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DJ YOSHITAKA - VALLIS-NERIA [Taiko|Osu]

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- SB DangYang -
[quote="Flower"]Hi~ PM request~

[DangYang's Muzukashii]
Taiko mapping is very free in style, so my moddings are mostly suggestions. You can ignore if you think yours play better.
SV -> 1.4
建议OD改回5因为Muzu不是靠判定松才成为Muzu 这谱子就是MUZUKASHII里比较难的那种,降下OD更适合某些光头DT。。
00:03:180 (4) - d 以造成段落感 好评。
00:10:316 (16,1,2) - 莫名 其实00:09:018 (15) - 可以改成spinner 这里大概是我当时忘记删了?!
00:19:397 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 按照muzu的风格可以改成这样: 我还是认为我自己这样比较好XD

00:23:937 (25) - d 因为这里不是高音也不是重音 感觉也不合拍
00:27:018 (39,40) - 交换d k
00:28:316 (47) - k 因为顺着前面红线k的梗
00:30:099 (56) - k
00:31:883 (67) - k 可以更简单地表现段落感
00:34:640 (79,80) - k
00:36:424 (87) - 建议这里跟鼓点,删掉,然后00:36:586 (88) - 移到00:36:586 (88) -
00:37:640 (2) - 可删,看你感觉
00:40:234 (2) - ^
00:43:721 (21) - k 顺着跟高音的梗
00:44:207 (23) - 去掉 营造段落感
00:48:018 (2) - 可删
00:50:613 (2) - ^
00:54:099 (21) - k
00:54:585 (23) - 去掉
00:56:856 (34,35,1,2) - 这里是切分音,同00:36:424 (87) -
后面的部分都是一样的东西了 如果前面改了后面就跟着改吧

花花真是神MOD。上面这些建议真的太棒了。就是那几个三连我觉得还是要的。其余的都改了XD,感谢花花~
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Flower wrote:

Hi~ PM request~

[Basic]
00:25:559 - 这里太空了啊 + note --fixed
00:25:883 - 00:26:532 - slider --fixed
00:33:667 (3) - repeat --fixed
00:37:559 (1) - 去掉,因为和转盘太近了,转盘改在这里结束 --fixed
00:46:640 (1) - 太短了 改成一个长滑条 --fixed
00:56:694 (1) - ^ --这里有一个小节了,而且也不短吧
01:16:478 (1,1) - 改成一个转盘因为太短了 -fixed
01:27:829 (1,1) - 两个之间的间隔太短了 建议重新考虑,其中可以删掉01:27:829 (1) - 并且加break --加了break
01:33:018 - 这里同00:25:559 - ,不说了 -fixed
01:41:126 (3) - repeat -fixed
01:42:424 (1,1) - 同 00:37:559 (1) - -fixed
01:54:099 (1) - 同00:46:640 (1) - -fixed
其实没必要做成Easy,做成3星Normal一样可以 Medium当Normal+

[Medium]
节奏一塌糊涂 remap plz
PS:请跟着旋律下 因为自创节奏容易蠢 -冲做完了

Laogong Jiayou
谢谢老婆~
Cihyaa
hi from pm

small don = d , small kat = k
BIG don = D , BIG kat = K
del = delet

[DangYang's Muzukashii]
  1. 00:16:478 change k
  2. 00:36:099 add d
  3. 01:18:829 (104,106) - change k
[Yia's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:17:937 add d
  2. 00:30:586 (95,96) - change k k
  3. 00:36:991 add d
  4. 00:48:734 change D
  5. 01:03:343 add k
  6. 01:08:532 add k
  7. 01:17:370 and 01:17:694 add k
  8. 01:29:289 change k
  9. 01:38:045 (70,71) - change k k
  10. 01:45:829 change D
  11. 01:56:207 change D
good map ~ !

go go rank >w<//
Rotte
Hi~

[General]


  1. 没什么问题

[Easy]


  • Useless Green line
  1. Fine

    Rhythm

  2. 00:21:991 (1,2) - 挪到179|123,你这之前的位置看起来就怪怪的
  3. 00:28:802 (1) - 删掉spinner改成note,不要偷懒
  4. 00:34:964 (1) - 同上
  5. 00:38:694 - 鼓点这么重确定不放note么
  6. 00:41:289 - 同上
  7. 00:42:748 (3,4) - 请使用slider
  8. 00:49:072 - 这种重鼓点咱不提了,后面野牛自己听听
  9. 00:53:126 (1,2) - 同 00:42:748 (3,4) -
  10. 00:56:694 (1) - 这里放spinner不合适
  11. 01:36:262 (1) - 这里放spinner不合适,删掉做成note群
  12. 01:42:424 (1) - 为什么总是无故spinner这么多....



    Sound Effect

  13. 没问题吧?

[Medium]


  • Useless Green line
  1. Fine



    Rhythm

  2. 00:25:559 (4) - 完全多余,删掉吧
  3. 00:33:667 (1) - 莫名spinner又来了,当遇到无法处理的节奏请多mod而不是一个spinner直接略过啊
  4. 00:38:045 - 同easy,里重音全在红线上,后面不再赘述
  5. 00:44:045 (3,4,5,6,1) - 五边形形状?
  6. 00:47:937 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1) - 为什么是纯复制啊!!!omg..
  7. 01:33:018 (2) - 同 00:25:559 (4) - ,既不适合音乐,声音又低,显然不符合音乐,这样的话这个note留着有什么用?
  8. 01:34:316 - 确定这儿不放note?
  9. 01:41:126 (1) - 莫名spinner又来了oh,no!!
  10. 01:45:018 (1,2,1) - 节奏处理明显有问题啊!咱还是给你例子吧
    这一段的01:45:018 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) -
  11. 01:53:775 (1) - 不说了.......
  12. 01:55:397 (1,2,1,1,2,1) - 参照01:45:018 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2) -
  13. 02:04:153 (1) - 偷懒,改成 note群



    Sound Effect

  14. 没问题吧?

[Hard]


  • Useless Green line
  1. 没问题


    Rhythm

  2. 00:09:180 (1) - 参照咱给的例子
  3. 00:20:694 (1) - 又来了
  4. 00:22:153 (2) - 野牛啊,这个你要自己听,看是你的合适还是咱的节奏合适
  5. 00:37:721 (2) - 这里应该用一个note,为了强调重音
  6. 00:40:315 (2) - 同上
  7. 00:39:018 - 这里为什么不加上一个比较响的音效?这样效果会很好
  8. 00:57:180 (5,6,7) - 需要自行加上效果音以促进这个note的存在感
  9. 01:05:126 (3,4,5) - 这个3stream用在这儿不合适
  10. 01:45:180 (2) - 同 00:37:721 (2) - 后面不再赘述
  11. 02:04:640 (6,7,8) - 阿卡林式note,需要加音效

    Sound Effect

  12. 加在Rhythm里面了

说句不好听的吧,问题还是很多的,就拿easy来说吧,槽点非常多,咱只是说了很明显的一些地方,功底不够啊,还是需要多做.
[Kirisame-Marisa]

Cihyaa wrote:

hi from pm

small don = d , small kat = k
BIG don = D , BIG kat = K
del = delet

[Yia's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:17:937 add d fixed
  2. 00:30:586 (95,96) - change k k X
  3. 00:36:991 add d X
  4. 00:48:734 change D X
  5. 01:03:343 add k Fixed
  6. 01:08:532 add k Fixed
  7. 01:17:370 and 01:17:694 add k X
  8. 01:29:289 change k Fixed
  9. 01:38:045 (70,71) - change k k X
  10. 01:45:829 change D X
  11. 01:56:207 change D X
good map ~ !

go go rank >w<//
Thanks Cihyaa's mod

update
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Yuki-kun
Hi~
M4M from my queue.~ :D

General

Inconsistency in Combo Colour:

- [DangYang's Muzukashii] :
Combo1 : 5,5,240
Combo2 : 255,0,0

- [Yia's Taiko Oni] :


Also, the current combo color is too bright and it's very hard too see with the your BG.

