1. Easy (1.75 stars, 212 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 1039 notes)
3. Mancuso's Muzukashii (4.78 stars, 1298 notes)
4. Normal (4.34 stars, 486 notes)
5. Sieg's Hard (4.97 stars, 784 notes)
6. Zukisinx's Oni (4.83 stars, 1818 notes)

pife1 wrote:

Tu mapa no lo pude hacer.
Creo yo que el BMP es 94.49, el offset lo veo bien, si realmente vas a tomar mi consejo te sugiero que rehagas el mapa
Aunque yo no soy bueno en esto del mod, mi pregunta real estu puedes hacer ese mapa en S

VelperK wrote:

More spam

Wishy wrote:

Esta muy bueno el mapa, pero siento que la velocidad de los sliders se queda muy corta comparado con el spacing que usas en todos los jumps, es decir, son muy lentos, o da esa sensacion, sobretodo en los sliders mas largos.

1. According to new rules you need two taiko diffs. :< rule.txt
2. Add some tags? Maybe you need tags like Hechizos, pócimas y brujería (have no idea what it means, but it's name of the album)
3. Offset in Taiko Diff is different, please fix it.

• 
  I didn't like this diff, because it doesn't looks like actual [Easy]. Let me explain why:

1. Flow. Flow here is quite weird and may stress/confuse beginners. Beginners aren't used to this kind of flow, it will stress them too much. See the spoilerbox below! I understand, that this is your style, but can't you make it a little it more understandable for beginners?
   [box=Flow in [Easy:87cc0]diffs]
   Blue is the way, how players should read this pattern. It is not so understandable here, or looks confusing for beginners.
   Red is how beginners see your flow. Tail of (2) is too close, so beginners might mistakenly click it.
   

1. 00:48:294 (1) - short sliders like this one may confuse beginners. Personally, I think that beginners should be able to see start/end of the slider clearly.
2. 00:55:915 (3) - 2nd and 3rd reverse arrows appeartoo fast, beginners have no time to read them properly.They don't even expect to see here more than ONE reverse-arrow. That's why sliders like this one aren't recommended for [Easy] and [Normal] diffs.
3. 00:24:160 (3) - some of your hitobjects are overlapped with HP-Bar. Looks messy, so try to avoid overlaps :<

1. This diff is just a [Normal]. I think you need a third break somewhere in the nd of this diff, players need some time to recover, y'know!
2. 00:14:475 (7,8,9) - three finishes in a row sound the the way too loud. Try to replace finishes on (7,8) with whistles.
3. 00:21:620 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - too many 1/1 clicking here, for a [Normal] diff with 189 BPM it's too hard. Try to replace some of 1/1 circles with sliders?
4. 00:41:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - no. Same as above here :< Also, this combo is too long, try to place NC on (8) to keep comboing consistent!
   Note: it's quite clear, that you should apply (or ignore it) for all similar patterns: 00:46:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 01:39:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
5. 01:15:602 (1) - After all those loooooooooooooong combos, you've got two short ones. Try to remove NC here and 01:18:142 (1) - here to keep comboing consistent?
6. 01:32:115 (1,2,3) - sudden x1.2 spacing here for no reason. Can you fix it to keep DS consistent here?
7. 01:53:708 (1) - your patterns are pretty similar, so remove here NC to make this combo a bit longer. So, you'll get consistent comboing
8. 02:06:727 (5) - 2nd and 3rd reverse arrows appeartoo fast. Players don't even expect to see here more than ONE reverse-arrow. That's why sliders like this one aren't recommended for [Easy] and [Normal] diffs.What's more, normally you use only [b]ONE repeat on each 1/2 slider, that's why this slider looks pretty awkward. Consider replacing it with one long slider?[/b] you can try to make this slider curvy, instead (each angle follows 1/2 beat here)
   Note: same happens to 03:09:125 (2) - 03:38:180 (2) -03:58:503 (6) - 04:12:951 (3) -
9. 02:14:824 (6) - try to place here a new combo. This is end of the kiai, after all!
10. 02:45:150 (1) - I'd remove thin NC to keep comboing more consistent. It doesn't sound like you need this NC, anyway.
    Note: Same with 02:56:582 (1) - 03:16:269 (1) - 03:25:796 (1) - 03:35:322 (1) - 03:39:133 (1) - 03:45:483 (1) - 04:07:076 (1) -
11. 02:57:852 (1) - nazi - this slider flows pretty awkward, try to rotate it for better flow. Something like this for better flow.

