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Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Kirino Kousaka

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi Hello~ >w</

Hard

  1. 00:07:755 (2,3) - lyrics rhythm is http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771161 fixed~
  2. 00:10:155 (3) - this doesn't feel comfortable, i suggest remove fixed~
  3. 00:18:195 (5) - ^ fixed~
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - i think (5) could make a M shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771162 fixed~
  5. 00:53:475 (2) - remove this? nope. owo
  6. 01:00:675 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771164 meh, looks fine as it is imo. =w=
Normal

  1. 00:29:235 (3,3) - end on blue tick ww fixed~
  2. 00:32:115 (1,2,3,4) - square! I nailed it. owo
  3. 00:57:075 (1) - 3/4 ww http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771171 no change owo
Easy

  1. 00:57:075 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771174 Fixed~
  2. 01:08:115 (2) - looks too close owo? no change~
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Thanks for the mod [CSGA]Ar3sgice! >w<

Saten wrote:

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Saten

  1. 00:33:075 (4) - 0,0 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771145 I'll keep it as it is
  2. 00:52:395 (2,4) - i suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/771167 www sure, looks pretty neat
thanks

http://puu.sh/2Zxlf/67a5c37dc3.osu
Updated! Thanks Saten-san! >w<
UnitedWeSin
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes :)
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin: :)
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on :)
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you :)
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to :D
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way :D
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good :)
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=

IRC moddededed. :3

Just a quick look at Saten's diff:
  1. Some things are overmapped imo. For example, 01:12:795 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - there is absolutely nothing in the music supporting a long stream like this so it feels really awkward in play. You ignore the interesting variation in claps in the music and just map a stream...
  2. 01:16:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - A stream is alright there, but the music is calling for large jumps with the accented trumpets. I'm surprised that you didn't take advantage of that.
  3. 00:45:075 (6) - Should be a single circle really.
  4. 00:46:275 (3,4,5,6) - The small spacing here is awkward imo, they would be better as slight jumps.
  5. 01:00:195 - I don't like this gap to be honest, it's hard to read the rhythm on the 01:00:315 (1,2). A 3/4 slider at 00:59:955 would have been better.
  6. 01:05:955 - I was really disappointed with the transition here. To me this it's the most epic part of the song, I was surprised that you didn't take the chance here to map a really amazing transition with techniques that I've seen in so many of your other maps. Jumps perhaps.

Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. :)
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

UnitedWeSin wrote:

