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ljqandylee
纳米姐神mapper> < 一点小建议:
[Lv.5]
00:47:586 (47586|4) - 移到第七列
00:47:986 (47986|6) - 移到第五列
00:48:386 (48386|4) - 移到第四列
[Lv.10]
00:22:186 - 第三列加一个长条到00:22:386,然后第四列的长条从00:22:386开始
00:24:986 - 加一个note
[Lv.16]
00:36:536 - 这里还有一个1/8音,不考虑做进去么?
[Lv.24]
OD建议8
02:01:986 - 7押是unrank因素


超好听~star~ :)
HanzeR
Sorry is so late x_x

[General]
Your MP3 sounds to be pretty low quality.. I was able to encode a better one for you, if you wanted to use it http://puu.sh/36kiP.mp3
If you use that MP3, the offset should stay the same.

I also found a higher res version of your BG http://puu.sh/36kFg.jpg

01:21:986 - This section needs to be mapped in all difficulties, according to rule
Only use breaks when they are necessary (totally mute period, not in your instrument usage time, etc).
*Make sure you changes this across all difficulties
Source needs to be beatmania IIDX
"19" "lincle" "original" "soundtrack" goes in tags (don't use capitalization in tags)

[Lv 24]

00:12:986 (12986|3,13086|1) - - missing kick sound
00:16:386 - ^
00:23:986 - ^
00:40:286 - ^
00:40:547 - Remove kick
00:56:386 - missing kick sound
01:05:986 - ^
01:45:986 -^

[Lv 16]
drain +1 imo

[Lv 10]
Remove SV changes from this diff, it doesnt fit a normal
00:34:186 (34186|6,34586|6) - move to 4
00:34:986 (34986|5,35386|5) - move to 6
00:35:786 (35786|4,36186|4) - move to 5

[Lv 5]
Remove SV changes from this diff, it doesnt fit in an easy
Drain -2
Od -2

Good map ~ star (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

ljqandylee wrote:

纳米姐神mapper> < 一点小建议:
[Lv.5]
00:47:586 (47586|4) - 移到第七列
00:47:986 (47986|6) - 移到第五列
00:48:386 (48386|4) - 移到第四列
[Lv.10]
00:22:186 - 第三列加一个长条到00:22:386,然后第四列的长条从00:22:386开始
00:24:986 - 加一个note
[Lv.16]
00:36:536 - 这里还有一个1/8音,不考虑做进去么?
[Lv.24]
OD建议8
02:01:986 - 7押是unrank因素


超好听~star~ :)
坚强你没理解我LV.5那里是在写人声啊>_>
LV.16那里不是1/8
LV.24会考虑的~~._.但是OD8,我不喜欢高判定,所以暂时这样吧,因为面条也不少,而且还有变速在~~
Luyuja
LV24:
HP8OD8好点
01:54:986 - 这里有4个类似01:53:786 - 这里的32分音 不考虑map个类似的楼梯过去么
00:07:986 (7986|5) - 这里不加个面条么?前面一小节类似的地方有面条。
00:40:386 - 00:40:786 - 有个8分音的3连点,map出来好点,不过这个其实随便
02:01:986 - 这里应该不允许这样,老板的规定,改下吧

LV16
唔。。一切都好

LV10
唔。。一切都好

LV5
00:03:186 (3186|1,3386|5,3586|1,3786|6,3886|4,4186|1,4386|6,4586|5,4786|4) - 怀疑这样的排列对LV5来说有点过难 (或者相对ez来说) 尽量简化1-3个note吧
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Luyuja wrote:

LV24:
HP8OD8好点
01:54:986 - 这里有4个类似01:53:786 - 这里的32分音 不考虑map个类似的楼梯过去么
00:07:986 (7986|5) - 这里不加个面条么?前面一小节类似的地方有面条。
00:40:386 - 00:40:786 - 有个8分音的3连点,map出来好点,不过这个其实随便
02:01:986 - 这里应该不允许这样,老板的规定,改下吧

LV16
唔。。一切都好

LV10
唔。。一切都好

LV5
00:03:186 (3186|1,3386|5,3586|1,3786|6,3886|4,4186|1,4386|6,4586|5,4786|4) - 怀疑这样的排列对LV5来说有点过难 (或者相对ez来说) 尽量简化1-3个note吧
如果是LV.1我会简化的>_>噗