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Basic] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:37:559, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:018, ends on 02:05:775

- [CorruptEXT] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:21:991, ends on 00:22:072
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:58:316, ends on 01:19:072
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:29:451, ends on 01:29:532

- [DangYang's Muzukashii] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:21:991, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:29:451, ends on 02:05:775

- [Extreme] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:37:559, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:018, ends on 02:05:775

- [Flower's Another] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:42:748, ends on 00:47:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:53:126, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:08:694, ends on 01:08:775
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:50:207, ends on 01:55:397
Kiai #5: Starts on 02:00:586, ends on 02:05:775

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:37:559, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:018, ends on 02:05:775

- [Medium] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:37:559, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:45:018, ends on 02:05:775

- [Yia's Taiko Oni] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:21:991, ends on 00:58:316
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:29:451, ends on 02:05:775

Due to the rules about kiai time said that it can be different in GD, I post here just in case if MAT/BAT told you to change.

-- Something is wrong with your skin. The aproaching circle is not fit perfect with hitcircle.

-- Your current normal-clap's volume is really too low. Raise it up by using some sound editor. I can make it for you if you want.


My Mod

[Basic]

00:27:018 (1,2) - I think this part is out of rhythm. How about this?
00:29:126 (1) - Remove repeat and end this at 00:29:613
00:34:316 (1,1) - This is too fast for a new player.
00:37:559 (1) - From this, you used soft custom hitsound, but it's too silence with loud music like this. Can you raise the volume up a bit? :o

[Medium]
---- Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
02:04:086 - snap to 02:04:072

00:44:045 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make this flower more beautiful.
01:04:153 (2) - Stack with 01:02:856 (3) -
01:32:045 (1,2) - Don't make error distance like this in Easy/Normal diff.
01:41:126 (1,2,3) - I can say this is overlap. How about this?
01:51:505 (3) - Move this to x:288 y:32
02:01:883 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make this flower nicer.

[Hard]
00:07:072 (3) - Boring~
01:51:829 (2) - Stack with 01:50:694 (2) -
02:04:153 (4) - Almost become silence since the soft hitsound volume is too low.

Well, i mod only 3 diff cause you said it.
Good luck~ <3
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
M4M from my queue.~ :D

General

Inconsistency in Combo Colour:

- [DangYang's Muzukashii] :
Combo1 : 5,5,240
Combo2 : 255,0,0

- [Yia's Taiko Oni] :


Also, the current combo color is too bright and it's very hard too see with the your BG. --oh..don't worry...It's taiko diff


-- Something is wrong with your skin. The aproaching circle is not fit perfect with hitcircle. --Yes....hitcircle looks like bigger..I'll revise it..

-- Your current normal-clap's volume is really too low. Raise it up by using some sound editor. I can make it for you if you want. --oh,thanks.However I still want to amend the hitsounds on myself



My Mod

[Basic]

00:27:018 (1,2) - I think this part is out of rhythm. How about this? --I think now it's fine
00:29:126 (1) - Remove repeat and end this at 00:29:613 --I think now it's fine
00:34:316 (1,1) - This is too fast for a new player. --I think it's ok
00:37:559 (1) - From this, you used soft custom hitsound, but it's too silence with loud music like this. Can you raise the volume up a bit? :o --OK,fixed

[Medium]
---- Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
02:04:086 - snap to 02:04:072 --OK,fixed

00:44:045 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make this flower more beautiful. --OK,fixed
01:04:153 (2) - Stack with 01:02:856 (3) - --OK,fixed
01:32:045 (1,2) - Don't make error distance like this in Easy/Normal diff. --OK,fixed
01:41:126 (1,2,3) - I can say this is overlap. How about this?
--Ummm....I only see Image but no picture...
01:51:505 (3) - Move this to x:288 y:32 --OK,fixed
02:01:883 (3,4,5,6,1) - Make this flower nicer. --OK,fixed

[Hard]
00:07:072 (3) - Boring~ --OK,fixed.change two sliders
01:51:829 (2) - Stack with 01:50:694 (2) - --OK,fixed
02:04:153 (4) - Almost become silence since the soft hitsound volume is too low. --OK,fixed.I change normal hitsound now

Well, i mod only 3 diff cause you said it.
Good luck~ <3
thank you very much~<3
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

Rotte wrote:

Hi~

[General]


  1. 没什么问题
--Easy Normal全重做了,所以这里从Hard开始看


[Hard]


  • Useless Green line
  1. 没问题


    Rhythm

  2. 00:09:180 (1) - 参照咱给的例子 --恩参考之后自己修改了下
  3. 00:20:694 (1) - 又来了 --这里没有问题
  4. 00:22:153 (2) - 野牛啊,这个你要自己听,看是你的合适还是咱的节奏合适 --考虑到这是hard的原因这里摆成这样,而且节奏我听着也没问题
  5. 00:37:721 (2) - 这里应该用一个note,为了强调重音 --我觉得这里毫无问题,RB原谱这里的clap节奏都没有忽略,存在即合理
  6. 00:40:315 (2) - 同上 --同上
  7. 00:39:018 - 这里为什么不加上一个比较响的音效?这样效果会很好 --这里原音就够响了用soft音效不是更能反应乐曲本身?
  8. 00:57:180 (5,6,7) - 需要自行加上效果音以促进这个note的存在感 --改成了circle+slider
  9. 01:05:126 (3,4,5) - 这个3stream用在这儿不合适 --你把playback Rate调慢听听就可以听出完全就是这样。另外我稍微看过原谱也是3连
  10. 01:45:180 (2) - 同 00:37:721 (2) - 后面不再赘述 --同之前的,这个slider尾本来就有clap,而且我觉得这个作为MUG曲有原谱面参考这样放并不是没合理性
  11. 02:04:640 (6,7,8) - 阿卡林式note,需要加音效 --修改方法同00:57:180 (5,6,7) -

    Sound Effect

  12. 加在Rhythm里面了

说句不好听的吧,问题还是很多的,就拿easy来说吧,槽点非常多,咱只是说了很明显的一些地方,功底不够啊,还是需要多做.
thanks a lot~
Yuki-kun
*Don't KDS this post*

Very sr, i accidently deleted picture in my account because st is wrong with my puush :o
About that part 01:41:126 (1,2,3) in medium diff , here it is.

http://puu.sh/2LWov.jpg

Just my opinion, because it make more sense than your current pattern imo.
Kotone
SPOILER
[General]
  1. Skin maker is unnecessary in Tags.
[Basic]
00:06:424 (1) - Add a hitsounds to enrich the music?Maybe finish or whistle.
00:23:775 (1) - Remove the Newcombo here.It's unmeaning.
00:30:748 (3) - Same.Remove the Newcombo.
00:34:316 (1) - I dont know why you add a short spinner here,which is so close to other note(It isnt a good idea of low difficult)and it'd better if you use slider or circle instead.
上街。S/L大法
Skystar
[General]
  1. 不得不吐槽這combo color 2在edit test的時候帶著BG完全跟看不到一樣...
[Extreme]
  1. 00:19:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 請善用轉角功能.
  2. 00:30:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 右邊的1234跟左邊的5678對稱一下.
  3. 00:22:316 (4) - 這3/4節奏打起來略奇怪, 建議換成1/2.
  4. 00:32:694 (4) - 同上, 不過這個反而還挺順的, 你自己決定.
  5. 00:45:343 (1) - 節奏不跟後面保持一致? 01:52:802 (1) -
  6. 00:53:775 (5) - 這裡應該是三連節奏, 你前面也下了三連這卻沒下.
  7. 00:56:694 (4) - 這裡節奏應該是: http://puu.sh/2PQRJ.jpg
  8. 00:58:316 (1) - 這段全程circle段我喜歡, 做得很好.
  9. 01:00:424 (7,8,9,10,11) - 還是得吐槽下這5連不要太難看, 修好點: http://puu.sh/2PQAp.jpg
  10. 01:03:018 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ 因為你這段的三連用的都是直線三連, 所以這種五連最好也不要太弧線.
  11. 01:05:613 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
  12. 01:08:207 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^
  13. 01:25:559 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 這串太難看了...擺好點吧.
  14. 01:34:964 (5,6) - 這6可以再難看點?
  15. 01:59:613 (2) - ^
  16. 02:01:234 (1) - 又到這個地方了, 同前面, 應該是三連.
  17. 02:03:424 (2,3) - 這間距有點confusing, 把3那組拉遠點.
  18. 02:04:640 (3,4,5) - 這節奏錯了: http://puu.sh/2PQTI.jpg
[Flower]
  1. 00:35:613 (7,8,9,10) - 間距難看, 還是保持一致吧.
  2. 01:33:343 (1,1) - 這2個沒必要NC吧
  3. 01:35:289 (6,1) - 做一下blanket
  4. 02:04:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 用多邊形工具擺啊, 拒絕手擺從我做起.
[屎爺]
  1. 00:13:883 (1,2) - overlap
  2. 00:45:991 (3) - 藍線節奏不考慮一下?
  3. 00:58:316 (1) - 嗎的這段不要太神, 打起來太爽.
  4. 01:21:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這有點不近人情了, 打起來完全卡手, 建議換梗.
  5. 01:53:451 (3) - 同00:45:991 (3) -
抱歉有點短, 花花跟吃屎爺的diff沒甚麼能挑的.
Flower