22:57 Kirino Kousaka: hello owo/
22:57 UnitedWeSin: hi there
22:57 Kirino Kousaka: do you have some time for a quick mod? ;w;
22:58 UnitedWeSin: like irc?
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: possible
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :3
22:58 UnitedWeSin: i can take a look
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: do you? ;w;
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: :O
22:58 Kirino Kousaka: ♥
22:58 *Kirino Kousaka is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/225589 Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)]
22:59 UnitedWeSin: ah yes :)
22:59 Kirino Kousaka: yay >w<
23:11 UnitedWeSin: the circle size for hard surprised me lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: how was it? owo
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:11 Kirino Kousaka: if I adjust it by 1, it feels so small orz
23:11 UnitedWeSin: it's fine it works well
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I get that a lot. =w=
23:12 UnitedWeSin: 00:19:155 (1) - seems strange shape
23:12 UnitedWeSin: how about a nice wave slider?
23:12 Kirino Kousaka: I see, wait =w=
23:13 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYu0.png
23:14 Kirino Kousaka: nailed it \:D/ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772451
23:14 UnitedWeSin: :)
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: nazi, but I would select the 00:22:515 (1,2,3,4) - and move it slightly so that the head of the 2 is overlapped perfectly with the head of the 00:24:915 (2) -
23:15 UnitedWeSin: doesn't really matter but its just a few grids to the left and it looks nicer
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: hmm, wait
23:16 Kirino Kousaka: fixed :3
23:17 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:395 - i really really really wish there was a note here ;_;
23:17 UnitedWeSin: i know it follows vocals but that's a long wait -.-
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait
23:18 UnitedWeSin: if you don't want to
23:18 UnitedWeSin: you could changethe placement on 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to make it more that 1.0 spacing
23:18 UnitedWeSin: to the 2 that is
23:18 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I didn't get much of that XD
23:19 UnitedWeSin: sorry ;_;
23:19 Kirino Kousaka: no, I'm the dumb one here ;w;
23:20 UnitedWeSin: sec brb
23:20 Kirino Kousaka: oki :3
23:22 UnitedWeSin: ok
23:22 UnitedWeSin: coffee is ready :3
23:22 Kirino Kousaka: lol :3
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: what to do 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5) -
23:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:23 UnitedWeSin: sec lemme see
23:27 UnitedWeSin: lets move on :)
23:27 Kirino Kousaka: okay XD
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i'll come back to that
23:27 UnitedWeSin: 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - try to make placement look nicer
23:27 UnitedWeSin: i suggest angle the 3 more down and have the 1 and 2 at the same angle
23:27 UnitedWeSin: like this
23:28 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYQu.png
23:28 UnitedWeSin: my pictures slow -.-
23:28 UnitedWeSin: anyways you can use more than 1.0 distance snap there imo
23:28 UnitedWeSin: it looks better and plays more smooth
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: on 00:41:715 (3,1,2) - ?
23:29 UnitedWeSin: yes
23:29 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: only for those three?
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: lol
23:30 Kirino Kousaka: I'll see
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 (1,2,1) - also here
23:30 UnitedWeSin: please use more that .4 snap -.-
23:30 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 works well
23:30 UnitedWeSin: the repeating slider overlap too much
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I'll use 1.4? so the sliders don't overlap much?
23:31 UnitedWeSin: no 1.0 is best
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:31 UnitedWeSin: 1.0 plays natural
23:31 Kirino Kousaka: I thought "please use more than .4" XD
23:32 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:33 UnitedWeSin: here's what I would suggest
23:33 UnitedWeSin: remove a repeat from the 00:50:835 (2) -
23:33 UnitedWeSin: it's overmapped
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: I think not, since I here the music :<
23:33 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZYZ6.png
23:33 Kirino Kousaka: hear*
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:34 UnitedWeSin: at 00:51:195 - there is no drum sound
23:34 UnitedWeSin: so it's better to have a gap
23:34 Kirino Kousaka: I see
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: how about the pattern of these sliders?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: what goes nice?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: of the 00:50:355 (1,2) -
23:35 UnitedWeSin: ?
23:35 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:35 UnitedWeSin: how about that picture?
23:35 UnitedWeSin: it's up to you :)
23:36 UnitedWeSin: place then how you like
23:36 UnitedWeSin: but 1.0 spacing is best imo
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: oh
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: I didn't notice the picture orz
23:36 Kirino Kousaka: okay wait
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: oops dc
23:39 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: sorry about that
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: what did I miss>
23:39 Kirino Kousaka: :3?
23:39 UnitedWeSin: nothing xD
23:39 UnitedWeSin: are you done with 00:50:355 (1,2) - ?
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: oh :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: well yes :3
23:40 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772469
23:41 UnitedWeSin: ok well at 00:37:635 -
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:41 UnitedWeSin: i don't like rhythm -.-
23:41 Kirino Kousaka: ... ;w;
23:42 UnitedWeSin: maybe http://puu.sh/2ZZ9e.png