LV24,我不喜欢高OD的,HP7也挺好,以后作图都这个HP了>_>,还有那里确实1/8,就算是32我也不会做32的~~
加面条的地方因人而异吧,就像钢琴曲有的人会用长键去写,而有的会用米粒来写,8分音三连点那里不明显,不容易分辨,不建议写,7键同按会考虑的,但是这个是面条+米粒的7键,全压300是没什么大问题的~~谢谢MOD ;)
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

HanzeR wrote:

Sorry is so late x_x

[General]
Your MP3 sounds to be pretty low quality.. I was able to encode a better one for you, if you wanted to use it http://puu.sh/36kiP.mp3
If you use that MP3, the offset should stay the same.

I also found a higher res version of your BG http://puu.sh/36kFg.jpg

01:21:986 - This section needs to be mapped in all difficulties, according to rule
Only use breaks when they are necessary (totally mute period, not in your instrument usage time, etc).
*Make sure you changes this across all difficulties
Source needs to be beatmania IIDX
"19" "lincle" "original" "soundtrack" goes in tags (don't use capitalization in tags)

[Lv 24]

00:12:986 (12986|3,13086|1) - - missing kick sound
00:16:386 - ^
00:23:986 - ^
00:40:286 - ^
00:40:547 - Remove kick
00:56:386 - missing kick sound
01:05:986 - ^
01:45:986 -^

[Lv 16]
drain +1 imo

[Lv 10]
Remove SV changes from this diff, it doesnt fit a normal
00:34:186 (34186|6,34586|6) - move to 4
00:34:986 (34986|5,35386|5) - move to 6
00:35:786 (35786|4,36186|4) - move to 5

[Lv 5]
Remove SV changes from this diff, it doesnt fit in an easy
Drain -2
Od -2

Good map ~ star (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧
Thanks for your mod and star > <
Izumi_old
star!~
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Izumi wrote:

star!~
THX >A<
PROGUY
Hi there! As requested, I'll mod your map :)

[LV.5]
(Doesn't look like a Level 5 to me. Looks more like Level 7 :p)
00:03:786 (3786|6) Delete this note.
00:04:586 (4586|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:04:786 (4786|4) Move to 1st column.
00:06:786 (6786|5) Move to 5th column.
00:06:986 (6986|0,7286|6) Delete these notes.
00:07:586 Try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:10:286 (10286|6) Move to 3rd column.
00:11:886 (11886|0) Move to 5th column.
00:13:386 (13386|0,13686|6) Delete these notes.
00:13:986 Same? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:14:986 (14986|2,15286|2) Delete these notes.
00:15:086 (15086|4,15386|4) Move to 4th column.
00:22:386 Add note in 7th column.
00:42:586 Add note in 6th column.
00:43:586 (43586|1) Move to 1st column.
00:43:586 (43586|5) Move to 7th column.
00:56:586 (56586|6) Delete this note.
00:59:586 (59586|5) Move to 5th column.
00:59:786 (59786|0,60086|6) Delete these notes.
01:02:986 (62986|0) ^
01:06:186 (66186|6,66486|0) ^
01:07:786 (67786|0,68086|6) ^
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) ^ (These ones don't even match the song at all)
01:36:386 From here, I noticed and realized that these patterns are literally a copy & paste without any variations. While this is acceptable in Easy charts, repeating this more than four times can get extremely repetitive and boring. Please arrange your patterns from here onwards to make it different from the rest of the chart.

[LV.10]
HP Drain +1
00:09:586 Add note in 4th column.
00:12:886 (12886|4) Delete this note.
00:43:786 (43786|1,43986|2,44386|2,44586|1,44986|2) Move right by one or two columns.
00:45:586 (45586|4,45986|4,46586|4) Move to 2nd column.
00:45:386 (45386|5,46186|5) Move to 4th column.
00:50:186 (50186|5,50386|4,50786|4,50986|5,51386|4) Move left by two columns.
01:15:886 Add note in 4th column.
01:17:486 ^
01:21:986 Add note in 1st column.
01:51:086 Add note in 2nd or 4th column.
01:51:086 Add note in 1st, 2nd, or 4th column.
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

[LV.16]
HP Drain +1 or 2
00:09:586 Add note in 4th, 5th, or 6th column.
00:24:786 Add note in 4th column.
01:21:986 That's odd... The previous diffs had a Break Time at this point... Why isn't there one here?
01:26:786 (86786|6,86986|5,87186|4,87386|5,87586|4,87786|6,87986|5,88186|4) Delete these notes (unless you're gonna chart the rest of the melody before this part)
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

I don't have much time for now, but I will mod your last chart/diff sometime later. Hope this helps though! :D
woc2006
LV.24
02:01:989 - 7 notes

Lv.16
Mind all 2x speed changes, a bit unreadable.

