard]

1. 主歌的部分, 由於打了比較自創的節奏和一些slider造成白線上沒object的情形, 造成你whistle有點亂, 沒有2/4白線可能性的時候, 我建議都移到跟鼓重疊:嗯啊当时下完就感觉意外了怎么下成这样
2. 00:26:403 (4) - 移到尾k
3. 00:31:736 (4) - ^k
4. 00:37:070 (4) - ^, 這個甚至可以砍了只在37:236下圈, 因為37:403才有鋼琴, 可以讓人了解到slider在做什麼k
5. 第二段沒鼓了, 維持原樣或把whistle都挪後一個藍線都可以
6. 副歌沒問題
7. 03:12:403 (8) - 可以開始clapk
8. 03:26:236 (1) - 值得new combo的程度k
9. 03:35:736 (5) - 把finish換成whistle, 或者前面的KIAI對應的把whistle換成finishk

整個來說, 音效太輕吧..嗯啊不过暂时没想出别的下法 感觉也不适合很响的下法

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
泥轰artist确定要空格么，tag建议至少加上泥轰sourcek
我觉得offset需要至少-6，1064最多了k

[Normal]
00:26:403 (3) - 第三个点可以往上一格k
00:46:403 (1) - 这里也可以修一修k
00:57:070 (1) - out of screenk
关于音效我觉得00:14:070 (4) - 和00:46:070 (4) - 这两种地方可以全加上whistle 觉得太吵了

[Hard]
00:58:070 - unsnapped slider endk
01:15:069 (7) - 感觉这个可以往上点，虽然spacing都一样但是由于朝向，6到7比7到8难不少k
01:49:403 (5) - 这跳的感觉有点大，这里是平缓段，感觉不用这三星巴克0.0 stack到6上如何感觉还行
02:40:736 (9,10) - 距离再开点弄成正方形么，感觉更合曲点不太喜欢正方形 最近用太多了
03:26:736 (2) - 往右挪点么0.0 感觉下面的跳有点大k

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