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: but it follows the vocal ;w;
23:42 Kirino Kousaka: vocals*
23:42 UnitedWeSin: the 00:38:355 (5) - isn't following voclas
23:42 UnitedWeSin: vocals
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:43 Kirino Kousaka: I see =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: if you want to :D
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: make spacing to the 00:37:635 (2) - bigger than 1.0
23:44 Kirino Kousaka: I'm experimenting =w=
23:44 UnitedWeSin: like the 00:41:475 (2) -
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
23:47 UnitedWeSin: :D
23:47 UnitedWeSin: wanna upload or move on?
23:47 Kirino Kousaka: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772474
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: well, it's up to you :3
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: if you want to see or just continue =w=
23:48 UnitedWeSin: normal needs work -.-
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: orz
23:48 UnitedWeSin: ;_;
23:48 Kirino Kousaka: Anything else for [Hard] ? ;w;
23:49 UnitedWeSin: that's all that really bothers me in hard
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: okay \:3/
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: move to [Normal] then? :3
23:49 UnitedWeSin: yep
23:49 Kirino Kousaka: :3
23:50 UnitedWeSin: 00:13:875 (3,1,2,3) - try to make placement look better
23:50 UnitedWeSin: the 00:13:875 (3,3) - overlap
23:50 UnitedWeSin: in a bad way
23:50 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZjG.png
23:50 UnitedWeSin: try flipping the 00:15:795 (3) around
23:51 UnitedWeSin: and place it so the 00:14:835 (1,2,3) - are all blanketing the 00:13:875 (3) -
23:51 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
23:52 UnitedWeSin: 00:06:555 (2,2) - i really don't like this -.-
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: I know
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: blue tick
23:53 Kirino Kousaka: =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: but I have found no good solutions for it so far =w=
23:54 Kirino Kousaka: wait, still fixing 00:14:835 (1,2,3) -
23:58 UnitedWeSin: k
23:58 UnitedWeSin: dun?
23:58 Kirino Kousaka: yes :3
23:59 UnitedWeSin: 00:31:155 (3) - don't you want this to end on the blue tick00:31:755 - ?
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: true dat. =w=
23:59 Kirino Kousaka: wait =w=
23:59 UnitedWeSin: =w=
00:00 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:00 UnitedWeSin: i think your rhythm at beginning will confuse people
00:01 UnitedWeSin: can you make it more simple?
00:01 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZxd.png
00:01 UnitedWeSin: just a sample
00:01 Kirino Kousaka: wait
00:05 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:06 UnitedWeSin: `:3
00:06 UnitedWeSin: 00:50:355 -
00:06 UnitedWeSin: please add something I beg you ;_;
00:06 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZAV.png
00:06 UnitedWeSin: just a 1/2 slider with a repeat
00:06 UnitedWeSin: fits so nice
00:06 Kirino Kousaka: wait wait XD
00:09 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=
00:09 UnitedWeSin: 00:57:075 (1) - please don't have 2 repeats on this I beg you ;_;
00:10 UnitedWeSin: the slider is too short for that
00:10 UnitedWeSin: remove one repeat
00:10 UnitedWeSin: then add cricle at 00:57:795 -
00:11 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZIs.png
00:11 UnitedWeSin: i say that because it's just more intuitive for the player
00:13 Kirino Kousaka: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772493
00:13 *Kirino Kousaka runs
00:13 UnitedWeSin: yea that's fine :3
00:13 UnitedWeSin: do the same thing at 01:20:115 (5) - please ;_;
00:14 UnitedWeSin: change to two 1/2 sliders
00:14 UnitedWeSin: plays so much better
00:14 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:15 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:15 Kirino Kousaka: done =w=d
00:16 UnitedWeSin: ready for rank after that imo :3
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:16 Kirino Kousaka: how about [Easy] ? :O
00:17 UnitedWeSin: will check
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: okay :3
00:17 UnitedWeSin: again I wish you would add something at 00:50:355 -
00:17 Kirino Kousaka: wait, I'm fixing things for normalXD
00:17 UnitedWeSin: xD
00:18 UnitedWeSin: maybe it's better not to though
00:18 UnitedWeSin: the easy is really good
00:19 Kirino Kousaka: :O
00:19 UnitedWeSin: just one more thing in normal
00:19 UnitedWeSin: 01:08:595 (3,4,1) - this placement -.-
00:20 Kirino Kousaka: what to do ;w;
00:21 UnitedWeSin: maybe just rotate the 01:08:595 (3) - a bit
00:21 UnitedWeSin: :3
00:21 UnitedWeSin: http://puu.sh/2ZZV6.png
00:22 UnitedWeSin: idk I'm nazi -.-
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: how about blanket 01:09:555 (4) - with 01:08:595 (3) - ? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/772496
00:22 Kirino Kousaka: :3
00:23 UnitedWeSin: seems ok either way :D
00:23 Kirino Kousaka: =w=d
00:24 UnitedWeSin: do you want me to mod saten's diff?
00:24 Kirino Kousaka: ofc =w=
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: if you're done with my diffs, post this irc mod together with mods for saten :3
00:25 UnitedWeSin: ah
00:25 UnitedWeSin: well update I'll check
00:25 Kirino Kousaka: like this p/2312719/
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: nothing more for [Easy]? :3
00:26 UnitedWeSin: easy is good :)
00:26 Kirino Kousaka: \:D/
00:27 UnitedWeSin: it seems that saten doesn't plan on changing anything so I won't waste my time lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: lol
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: why not try owo
00:27 UnitedWeSin: some things are overmapped imo but it's fine
00:27 Kirino Kousaka: well okay, just post and say that's Saten's diff is fine owo
00:28 Kirino Kousaka: also, updated. Check now =w=
00:31 UnitedWeSin: 00:37:635 (2,3,4,5,6) - i love this in hard
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: hue =w=
00:31 Kirino Kousaka: thank you =w=
00:33 UnitedWeSin: nice :3
00:33 Kirino Kousaka: =w=