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

[Flower]
  1. 00:35:613 (7,8,9,10) - 間距難看, 還是保持一致吧. done
  2. 01:33:343 (1,1) - 這2個沒必要NC吧 done
  3. 01:35:289 (6,1) - 做一下blanket done
  4. 02:04:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 用多邊形工具擺啊, 拒絕手擺從我做起. 这是螺线啊怎么用多边形摆

SPOILER
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[Editor]
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TitleUnicode:VALLIS-NERIA
Artist:DJ YOSHITAKA
ArtistUnicode:DJ YOSHITAKA
Creator:Sagisawa-Yukari
Version:Flower's Another
Source:REFLEC BEAT limelight
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CSY the corrupt

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

[屎爺]
  1. 00:13:883 (1,2) - overlap 这是要有点挨着的意思还是说更加分开一点
  2. 00:45:991 (3) - 藍線節奏不考慮一下? 不用,现在这样感觉挺好
  3. 00:58:316 (1) - 嗎的這段不要太神, 打起來太爽. ;)
  4. 01:21:667 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這有點不近人情了, 打起來完全卡手, 建議換梗. 这个看看吧.最近有点忙也懒得想,以后想到了更好的就直接改吧
  5. 01:53:451 (3) - 同00:45:991 (3) -
感谢mod :)
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
[quote="Amamiya Yuko"][General]
  1. 不得不吐槽這combo color 2在edit test的時候帶著BG完全跟看不到一樣...
--我改了combo color,当然其他难度也一并改了

[Extreme]
  1. 00:19:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - 請善用轉角功能. --sure.fixed
  2. 00:30:586 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 右邊的1234跟左邊的5678對稱一下. --fixed
  3. 00:22:316 (4) - 這3/4節奏打起來略奇怪, 建議換成1/2. --fixed
  4. 00:32:694 (4) - 同上, 不過這個反而還挺順的, 你自己決定. --那这里就维持现状吧
  5. 00:45:343 (1) - 節奏不跟後面保持一致? 01:52:802 (1) - --fixed
  6. 00:53:775 (5) - 這裡應該是三連節奏, 你前面也下了三連這卻沒下. --fixed
  7. 00:56:694 (4) - 這裡節奏應該是: http://puu.sh/2PQRJ.jpg --fixed
  8. 00:58:316 (1) - 這段全程circle段我喜歡, 做得很好.
  9. 01:00:424 (7,8,9,10,11) - 還是得吐槽下這5連不要太難看, 修好點: http://puu.sh/2PQAp.jpg --fixed
  10. 01:03:018 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ 因為你這段的三連用的都是直線三連, 所以這種五連最好也不要太弧線. --fixed
  11. 01:05:613 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ --fixed
  12. 01:08:207 (7,8,9,10,11) - ^ --fixed
  13. 01:25:559 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 這串太難看了...擺好點吧. --fixed
  14. 01:34:964 (5,6) - 這6可以再難看點? --这里是人为失误。。改过来了
  15. 01:59:613 (2) - ^ --fixed
  16. 02:01:234 (1) - 又到這個地方了, 同前面, 應該是三連. --fixed
  17. 02:03:424 (2,3) - 這間距有點confusing, 把3那組拉遠點. --fixed
  18. 02:04:640 (3,4,5) - 這節奏錯了: http://puu.sh/2PQTI.jpg
--fixed


thanks for modding~ :)
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
*Don't KDS this post*

Very sr, i accidently deleted picture in my account because st is wrong with my puush :o
About that part 01:41:126 (1,2,3) in medium diff , here it is.

http://puu.sh/2LWov.jpg

Just my opinion, because it make more sense than your current pattern imo. --OK,fixed.thanks a lot :)
yanlu
也牛~~
對不起我拖了好久D;
[Hard]
00:19:883 (1) - 提前結束在00:21:667 - ? 現在這樣有點趕..
00:25:559 (4,1) - 這個跳很突然的..改一下4的位置?
00:29:451 (1,2) - 交換節奏比較合
00:30:424 - 這個空拍是為什麼呢...? 如果你不想改節奏的話,把(4)stack(5)的頭如何
00:38:045 (3,4,5) - (4)的間距可以拉大點提示(區別00:37:234 (7,8) - )
00:40:964 (4) - ^
00:51:343 (4) - ^
00:52:640 - 到00:52:802 - 做個三連呢?><
00:58:964 - 空拍怪怪的...讓00:58:478 (2) - 再迴一次都比空著好..我覺得啦:/
01:16:802 (3,4) - ctrl+g?
01:29:126 - 01:29:451 - 有點趕...
01:36:910 (1) - note+slider?(跟後面的2交換)
01:45:829 (4) - 間距拉大
01:48:424 (4) - ^
01:55:072 (6,7) - 換成一個slider?比較不會這麼難..
01:56:207 (4) - 01:58:802 (4) - 拉遠一點
02:08:370 - 加個綠線降低spin音量?

[Medium]
AR+1
00:01:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - 怎麼聽都覺得節奏沒跟著音樂....自創節奏嗎>.<
00:21:667 - 00:21:991 - 對normal來說太趕了...
00:55:721 (1,2) - 就弄個slider就好

[Basic]
00:40:153 (1) - 右移一格
01:30:910 (3,1,2) - 對easy來說有些困難...
01:37:234 (3) - 這個沒打算跟之前的從紅線開始嗎0 0?
01:43:721 (1) - 弄成不要來回的slider會更易些..
01:48:910 (1) - easy呢...建議改點>~<

兩個低難度我都覺得節奏好鬼畜OAQ!
其他三個難度真心Mod不動(雖然有一半是偷懶的成分...嗚!
GL ;Q
jesse7419
Hi~ mod from your request.

話說我拖了更久 ;W;

  • [General]
  1. 您的Lead-In很多都不一致,請都調成一樣.
  • [CorruptEXT]
  1. 00:33:505 (1) - 開頭finish.
  2. 00:50:370 (9) - Sampiest不跟前面一樣用auto嗎?
  3. 00:50:532 (1) - 拿掉clap.
  4. 01:16:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這幾個距離有點混亂.
  5. 01:42:748 (2,3) - 改成這樣?
    96,240,102748,2,0,L|190:240,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    268,144,103072,2,0,L|173:144,1,95
  • [Flower's Another]
  1. 01:18:748 - Useless inherited point.
  2. 00:37:559 (1,2,3,1) - 這節奏我覺得不太適合用這麼大的跳去做4個單點的排列,其實讓(3)(1)有大跳就很有感覺了,類似這樣
  3. 00:40:153 (1,2,3,1) - flow有點不順,一樣建議只讓跳後面有大跳,第三個太右下方了 o.o 試試這樣? (後面還有一樣的地方,但其實後面感覺還可以..)
    184,204,40316,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    68,44,40478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:54:262 (1,2,3) - 節奏已經跟前面不一樣了,換個排版感覺比較好,且00:54:424 - 這邊開始單點漸遠比較有感覺.
  5. 01:13:883 (1) - 開頭finish.
  6. 02:04:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 間距改成0.7比較舒服.
  • [Extreme]
  1. 00:29:207 (2) - 這個stream不太好,00:30:018 - 這裡放還不錯 o.o
  2. 00:33:829 (9) - 放 x:416 y:232 ?
  3. 00:34:883 (1) - 這spinner有點突然,不用其他note代替嗎!?
  4. 00:37:559 - 這段音效用whistle空虛,重音建議給他有個音吧,00:37:559 (1) - 00:38:045 (3) - 00:37:721 (2) - 等等之類的..開頭用個finish也好,要不就把whistle音量調高吧. 後面一樣的地方也是.
  5. 00:56:694 - 直接用您原來音效連接就很好了,音量降低有點怪.
  6. 01:17:289 (6) - NC.
  7. 01:28:153 - 這邊讓音效漸強很不錯.
  8. 01:37:072 (4,5,6,7) - 跟前面part一樣感覺不太好,試試看這個節奏?
    160,40,97072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    160,40,97397,2,0,L|240:104,1,100
    200,192,97721,2,0,L|120:128,1,100
  9. 01:42:343 (1) - 同前.
  10. 02:05:613 (10) - 改用slider代替結束在02:05:775 - 尾巴上finish,轉盤往後1/4,結束在02:08:207 -
  11. 02:05:775 (1) - 最後放條綠線消音吧.
實在是太鬼觸了mod不太起來.
渣mod請見諒 QAQ
Good Luck for your map.
CSY the corrupt

jesse7419 wrote:

  • [CorruptEXT]
  1. 00:33:505 (1) - 開頭finish. added
  2. 00:50:370 (9) - Sampiest不跟前面一樣用auto嗎?
  3. 00:50:532 (1) - 拿掉clap.
  4. 01:16:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這幾個距離有點混亂.
  5. 01:42:748 (2,3) - 改成這樣?
    96,240,102748,2,0,L|190:240,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    268,144,103072,2,0,L|173:144,1,95
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
yanlu

yanlu wrote:

也牛~~
對不起我拖了好久D;
[Hard]
00:19:883 (1) - 提前結束在00:21:667 - ? 現在這樣有點趕.. --fixed
00:25:559 (4,1) - 這個跳很突然的..改一下4的位置? --我直接把4去掉了,这样听着也舒服
00:29:451 (1,2) - 交換節奏比較合 --no fixed
00:30:424 - 這個空拍是為什麼呢...? 如果你不想改節奏的話,把(4)stack(5)的頭如何 --还是把前面的3拉长的好
00:38:045 (3,4,5) - (4)的間距可以拉大點提示(區別00:37:234 (7,8) - ) --再大下去就是我extreme的间距了
00:40:964 (4) - ^ --
00:51:343 (4) - ^ --
00:52:640 - 到00:52:802 - 做個三連呢?>< --hard的话还是算了
00:58:964 - 空拍怪怪的...讓00:58:478 (2) - 再迴一次都比空著好..我覺得啦:/ --我感觉空着正好啊。。
01:16:802 (3,4) - ctrl+g? --no fixed
01:29:126 - 01:29:451 - 有點趕... --这后面还空了很多啊
01:36:910 (1) - note+slider?(跟後面的2交換) --这里我按照自己的想法改了下
01:45:829 (4) - 間距拉大 --同之前
01:48:424 (4) - ^ --
01:55:072 (6,7) - 換成一個slider?比較不會這麼難.. --不用啊。。。这只是4个单点啊喂
01:56:207 (4) - 01:58:802 (4) - 拉遠一點 --同之前
02:08:370 - 加個綠線降低spin音量? --fixed

[Medium]
AR+1 --不用了,这样可以了
00:01:235 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2) - 怎麼聽都覺得節奏沒跟著音樂....自創節奏嗎>.< ---跟了啊你再仔细听听
00:21:667 - 00:21:991 - 對normal來說太趕了... --我把转盘往前挪了点
00:55:721 (1,2) - 就弄個slider就好 --fixed

[Basic]
00:40:153 (1) - 右移一格 ---这。。这里没问题啊
01:30:910 (3,1,2) - 對easy來說有些困難... --我把1拉短了1/2当然后面的某些部分也有这样情况一样调整了
01:37:234 (3) - 這個沒打算跟之前的從紅線開始嗎0 0? --最后想了想把2拉到你说的红线位置结束,3调整了下
01:43:721 (1) - 弄成不要來回的slider會更易些.. ---这里的节奏本身就适合折返
01:48:910 (1) - easy呢...建議改點>~< --改了点

兩個低難度我都覺得節奏好鬼畜OAQ!
其他三個難度真心Mod不動(雖然有一半是偷懶的成分...嗚!
GL ;Q

jesse7419

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi~ mod from your request.

話說我拖了更久 ;W;

  • [General]
  1. 您的Lead-In很多都不一致,請都調成一樣.
--进记事本全调好了

鉴于我老婆突然犯懒她的难度我来改。。。
  • [Flower's Another]
  1. 01:18:748 - Useless inherited point. --删掉了
  2. 00:37:559 (1,2,3,1) - 這節奏我覺得不太適合用這麼大的跳去做4個單點的排列,其實讓(3)(1)有大跳就很有感覺了,類似這樣 ---nofixed
  3. 00:40:153 (1,2,3,1) - flow有點不順,一樣建議只讓跳後面有大跳,第三個太右下方了 o.o 試試這樣? (後面還有一樣的地方,但其實後面感覺還可以..)
    184,204,40316,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    68,44,40478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    --fixed
  4. 00:54:262 (1,2,3) - 節奏已經跟前面不一樣了,換個排版感覺比較好,且00:54:424 - 這邊開始單點漸遠比較有感覺. --改了节奏的部分
  5. 01:13:883 (1) - 開頭finish. --fixed
  6. 02:04:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - 間距改成0.7比較舒服.
--最后想了想还是维持原样

  • [Extreme]
  1. 00:29:207 (2) - 這個stream不太好,00:30:018 - 這裡放還不錯 o.o --fixed
  2. 00:33:829 (9) - 放 x:416 y:232 ? --最后放296,328了
  3. 00:34:883 (1) - 這spinner有點突然,不用其他note代替嗎!? --这里最后改了
  4. 00:37:559 - 這段音效用whistle空虛,重音建議給他有個音吧,00:37:559 (1) - 00:38:045 (3) - 00:37:721 (2) - 等等之類的..開頭用個finish也好,要不就把whistle音量調高吧. 後面一樣的地方也是. --音量加了,另外这里的确有finish是我的疏忽
  5. 00:56:694 - 直接用您原來音效連接就很好了,音量降低有點怪. ---主要这一段没鼓点所以用了soft音效
  6. 01:17:289 (6) - NC. --fixed
  7. 01:28:153 - 這邊讓音效漸強很不錯. --我试着弄弄,不过这里没鼓点不大好放normal。。
  8. 01:37:072 (4,5,6,7) - 跟前面part一樣感覺不太好,試試看這個節奏?
    160,40,97072,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    160,40,97397,2,0,L|240:104,1,100
    200,192,97721,2,0,L|120:128,1,100
    --我这里参考了前面自己改了点
  9. 01:42:343 (1) - 同前. --恩改了
  10. 02:05:613 (10) - 改用slider代替結束在02:05:775 - 尾巴上finish,轉盤往後1/4,結束在02:08:207 - ---我还是决定用现在的
  11. 02:05:775 (1) - 最後放條綠線消音吧.
---之前有人让我不要消音。。恩先保留着

實在是太鬼觸了mod不太起來.
渣mod請見諒 QAQ ---主要是那两个人太鬼畜么,我还是比较人性
Good Luck for your map.



thanks for modding~
Kotone

DangYang_shushu wrote:

乖乖站好
時間還沒過。
現在就摸。

刪skin摸比較方便,別介意
[General]
  1. section-pass.png 233
  2. DangYang's Muzukashii的Countdown沒關。
  3. AIBAT: DangYang's Muzukashii Snapping 01:58:155 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:59:128 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
  4. AIBAT: Yia's Taiko Oni Spinner New Combo 00:10:316 (30) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.
[Basic]

  • 00:06:424 (1) - 太靜了加個音效(finish/whistle)
    00:21:991 (1) - http://puu.sh/3irDU.png 改成這樣其實比較好聽也能較凸出重音
    00:23:775 (1) - 這個NC沒什么意思,刪掉。
    00:30:748 (1) - 同上。
    00:34:316 (4) - 頭是不是漏了個finish
    00:40:640 (2) - 你仔細一點聽,頭尾都有clap音,加?
    00:46:964 (1) - 刪NC,理由一樣
    01:35:289 (2) - 尾停紅線(01:35:775 - )會比較好吧。像這樣http://puu.sh/3irRM.png
    02:03:180 (1) - .
其實整體來看沒什么問題,不過有點濫用NC。不知道你有沒有什么特别意思的不過有些汪汪汪你懂的。建議刪減,比如說頭4個note絕對可以用一個combo;還有很多1,1,2絕對可以改成1,2,3

