can't leave a star

I think source should be "30-sai no Hoken Taiiku", because wikia says it: http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/30歳の保健体育

Hi ! Mod from my queue





Good Luck ><

P A N wrote:

Hi ! Mod from my queue

[General]

change the bg size to 1024x768

[UWS's Normal]

AR +1 because 200BPM
00:12:720 (1) - more curve would be great
01:02:670 (3) - move head left 1 grid
01:24:870 (1) - move center to left 1 grid
02:38:070 (5) - move tail up 1 grid
03:23:670 (2) - move to 40|164 is better
03:24:570 (3) - mvoe to 256|64
03:24:870 (1) - move tail right 2 grid

[Hard]

01:26:820 (1) - move center down 1 grid? fixed
02:00:120 (7) - cancle grid snap and move to 440|163 change to another pettern
02:41:670 (8) - NC

fixed

[Insane]

00:16:320 (10) - NC this would be great >_> fixed
00:57:120 (6) - move tail left 1 grid no
01:11:970 (5) - NC here? fixed
01:31:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe curve this stream a bit to a better flow? hmm...no change
02:17:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OMG confusing here @_@ maybe change? fixed
02:19:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - curve this stream a bit? no
02:27:720 (4) - NC no
02:36:870 (8) - NC fixed
02:41:670 (8) - NC add to 02:41:070 -
02:59:520 (8) - NC fixed
03:07:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - curve?

no

Good Luck ><

Thank you for modding :3

changed BG

Fixed all but last suggestion. I prefer it offset. :3

Thanks for modding. C:

http://puu.sh/2HOKJ.osu

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2!

Some suggestions.

[Overall]
Make audio lead in consistent in all diff's
I'd suggest to remove this 00:58:470 - 01:17:670 kiai section or at least replace it w/ fontains at the start and in the end, since it's too much kiai all across the field

[Normal]
AR-1?
STR 1 instead of 2?
00:24:270 (4) - 1/2 slider or 2 circles will sounds better imo
01:38:070 (2) - align w/ the end of (1)?
01:56:070 (1,2) - I'd suggest to ctrl+J (2) to deal w/ that overlap
02:43:470 (3,1) - is this overlap is nesessary? It don't looks good imo
02:49:170 - Here comes a nice vocal part, why you've left it unmapped? Also, that mico-break makes no sence
Well, it can be told as spinnerspam, but you can place 1st here 02:48:870 - 02:50:670, circle 02:50:970 here and 2nd 02:51:270 - 02:53:520
03:14:070 (3,4) - better get start of 4 right under an end of 3

[Hard]
Dunno 'bout nowadays, earlier any MAT (was really good comunity structure, R.I.P.) or BAT can force you to remap your diff if you're abusing mid-combo spacing breaks. So if I dunno, I will not point on those.
01:20:070 - break here
01:52:470 (4) - align w/ (3)?
02:09:870 (7,8) - align w/ 6?
02:39:270 (3,4) - That overlap didn't looks good imo. Consider to respace it
02:42:870 (7,8) - ^
02:49:170 - same as for normal, I'd suggest to map something here, instead of inserting break
03:22:770 - delete (1), start (2) here?

[Insane]
Is this HUGE spacing is really needed since that diff is quite fast already?
00:17:220 (4,5,6) - space it properly under each other
01:11:370 (3) - I'd suggest to space it away 'cause how ppl manage to read where a slider starts


Rest seems fine enough

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General

• Everything seems in order.

UWS's Normal

• Hello, United. Want some coffee?

