senya - Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba [OsuMania] · forum

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-02-10T13:46:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月5日星期五 at 1:17:52

Artist: senya
Title: Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
Source: Touhou
Tags: opening th08 reach for the moon immortal smoke
BPM: 155
Filesize: 2541kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:

LV.14 - 7Key (4.06 stars, 624 notes)
LV.21 - 7Key (5 stars, 842 notes)
LV.28 - 7Key (5 stars, 1099 notes)
LV.8 - 7Key (3.15 stars, 387 notes)

Download: senya - Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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7K

Enjoy it

Last edited by Lieselotte 2013-07-04T17:17:33+00:00, edited 22 times in total.

Irie Miyuki

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Irie Miyuki 2013-02-10T14:50:15+00:00

おかえり

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-02-10T14:52:43+00:00

Irie Miyuki wrote:
:D おかえり

Sorry,I can't read japanese._.

Irie Miyuki

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Irie Miyuki 2013-02-10T16:46:35+00:00

Lieselotte wrote:
Irie Miyuki wrote:
:D おかえり
Sorry,I can't read japanese._.

这个时候你应该温柔地回一句ただいま不是吗T T

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2013-02-11T00:34:04+00:00

路过 _(:3 」∠ )_

Entozer

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Entozer 2013-02-13T06:17:18+00:00

Hello~!

lv8

00:01:701 (1701|3,1701|5) - remove one note here?
00:02:669 (2669|1) - add one note in this time
00:04:217 (4217|4) - ^

lv14

00:45:056 (45056|5) - remove
00:44:862 (44862|1) - add note here

Lv28

I think this is a bit overmapped for the song

too much notes xD

Anyway, you can't have 7 key simultaneous keypresses yet (according to ranking criteria -_-)
01:07:701 (67701|2,67701|3,67701|4) - delete at least one note

Sorry if it wasn't that helpful. I can't find much problem here somehow, and I can't mod patterns because you look like you know what you're doing x_x \o/ good luck~

ExPew

Elite Mapper

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ExPew 2013-06-09T16:41:58+00:00

nothing i can do this map.....actually i no good on mod anime/pop song

dont kudo if doesn't got any help

[LV.8]

00:48:540 (48540|1,48540|4) - move left
00:54:830 (54830|5) - move 4 00:55:024 (55024|5) - move 2
01:15:443 (75443|4,76217|4) - move 4
01:19:701 (79701|6,79798|4,79895|2,79991|0,80088|3,80088|5) - http://puu.sh/3bQPo.png
01:22:217 (82217|5) - the hold should start here 01:22:411

[LV.14]

00:13:120 (13120|6,13217|4,13314|2,13411|0,13508|6) - http://puu.sh/3bR0i.png
01:19:798 (79798|4) - move 1 01:19:895 (79895|6) - move 3

[LV.21]

00:25:895 (25895|1,26088|5,26282|2,26379|4) - too short hold?

[LV.24]

HP8

01:11:959 (71959|0,71959|5,71959|2,71959|6,72153|4,72153|5,72153|6,72153|2,72153|0,72346|4,72346|5,72346|1,72346|0,72346|6) - too many note there try reduce some?

Luyuja

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Luyuja 2013-06-11T14:57:44+00:00

LV28:
00:04:798 - add a note here on 5 or 6
00:26:282 (26282|3) - 移到5吧这里有个连点的感觉好点
00:26:572 (26572|4) - 这个移动到4 摆在5其实也可以
00:06:153 - 这里有个"滋"的声音，不打算做个条子么

woc2006

409 posts

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woc2006 2013-06-11T15:12:02+00:00

General
=====
Tags/KIAI/hitsound reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69681
OD: Consider OD 8 for LV21 and 28

LV.21
=====
00:32:862 (32862|3,32862|5,33056|4,33056|2,33250|3,33250|1) - double notes?
00:59:959 (59959|4,59959|0,59959|6,59959|2) - maybe remove one note to keep the same as before.

LV.14
=====
00:09:733 (9733|2,9830|3,9927|4,10024|5) - make the pattern start from column 7 to column 4, much easier to hit.

LV.8
=====
01:11:185 (71185|2) - remove this one

ljqandylee

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ljqandylee 2013-06-13T19:32:28+00:00

[LV8]
HP 6→5
01:11:959 (71959|5) - 延长至01:12:346
01:13:895 - 这里开始的几个长条感觉不是很舒服，建议要么改成首尾相接，要么在长条末尾处加note

别的没什么了，这图四个难度基本都一个思路，就是删点note的区别……

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-13T19:42:50+00:00

ljqandylee wrote:
[LV8]
HP 6→5
01:11:959 (71959|5) - 延长至01:12:346
01:13:895 - 这里开始的几个长条感觉不是很舒服，建议要么改成首尾相接，要么在长条末尾处加note

别的没什么了，这图四个难度基本都一个思路，就是删点note的区别……

曲子本身没那么多变化，这也是没办法的事情._.