[Medium]

  • 00:01:883 (3,4) - 這裏是在干嘛。。。完全不是在跟音樂
    00:34:153 - 轉回n set吧。這裏突然轉s超怪的而且不好聽。
    00:36:262 (1) - 頭漏了個finish
    00:37:559 (1) - 漏了whistle
    01:27:829 (1) - 聽清楚音樂,這個應該在紅線開始。
    01:39:180 (2) - 尾addtion改成soft加finish試試?個人感覺配極
    01:41:775 (2) - 漏finish
    01:41:937 (3) - 折返漏finish
    依然是NC問題,不多說了

[Extreme]
00:11:937 - ,00:14:856 - 不加 break么
我去好像mod不出東西了
對了最尾spinner紅線結束

整體來說,一般。沒有亮眼的地方也沒有不舒服的地方,沒有什么不好的地方。
感覺我慢慢說把這個note放x111y111什么的好像也沒什么幫助(其實是我懶
我覺還是多作圖多吸收經驗,留意一下別人的圖的表現方式。其實這次好像比上次那張好多了

[CorruptEXT]
[Flower's Another]
說不出有什么問題。

眼睛好痛,888888
- SB DangYang -

Kotone wrote:

對不起讓我拖到明天吧!明天不mod讓你打屁屁!
我會edit這個po,之前的不用給kd了

乖乖站好
- SB DangYang -
Taiko Andy's Oni:



首先,我这些MOD都是我个人的想法,镜姐姐可以有选择性的参考。
这谱子我打完之后的第一感觉就是NOTE摆放太随心所欲,没有一个固定的思路,这里想怎么放就怎么放XD。不过这样加大了谱子的难度,增加了NOTE组合的多样性。

00:03:829 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 这一串来的太仓促了,可以先弄几个1/1再逐渐的代入1/2.
比如:00:17:126 (62) - 从这里开始,前面的调调和这里还有后面的调调是一样的,但是这个NOTE之后基本上是散音,我认为可以把这一段散音和前面的那几个3连组合换一下?然后就相当于难度慢慢递增一样XD.
00:22:153 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - 这里我觉得XXO OOX这样比较好
00:44:694 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - 这一段听上去好像不太对劲。
00:58:316 (192) - 从这里开始到减速那里这一段音乐一直在重复,可以放点有太鼓特色的节奏突出的组合,但是不要做得太难。
01:19:072 (1) - 这里我打了好几次都MISS了XD,也许是我技术不到位,但是还是觉得这NOTE粘的太紧突然就减速这么多有点不习惯XD。
而且这段音乐前面速度是减得啊,01:21:991 (14) - 从这个开始速度就开始变快了。可以试着慢慢的从散音做成NOTE组合。
01:29:613 (49,50,51,52,53,54) - 可以改一下NOTE的颜色XD
01:36:424 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - 听着怪怪
01:43:722 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - XOX OXO这放这里真的不好听。
01:50:208 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - 这几个做的太棒了,太鼓声和音乐融合的恰到好处,
但是后面那几个组合01:51:505 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - 却乱了这几个NOTE的节奏。
接着我已经挑不出刺了。因为AImod不能查错,查错还是要交给其他MOD来干。

最后,镜爷爷加油!XDDDDDDDDDD手指头扎了肉刺还要打字好痛XDDDDDDDDDDDDD。
Kagami Yuki

DangYang_shushu wrote:

Taiko Andy's Oni:



首先,我这些MOD都是我个人的想法,镜姐姐可以有选择性的参考。
这谱子我打完之后的第一感觉就是NOTE摆放太随心所欲,没有一个固定的思路,这里想怎么放就怎么放XD。不过这样加大了谱子的难度,增加了NOTE组合的多样性。

00:03:829 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - 这一串来的太仓促了,可以先弄几个1/1再逐渐的代入1/2.
比如:00:17:126 (62) - 从这里开始,前面的调调和这里还有后面的调调是一样的,但是这个NOTE之后基本上是散音,我认为可以把这一段散音和前面的那几个3连组合换一下?然后就相当于难度慢慢递增一样XD.
00:22:153 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - 这里我觉得XXO OOX这样比较好
00:44:694 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - 这一段听上去好像不太对劲。
00:58:316 (192) - 从这里开始到减速那里这一段音乐一直在重复,可以放点有太鼓特色的节奏突出的组合,但是不要做得太难。
01:19:072 (1) - 这里我打了好几次都MISS了XD,也许是我技术不到位,但是还是觉得这NOTE粘的太紧突然就减速这么多有点不习惯XD。
而且这段音乐前面速度是减得啊,01:21:991 (14) - 从这个开始速度就开始变快了。可以试着慢慢的从散音做成NOTE组合。
01:29:613 (49,50,51,52,53,54) - 可以改一下NOTE的颜色XD
01:36:424 (93,94,95,96,97,98,99) - 听着怪怪
01:43:722 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - XOX OXO这放这里真的不好听。
01:50:208 (74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - 这几个做的太棒了,太鼓声和音乐融合的恰到好处,
但是后面那几个组合01:51:505 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93,94,95,96) - 却乱了这几个NOTE的节奏。
接着我已经挑不出刺了。因为AImod不能查错,查错还是要交给其他MOD来干。

最后,镜爷爷加油!XDDDDDDDDDD手指头扎了肉刺还要打字好痛XDDDDDDDDDDDDD。
nice suggestions.:3/
But I won't change anything of it . I think all notes are fine .But I'm looking foward to others'suggestions:3
This is my style,maybe some places are uncomfortable for you,but I'll study so many things from you =w=
Ps: Cat god lets u know \:D/
wmfchris
切尔西新赛季赛程:8月24日客场挑战曼联
[流言板]传:巴萨有意3000万英镑求购马塔

- 你tag自己幹毛

[Oni]
00:03:829 - 從前面比較慢的地方過渡的很不自然 可以刪掉00:03:991 -
00:06:099 - 明顯跟不上音樂
00:09:667 - 不建議用slider因為slider代表了1/4 stream 用spinner較為合適 而且可以在00:11:289 - 完
00:13:883 - 第2/3個鼓聲比第1個更輕 不太適合一起finish
00:19:883 - 按照音樂這裡就該連起來了
00:29:937 - 這不算重音 remove finish
00:44:694 - 一首以4個一組拍子為主的歌不適合用這種連打 可以用ddddkkd
00:49:721 - 意味不明
00:52:316 - ^ 後面的3連聽上去就像孤立了出來 效果不好
00:56:613 - 這樣放略欠跳躍感 試dkk/變成kk2連
01:43:721 - 旋律/鼓都是單一下行 kdd kkd kkddkdd更為合適
01:52:153 - 同0:44


[Muzu]
remove letterbox during breaks
00:19:397 - 在小節的開頭就用1/2吧
00:20:045 - 感覺怪怪的 試試kdddkddkd
02:05:775 - 同上 不適合用slider

Muzu中段不錯
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

wmfchris wrote:

切尔西新赛季赛程:8月24日客场挑战曼联 ---瓜仔在拜仁等着你们
[流言板]传:巴萨有意3000万英镑求购马塔 ---蒂托不想要别的:只想要蒂亚戈-席尔瓦

- 你tag自己幹毛 --知道了,等他们改完了一起更新
- SB DangYang -

wmfchris wrote:

切尔西新赛季赛程:8月24日客场挑战曼联
[流言板]传:巴萨有意3000万英镑求购马塔

- 你tag自己幹毛


[Muzu]
remove letterbox during breaks
00:19:397 - 在小節的開頭就用1/2吧 OK
00:20:045 - 感覺怪怪的 試試kdddkddkd OK
02:05:775 - 同上 不適合用slider 我感觉不用滑条的话谱子一瞬间就断了的感觉。
好吧,经过了几十分钟的思想斗争,我还是删掉了滑条。

