Strawberry wrote:
modding time~~
okay, let's see..
[ General]
- be sure the file's name should be "pause-overplay.jpg", you have lost the "p" on the file's name~. Are you sure? o.o It shows up fine on my end when I pause, and if I change it to overplay it doesn't show up at all...
[ Easy]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 00:07:676 (2) - move to x:203 y:137 for position is at the same line with the flow after slider(1)'s tail?~ much better, fixed!
- 00:11:426 (2) - same as above.~ ^
- 00:28:444 (3) - will be a much better flow with (4) if you make a ctrl+gh here~ like this~(don't forget to adjust the position of (4,5,6,7) for the balance spacing~) done
- 00:34:790 (2,3) - just put them like a line? looks much neater.~ done
- 00:51:521 (4) - sorry for always nazi position.. but really looks better if you move it to x:400 y:209. nah, this sort of thing is really useful to me. changed!
- 00:52:097 (1,2) - for some suggestions~ if you followed above, also move slider(1) to x:357 y:304, and then move (2) to x:216 y:224, seems really pretty~. > .< okay, did that but changed (2)'s shape to maintain flow.
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- clear!~
[ Normal]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 01:29:018 (2,3,4) - so croweded and looks wired.. maybe you can try to make them like this? yeah, it looks odd at the moment. Changed to your suggestion
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 01:05:799 (1) - silence the sound of slidertick with at 01:06:087. Actually, that slider tick goes with a beat in the music, so I'll keep it
- 01:10:413 - same place as above~^
[ Hard]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
- 01:02:914 (1) - add a nc here to avoid people confuse here?~ good idea, done
- 01:03:924 (2) - the nc should be set here, instead of 01:03:635 (1) imo.. :3 Nah, it's fine where it is for me
- 01:07:962 (7) - since the hitburst and you have set a finish here, i'd prefer to add the nc on 01:08:250 (3) rather than 01:07:674 (1) ..I can see your reasoning, but I would like to have NC on 01:07:674 (1) due to the jump and to keep consistency
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
- 00:39:693 (1) - i'd prefer to remove the useless clap on that slider's repeat, and also consistent as 00:16:617 (1)~
it feels a bit empty without it imo. but I added a clap at 00:16:167 for consistencyactually on second thought I agree with you.
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nice map for a newbie mapper. x3 keep it and good luck with ranking!~ Thanks very much. It's a difficult process but I'm hoping I can see it through