1. 00:54:570 (2,3) - A blanket would fit perfectly fine here for me. In fact, I wonder why you haven't make it here, since with 00:53:670 (1,2) - it feels much, much better the flow with the blanket. And I quite like the fact that it would be closer to the center of the grid, since the next object is a spin.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:00:570 - Feels quite empty without a circle here. I understand your point by following the vocals, but it would make a huge improvement with flow adding so. Therefore, is there any chance of adding something here? I quite like the possibility of placing the circle here under 00:59:370 (2) -. But yeah, this is up to you.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:05:670 (1,2) - Pattern here feels somewhat weird. The stack kinda ruins the flow as well, with the "empty" tick in 01:07:170 -. Making a slider in 01:07:170 - to 01:07:770 - would be better in my opinion. Another way is making a reverse arrow in 01:07:470 - .
   
4. 01:10:170 - The same as 01:00:570 - applies here.
   
5. 01:44:070 (3) - Uhh, New Combo here? The whole combo 01:41:670 (1,2,3,4) - is quite long, if compared with your previous ones.
   
6. 02:20:220 - Why no spin here, just like in 01:17:820 (1) - ?
   
7. 02:39:270 (1) - Hmm, this shape for sliders are great for making blankets, but I dislike them very much with only themselves on the grid. This specifically slider here I would have changed for a better shape. Any chance you can do the same here? What you think?

Hard

1. 01:24:570 - For making things consistent, I highly suggest mapping this part here to be a complement of what you did on 01:21:870 (1,2,3) - . Below an example of pattern you could try doing here. The break after 01:22:470 (3) - doesn't suit up on your diff, since in Normal and Insane, this part is completely mapped.
   
   Example

   
2. 02:58:020 - Consider making a triple stack here with 02:57:870 (7,8) - . It feels weird playing the way it is.

Insane

• Nice diff.

1. 01:03:870 - Make a triple stack with 01:03:720 (2,3) - here? The same applies for 01:05:070 - with 01:04:920 (5,6) - .
   
2. 02:35:370 (3,4,5) - Overmap here. You could have done exactly the same thing in 02:34:470 (1,2) - at this point for making things consistent.
   
   Example

   
3. 02:52:470 (1) - Watch out here. Why not do something like in 00:09:570 (1) - since the melody is exactly the same thing? With this said, consider starting this slider in 02:52:770 - to 02:53:070 - .
   
   Example

   

Nice mapset.
Here, have a star:

Thunderstorm wrote:

Hey! You're welcomed by Thunderstorm's modding system v 220708000...2!

Some suggestions.

[Overall]
Make audio lead in consistent in all diff's Taiko is longer so I think don't need audio lead in othe diff
I'd suggest to remove this 00:58:470 - 01:17:670 kiai section or at least replace it w/ fontains at the start and in the end, since it's too much kiai all across the field

[Normal]
AR-1?
STR 1 instead of 2?
00:24:270 (4) - 1/2 slider or 2 circles will sounds better imo
01:38:070 (2) - align w/ the end of (1)?
01:56:070 (1,2) - I'd suggest to ctrl+J (2) to deal w/ that overlap
02:43:470 (3,1) - is this overlap is nesessary? It don't looks good imo
02:49:170 - Here comes a nice vocal part, why you've left it unmapped? Also, that mico-break makes no sence
Well, it can be told as spinnerspam, but you can place 1st here 02:48:870 - 02:50:670, circle 02:50:970 here and 2nd 02:51:270 - 02:53:520
03:14:070 (3,4) - better get start of 4 right under an end of 3

[Hard]
Dunno 'bout nowadays, earlier any MAT (was really good comunity structure, R.I.P.) or BAT can force you to remap your diff if you're abusing mid-combo spacing breaks. So if I dunno, I will not point on those.
01:20:070 - break here fixed
01:52:470 (4) - align w/ (3)?
02:09:870 (7,8) - align w/ 6?
02:39:270 (3,4) - That overlap didn't looks good imo. Consider to respace it
02:42:870 (7,8) - ^
02:49:170 - same as for normal, I'd suggest to map something here, instead of inserting break
03:22:770 - delete (1), start (2) here?