快,麻将点你的役满。

Muzu中段不錯
ts8zs
这skin真是…… http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/831871 表示这虽然是特殊情况……背景的内圈明显比这个大好么
F's A
00:15:180 - break用右键点掉
00:16:316 (2,3) - 改成左右相对
00:21:829 - note?
00:38:856 - note 依据是 01:45:505 (1,1,1,2) -
00:39:018 (1) - 位置不应该在这里吧……
01:27:262 - break用右键点掉
01:59:126 (1) - 我觉得这个应该放在上面而不是下面
02:05:775 (3) - 在292,332试试
HD
00:08:532 (3,4) - 跳的有点远
00:19:397 (1,2) - 意义不明,删
00:19:883 (1) - 00:16:802 - 开始
01:07:721 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 滑条和连击方向不一致
01:16:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for hard(好笑么好笑么~)
01:24:262 (1,2) - 意义不明,删
01:43:559 (1,2,3) - 滑条和连击方向不一致 ……貌似末尾要向左上移一个格
01:58:478 (3) - 没对准滑条尾
02:05:775 - 需要一个note
02:05:775 (1) - 如果上面那个改了那就是最后一个转盘,结束于 02:08:126 -
EXT
00:16:153 (1,2,3) - 和音乐反过来了啊?
00:46:802 (2,3,4) - 滑条和连击方向不一致
00:48:748 (4,5) - 不对称
01:25:559 (5) - NC
01:41:937 (3) - 移到 01:41:613 (1) - 上面
01:48:424 (4) - Ctrl+G
02:05:775 - 需要一个note
02:05:775 (1) - 如果上面那个改了那就是最后一个转盘,结束于 02:08:126 -
CSY EXT
再一次对osu的评星系统的猛烈吐槽
01:39:505 (7,8) - 我觉得这两个向外比较好
02:05:775 (1) - 如果上面那个改了那就是最后一个转盘,结束于 02:08:126 - ……207也行啦!
CSY求互粉!
NM
看起来不太认真的样子……反正我也累了
00:19:397 (1) - 头在更前面
01:24:262 (1,2) - 我要是3mod这个我一定会砸电脑
BSC
NC太多了,自己删
00:01:235 (1,1,1,1) - ……开头的话还能忍吧……
00:34:964 (5) - ……没摆正算了,反正一大堆都没摆正
顺便求个互粉……啊……太鼓忘掉了……重新开吧ww
ts8zs
A's Oni
00:31:883 (127,128) - k
00:31:964 - d
00:48:424 (121,122) - finish
00:50:856 (137) - remove and 00:51:018 (138,139) - finish
00:57:018 (186,187,188) - dkk
01:32:857 (71) - remove finish
01:36:911 (98) - k
01:39:424 - d
01:55:884 (102,103) - Finish
01:58:478 (118,119) - Finish
DY's Muzu
00:14:532 (25) - remove finish
00:29:937 (55) - k
01:18:748 (103,104,105,106,107) - ... 1/4 |kk kd|
02:05:613 - k
02:05:775 - D
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
Kotone

Kotone wrote:

DangYang_shushu wrote:

乖乖站好
時間還沒過。
現在就摸。

刪skin摸比較方便,別介意
[General]
  1. section-pass.png 233
  2. DangYang's Muzukashii的Countdown沒關。
  3. AIBAT: DangYang's Muzukashii Snapping 01:58:155 (3) - Unsnapped circle. 01:59:128 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
  4. AIBAT: Yia's Taiko Oni Spinner New Combo 00:10:316 (30) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.
--这些我都让本人改过了

[Basic]

  • 00:06:424 (1) - 太靜了加個音效(finish/whistle) --fixed
    00:21:991 (1) - http://puu.sh/3irDU.png 改成這樣其實比較好聽也能較凸出重音 --fixed,我参考这个自己重新改了下
    00:23:775 (1) - 這個NC沒什么意思,刪掉。--fixed
    00:30:748 (1) - 同上。 --fixed
    00:34:316 (4) - 頭是不是漏了個finish --加上了
    00:40:640 (2) - 你仔細一點聽,頭尾都有clap音,加? --加上了
    00:46:964 (1) - 刪NC,理由一樣 --fixed
    01:35:289 (2) - 尾停紅線(01:35:775 - )會比較好吧。像這樣http://puu.sh/3irRM.png --fixed
    02:03:180 (1) - .
--删了NC
其實整體來看沒什么問題,不過有點濫用NC。不知道你有沒有什么特别意思的不過有些汪汪汪你懂的。建議刪減,比如說頭4個note絕對可以用一個combo;還有很多1,1,2絕對可以改成1,2,3 -我会从头检查一遍,谢谢了~

[Medium]

  • 00:01:883 (3,4) - 這裏是在干嘛。。。完全不是在跟音樂 --这一段重新做了
    00:34:153 - 轉回n set吧。這裏突然轉s超怪的而且不好聽。 --fixed
    00:36:262 (1) - 頭漏了個finish --fixed
    00:37:559 (1) - 漏了whistle --fixed
    01:27:829 (1) - 聽清楚音樂,這個應該在紅線開始。 --恩,另外加了个默认的拍子音效
    01:39:180 (2) - 尾addtion改成soft加finish試試?個人感覺配極 -好主意,fixed
    01:41:775 (2) - 漏finish -加了,然后改了点其他东西
    01:41:937 (3) - 折返漏finish --fixed
    依然是NC問題,不多說了 --我会仔细再检查一次

[Extreme]
00:11:937 - ,00:14:856 - 不加 break么
我去好像mod不出東西了
對了最尾spinner紅線結束 --如果要加的话三段一起加了吧,最后的转盘改成红线结束了

整體來說,一般。沒有亮眼的地方也沒有不舒服的地方,沒有什么不好的地方。
感覺我慢慢說把這個note放x111y111什么的好像也沒什么幫助(其實是我懶
我覺還是多作圖多吸收經驗,留意一下別人的圖的表現方式。其實這次好像比上次那張好多了 --和LKs说的一样啊233

[CorruptEXT]
[Flower's Another]
說不出有什么問題。

眼睛好痛,888888 --辛苦了,谢谢盈盈~


ts8zs

ts8zs wrote:

这skin真是…… http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/831871 表示这虽然是特殊情况……背景的内圈明显比这个大好么
F's A
00:15:180 - break用右键点掉 --sure
00:16:316 (2,3) - 改成左右相对 --不用了我觉得这样挺好
00:21:829 - note? --不加了加了毁节奏
00:38:856 - note 依据是 01:45:505 (1,1,1,2) - --我问了他本人说这里不用管
00:39:018 (1) - 位置不应该在这里吧…… --这里有节奏为何不对?
01:27:262 - break用右键点掉 --这里为什么要点掉?
01:59:126 (1) - 我觉得这个应该放在上面而不是下面 -- --有区别?
02:05:775 (3) - 在292,332试试 --放这也不差
HD
00:08:532 (3,4) - 跳的有点远 --都空了一拍还远?
00:19:397 (1,2) - 意义不明,删 --我建议你仔细听听
00:19:883 (1) - 00:16:802 - 开始 --同上
01:07:721 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 滑条和连击方向不一致 --什么叫一致?你打个比方给我看看?
01:16:478 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for hard(好笑么好笑么~)--打不来先找自己原因
01:24:262 (1,2) - 意义不明,删 --不全在重音上?
01:43:559 (1,2,3) - 滑条和连击方向不一致 ……貌似末尾要向左上移一个格 --什么不一致?玩家都是大爷?
01:58:478 (3) - 没对准滑条尾 --为什么一定要对准
02:05:775 - 需要一个note --加了怪不怪?
02:05:775 (1) - 如果上面那个改了那就是最后一个转盘,结束于 02:08:126 - --我结束在前面一根红线上
EXT
00:16:153 (1,2,3) - 和音乐反过来了啊? --再仔细听听?
00:46:802 (2,3,4) - 滑条和连击方向不一致 --又来?为什么我找过的人都打起来没问题?
00:48:748 (4,5) - 不对称 --明明就是ctrl+H过去的
01:25:559 (5) - NC --加不加无所谓
01:41:937 (3) - 移到 01:41:613 (1) - 上面 --这样哪里不好?
01:48:424 (4) - Ctrl+G --同上
02:05:775 - 需要一个note --这样也可以
02:05:775 (1) - 如果上面那个改了那就是最后一个转盘,结束于 02:08:126 - --这里按照Kotone的建议改了

NM
看起来不太认真的样子……反正我也累了
00:19:397 (1) - 头在更前面 --有什么不好?
01:24:262 (1,2) - 我要是3mod这个我一定会砸电脑 --哪条规定normal就必须给你3MOD轻松FC?
BSC
NC太多了,自己删
00:01:235 (1,1,1,1) - ……开头的话还能忍吧……
00:34:964 (5) - ……没摆正算了,反正一大堆都没摆正 --这里我都按kotone的改了
顺便求个互粉……啊……太鼓忘掉了……重新开吧ww

thanks for modding
abalee
Be careful the difficulty spread.