12:24 Sieg: huehue
12:24 -Bakari-: yes
12:25 Sieg: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/128778&start=255 напиши что-нибудь тут
12:25 Sieg: :3
12:25 Sieg: надо захватить новую страницу
12:25 Sieg: как тебе кстати моя дифа, еще не добрался?
12:25 -Bakari-: Не добрался
12:31 -Bakari-: Мне кажется ты переусердствовал с джумпами
12:32 Sieg: да ладно, там их не так много же
12:32 -Bakari-: Просто я бы их где то в районе х2.0 держал :<
12:32 -Bakari-: 00:36:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - ну слишком же :<
12:32 Sieg: а ну это я могу объяснить
12:33 Sieg: это всего 2 раза по сравнению с тем что использовано как базовый
12:33 -Bakari-: и ХП дрэйн 7 используй
12:33 -Bakari-: ну чтоб баланс держать и все дела
12:33 Sieg: да и вообще только инвалит на харде не прожмет это
12:34 Sieg: это же 1\1\
12:34 Sieg: инвалид*
12:34 -Bakari-: 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
12:34 -Bakari-: 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
12:34 -Bakari-: 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
12:34 Sieg: это же ресет ритма, 1\1 там пробить даже 3х не проблема
12:34 -Bakari-: cлишком короткие же
12:34 -Bakari-: каждый даунбит НК не очень
12:34 -Bakari-: давай хотя бы каждый второй тут
12:35 Sieg: я не силен в нк
12:35 Sieg: а там нк
12:35 Sieg: вспомнил
12:35 Sieg: типо на джамп нк
12:35 Sieg: смена спейсинга
12:35 -Bakari-: слишком спамовые :<
12:35 -Bakari-: давай пореже их там :<
12:35 Sieg: ну зато читается лучше
12:35 Sieg: намного
12:35 -Bakari-: а так все D:
12:36 Sieg: лал

1. Try to use HP Drain 7 or 8 to keep diff spread more balnced. Hard has HP Drain 6, you should make HP Drain here higher! 7 or 8 would be good.
2. 00:03:996 (1,2,3,4) - stacking 1/4 and 1/2 notes is kinda bad idea, it plays pretty awkward and hard to read :<
3. 00:09:712 (6) - consider moving its tail somewhere else, looks too much like part of this stream, so players might mistakenly hit tail of this slider :<
4. 00:14:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhh... I'm not sure, but those jumps have weird flow. How about re-making them easier readable?
5. 00:20:826 (1,2) - nazi - it'd be more reasonable to stack them with 00:20:032 (3,4) - for consistent flow, don't you think so?
6. 00:23:684 (5) - combo mods are welcome? - how about a new combo here? To follow vocals and to keep your patterns consistent you need a NC here
   Note: 00:26:859 (7) -01:12:745 (6) - guess what? Same here \:D/
7. 01:29:416 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - WHOOAAAAA. man, you're overusing jumps or you're overusing new combos.
   Note: 02:26:097 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 02:31:813 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - same thing here but looks cute, tho.
8. 01:53:549 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - can't you make patterns here more understandable. I'm pretty sure that this pattern is almost unreadable :V
   Note: if you'll do it, do the same thing to 02:37:846 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
9. 02:55:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I'd keep spacing consistent spacing here. Anyway, don't you think that you need some sliders in this stream to make it more.. playable?
10. 04:19:302 (7) - place here a new combo to make EPIC finish <3.
    
    Jumps everywhere. It's your style and I like it!

-Bakari- wrote:

:) As requested

[General]

1. According to new rules you need two taiko diffs. :< rule.txt
2. Add some tags? Maybe you need tags like Hechizos, pócimas y brujería (have no idea what it means, but it's name of the album)
3. Offset in Taiko Diff is different, please fix it.