Lv.10
00:54:886 - the two speed changes here is a bit unreadable as in a normal diff. The same for other 2.0x sv changes.
01:10:786 - A sudden slow down.

Lv.5
Speed changes are not suitable for easy diff, I'd like you remove them all.
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

PROGUY wrote:

Hi there! As requested, I'll mod your map :)

[LV.5]
(Doesn't look like a Level 5 to me. Looks more like Level 7 :p)
00:03:786 (3786|6) Delete this note.
00:04:586 (4586|5) Move to 3rd column.
00:04:786 (4786|4) Move to 1st column.
00:06:786 (6786|5) Move to 5th column.
00:06:986 (6986|0,7286|6) Delete these notes.
00:07:586 Try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:10:286 (10286|6) Move to 3rd column.
00:11:886 (11886|0) Move to 5th column.
00:13:386 (13386|0,13686|6) Delete these notes.
00:13:986 Same? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/795396
00:14:986 (14986|2,15286|2) Delete these notes.
00:15:086 (15086|4,15386|4) Move to 4th column.
00:22:386 Add note in 7th column.
00:42:586 Add note in 6th column.
00:43:586 (43586|1) Move to 1st column.
00:43:586 (43586|5) Move to 7th column.
00:56:586 (56586|6) Delete this note.
00:59:586 (59586|5) Move to 5th column.
00:59:786 (59786|0,60086|6) Delete these notes.
01:02:986 (62986|0) ^
01:06:186 (66186|6,66486|0) ^
01:07:786 (67786|0,68086|6) ^
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) ^ (These ones don't even match the song at all)
01:36:386 From here, I noticed and realized that these patterns are literally a copy & paste without any variations. While this is acceptable in Easy charts, repeating this more than four times can get extremely repetitive and boring. Please arrange your patterns from here onwards to make it different from the rest of the chart.

[LV.10]
HP Drain +1
00:09:586 Add note in 4th column.
00:12:886 (12886|4) Delete this note.
00:43:786 (43786|1,43986|2,44386|2,44586|1,44986|2) Move right by one or two columns.
00:45:586 (45586|4,45986|4,46586|4) Move to 2nd column.
00:45:386 (45386|5,46186|5) Move to 4th column.
00:50:186 (50186|5,50386|4,50786|4,50986|5,51386|4) Move left by two columns.
01:15:886 Add note in 4th column.
01:17:486 ^
01:21:986 Add note in 1st column.
01:51:086 Add note in 2nd or 4th column.
01:51:086 Add note in 1st, 2nd, or 4th column.
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

[LV.16]
HP Drain +1 or 2
00:09:586 Add note in 4th, 5th, or 6th column.
00:24:786 Add note in 4th column.
01:21:986 That's odd... The previous diffs had a Break Time at this point... Why isn't there one here?
01:26:786 (86786|6,86986|5,87186|4,87386|5,87586|4,87786|6,87986|5,88186|4) Delete these notes (unless you're gonna chart the rest of the melody before this part)
02:01:986 Add notes in 1st and 7th columns.

I don't have much time for now, but I will mod your last chart/diff sometime later. Hope this helps though! :D
thanks for your mod :D
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

woc2006 wrote:

LV.24
02:01:989 - 7 notes

Lv.16
Mind all 2x speed changes, a bit unreadable.

Lv.10
00:54:886 - the two speed changes here is a bit unreadable as in a normal diff. The same for other 2.0x sv changes.
01:10:786 - A sudden slow down.

Lv.5
Speed changes are not suitable for easy diff, I'd like you remove them all.
开源哥你的图没更新吧,我早就把LV.24那个七键全压改了……
woc2006
bubbled
chonicle
Nice map! Ranked~
Loooctav
Congratz~
Maiz94
Congratz \:D/
PROGUY
I haven't finished my mod yet :/
Oh well, congrats anyway :p
Verlaren
Congrats.
Flanster
when will someone make 5k maps ;_;
Andrea

LoliFlan wrote:

when will someone make 5k maps ;_;
Why don't you make one yourself? :P

Congrats to the mapper btw.
Flanster

Andrea wrote:

Why don't you make one yourself? :P
Because I map too slow xD.. Plus playing my own maps is boring LOL.
DJPop
Serious issues here...

