[General]
All diffs have no kiai time? I suggest put it here: 00:52:221 - 01:23:337 and 02:15:135 - 02:45:998 - and 03:32:833 - 04:03:912
How about put in Creator's Words real names of diffs? I mean "Love - hard, Full Love - Insane"
[HellDawn's Easy]
Your hitsounds sounds very loud for me, i suggest you reduce them to 75-80%
00:14:235 (2) - Probably NC should be here follow the music
00:15:962 (1,3) - Very ugly overlap as for me, i suggest move 00:18:552 (3) out from slider's body.
00:34:092 - Add a note? You miss strong beat here.
00:38:408 - ^ Here it makes even more better rhytm.
00:41:430 (4) - NC follow music?
01:07:761 (1) - Try to make arc here bigger. For now it can confuse beginners, bigger arc will help for better slider's readability
02:09:955 (2) - ^
02:38:444 (4) - Not sure that it is a really good idea to make patterns like this. My propose:
03:13:840 (4) - NC should begins here, not at 03:14:272 (1)
03:38:013 (1) - same about arc in slider
03:46:646 (2) - new combo here follow music?
03:57:006 (4) - NC should begins here, not at 03:58:301 (1)
04:00:459 (1) - Map this part, please :\ 2 spinners looks too boring and they really not so good fits here.
[Normal]
Reduce all hs volume by 5-10% because they all are too loud for now
Reduce OD by 1 for better balance between diffs.
00:22:653 (3) - Begin those slider on a red tick, sounds better for me
03:06:934 (3) - Try to silence sliderticks here, they sounds bad for me
04:17:767 (3) - missed finish?
[LOVE]
LOVE this diff xDIncrease HP Drain by 1 for better balance between diffs.
01:04:523 - Add note for better rhytm?
01:53:121 (6,7,8) - i'd duggest you use drum saple in all those notes (in case of slider only in ending) - sounds really better for me
01:55:711 (5) - nc follow music & pattern?
02:11:898 (7) - ^
03:14:703 (7,8) - Replace it with 1/4 slider?
03:31:106 (9) - nc since you use slowdown here
03:52:042 (6) - nc follow music?
[Full LOVE]
awesome diff <3HP Drain feels to high, reduce it by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability
01:03:444 (6) - nc follow pattern?
02:26:358 (7) - ^
02:40:171 (4) - ^
02:43:624 (4) - imho nc should begins here, not at 02:44:488 (1)
03:25:926 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hmm, just suggestion: what if make all thise squares expanding? I mean do it all from smaller to bigger.
03:31:106 (5) - NC here because you use slowdown
03:44:056 (6) - nc follow music & pattern
03:57:869 (4) - ^
04:01:322 (4) - ^
Very good mapset, i like it. Want to star but sadly have no kd for now :<