Please, ignore taiko for now, and also I dont think those tags are that needed, considering how unpopular mago de oz actually is, let alone that not many people will find or they will be able to find this map by just searching for the band's name. But if more people insist, I'll add.

[Easy]

• 
  I didn't like this diff, because it doesn't looks like actual [Easy]. Let me explain why:

1. Flow. Flow here is quite weird and may stress/confuse beginners. Beginners aren't used to this kind of flow, it will stress them too much. See the spoilerbox below! I understand, that this is your style, but can't you make it a little it more understandable for beginners?
   Well, for starters, you can't really see at this diff as an actual easy, but more like a normal, precisely because of the bpm.
   
   [box=Flow in [Easy:80b70]diffs]
   Blue is the way, how players should read this pattern. It is not so understandable here, or looks confusing for beginners.
   Red is how beginners see your flow. Tail of (2) is too close, so beginners might mistakenly click it.
   

1. 00:48:294 (1) - short sliders like this one may confuse beginners. Personally, I think that beginners should be able to see start/end of the slider clearly.
   Sliders gone
   
2. 00:55:915 (3) - 2nd and 3rd reverse arrows appeartoo fast, beginners have no time to read them properly.They don't even expect to see here more than ONE reverse-arrow. That's why sliders like this one aren't recommended for [Easy] and [Normal] diffs.
   Im sure they are fine, will wait for more opinion
   
3. 00:24:160 (3) - some of your hitobjects are overlapped with HP-Bar. Looks messy, so try to avoid overlaps :<
   Im sure they are fine, will wait for more opinion

1. This diff is just a [Normal]. I think you need a third break somewhere in the nd of this diff, players need some time to recover, y'know!
   
2. 00:14:475 (7,8,9) - three finishes in a row sound the the way too loud. Try to replace finishes on (7,8) with whistles.
   Done something a bit different
   
3. 00:21:620 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - too many 1/1 clicking here, for a [Normal] diff with 189 BPM it's too hard. Try to replace some of 1/1 circles with sliders?
   I have asked some players ranked at 20k+ this map, and they seem to do okay in these parts, so no change for now.
   
4. 00:41:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - no. Same as above here :< Also, this combo is too long, try to place NC on (8) to keep comboing consistent!
   Note: it's quite clear, that you should apply (or ignore it) for all similar patterns: 00:46:388 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 01:39:736 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
5. 01:15:602 (1) - After all those loooooooooooooong combos, you've got two short ones. Try to remove NC here and 01:18:142 (1) - here to keep comboing consistent?
6. 01:32:115 (1,2,3) - sudden x1.2 spacing here for no reason. Can you fix it to keep DS consistent here?
7. 01:53:708 (1) - your patterns are pretty similar, so remove here NC to make this combo a bit longer. So, you'll get consistent comboing
   All those stuff done
   
8. 02:06:727 (5) - 2nd and 3rd reverse arrows appeartoo fast. Players don't even expect to see here more than ONE reverse-arrow. That's why sliders like this one aren't recommended for [Easy] and [Normal] diffs.What's more, normally you use only [b]ONE repeat on each 1/2 slider, that's why this slider looks pretty awkward. Consider replacing it with one long slider?[/b] you can try to make this slider curvy, instead (each angle follows 1/2 beat here)
   Note: same happens to 03:09:125 (2) - 03:38:180 (2) -03:58:503 (6) - 04:12:951 (3) -
   Hmm from what I remember from the tests, I think that none has missed them, okay, I could ask for more players to test and see.
   
