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C.S.Port - Fuujin Raijin [Taiko|Osu]

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Faust
Hi.

I noticed you have got unsnapped timing sections, and some parts of the metronome are definitely off (if not, just more than marginally)
so I did some fixing.

Timing:

SPOILER
130.50 BPM - 88,438
126.00 BPM - 89,409
90.50 BPM - 90,928

Remember to resnap what you have to !

In general, I'd prefer if you have a 1 second lead-in to this.
Apart from that, the mapset is an aesthetic feast. Unique and variating slider patterns and beat placements move very intuitively with the song, although some parts need getting used to.

Easy has an unsnapped slider end at - 01:28:885 (1) -

Nothing on TuNormal.

alacat:

I like this one the most, haha.

- 01:27:080 (1) - Wonder why it gets to streamlined here all of a sudden towards the end.

kiiwa:

- 00:28:136 (1,1) - This is super confusing, even though it's just slider placed opposite the note. The 2 approach circles converging together is what got me, and I don't feel comfortable playing this part at all. It'd be better to forgo this.

- 00:38:699 (1) - New Combo? It's fine as it is since this plays off where the vocals left. If you do decide to make an NC, make sure you remove the one on - 00:39:122 (2) -

- 00:43:770 (1,2) - Wonder why you never used 1/4 for this.

- 00:54:756 (2) - Make this note visible.

- 01:16:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is amazing to play.

- 01:29:403 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

Insane:

Excellent hitsounding on this.

- 00:21:164 (1,2,3) - Kinda risky. But nothing new. Here's a suggestion to make it more visible:
- 00:22:009 (1,2,3) - Could do the same with this, just give the 2nd slider is little more exposure. I suppose you could go over the rest of the portions in the map that are similar.

- 00:24:967 - Try placing this at x:272 y:288, I feel it'd be better if the player could slap it in the open than after whirling that slider around.

- 01:13:559 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Awesome variety here.

That's all.
Topic Starter
Beren

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Title:
According to this, title should be changed into "Fuujin Raijin".
Since this is a game version, the title should also be changed into "Fuujin Raijin (Game Size)" or "Fuujin Raijin (Short Ver.)" (the second is better, seems).

Tags:
For search reasons, I suggest to change "colorful.sounds.port" into "colorful" "sounds" "port"

Kiai: Why no- Ok, just read on the post above :P

[Easy, TuNormal]
Nothing really wrong, but I would have done some part more easy.

[alacat]
I don't get what rhythm the new combos follow.

[Kiiwa]
00:28:136 (1,1) - Please unstack these note. The color is too similar and confonds.
00:38:699 (3) - This slider is covered by the hit and is an anti-jump. I suggest to move it a bit away from 00:38:066 (2) - (like 5 grid right and 5 up on grid level 4) sorry no
01:25:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is different from the rest of map in term of style. I suggest to lower the distance between 01:25:178 (1,2) -, 01:25:601 (3,4) - and 01:26:023 (5,6) - ^
01:28:891 (1) - Unsnapped note. This should start at 01:28:885 -
Your diff has 5 different slider velocity, so someone could ask to change.
Pesonally I think that they are intuitive.
Btw I'll quote you the rule:
A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be.
^
other fixed. thank you for mod!

Faust wrote:

Hi.

I noticed you have got unsnapped timing sections, and some parts of the metronome are definitely off (if not, just more than marginally)
so I did some fixing.

Timing:

SPOILER
130.50 BPM - 88,438
126.00 BPM - 89,409
90.50 BPM - 90,928

Remember to resnap what you have to !

In general, I'd prefer if you have a 1 second lead-in to this.
Apart from that, the mapset is an aesthetic feast. Unique and variating slider patterns and beat placements move very intuitively with the song, although some parts need getting used to.

Easy has an unsnapped slider end at - 01:28:885 (1) -

Nothing on TuNormal.

kiiwa:

- 00:28:136 (1,1) - This is super confusing, even though it's just slider placed opposite the note. The 2 approach circles converging together is what got me, and I don't feel comfortable playing this part at all. It'd be better to forgo this.

- 00:38:699 (1) - New Combo? It's fine as it is since this plays off where the vocals left. If you do decide to make an NC, make sure you remove the one on - 00:39:122 (2) -

- 00:43:770 (1,2) - Wonder why you never used 1/4 for this.

- 00:54:756 (2) - Make this note visible.

- 01:16:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is amazing to play.

- 01:29:403 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

Insane:

Excellent hitsounding on this.

- 00:21:164 (1,2,3) - Kinda risky. But nothing new. Here's a suggestion to make it more visible:
- 00:22:009 (1,2,3) - Could do the same with this, just give the 2nd slider is little more exposure. I suppose you could go over the rest of the portions in the map that are similar.

- 00:24:967 - Try placing this at x:272 y:288, I feel it'd be better if the player could slap it in the open than after whirling that slider around.

- 01:13:559 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Awesome variety here.