IRC moddededed. :3

Fun map though. Good luck with ranking, hopefully soon. :) Yes! >w<
Thanks for the mod UnitedWeSin! >w<
cRyo[iceeicee]
Hi hi o.o
Easy
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) -
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ?
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ?
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle
Normal
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal)
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) -
Hard
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part.
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap
Saten's Easy
  1. i would add some claps that maybe dont exist in bgm but i think sounds nice,
    00:06:555 (5) -
    00:08:475 (5) -
    00:10:395 (6) -
    00:14:235 (5) -
    00:16:035 (5) - tail
    00:18:075 (5) -
  2. 00:42:675 (1,2) - this bgm drum doest belong to calm part, i think you need to use 1.0 SV here
  3. 00:55:395 (2) - this note sound like drum hit D:
    other fine for me, easy map as always ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)乃
Good luck :>
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi hi o.o
Easy
  1. 00:14:835 (1) - i dont think this NC is necessary, removing it fits with your shor 1,2 NC pattern that you used before and after I get your point, but nope, I think it's fine. :3
  2. 00:39:795 (1) - this also, remove NC and you will get same 1,2,3 like here 00:35:955 (1,2,3) - fixed~
  3. 00:42:675 (2) - i hear something heavier then soft hit on slider tail, use N hit instead ? added SC:1 clap instead~
  4. 00:57:075 (5) - hmm, should NC start here ? since you following vocal fixed~
  5. 01:10:515 (5) - use clap instead whistle ? no change :3
  6. 01:16:035 (1) - whistle fixed~
Normal
  1. 00:22:515 (1) - missing hitsound, finish or smth added Finish~
  2. 00:37:875 (3) - whistle fixed~
  3. 00:54:195 (1) - should be clap on slider tail fixed~
  4. 01:00:915 (1) - i think you need to start this slider 1 tick earlier and follow the vocal, becase such long pattern 00:54:195 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - following vocal and then suddenly stop ._. (more of it if you listen carefully then you will hear some sound on the red tick, which means if you apply this suggestion pattern will perfectly follow music/vocal) fixed~
  5. 01:04:755 (1) - missing whistle fixed~
  6. 01:09:555 (4) - clap on tail, sound good fixed~
  7. 01:15:315 (3,1) - same thing as i mentioned before, i prefer to see similar pattern that i suggested 01:00:915 (1) - fixed~
Hard
  1. 00:08:115 (4) - whistle fixed~
  2. 00:22:995 (2) - missing tail whistle fixed~
  3. 00:23:475 (3,4) - missing 2 claps, #3 tail, #4 head fixed~
  4. 00:33:075 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  5. 00:41:715 (3) - whistle fixed~
  6. 00:42:675 (1,2) - i prefer to see 1.0x SV here, because this bgm drum doesnt belong to calm part. No change, it plays better like this imo. =w=
  7. 00:47:475 (1) - whistle or finish added finish
  8. 00:50:835 (2) - add 1 repeat, fit better with music + add claps on 1,3,4 tick fixed~
  9. 00:54:915 (1) - missing clap fixed~
  10. 00:56:595 (5) - tail clap fixed~
  11. 00:57:795 (2) - missing clap fixed~
  12. 00:59:235 (2) - whistle fixed~
  13. 00:59:715 (4) - clap head fixed~
  14. 01:01:635 (4) - whistle head fixed~
  15. 01:02:595 (6) - clap fixed~
  16. 01:08:355 (3) - whistle head, tail can be too fixed~
  17. 01:18:915 (3) - whistle fixed~
  18. 01:19:515 (5) - head whistle, tail clap fixed~

Good luck :>
Thanks for the mod and star cryo! >w<
Miya
Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo.
Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start.
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start.
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start.
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 -
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider ><
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm.
Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end ><
;)
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Miya wrote:

Recheck :3

Easy
  1. 01:14:355 (3) - How about copy paste the previous slider shape 01:13:395 (2) - to here? It's more good if you continue to use not curvy slider here since it's still on the same combo. Good point. XD Fixed~
Normal
  1. 00:13:635 (2) - The whistle on this circle should be on white tick on 00:13:875 - like you did at previous combo. So, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:13:875 (3) - start. fixed~
  2. 00:15:555 (2) - Same, remove this whistle and add a whistle on 00:15:795 (3) - start. fixed~
  3. 00:17:715 (3) - Same, add a whistle on this slider start. fixed~
  4. 00:21:555 (3) - ^ fixed~
  5. 00:23:475 (3) - ^ fixed~
  6. 00:25:395 (2) - ^ fixed~
  7. 00:28:995 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  8. 00:30:915 (2,3) - ^ fixed~
  9. 00:33:075 (3) - ^ fixed~
  10. 00:50:355 (1) - Add another repeat to this slider? It's a bit awkward since the rhythm still continue on 00:51:075 - changed into two sliders instead!~
  11. 00:57:075 (1) - You forgot a whistle again at this slider >< fixed~
  12. 01:15:075 (2) - Remove whistle here, overused and unnesecary. Break the current whistle rhythm. fixed~
Hard
  1. 00:33:075 (5) - You forgot a clap at this slider end >< fixed~
;)
Thanks! >w<
Miya
Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Miya wrote:

Yup, it's looks awesome now. :)

Bubbled!
OMG Thank you ;w;
Natsu
glad to see this bubbled go baka but this need a KirinOni... :roll:
Makar
Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing?
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1)

[Normal]
  1. HP+1?
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/

[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to

[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this.

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka

Makar wrote:

Mod for mod requested :3

[Easy]
  1. 00:54:15 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this consistent with 01:09:555 (1,2) in terms of timing? fixed~
  2. 00:59:955 (3,1) - ^ with 01:15:315 (4,1) fixed~

[Normal]
  1. HP+1? fixed~
  2. I really don't like this SV/Spacing combination ._. the high SV and low spacing makes the sliders that end on 1/4 and circles right after it a bit confusing to me.... but I guess it's too late to change this now :/ fixed~

[Muzukashii]
  1. Tick rate 1 fixed~
  2. 00:39:785 (1) - remove finish fixed~
  3. Use normal hitsounds please... adjust volume if you have to fixed~ Used 70% vloume

[Oni]
  1. Tick rate 1 fixed~
  2. Same as Muzu: Use normal hitsounds and adjust volume if you have to fixed~ Used 70% vloume
  3. Center difficulty settings (so CS5) but this is minor fixed~

[Hard]
  1. 00:05:235 - 00:10:635 - This section is completely different and inconsistent with the others in the intro in terms of difficulty and style. I highly suggest you use the note patterns you use at 00:12:915. PM me for help if you dont understand what I mean by this. I deleted some notes that may help to make the rhythm consistent with the others

Call me back after fixes, or PM me if you have any questions~
Thanks Makar! :3
EDIT: on [Normal] readjusted to HP 3, since it became this with HP 4 orz
Makar
Ranked~
Lally
\o3o/ gratz <3
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka
Thank you! >w<
scanter
omedeto ~ kiririn <3
Lolicakey
Congratz Kiri <3
Miya
Finally ranked, so fast xD
Gratz :P
Oyatsu
Congratz 2nd ranked!
Suimya
Gratz bakrino =w=
BeatofIke
Congratulations! :D
Lust
Just played this, congratulations, well done!
[Maid] NekoRyo
Gratz for getting approve :D going to play it soon~
Verlaren
gtz
cRyo[iceeicee]
:3
Natsu
gratz
HeatKai
CONGRATS Ki!!
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka
Thanks alot everyone! >w<
y u c a
grats~(。・ω・。)ノ
LunarSakuya
Congrats!! :D
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka
thanks! ;w;
hoLysoup
congrats desu! :)
Topic Starter
Kirino Kousaka
Thanks :D
angel000120
쿠로우사기넘웃겨
mike91lau

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, May 26, 2013 at 10:39:50 AM

Artist: Sadohara Kaori
Title: To Be Continued? (TV Size)
Source: Mondaiji-tachi ga Isekai kara Kuru Sou Desu yo?
Tags: ending saten-san Kuro Usagi Problem Children Are Coming from Another World, Aren't They? Studio Barcelona Diomedea
BPM: 125
Filesize: 13982kb
Play Time: 01:22
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.21 stars, 81 notes)
  2. Hard (4.77 stars, 162 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (4.31 stars, 195 notes)
  4. Normal (3.76 stars, 98 notes)
  5. Oni (4.83 stars, 368 notes)
  6. Saten (5 stars, 271 notes)
Download: Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size)
Download: Sadohara Kaori - To Be Continued? (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 7th Submitted Map~
I love this kawaii ending from「問題児たちが異世界から来るそうですよ?」and wanted to make my own version. >w<
This is my first time to submit a map with own made taiko diffs, I hope I did well. ;w;

Ranked!

Special Thanks to:
Kawayi Rika for mp3 and Background Video~! \>w</
Saten for Insane guest diff >w<
Shiro for latest offset :3
Makar for ranking~
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