[Insane]
Is this HUGE spacing is really needed since that diff is quite fast already? I think it's boring if there isn't jumps
00:17:220 (4,5,6) - space it properly under each other
01:11:370 (3) - I'd suggest to space it away 'cause how ppl manage to read where a slider starts


Rest seems fine enough

Wolf wrote:

Hi.
From my Modding Queue.

General

• Everything seems in order.

UWS's Normal

• Hello, United. Want some coffee?

1. 00:54:570 (2,3) - A blanket would fit perfectly fine here for me. In fact, I wonder why you haven't make it here, since with 00:53:670 (1,2) - it feels much, much better the flow with the blanket. And I quite like the fact that it would be closer to the center of the grid, since the next object is a spin.
   
   Example

   
2. 01:00:570 - Feels quite empty without a circle here. I understand your point by following the vocals, but it would make a huge improvement with flow adding so. Therefore, is there any chance of adding something here? I quite like the possibility of placing the circle here under 00:59:370 (2) -. But yeah, this is up to you.
   
   Example

   
3. 01:05:670 (1,2) - Pattern here feels somewhat weird. The stack kinda ruins the flow as well, with the "empty" tick in 01:07:170 -. Making a slider in 01:07:170 - to 01:07:770 - would be better in my opinion. Another way is making a reverse arrow in 01:07:470 - .
   
4. 01:10:170 - The same as 01:00:570 - applies here.
   
5. 01:44:070 (3) - Uhh, New Combo here? The whole combo 01:41:670 (1,2,3,4) - is quite long, if compared with your previous ones.
   
6. 02:20:220 - Why no spin here, just like in 01:17:820 (1) - ?
   
7. 02:39:270 (1) - Hmm, this shape for sliders are great for making blankets, but I dislike them very much with only themselves on the grid. This specifically slider here I would have changed for a better shape. Any chance you can do the same here? What you think?

Hard

1. 01:24:570 - For making things consistent, I highly suggest mapping this part here to be a complement of what you did on 01:21:870 (1,2,3) - . Below an example of pattern you could try doing here. The break after 01:22:470 (3) - doesn't suit up on your diff, since in Normal and Insane, this part is completely mapped. fixed
   
   Example

   
2. 02:58:020 - Consider making a triple stack here with 02:57:870 (7,8) - . It feels weird playing the way it is.

hmm...no change

Insane

• Nice diff.

1. 01:03:870 - Make a triple stack with 01:03:720 (2,3) - here? The same applies for 01:05:070 - with 01:04:920 (5,6) - .
   
2. 02:35:370 (3,4,5) - Overmap here. You could have done exactly the same thing in 02:34:470 (1,2) - at this point for making things consistent.
   
   Example

   
   this notes follow vocal
   
3. 02:52:470 (1) - Watch out here. Why not do something like in 00:09:570 (1) - since the melody is exactly the same thing? With this said, consider starting this slider in 02:52:770 - to 02:53:070 - .
   
   Example

   

fixed

Nice mapset.
Here, have a star:

Thanks modders and star :3

General
You need two taikos.
Offset is different in the taiko.

UWS's Normal
Fun map. Only small things to consider.

00:58:470 (1,2,3) - Personally I feel the angle could be better. http://puu.sh/2WZ00.jpg Very minor change.
01:41:670 (1) - I'm not entirely sure about this. I don't really like the shape, but that's just me. I think you could improve the shape by bringing the curve part slightly lower. http://puu.sh/2WZzE.jpg The current angle just seems slightly too high.
01:41:670 (1,2,3,4) - You have hitsounds here, but they sound like blank hitsounds to me. The hitsounds lack depth here.
02:11:670 (3,1) - It would look better if the first curve of 1 matched the curve at 3 as a mirror. I think it has a better affect than the blanket with the second curve. I'm not sure if it's feasible for the next part though.
02:43:470 (3,1) - Such a weird crossover. I came up with this http://puu.sh/2WZzE.jpg It goes into the note curve perfectly.
02:46:470 (1,2,3) - Those claps >.<
02:47:670 (3) - Maybe a finish.
02:57:270 (3,4,1) - If you can get the spacing equal here it would look better.
03:00:870 (1) - Curve is too sharp. Use a softer curve.