• Inconsistent speed changes in LV.16 and LV.24, LV.16 is a lot harder than LV.24
• LV.5 and LV.10 have break time, otherwise don't

~LV.10~
01:52:586 (112586|6) - wrong rhythm, should be at 01:52:686


Speed-change gimmicks also kill the fun, because the gap around those parts aren't consistent. See image below (LV.16 at 00:54:786 - )
It's annoying when you can't guess the rhythm by just using sight reading and you also need to remember exactly where and how the speed changes in each part.
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

DJPop wrote:

Serious issues here...

• Inconsistent speed changes in LV.16 and LV.24, LV.16 is a lot harder than LV.24
• LV.5 and LV.10 have break time, otherwise don't

~LV.10~
01:52:586 (112586|6) - wrong rhythm, should be at 01:52:686


Speed-change gimmicks also kill the fun, because the gap around those parts aren't consistent. See image below (LV.16 at 00:54:786 - )
It's annoying when you can't guess the rhythm by just using sight reading and you also need to remember exactly where and how the speed changes in each part.
fixed

but I need someone help me unrank my map :(
DJPop
Unrank due to serious issue as I mentioned in p/2354573

And mapper decides to unrank this map to fix them.

Will do a full mod when I have time.

Hanyuu
While you are at it can you fix the timing slowdown changes at 01:10:786 - for the slowdown parts?
01:13:536 - This speedchange does not go with any note aswell
I found it really annoying that the speeddown is actually happening before the end of the hold note and i thought it was a bug at my first play.
01:36:386 - Same here. The speedup to normal tempo is happening before the end of the hold note. Such speed changes should allways happen at the major beat of the song.
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Hanyuu wrote:

While you are at it can you fix the timing slowdown changes at 01:10:786 - for the slowdown parts?
01:13:536 - This speedchange does not go with any note aswell
I found it really annoying that the speeddown is actually happening before the end of the hold note and i thought it was a bug at my first play.
01:36:386 - Same here. The speedup to normal tempo is happening before the end of the hold note. Such speed changes should allways happen at the major beat of the song.
No change

thx ;)
DJPop
• Mania maps shouldn't have break times. It's also told in AiMod.
• Set preview time at 00:55:986.
• Set audio lead-in 2000
• Use sound mods in LV.24 as a guide when fixing other diffs.
• Part of MP3's name is missing, change from "Mermaid girl- MIX-" to "Mermaid girl - Festa Mix -"
• Tags: change from "19" to "19th", remove "ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK"
• Use timing below:

Timings
386,400,4,2,0,30,1,0
9986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10086,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10286,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10386,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10719,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
11586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11686,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
11886,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11986,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
12319,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
12386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
29186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
54786,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
54919,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
55319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55586,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
70786,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
72386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
73986,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
74786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
93186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
95986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
96119,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
96386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
121586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
121719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
121986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0

~LV.5~
○ Don't use any speed changes in this diff.
○ HP 5
00:43:586 (43586|5) - remove
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) - ^

~LV.10~
○ Don't use too much speed changes in this diff (Slow part at 01:10:786 is allowed).
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:086
00:39:186 - add a note
00:48:986 (48986|2) - move to 00:49:086
00:49:186 (49186|0) - remove
00:55:586 - use only 1 long note
00:56:986 (56986|5) - remove
01:14:986 (74986|6) - ^
01:15:086 (75086|4,75286|4,75486|4) - remove
01:15:986 (75986|4) - move to 01:15:886
01:17:586 (77586|2) - move to 01:17:486
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 3
01:36:986 (96986|5) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|2) - move to 01:51:086
01:57:586 (117586|2) - move to 01:57:486

~LV.16~
○ HP 7
00:10:886 (10886|1) - move to 00:10:986
00:12:486 (12486|3) - remove
00:49:186 (49186|4) - ^
00:58:386 (58386|4) - ^
01:04:786 (64786|0) - ^
01:14:852 (74852|4,74919|5) - 1/8 snaps, not 1/6
01:32:386 (92386|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:486 (92486|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:586 (92586|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:686 (92686|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|6,93586|6) - move to lane 6
01:38:386 (98386|4) - remove
01:44:786 (104786|0) - ^