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-14T10:01:36+00:00

woc2006 wrote:
General
=====
Tags/KIAI/hitsound reference: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69681
OD: Consider OD 8 for LV21 and 28

LV.21
=====
00:32:862 (32862|3,32862|5,33056|4,33056|2,33250|3,33250|1) - double notes?
00:59:959 (59959|4,59959|0,59959|6,59959|2) - maybe remove one note to keep the same as before.

LV.14
=====
00:09:733 (9733|2,9830|3,9927|4,10024|5) - make the pattern start from column 7 to column 4, much easier to hit.

LV.8
=====
01:11:185 (71185|2) - remove this one

谢谢开源哥Mod

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-14T10:01:52+00:00

Luyuja wrote:
LV28:
00:04:798 - add a note here on 5 or 6
00:26:282 (26282|3) - 移到5吧这里有个连点的感觉好点
00:26:572 (26572|4) - 这个移动到4 摆在5其实也可以
00:06:153 - 这里有个"滋"的声音，不打算做个条子么

Thx for your mod

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-14T10:02:16+00:00

ExPew wrote:
nothing i can do this map.....actually i no good on mod anime/pop song

dont kudo if doesn't got any help

[LV.8]

00:48:540 (48540|1,48540|4) - move left
00:54:830 (54830|5) - move 4 00:55:024 (55024|5) - move 2
01:15:443 (75443|4,76217|4) - move 4
01:19:701 (79701|6,79798|4,79895|2,79991|0,80088|3,80088|5) - http://puu.sh/3bQPo.png
01:22:217 (82217|5) - the hold should start here 01:22:411

[LV.14]

00:13:120 (13120|6,13217|4,13314|2,13411|0,13508|6) - http://puu.sh/3bR0i.png
01:19:798 (79798|4) - move 1 01:19:895 (79895|6) - move 3

[LV.21]

00:25:895 (25895|1,26088|5,26282|2,26379|4) - too short hold?

[LV.24]

HP8

01:11:959 (71959|0,71959|5,71959|2,71959|6,72153|4,72153|5,72153|6,72153|2,72153|0,72346|4,72346|5,72346|1,72346|0,72346|6) - too many note there try reduce some?

Great mod ,thx

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-06-14T10:03:33+00:00

其實你可以用Quote把所有帖子連在一起阿...不用分開來放

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-14T10:05:22+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
其實你可以用Quote把所有帖子連在一起阿...不用分開來放

好吧，谢谢/.\

woc2006

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woc2006 2013-06-14T12:20:20+00:00

Bubbled

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-14T13:50:24+00:00

woc2006 wrote:
Bubbled

谢谢开源哥

eveless

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eveless 2013-06-16T06:49:35+00:00

标题不对吧，您可以看看其他ranked版本的标题有逗号的……

To next BAT: I think the title should be "Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba" since we have two ranked version with that title already

当然你可以找开源哥改了再rebubble

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-16T09:14:37+00:00

eveless wrote:
标题不对吧，您可以看看其他ranked版本的标题有逗号的……

To next BAT: I think the title should be "Utakata, Ai no Mahoroba" since we have two ranked version with that title already

当然你可以找开源哥改了再rebubble

好的，谢谢~~

fixed

chonicle

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chonicle 2013-06-16T18:30:54+00:00

Bubble checking.

[Lv.8]
01:33:200 (93184|4) - snap it to the redline(note对齐红线)

[Lv.14]
00:49:120 (49120|2) - This should be at least double note(one for kick one for the hit-finish)(为啥少了一个?)
01:33:200 (93200|5) - snap it to the redline(对齐红线)

[Lv.21]
00:26:282 - add one kick note

[Lv.28]
Nice
But red line is different from other diffs. You need to fix that

Lieselotte

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Lieselotte 2013-06-16T21:30:41+00:00

chonicle wrote:
Bubble checking.

[Lv.8]
01:33:200 (93184|4) - snap it to the redline(note对齐红线)

[Lv.14]
00:49:120 (49120|2) - This should be at least double note(one for kick one for the hit-finish)(为啥少了一个?)
01:33:200 (93200|5) - snap it to the redline(对齐红线)

[Lv.21]
00:26:282 - add one kick note

[Lv.28]
Nice

THX,fixed

Satellite

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Satellite 2013-06-16T22:38:06+00:00

good job >w<
go ranked :3/

chonicle

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chonicle 2013-06-16T22:51:01+00:00

Since there is a inconsistancy in Lv28's red line. I can only rebubble here.

edit: rebub, changed some tags.

ExPew