9. 02:14:824 (6) - try to place here a new combo. This is end of the kiai, after all!
10. 02:45:150 (1) - I'd remove thin NC to keep comboing more consistent. It doesn't sound like you need this NC, anyway.
    Note: Same with 02:56:582 (1) - 03:16:269 (1) - 03:25:796 (1) - 03:35:322 (1) - 03:39:133 (1) - 03:45:483 (1) - 04:07:076 (1) -
    All done
    
11. 02:57:852 (1) - nazi - this slider flows pretty awkward, try to rotate it for better flow. Something like this for better flow.
    It seems okay for me, will wait for more opinions

12:24 Sieg: huehue
12:24 -Bakari-: yes
12:25 Sieg: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/128778&start=255 напиши что-нибудь тут
12:25 Sieg: :3
12:25 Sieg: надо захватить новую страницу
12:25 Sieg: как тебе кстати моя дифа, еще не добрался?
12:25 -Bakari-: Не добрался
12:31 -Bakari-: Мне кажется ты переусердствовал с джумпами
12:32 Sieg: да ладно, там их не так много же
12:32 -Bakari-: Просто я бы их где то в районе х2.0 держал :<
12:32 -Bakari-: 00:36:545 (1,2,3,4,5) - ну слишком же :<
12:32 Sieg: а ну это я могу объяснить
12:33 Sieg: это всего 2 раза по сравнению с тем что использовано как базовый
12:33 -Bakari-: и ХП дрэйн 7 используй
12:33 -Bakari-: ну чтоб баланс держать и все дела
12:33 Sieg: да и вообще только инвалит на харде не прожмет это
12:34 Sieg: это же 1\1\
12:34 Sieg: инвалид*
12:34 -Bakari-: 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
12:34 -Bakari-: 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
12:34 -Bakari-: 00:00:186 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 
12:34 Sieg: это же ресет ритма, 1\1 там пробить даже 3х не проблема
12:34 -Bakari-: cлишком короткие же
12:34 -Bakari-: каждый даунбит НК не очень
12:34 -Bakari-: давай хотя бы каждый второй тут
12:35 Sieg: я не силен в нк
12:35 Sieg: а там нк
12:35 Sieg: вспомнил
12:35 Sieg: типо на джамп нк
12:35 Sieg: смена спейсинга
12:35 -Bakari-: слишком спамовые :<
12:35 -Bakari-: давай пореже их там :<
12:35 Sieg: ну зато читается лучше
12:35 Sieg: намного
12:35 -Bakari-: а так все D:
12:36 Sieg: лал

1. Try to use HP Drain 7 or 8 to keep diff spread more balnced. Hard has HP Drain 6, you should make HP Drain here higher! 7 or 8 would be good.
   From the tests I have done, most people ranked 600-1000 will fail this map if I use hp drain 6, and since I want more people to be able to enjoy this diff to the end, I decided to use low hp drain
   
2. 00:03:996 (1,2,3,4) - stacking 1/4 and 1/2 notes is kinda bad idea, it plays pretty awkward and hard to read :<
   
3. 00:09:712 (6) - consider moving its tail somewhere else, looks too much like part of this stream, so players might mistakenly hit tail of this slider :<
   It is intentional
   
4. 00:14:475 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uhh... I'm not sure, but those jumps have weird flow. How about re-making them easier readable?
   Actually, some players praised those jumps, Not sure quite sure why's that particularly.
   
5. 00:20:826 (1,2) - nazi - it'd be more reasonable to stack them with 00:20:032 (3,4) - for consistent flow, don't you think so?
   Intentional
   
6. 00:23:684 (5) - combo mods are welcome? - how about a new combo here? To follow vocals and to keep your patterns consistent you need a NC here
   Note: 00:26:859 (7) -01:12:745 (6) - guess what? Same here \:D/
   Done! Except for 01:12:745 (6) - were I did something a bit different
   
7. 01:29:416 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - WHOOAAAAA. man, you're overusing jumps or you're overusing new combos.
   Note: 02:26:097 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 02:31:813 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - same thing here but looks cute, tho.
   Well, those new combos are there to make it easier to read, although that part in particular that youre pointing out doesnt really need them, I added them for sake of consistency
   
8. 01:53:549 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - can't you make patterns here more understandable. I'm pretty sure that this pattern is almost unreadable :V
   Note: if you'll do it, do the same thing to 02:37:846 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
   
9. 02:55:470 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - I'd keep spacing consistent spacing here. Anyway, don't you think that you need some sliders in this stream to make it more.. playable?
   