~LV.24~
○ HP 8
Sounds:
00:03:586 - crash
00:09:986 - ^
00:11:586 - ^
00:13:186 - ^
00:13:986 - ^
00:14:786 - ^
00:16:386 - ^
00:22:786 - ^
00:25:986 - ^
00:26:786 - ^
00:27:586 - ^
00:30:786 - ^
00:37:186 - ^
00:38:786 - ^
00:39:186 - ^
00:39:586 - ^
00:40:386 - ^
00:41:986 - ^
00:42:386 - ^
00:43:586 - ^
00:49:986 - ^
00:51:586 - ^
00:51:986 - ^
00:52:386 - ^
00:53:186 - ^
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:386 - ^
01:02:786 - ^
01:06:786 - ^
01:09:186 - ^
01:12:386 - ^
01:15:586 - ^
01:18:786 - ^
01:19:586 - ^
01:20:386 - ^
01:21:186 - ^
01:32:386 - ^
01:33:186 - ^
01:33:586 - ^
01:42:786 - ^
01:48:386 - ^
01:49:186 - ^
01:55:586 - ^
01:59:586 - ^
02:00:386 - ^
02:01:186 - ^
Notes:
00:03:186 (3186|1,3236|2,3286|5,3336|4,3386|1,3436|2,3486|5,3536|4) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:10:886 (10886|0) - move to 00:10:986
00:15:586 (15586|3) - remove
00:19:986 (19986|2) -
00:20:786 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
00:22:986 (22986|5) - move to lane 7, add note at lane 5
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:286, lane 4 or 2
00:28:186 (28186|2) - move to 00:28:086
00:28:286 - add note at lane 3
00:29:186 - good place for speed changes
00:30:386 (30386|6,30436|5,30486|4,30536|3,30586|2,30636|3,30686|4,30736|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:46:436 (46436|5,46486|4,46536|3) - remove, not fit to anything
00:56:036 (56036|5,56086|4,56136|3,56186|2,56236|3,56286|4,56336|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:14:911 (74911|5,74911|1) - remove, not fit to anything
01:15:986 (75986|5) - remove
01:17:586 (77586|0) - move to 01:17:686
01:20:986 (80986|3) - move to 01:20:686
01:20:986 - add note at lane 5
01:21:086 - add note at lane 4
01:32:586 (92586|5) - remove
01:34:436 (94436|1,94486|2,94536|3,94586|4,94636|3,94686|2,94736|1) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:35:086 (95086|6) - end at 01:35:286
01:35:686 - add note at lane 4, shouldn't ignore the sound there
01:35:786 (95786|5,95786|1) - end at 01:35:986
01:43:386 (103386|0) - end at 01:43:586
01:44:786 (104786|3) - move to 01:44:886, lane 3 or 1
01:49:586 (109586|3) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|4) - ^
01:52:186 - add note at lane 6
01:52:786 (112786|1) - remove
01:53:586 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
01:55:986 (115986|6) - remove
01:57:586 (117586|3) - ^
02:00:986 (120986|2) - move to 02:00:886
02:01:086 - add note at lane 3


Too much syncing issues, why is this mapset got ranked in the first place ...

EDIT: Didn't blame the mapper though
Shohei Ohtani
lol this dude got told by DJPop omg
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

DJPop wrote:

• Mania maps shouldn't have break times. It's also told in AiMod.
• Set preview time at 00:55:986.
• Set audio lead-in 2000
• Use sound mods in LV.24 as a guide when fixing other diffs.
• Part of MP3's name is missing, change from "Mermaid girl- MIX-" to "Mermaid girl - Festa Mix -"
• Tags: change from "19" to "19th", remove "ORIGINAL SOUNDTRACK"
• Use timing below:

Timings
386,400,4,2,0,30,1,0
9986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10086,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10286,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10386,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
10719,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
10786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
11586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11686,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
11886,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
11986,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
12319,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
12386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
29186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
29719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
29986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
54786,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
54919,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
55319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
55586,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
70786,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
72386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
73986,-200,4,2,0,30,0,0
74786,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
93186,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93319,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
93719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
93986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
95986,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
96119,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
96386,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
121586,-250,4,2,0,30,0,0
121719,-76.9230769230769,4,2,0,30,0,0
121986,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0