Hard
There were multiple things I didn't agree with in this difficulty. It was largely personal opinion so I didn't mention much of what I didn't like. I had problems playing the song when the spacing increased to 1.3 and some stacks just felt awkward to play. I don't expect you to change any of these things on my behalf.

00:38:970 (5,1) - Please line up.
00:54:570 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Transition is uneven. I don't care for the 5,6 stack, but that's just personal opinion.
01:10:470 (1) - Bad angle. I suggest curving like this instead. http://puu.sh/2XPbn.jpg (Make similar to 01:11:520 (5) - )
01:36:570 (6,1) - Alignment could be better.
01:56:970 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I have to say this looks better upside down, because of the way the approach circles change. 01:58:170 (9,1) - Not really a fan that 9 doesn't point towards the next object though. Not sure what you can do about it though.
02:12:870 (1) - Same comment as the mirror.
02:44:070 (1,4) - Use a normal curve? These look out of place.
03:08:070 (1) - Looks slightly too low to line up perfectly with previous slider. Move to y 334
03:24:870 (1,2) - Improve how these interlock?

Insane
I'm pretty sure this song is unsightreadable. I'm not sure if that is a bad thing though. I'll leave that to be answered by someone else.

00:22:320 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing keeps change here. Keep it consistent!
00:56:670 (3,4,5,6) - Unusual transition. It doesn't seem to reflect the song very well, but I could be wrong.
02:17:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wild changes in jump spacing. The vocals weren't there to back up the wild spacing changes as in previous parts of the song. I can't play it so feel free to get a second opinion.
02:59:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So confusing to follow ><

Good luck

look so nice!

Star!

MineC24 wrote:

UWS's Normal

AR - 1

01:02:670 (3) - x:244 y:204
01:07:470 (2) - normal diff's hidden note -> So confuse pattern..
02:08:670 (4) - imo, NC
03:24:870 (1) - imo, change by Straight slider

Hard

00:24:420 (7) - remove 2nd slider point

look so nice pattern because so many note stack

ReySHeL's Oni

Open AIMod plz

00:08:062 (2,1) - Big K / Big D
00:44:062 (1) - d
01:43:312 - add k (So awkward..)
01:44:512 - ^
01:45:712 - ^

Insane

HP Drain - 1

00:18:420 (4,5) - Sooooo hard this pattern...
01:25:320 (2,3,4,5) - ummm... change pattern..? fixed
02:00:570 (1,2) - Slightly close plz...
03:07:995 (8,1) - ????

look so nice!

Star!

Thanks for mod&star :3

Glad to see you back Wolf.



Thank you everyone for modding!
http://puu.sh/2XUcD.osu

Sorry so late, I've been very busy. Also Biwako, maybe you're planning to add one, but you need an easier Taiko diff like TheVileOne said. It's a new rule. ><
t/92508

thanks,updated.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

maybe you're planning to add one, but you need an easier Taiko diff like TheVileOne said. It's a new rule. ><
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/92508

Muzukashii diff will made by ReySHeL parhaps

MineC24 wrote:

ReySHeL's Oni

Open AIMod plz

00:08:062 (2,1) - Big K / Big D
00:44:062 (1) - d
01:43:312 - add k (So awkward..)
01:44:512 - ^
01:45:712 - ^

look so nice!

Star!

sry no change
thanks for mod!

[Hi, From My Queue]


[General]


[UWS's Normal]


[Hard]


[Insane]

Nice Song i liked it i hope it get ranked

TheVileOne wrote:

General
You need two taikos.
Offset is different in the taiko.

UWS's Normal
Fun map. Only small things to consider.