That's all.

all fixed. thank you mod and star! :D
Natsu
General:

SPOILER
This is wrong

alacat

01:30:928, BPM of 91,000
01:30:928, BPM of 90,500

Easy

01:30:928, BPM of 90,500
01:30:928, BPM of 91,000

Insane

01:30:928, BPM of 90,500
01:30:928, BPM of 91,000

Kiiwa

01:30:928, BPM of 90,500
01:30:928, BPM of 91,000

TuNormal

01:30:928, BPM of 91,000
01:30:928, BPM of 90,500

Easy:

SPOILER
00:02:150 add whistle since all diffs got it
01:27:080 (1,1) – look better in this way imo:

Tunormal:

SPOILER
00:02:150 add circle o.o since all the other diff start here..

Kiiwa:

SPOILER
00:28:136 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – really I don’t like this part is just my opinion
00:41:446 move it to x: 444 y: 308 look a lot better
01:05:742 (3,4) – stack it perfectly

Insane:

SPOILER
01:16:939 move this x: 408 y:228 for consistency with previous stream

good map :)
Topic Starter
Beren

Natsu wrote:

General:

SPOILER
This is wrong

alacat

01:30:928, BPM of 91,000
01:30:928, BPM of 90,500

Easy

01:30:928, BPM of 90,500
01:30:928, BPM of 91,000

Insane

01:30:928, BPM of 90,500
01:30:928, BPM of 91,000

Kiiwa

01:30:928, BPM of 90,500
01:30:928, BPM of 91,000

TuNormal

01:30:928, BPM of 91,000
01:30:928, BPM of 90,500

fixed

Easy:

SPOILER
00:02:150 add whistle since all diffs got it k
01:27:080 (1,1) – look better in this way imo:

Tunormal:

SPOILER
00:02:150 add circle o.o since all the other diff start here..added

Kiiwa:

SPOILER
00:28:136 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – really I don’t like this part is just my opinion
00:41:446 move it to x: 444 y: 308 look a lot better
01:05:742 (3,4) – stack it perfectly fixed

Insane:

SPOILER
01:16:939 move this x: 408 y:228 for consistency with previous stream

good map :)
thanks
hs714
Hello,Beren <33
May I make a Taiko diff?
Topic Starter
Beren

hs714 wrote:

Hello,Beren <33
May I make a Taiko diff?
ok
hs714
Edit end~ :oops:

Taiko Muzu: http://puu.sh/1XPtI
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/1XPtf

Thank you for saying "ok"! Beren <33
Topic Starter
Beren
added :D
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hi~ from my queue

[General]
lol, dat BG name.

[Easy]
Flawless!!

[TuNormal]
Again flawless!!! <3

[alacat]
01:29:885 (1) - Reeeaally unnecessary NC.
Cool!

[Kiiwa]
I think, there are for far too many NCs. Maybe erase inappropriate NCs on your own accord. NCs influence the HP drain, you know.

Taste the rainbow. Oh yeah~
Besides, I would really recommend setting tick rate to 2. Follows the rhythm a lot better IMO.

00:38:066 (2,1) - lolwat? Spacing!
01:04:263 (4,1) - ^
01:08:911 (2) - Awkward slider.
01:09:967 (4,1) - Spacing! Make a stack instead.
01:11:023 (3) - Again, awkward slider.

[Insane]
HP Drain Rate 8? Hah, that's overkill!

00:22:009 (1,2,3) - Nope, this overlap isn't really cool. Maybe remake this?
00:43:136 (3) - :shock: NO WAI. Please change this.
01:30:928 - Maybe turn down hitsound volume to 5? Makes a calm moment of silence.

That's already it!
Good luck!!~
Kitsuneko
Osoku narimashita!!!!

[TuNormal]
Generally does not fit with custom finish sounds on this diff.
try change to non custom soft-finish.
00:08:488 - add finish
00:46:516 - ^
00:53:277 - ^
( 01:01:728, 01:02:573 (4) - ^ )
01:14:404 (1) - default soft-whitle or any sounds. also there is way to change the rhythm.
01:16:094 - ^
01:17:784 (5) - ^
01:19:474 - ^

[alacat]
00:55:390 (1,1,1) - 0.27x程度まで広げたほうが見栄えいいかなという提案
(00:55:812 (1) - x248 y320, 00:55:390 (1) - x288 y316, みたいな感じ)

other diffs are clearly good map.
Ganbare Beren-chan~~~ :3
Topic Starter
Beren

Kitsuneko wrote:

Osoku narimashita!!!!