~LV.5~
○ Don't use any speed changes in this diff.
○ HP 5
00:43:586 (43586|5) - remove
01:15:386 (75386|6,75486|4) - ^

~LV.10~
○ Don't use too much speed changes in this diff (Slow part at 01:10:786 is allowed).
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:086
00:39:186 - add a note
00:48:986 (48986|2) - move to 00:49:086
00:49:186 (49186|0) - remove
00:55:586 - use only 1 long note
00:56:986 (56986|5) - remove
01:14:986 (74986|6) - ^
01:15:086 (75086|4,75286|4,75486|4) - remove
01:15:986 (75986|4) - move to 01:15:886
01:17:586 (77586|2) - move to 01:17:486
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 3
01:36:986 (96986|5) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|2) - move to 01:51:086
01:57:586 (117586|2) - move to 01:57:486

~LV.16~
○ HP 7
00:10:886 (10886|1) - move to 00:10:986
00:12:486 (12486|3) - remove
00:49:186 (49186|4) - ^
00:58:386 (58386|4) - ^
01:04:786 (64786|0) - ^
01:14:852 (74852|4,74919|5) - 1/8 snaps, not 1/6
01:32:386 (92386|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:486 (92486|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:586 (92586|6) - move to lane 1
01:32:686 (92686|0) - move to lane 3
01:32:786 (92786|2) - move to lane 1
01:33:186 (93186|0) - move to lane 2
01:33:186 (93186|6,93586|6) - move to lane 6
01:38:386 (98386|4) - remove
01:44:786 (104786|0) - ^

~LV.24~
○ HP 8
Sounds:
00:03:586 - crash
00:09:986 - ^
00:11:586 - ^
00:13:186 - ^
00:13:986 - ^
00:14:786 - ^
00:16:386 - ^
00:22:786 - ^
00:25:986 - ^
00:26:786 - ^
00:27:586 - ^
00:30:786 - ^
00:37:186 - ^
00:38:786 - ^
00:39:186 - ^
00:39:586 - ^
00:40:386 - ^
00:41:986 - ^
00:42:386 - ^
00:43:586 - ^
00:49:986 - ^
00:51:586 - ^
00:51:986 - ^
00:52:386 - ^
00:53:186 - ^
00:53:986 - ^
00:56:386 - ^
01:02:786 - ^
01:06:786 - ^
01:09:186 - ^
01:12:386 - ^
01:15:586 - ^
01:18:786 - ^
01:19:586 - ^
01:20:386 - ^
01:21:186 - ^
01:32:386 - ^
01:33:186 - ^
01:33:586 - ^
01:42:786 - ^
01:48:386 - ^
01:49:186 - ^
01:55:586 - ^
01:59:586 - ^
02:00:386 - ^
02:01:186 - ^
Notes:
00:03:186 (3186|1,3236|2,3286|5,3336|4,3386|1,3436|2,3486|5,3536|4) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:10:886 (10886|0) - move to 00:10:986
00:15:586 (15586|3) - remove
00:19:986 (19986|2) -
00:20:786 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
00:22:986 (22986|5) - move to lane 7, add note at lane 5
00:23:186 (23186|4) - move to 00:23:286, lane 4 or 2
00:28:186 (28186|2) - move to 00:28:086
00:28:286 - add note at lane 3
00:29:186 - good place for speed changes
00:30:386 (30386|6,30436|5,30486|4,30536|3,30586|2,30636|3,30686|4,30736|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
00:46:436 (46436|5,46486|4,46536|3) - remove, not fit to anything
00:56:036 (56036|5,56086|4,56136|3,56186|2,56236|3,56286|4,56336|5) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:14:911 (74911|5,74911|1) - remove, not fit to anything
01:15:986 (75986|5) - remove
01:17:586 (77586|0) - move to 01:17:686
01:20:986 (80986|3) - move to 01:20:686
01:20:986 - add note at lane 5
01:21:086 - add note at lane 4
01:32:586 (92586|5) - remove
01:34:436 (94436|1,94486|2,94536|3,94586|4,94636|3,94686|2,94736|1) - 1/6 snaps, not 1/8
01:35:086 (95086|6) - end at 01:35:286
01:35:686 - add note at lane 4, shouldn't ignore the sound there
01:35:786 (95786|5,95786|1) - end at 01:35:986
01:43:386 (103386|0) - end at 01:43:586
01:44:786 (104786|3) - move to 01:44:886, lane 3 or 1
01:49:586 (109586|3) - remove
01:51:186 (111186|4) - ^
01:52:186 - add note at lane 6
01:52:786 (112786|1) - remove
01:53:586 - add 1/8 ladder streams here
01:55:986 (115986|6) - remove
01:57:586 (117586|3) - ^
02:00:986 (120986|2) - move to 02:00:886
02:01:086 - add note at lane 3


Too much syncing issues, why is this mapset got ranked in the first place ...