29958379.png <-- useless?
[Hard]
00:29:451 (1) - slider-> circle
00:29:613 (2) - circle-> slider
02:03:667 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggest change to this:

02:05:775 (1) - silent the spinner end.

[DangYang's Muzukashii]
inherit the timing point at 125775ms

[Flower's Another]
01:18:586 (5) - extend to 01:18:829 (x) - .change the DS if needed.

[Extreme]
02:05:775 (1) - silent the spinner end.
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari
Be careful the difficulty spread. --(HP darin/AR/OD)change: basic 2/3/2 Meduim 3/5/4 Hard 5/7/6

29958379.png <-- useless? --I checked it and sure to delete
[Hard]
00:29:451 (1) - slider-> circle --fixed
00:29:613 (2) - circle-> slider --fixed
02:03:667 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - suggest change to this:
--fixed
02:05:775 (1) - silent the spinner end. --fixed,and add a green line,Volume change 20%

[DangYang's Muzukashii]
inherit the timing point at 125775ms --fixed

[Flower's Another]
01:18:586 (5) - extend to 01:18:829 (x) - .change the DS if needed. --Yes,I extend 01:18:829 - and DS:01:18:424 (4) - - 01:18:586 (5) - =2.68,01:18:586 (5) - - 01:18:991 (6) - =2.64,so don't change distance

[Extreme]
02:05:775 (1) - silent the spinner end.--the same as hard

thanks for modding~
- SB DangYang -
DY's Muzu
00:14:532 (25) - remove finish OK
00:29:937 (55) - k OK
01:18:748 (103,104,105,106,107) - ... 1/4 |kk kd| OK
02:05:613 - k ok
02:05:775 - D[/quote] ok
aabc271
As requested by Sagisawa-Yukari, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

-----------------------

[ Taiko Andy's Oni]

I'd personally prefer a name like "Andy's Oni" or "Andy's Taiko Oni" more. ( Usually the word "Taiko" won't be the 1st word before the mapper's name. Just a minor issue though. )

01:19:072 ( 1 ) - This note is stacked with the previous stream because of the slowdown. I'd suggest using gradual slowdown to avoid that. Something like this will be a good solution.

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:07:883 ( 25, 26 ) - o o / o o ? ( 25~27 is a falling pitch which sounds like k k d / k d d )

00:09:180 ( 29, 30 ) - o o ? ( Comparing with 28, these two notes have significantly high pitch, so k k fits better as this could make a pitch comparison with 28, which is d )

00:17:937 ( 33 ) - Blue note ? ( I personally think it's not a good idea to have all d at 29~45, as the song isn't that monotonous. In this case, it's a good idea to add custom hitsounds, just like what I suggested )
00:19:234 ( 38 ) - ^
00:19:883 ( 42 ) - ^

00:21:991 ( 59 ) - Add finish ? ( As the start of kiai, it has strong background beats and therefore finish should fit well )

00:22:964 ( 67, 70 ) - 67:Remove finish, 70:Add finish ? ( If you listen to the music carefully, you'll notice the heavy beats are at 68~70, not 67~69 )
01:30:424 ( 56, 59 ) - ^, 56-, 59+.


00:24:586 ( 75~78 ) - o ooo ? ( 75~81 are all d, which could be too monotonous, as the music actually varies a lot in pitch )

00:25:721 ( 83 ) - Blue note ? ( Optional. 82~85 is a falling pitch, with similar falling rate throughout these 4 notes. So I'd prefer K K D D instead of K D D D because that would show it's constant drop better. 83~85 D might be ignoring some pitch difference quite significantly )
01:33:180 ( 72 ) - ^

00:26:694 ( 86~89 ) - ooo ? ( Comparing with 85, they have higher pitch. Also 90 has the same level of pitch as 86~89. Based on these 2 reasons, kkk will fit better )

00:28:316 ( 100 ) - Add finish ? ( The background hit is actually quite strong and finish should fit well. This is also to fit the consistency of use of finishes, as you also used finish at 110 )

00:31:072 ( 119~129 ) - ooooooo o o o o ? ( This simply fits the pitch difference of instrument better )

00:32:370 ( 130 ) - Add finish ? ( The background beat is quite strong and it's the first hit of a new song section. So you may consider adding a finish here )
01:39:829 ( 120 ) - ^

00:33:505 ( 139 ) - Add finish and blue note ? ( It is clear that it has the same level of pitch as 138, with a heavier drum beat. imo it's better to follow the pitch (k) rather than drum (d) because imo the pitch is more significant. Also players will probably feel more consistent when they hit k K, as this would tell them that 139 has the same pitch as 138, and finish at 139 means there is a stronger hit in music )
01:40:964 ( 129 ) - ^

00:33:829 ( 140~141, 1~8 ) - o o ooo ooooo ? ( Again following the pitch. I'd say this fits the music much better but you should have the decision yourself :3 )

00:48:748 ( 122~123 ) - O O ? ( The heavy beat also exists at 123 so finish for it too. Also 122~123 have higher pitch than 121, so D K K probably fits better )

00:51:018 ( 137, 139 ) - 137:Add finish, 139:Remove finish ? ( For consistency with 121, 123 )

02:00:586 ( 131 ) - Blue note ? ( The background has a high pitch followed by lower pitch at 132~134, so I think k fits better here )
02:01:072 ( 135 ) - ^

Overall ok
But it's better to notice the consistency of use of finishes more next time
Also try to listen more carefully whether a certain hit is heavy enough to justify a finish :3

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[ DangYang's Muzukashii]

I notice the SV of this muzu diff is 1.5, which is higher than oni (1.4). Unless you have special reasons for using 1.5, I'd personally suggest you changing it into 1.4 so as not to be faster than oni.

The red line at the last part of song should be green instead, as it indicates no BPM, offset or time signature changes. Also there quite many useless green lines. If they're not for a specific purpose in gameplay, just delete them. I'll say leaving only these green lines shown here is enough.


Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:01:235 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( The 1st note of this diff. It has a heavier sound in the background which indicates the start of the music, so I'd suggest adding a finish here )

00:21:667 ( 16 ) - Add finish ? ( The background sound is quite loud compared to other parts of the song. So it could be a good idea to add finish )

00:27:829 ( 44~47 ) - o o o o ? ( This fits the pitch of music better )
01:35:289 ( 40~43 ) - ^

00:29:937 ( 55 ) - Blue note ? ( It has the same level of pitch as 56, so I'd suggest k k instead )

00:31:721 ( 66~69 ) - o o o o ? ( Again, this is for fitting the pitch of music )
01:39:180 ( 62~65 ) - ^

00:33:343 ( 73 ) - Blue note ? ( Same reason as 55. 73=74 in terms of pitch )
00:33:829 ( 75 ) - Red note ? ( Similar reason. Although this time not that significant, but still 75 has a very similar pitch with 76 )

01:40:802 ( 69 ) - Blue note ? ( See 73 )
01:41:289 ( 71 ) - Red note ? ( See 75 )


01:37:072 ( 50 ) - Red note ? ( Again, it has same pitch as 49, so d d fits better )
01:37:397 ( 51 ) - Blue note ? ( ^, 51 has same pitch has 52 )

02:05:775 ( x ) - Add a note ( Red finish ) here ? ( To indicate the end of kiai, and gives players a feeling of "ending the song" )

Overall nicely-made ~
Good job at 00:58:316 ~ 01:19:072

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Both diffs seem to be ok
Should be ready to go after fixing the above :3
Star and good luck ~ ;)
Kagami Yuki
[quote="aabc271"]As requested by Sagisawa-Yukari, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to
Grey~ Explanations of my suggestions

-----------------------

[ Taiko Andy's Oni]

I'd personally prefer a name like "Andy's Oni" or "Andy's Taiko Oni" more. ( Usually the word "Taiko" won't be the 1st word before the mapper's name. Just a minor issue though. )

01:19:072 ( 1 ) - This note is stacked with the previous stream because of the slowdown. I'd suggest using gradual slowdown to avoid that. Something like this will be a good solution.