10. 04:19:302 (7) - place here a new combo to make EPIC finish <3.
    
    As for the rest that I didnt say anything, I could say that I have asked many players ranked from 3 (Shadow Sould) to 1000 (You may even say 10.000 lol, but they had to use no fail) to play this map, and I have got lots of input from them, and I have changed the patterns accordingly to the point were the players didnt had any complaints any more (And trust me, many patterns have been changed)
    
    
    Jumps everywhere. It's your style and I like it!

eldnl wrote:

Easy

00:44:483 (2) - Creo que te falto agregar el normal-hitsound aqui
00:48:929 (1) - Este slider esta muy lejos de la nota anterior, pero muy cerca de la que sige
Fixed

00:56:232 (1) - Se siente como si este slider no siguiera el ritmo, que tal si lo haces asi? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785141
00:58:773 (1) - El whistle que le pones a los sliders no suena bien aqui, se sienten solitarios:( ademas de que un finish queda mucho mejor, por lo menos en el primero :p
01:54:343 (1) - Lo mismo que te dije de los sliders arriba ^
Me parece que como esta ahora, esta bien

02:28:955 (1,2) - No me convencen mucho estas dos, es mejor que pongas un slider en vez de las notas, ya que es la unica parte asi en el mapa, puede ser confunso para los noobs
Fixed

03:25:796 (1) - Lo mismo que te dije de los sliders arriba ^

Normal

00:14:475 (7,8,9) - Aqui se siente como si siguieras el ritmo mal, que tal asi? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785153
Estan siguiendo los finish de la musica como tal, pero en otro mod se omento de que era un spam de finishes por lo que fue cambiado a whistles

01:27:828 (1,2,3) - Aqui tampoco se oye muy bien, intenta asi https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/785157
Me parece que aqui si suenan bien

02:06:727 (5) - Este slider tiene mas repeticiones de las que usaste antes, es muy confuso para los nuevos (incluso para mi) deberias cambiarlo:p
03:09:125 (2) - Lo mismo de arriba
03:38:180 (2) - ^
03:58:503 (6) Extrañamente este es mucho mas facil de leer, ni idea si lo cambias xd
No cambios

BrujoAzul wrote:

General

-¿Es tu primer map? Si lo es, tienes un gran talento para esto del mapping o3o
Nop, ya tengo varios maps rankeados

-Necesitas un full diff spread de Taiko si quieres que lo rankeen, creo, ve a comprobarlo a la wiki de osu
Lo se, ya mancuso esta haciendo la muzukashi

-Me gustaría hacer una GD, puedo?
No, ya tengo suficientes diffs

Easy

-En general, los combos podrían ser un poco más grandes, 4 notas estaría perfecto, en mi opinión
-00:31:146 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ese combo es demasiado largo, dividelo en dos (4 y 4)
Okay

-01:57:201 - FADSFASDFASDFASDFASDFS Me encantço que pusieses el Kiai Time ahi <3
-02:49:913 - Ese Whistle, suena mal <_<
Quitado

Normal

-00:05:266 - No hagas los sliders que hay por ahi completamente rectos, inclinalos un poquito
Nop

-00:19:556 (1,2) - Quita (2) y alarga (1)
Esta bien como esta

-04:18:032 - Pon 1 Reverse Arrow más y acerca las 2 últimas notas
Esta bien como esta

Insane

-00:03:202 - Ese jump es muy jarcor y random, mueve esa nota a x = 182; y = 280
-00:03:679 - Pasa lo mismo ahi, haz algo parecido a lo de la otra nota
-00:10:030 - Same here, muevela a algón sitio como x = 48; y = 160

-00:10:030 - Acorta ese slider, si no lo haces, tendrás que mover las notas de 00:11:776 (1,2)
-00:12:570 - Lo mismo
No veo por que tengo que hacer eso

-00:15:110 (5,6) - Las notas anteriores quedan bien, pero este jump es demasiado <_<
-00:15:904 (3,4) - Acercalas a 00:15:428 (1,2)
-00:28:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - SFASDASDFASD Demasiado jump, acorta un poco las distancias :c
-00:30:988 (1,2,3) - Demasiado espacio, ahi, y en todos sus copypastes xD
-00:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - No te vayas a pensar que todos los jumps quedan mal, este te quedó bien, y respaldado por la música o3o