EDIT: Didn't blame the mapper though
Fixed,thx
DJPop
Nothing changed...?
Niko-nyan
oh wait please
General
Title should be "Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX-" (Unicode "Mermaid girl -秋葉工房MIX-")
Artist should be "Remixed by DJ Command" (This is how it appears in IIDX)
Source should be "beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle"
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

DJPop wrote:

Nothing changed...?
I already fixed some notes,and some hitsounds

I think my patterns already good,unneed any pattern suggestion :(

sorry~~
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Frans Niko wrote:

oh wait please
General
Title should be "Mermaid girl -Akiba Koubou MIX-" (Unicode "Mermaid girl -秋葉工房MIX-")
Artist should be "Remixed by DJ Command" (This is how it appears in IIDX)
Source should be "beatmania IIDX 19 Lincle"
OK,fixed thx~~
Niko-nyan
anyway i'm seriously about the source you must fix the source too
Niko-nyan
remove 19th on tags
Sync
good map
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Sync wrote:

good map
Thanks ;)
Loctav
Having this in my queue. Will mod this as soon as possible.
Let's get it back to the level it deserves~
Loctav
Double post, yo!

[General]

Wrong artist: Artist should be DJ Command not Remixed by DJ Command, lol
Put cream puff into the the tags, since they are the artists of the song.

[LV 10]

Let's fix the barlines from 00:10:036 to 00:12:186



01:10:786 - 0,75x is enough
01:12:186 - remove green line
01:13:586 - remove green line
01:13:986 - x0.75 here
01:14:386 - remove green line
01:15:586 - move green line to 01:14:986
01:14:786 (74786|4,74986|5,75086|3,75186|1,75286|3,75386|5,75486|3) - this could increase the readability of the speedup: http://puu.sh/3Vsdj.jpg but pretty much optional

01:21:986 - do you really want to leave this section empty? this is so unneeded ;_;


[LV 16]

Same barlines as in Lvl 10 please!

patternwise everything seems fine to me
just the break-time is a bit sad and should be mapped ;_;

[LV 24]

Same barlines as in level 10 please! (except 00:54:786 to 00:55:136 and 01:33:186 to 01:36:386)

01:36:136 - move greenline (1,33x one) to 01:36:186

same issue with the break, patterns are fine.

This should be all. Poke me, if you need help applying and/or if you have done everything~
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Loctav wrote:

Double post, yo!

[General]

Wrong artist: Artist should be DJ Command not Remixed by DJ Command, lol
Put cream puff into the the tags, since they are the artists of the song.

[LV 10]

Let's fix the barlines from 00:10:036 to 00:12:186



01:10:786 - 0,75x is enough
01:12:186 - remove green line
01:13:586 - remove green line
01:13:986 - x0.75 here
01:14:386 - remove green line
01:15:586 - move green line to 01:14:986
01:14:786 (74786|4,74986|5,75086|3,75186|1,75286|3,75386|5,75486|3) - this could increase the readability of the speedup: http://puu.sh/3Vsdj.jpg but pretty much optional × so hard with beginner >.>

01:21:986 - do you really want to leave this section empty? this is so unneeded ;_; but,this is LV.10,not LV.24 :D


[LV 16]

Same barlines as in Lvl 10 please!

patternwise everything seems fine to me
just the break-time is a bit sad and should be mapped ;_; I don't know how to remove break time :(

[LV 24]

Same barlines as in level 10 please! (except 00:54:786 to 00:55:136 and 01:33:186 to 01:36:386) this is LV.24,Another diff,I think this is enough :D

01:36:136 - move greenline (1,33x one) to 01:36:186

same issue with the break, patterns are fine.

This should be all. Poke me, if you need help applying and/or if you have done everything~
Thanks,Loctav :)
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