00:58:470 (1,2,3) - Personally I feel the angle could be better. http://puu.sh/2WZ00.jpg Very minor change.
01:41:670 (1) - I'm not entirely sure about this. I don't really like the shape, but that's just me. I think you could improve the shape by bringing the curve part slightly lower. http://puu.sh/2WZzE.jpg The current angle just seems slightly too high.
01:41:670 (1,2,3,4) - You have hitsounds here, but they sound like blank hitsounds to me. The hitsounds lack depth here.
02:11:670 (3,1) - It would look better if the first curve of 1 matched the curve at 3 as a mirror. I think it has a better affect than the blanket with the second curve. I'm not sure if it's feasible for the next part though.
02:43:470 (3,1) - Such a weird crossover. I came up with this http://puu.sh/2WZzE.jpg It goes into the note curve perfectly.
02:46:470 (1,2,3) - Those claps >.<
02:47:670 (3) - Maybe a finish.
02:57:270 (3,4,1) - If you can get the spacing equal here it would look better.
03:00:870 (1) - Curve is too sharp. Use a softer curve.

Hard
There were multiple things I didn't agree with in this difficulty. It was largely personal opinion so I didn't mention much of what I didn't like. I had problems playing the song when the spacing increased to 1.3 and some stacks just felt awkward to play. I don't expect you to change any of these things on my behalf.

00:38:970 (5,1) - Please line up.
00:54:570 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Transition is uneven. I don't care for the 5,6 stack, but that's just personal opinion.
01:10:470 (1) - Bad angle. I suggest curving like this instead. http://puu.sh/2XPbn.jpg (Make similar to 01:11:520 (5) - ) fixed
01:36:570 (6,1) - Alignment could be better.
01:56:970 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I have to say this looks better upside down, because of the way the approach circles change. 01:58:170 (9,1) - Not really a fan that 9 doesn't point towards the next object though. Not sure what you can do about it though.
02:12:870 (1) - Same comment as the mirror. fixed
02:44:070 (1,4) - Use a normal curve? These look out of place.
03:08:070 (1) - Looks slightly too low to line up perfectly with previous slider. Move to y 334
03:24:870 (1,2) - Improve how these interlock? fixed

Insane
I'm pretty sure this song is unsightreadable. I'm not sure if that is a bad thing though. I'll leave that to be answered by someone else.

00:22:320 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The spacing keeps change here. Keep it consistent!
00:56:670 (3,4,5,6) - Unusual transition. It doesn't seem to reflect the song very well, but I could be wrong.
02:17:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Wild changes in jump spacing. The vocals weren't there to back up the wild spacing changes as in previous parts of the song. I can't play it so feel free to get a second opinion.
02:59:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - So confusing to follow ><

Good luck

OEvil wrote:

[Hi, From My Queue]

Sorry if my mod sucks

[General]

Tags
- Consider adding "ReySHeL" to all of your tags I forgot...fixed
- Consider adding "UWS" to all of your tags

Letter Box During Breaks:
- UWS's Normal: 1
- Hard: 1
- Insane: 1
- ReySHeL's Oni: 0
- ReySHeL's Muzu: 0
- Make It 0 (Off - Uncheck it) In All Difficulties Since You Don't Have Storyboard

Star Rating:
- UWS's Normal: 3.06 stars
- Hard: 4.89 stars Hmm, Do something about this?!?!?!?!
- Insane: 4.90 stars Hmm, Do something about this?!?!?!?!

[UWS's Normal]

It Was Nice Difficulty

[Hard]

You have Problem with NC:
- 00:36:420 (6) - Add NC.
- 00:55:320 (6) - Add NC.
- 01:31:170 (6) - Add NC.
- 01:38:520 (6) - Add NC.
- 01:57:720 (6) - Add NC.
- 01:59:970 (6) - Add NC.
- 02:47:970 (6) - Add NC.