Suggested patterns ~
Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:07:883 ( 25, 26 ) - o o / o o ? ( 25~27 is a falling pitch which sounds like k k d / k d d )

00:09:180 ( 29, 30 ) - o o ? ( Comparing with 28, these two notes have significantly high pitch, so k k fits better as this could make a pitch comparison with 28, which is d )

00:17:937 ( 33 ) - Blue note ? ( I personally think it's not a good idea to have all d at 29~45, as the song isn't that monotonous. In this case, it's a good idea to add custom hitsounds, just like what I suggested )
00:19:234 ( 38 ) - ^
00:19:883 ( 42 ) - ^

00:21:991 ( 59 ) - Add finish ? ( As the start of kiai, it has strong background beats and therefore finish should fit well )

00:22:964 ( 67, 70 ) - 67:Remove finish, 70:Add finish ? ( If you listen to the music carefully, you'll notice the heavy beats are at 68~70, not 67~69 )
01:30:424 ( 56, 59 ) - ^, 56-, 59+.


00:24:586 ( 75~78 ) - o ooo ? ( 75~81 are all d, which could be too monotonous, as the music actually varies a lot in pitch )

00:25:721 ( 83 ) - Blue note ? ( Optional. 82~85 is a falling pitch, with similar falling rate throughout these 4 notes. So I'd prefer K K D D instead of K D D D because that would show it's constant drop better. 83~85 D might be ignoring some pitch difference quite significantly )
01:33:180 ( 72 ) - ^

00:26:694 ( 86~89 ) - ooo ? ( Comparing with 85, they have higher pitch. Also 90 has the same level of pitch as 86~89. Based on these 2 reasons, kkk will fit better )

00:28:316 ( 100 ) - Add finish ? ( The background hit is actually quite strong and finish should fit well. This is also to fit the consistency of use of finishes, as you also used finish at 110 )

00:31:072 ( 119~129 ) - ooooooo o o o o ? ( This simply fits the pitch difference of instrument better )

00:32:370 ( 130 ) - Add finish ? ( The background beat is quite strong and it's the first hit of a new song section. So you may consider adding a finish here )
01:39:829 ( 120 ) - ^

00:33:505 ( 139 ) - Add finish and blue note ? ( It is clear that it has the same level of pitch as 138, with a heavier drum beat. imo it's better to follow the pitch (k) rather than drum (d) because imo the pitch is more significant. Also players will probably feel more consistent when they hit k K, as this would tell them that 139 has the same pitch as 138, and finish at 139 means there is a stronger hit in music )
01:40:964 ( 129 ) - ^

00:33:829 ( 140~141, 1~8 ) - o o ooo ooooo ? ( Again following the pitch. I'd say this fits the music much better but you should have the decision yourself :3 )

00:48:748 ( 122~123 ) - O O ? ( The heavy beat also exists at 123 so finish for it too. Also 122~123 have higher pitch than 121, so D K K probably fits better )

00:51:018 ( 137, 139 ) - 137:Add finish, 139:Remove finish ? ( For consistency with 121, 123 )

02:00:586 ( 131 ) - Blue note ? ( The background has a high pitch followed by lower pitch at 132~134, so I think k fits better here )
02:01:072 ( 135 ) - ^

Overall ok
But it's better to notice the consistency of use of finishes more next time
Also try to listen more carefully whether a certain hit is heavy enough to justify a finish :3

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All notes checked ready:3/ Thanks for your suggestions \:D/
- SB DangYang -

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Sagisawa-Yukari, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go :3



[ DangYang's Muzukashii]

I notice the SV of this muzu diff is 1.5, which is higher than oni (1.4). Unless you have special reasons for using 1.5, I'd personally suggest you changing it into 1.4 so as not to be faster than oni.
因为我的风格就是SV1.5,我想这和谱子本身的好坏是没有关系的。

The red line at the last part of song should be green instead, as it indicates no BPM, offset or time signature changes. Also there quite many useless green lines. If they're not for a specific purpose in gameplay, just delete them. I'll say leaving only these green lines shown here is enough.
最后的红线改掉了。但是前面的有些绿线是因为有些音效的渐变。所以留着,我会把没用的绿线删掉

[box=Suggested patterns ~]Here are the minor suggestions of patterns / hitsounds. It's your own choice whether to follow these suggestions.

00:01:235 ( 1 ) - Add finish ? ( The 1st note of this diff. It has a heavier sound in the background which indicates the start of the music, so I'd suggest adding a finish here )
ok
00:21:667 ( 16 ) - Add finish ? ( The background sound is quite loud compared to other parts of the song. So it could be a good idea to add finish )
ok
00:27:829 ( 44~47 ) - o o o o ? ( This fits the pitch of music better )
01:35:289 ( 40~43 ) - ^
这个超级好!
00:29:937 ( 55 ) - Blue note ? ( It has the same level of pitch as 56, so I'd suggest k k instead )

00:31:721 ( 66~69 ) - o o o o ? ( Again, this is for fitting the pitch of music )

01:39:180 ( 62~65 ) - ^

00:33:343 ( 73 ) - Blue note ? ( Same reason as 55. 73=74 in terms of pitch )
OK
00:33:829 ( 75 ) - Red note ? ( Similar reason. Although this time not that significant, but still 75 has a very similar pitch with 76 )
我还是觉得蓝色比较好。因为后面那个音有明显的变化。
01:40:802 ( 69 ) - Blue note ? ( See 73 )
OK
01:41:289 ( 71 ) - Red note ? ( See 75 )
同上

01:37:072 ( 50 ) - Red note ? ( Again, it has same pitch as 49, so d d fits better )
OK
01:37:397 ( 51 ) - Blue note ? ( ^, 51 has same pitch has 52 )
OK
02:05:775 ( x ) - Add a note ( Red finish ) here ? ( To indicate the end of kiai, and gives players a feeling of "ending the song" )
原先是黄条,wmf说去掉我就去掉没加任何东西上去,然后这建议超级棒

Overall nicely-made ~
Good job at 00:58:316 ~ 01:19:072

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Both diffs seem to be ok
Should be ready to go after fixing the above :3
Star and good luck ~ ;)
Paper AirPlane
[Extreme]
01:28:964 (5) - 这里的节奏是1/8拍,Clap没下到重音处,建议改,因为连我这种没做过图的人都听出来了
abalee

Paper AirPlane wrote:

[Extreme]
01:28:964 (5) - 这里的节奏是1/8拍,Clap没下到重音处,建议改,因为连我这种没做过图的人都听出来了
嗯,这里他用的是1/6拉出来的slider所以后面拍子对不上,建议拉成1/4。后面的拍手声就对上了
同时我也检查了一下其他往返的slider,还有这个01:44:694 (10) - 也是用的1/6拉出来的,似乎也是错的。

另外 Flower's Another 里面我指出01:18:586 (5) - 这里要延长是因为01:18:991 (6) - 这一点上跟了音乐,对应的01:18:829 (X) - 上我认为最好也跟上。但是lasted pending version里面没有这个改动是没有改到还是不愿意改?
Topic Starter
Sagisawa-Yukari

abalee wrote:

Paper AirPlane wrote:

[Extreme]
01:28:964 (5) - 这里的节奏是1/8拍,Clap没下到重音处,建议改,因为连我这种没做过图的人都听出来了
嗯,这里他用的是1/6拉出来的slider所以后面拍子对不上,建议拉成1/4。后面的拍手声就对上了
同时我也检查了一下其他往返的slider,还有这个01:44:694 (10) - 也是用的1/6拉出来的,似乎也是错的。

另外 Flower's Another 里面我指出01:18:586 (5) - 这里要延长是因为01:18:991 (6) - 这一点上跟了音乐,对应的01:18:829 (X) - 上我认为最好也跟上。但是lasted pending version里面没有这个改动是没有改到还是不愿意改?
已经根据建议两个都换成1/4的了,另外那个延长也拖到了位置了,非常感谢
abalee
Taiko checked by others.
So take a try.
MineC24
Go~ :D
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