-00:42:578 - Eliminala, o ponla entre los 2 sliders
No, esta bien como esta, no veo por que hacer eso

-00:50:358 (1,2,3,4,5) - Las 3 primeras pueden pasar, pero las 2 últimas...
-01:29:416 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Jumps :c Puedes darle la vuelta a la segunda linea de combos, no?
-01:36:560 - Acercala
-01:38:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Acercalas
-01:54:343 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Demasiado jump y poca creatividad, haz como un triangulo que se hace más grande progresivamente, quedará bien, Imo
Pls, cuantos maps con triangulos que se vuelven cada vez mas grandes has visto? y cuantos maps que tenga este pattern has visto?

-02:17:047 (1,2,3,4) - Haz que sea un triángulo equilátero
No veo por que tiene que ser equilatero, por la forma en que estoy viendo el espacio y su distribucion, me parece que ese lugar esta perfecto

-02:39:910 (1,2,3) - Pasaste de un borde de la pantalla a otro con solo 3 notas, no me gusta <_<
-02:50:072 (1,2,3) - Acercalas a la nota anterior, y acércalas un poco entre si
-02:58:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - No me gusta muco esa estream, asd
-02:59:439 - ¿Un 1/6?
Si, 1/6 me parecio apropiado, de todos modos no afecta al gameplay

-03:13:253 - Este combo es muy largo
Es largo por que tienen streams y hacen que el numero se vuelvan mas grande, porque si los divido en dos, entonces los combos se vuelven muy cortos, hablando temporalmente

-03:19:921 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Demasiado jump
-03:24:684 - Combo muy largo
-03:26:907 (15,16,17) - Ese jump
-03:55:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same

No he cambiado nada, mas que todo porque la razon de "FUUU ES MUCHO JUMP" no me parece suficiente, considerando que ya lo he probado muchas veces, ademas de que eso ha sido mi intención

Y eso es todo, ahora dame mi cudosu, que me lo he currado D:

eLtigreXXx wrote:

timing:
bmp: 188.970
offcet 39
El timing lo revisare a mas detalle luego


las notas del al final queda fuera del rimo por el bmp prueba con este nuevo
y creo que este offcet le queda mejor
vas a tener que resnapear todo x.x

el fondo tiene que ser de 1024x768.
Nop, ya que ahora osu! soporta resoluciones de 16:9, siendo la 1366x768 la maxima, y no he superado ese maximo

[insane]
00:18:921 (3) - http://puu.sh/3cipm yo tube problemas con estas notas que se salen de la cuadricula y creo es porque casi toca la barra hp
No esta offgrid, pero igual ya lo baje un poco

00:18:762 (2,1,2,5,6,1) - no se creoque estas se berian mejor apilarlas o separarlas mas no ? 00:56:232 (4,2) - asi como estas
Ehh no, estan apiladas, solo que no estan en la direccion que tu quieres

03:18:333 (9) - aqui no falto el finish ?
Si

Gonzvlo wrote:

Por fin puedo controlar bien la tablet, voy mejorando

01:08:458 (7,8,9,10) - Debo decir que este pattern se ve bastante mal y se obstruye a sí mismo, deberías cambiarlo
Esa fue mi intencion, hasta ahora no habia escuchado ninguna queja sobre ello, si recibo mas quejas, lo considerare

01:54:184 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - De igual manera este, deberías hacer que cada pattern vaya rotand un poco o algo
Rotando no... de todos modos cambie el orden de algunos objetos para que sea "mas facil" por ahora. Si luego recibo mas comentarios al respecto lo cambiare

1. Sinceramente perfecta!

1. 00:14:475 (7,8,9) - Estas 3 notas no me suenan muy bien, que tal si las reemplazas por un slider con repeticion? suena mucho mejor imo

1. 00:14:475 (7,8,9) - senti un vacio extraño, por eso agrega circulo?