[Insane]

Edits:
- 00:57:720 (1) - Move to {x:176 y:160}.
- 00:57:870 (2) - Move to {x:152 y:88}.
- 00:58:020 (3) - Move to {x:232 y:100}.
- 00:58:170 (4) - Move to {x:280 y:32}.
- 00:58:320 (5) - Move to {x:332 y:92}.
- 02:47:520 (1) - Move node #1 to {x:74 y:26}, move node #3 to {x:0 y:176}. If you didn't understand what i mean Just click Ctrl + G
- 02:47:970 (2) - Move to {x:56 y:228}.

Nice Song i liked it i hope it get ranked

Thanks for mod&star :3

Hi ~ biwako ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions






Hope this can help you ~

Good luck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ biwako ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 01:11:520 (4) - Bad flow,so use ctrl+g normal spacing to here. hmm... It is not problem imo
2. 01:17:745 (1) - End to 01:20:070 - and add finish to here. no change for consistency with other spinners
3. 01:56:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Werid jump and bad flow. same as 01:11:520 -
4. 02:42:870 (8) - Add new combo,looks long combo IMO.added to 02:42:270 - for visual
5. 03:29:370 - Add normal hitsound with 40% volume,sound much better.

fixed

[Hard]

1. 03:21:270 - #3 kiai time end to here,same as other diffs. fixed
2. 01:17:670 (1) - Same as Insane. same as Insane
3. 03:29:370 - ^

fixed

[USW's Normal]

fixed

1. Too low HP for normal diff,+1 is better.
2. 01:17:820 (1) - Same as Insane.
3. 02:51:270 (1,1) - Too suddenly for beginner,Merger to a spinner is better.

[ReySHeL's Oni]

1. 00:00:876 (1) - Unsnapped circle.

fixed

[ReySHeL's Muzu]

1. 00:00:412 (1,1,1) - Unsnapped circle.

fixed

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck ~

Thanks for mod~

Hi~biwako
Maybe my mod can not help you
I'm a noob modder >.<
[Insane]
00:28:770 (2,6) - The star overlap
00:22:470 (1,5) - 5 end overlap 1 star
00:36:870 (1,5) - overlap? < <
00:38:970 (1,2,3,4) - You do not think these straight enough ? or You deliberately put?
01:11:370 - well so good
01:29:520 (9,1,3) - overlap
02:53:520 (1,7) - ^
02:54:870 (1) - NC
03:08:820 (3,4) - ctrl+g If 3 in x496 y 192 I think that is so hard http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794870

[Hard]
00:39:270 (1,2) - move up a little
00:49:770 (2,3) - ^
02:04:170 (3) - move whit 4 overlap?

[Normal]
03:14:520 (4) - x84 y292
03:24:870 (1) - x248 y 148

wow good map!

bokito wrote:

Hi~biwako
Maybe my mod can not help you
I'm a noob modder >.<
[Insane]
00:28:770 (2,6) - The star overlap
00:22:470 (1,5) - 5 end overlap 1 star
00:36:870 (1,5) - overlap? < < fixed
00:38:970 (1,2,3,4) - You do not think these straight enough ? or You deliberately put?
01:11:370 - well so good
01:29:520 (9,1,3) - overlap
02:53:520 (1,7) - ^
02:54:870 (1) - NC
03:08:820 (3,4) - ctrl+g If 3 in x496 y 192 I think that is so hard http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/794870

[Hard]
00:39:270 (1,2) - move up a little fixed
00:49:770 (2,3) - ^
02:04:170 (3) - move whit 4 overlap?

[Normal]
03:14:520 (4) - x84 y292
03:24:870 (1) - x248 y 148

wow good map!

thanks~

少し編集したので更新お願いしますm(_ _)m
http://puu.sh/39qPa.zip

updateしました！

Last suggestion not fixed. I don't see a problem.
Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/39VL2.osu

updated!

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