[TuNormal]
Generally does not fit with custom finish sounds on this diff.
try change to non custom soft-finish.
00:08:488 - add finish
00:46:516 - ^
00:53:277 - ^
( 01:01:728, 01:02:573 (4) - ^ )
01:14:404 (1) - default soft-whitle or any sounds. also there is way to change the rhythm.
01:16:094 - ^
01:17:784 (5) - ^
01:19:474 - ^

sorry,im late..orz
all fixed


other diffs are clearly good map.
Ganbare Beren-chan~~~ :3
thank you very much (*´∀`*)ゞ
Kiiwa
omg your back! <3
Topic Starter
Beren

Kiiwa wrote:

omg your back! <3
<3
hs714
Okaerinasai! (Welcome back!) :oops:
Topic Starter
Beren

hs714 wrote:

Okaerinasai! (Welcome back!) :oops:
thank you! :D
alacat
Kitsuneko san, Thank you for modding !

http://puu.sh/2Gjbq.zip

@Beren

welcome back <3
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Insane]
  1. 00:08:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 从直觉上来说1->2是低音,后面三个音阶升高,所以Spacing的变化有些别扭……
  2. 00:11:023 (3,4,5,6) - 建议红线三连
  3. 00:17:361 (2,3,4) - 同样是感觉没什么道理的白线三连……
  4. 00:21:587 (3) - 把起点stack到前面(1)的尾巴上去?感觉flow会更好点而且没那么挤成一团的样子
  5. 00:39:756 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  6. 01:06:798 (9) - ^
[Kiiwa]
  1. 00:43:981 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to reduce the spacing here and make no stack
  2. 00:58:981 (4,5) - also.. the stack may break your flow imo :<
  3. 01:27:985 (1) - Unsnaped slider end
[Easy]
  1. 01:28:885 (1) - Unsnapped
Topic Starter
Beren

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[Insane]
  1. 00:08:911 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 从直觉上来说1->2是低音,后面三个音阶升高,所以Spacing的变化有些别扭…… 个人很喜欢>_<
  2. 00:11:023 (3,4,5,6) - 建议红线三连 可以
  3. 00:17:361 (2,3,4) - 同样是感觉没什么道理的白线三连…… 删了
  4. 00:21:587 (3) - 把起点stack到前面(1)的尾巴上去?感觉flow会更好点而且没那么挤成一团的样子 改了
  5. 00:39:756 (1) - ctrl+g for better flow? no
  6. 01:06:798 (9) - ^ no
[Kiiwa]
  1. 00:43:981 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to reduce the spacing here and make no stack fixed
  2. 00:58:981 (4,5) - also.. the stack may break your flow imo :< fixed
  3. 01:27:985 (1) - Unsnaped slider end 你懂的
[Easy]
  1. 01:28:885 (1) - Unsnapped 你懂的
非常感谢~ ;)

@alacat updated thank you! =w=b
Lundlerol
hi~
hs714's taiko mod req
hosichaaaaaaaan<3

[General]
kitai timeは付けないんですか?

[714's Taiko Oni]
00:09:967 (1,1) - k d ? このk dをd kにするとボーカルのアクセントにフィットする上に00:10:178 (1) - このクラップ音にも添えるので一石二鳥と思います。
00:11:868 (1) -  k? ^と同じようにクラップにもボーカルにも添えるので良いと思います。
00:26:868 (2,3,4) -  2と4を消して00:26:974 (3) - ここをkに変更。叩きやすさを追求するなら4だけ消してdkの2連を作ってみるのはどうですか?
00:27:502 (2) - delete.ここは無音なので無理にノーツを置く必要はないと思います。
00:49:052 (3) - k? アクセントはこちらと同じ気がします>00:42:291 (1) -    統一するならばdddをddkにした方が良いと思います。
00:49:052 (3) - ^
00:56:446 (3) - delete? 00:56:235 (2,3) -  この部分はもちろんボーカル沿いというのはわかります。
しかしボーカルよりも 00:55:812 (1,2) - この2つのting音だけに合わせる方が聴こえも良いのでは? 3を消すことで次の 00:56:657 (1) - Kもより良く際立たせる事が出来ます。
01:00:037 (3) - k? ボーカルのアクセントとしてフィットします。
01:01:728 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove d Kの間のdはボーカルを強調させるのには不要だと思います。
01:06:375 (5) - k? ボーカルのアクセントとしてフィットします。
01:09:544 (3) - ^
01:10:601 (3) - k クラップ音?の様な音がするのでkでフォローしてみては?
01:13:136 (1) - remove f フィニッシュと言うよりも音が落ち着いているのでフィニッシュは外したほうが良いと思います。そして音が鈍いのでdにするのもありかもしれません。試してみてください。
01:17:573 (3) -  k  この連打だけdだと今までの1/2のkの流れに違和感が生じるのでkにした方が良いでしょう。流れというのは01:16:728 (1) - この様な音が1/2間隔で続いてる事をいいます。そしてこの以前を見るとting音をkでフォローしているので01:17:784 (5) - ここもkにした方がいいかもしれません。
01:22:221 (3) -  k ^と同じ様に流れを崩すのは少々気になるので。
01:22:432 (1) -  d 同じ音をした前の部分ではdでフォローされていたのでdにした方がいいのでは?
01:22:643 (1) - k ^流れを崩さないため。流れ流れと言いましたが音もちゃんとkでフィットするので大丈夫です。

01:26:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - kkddd? 最初の2つをkにした理由は 1つはting音のフォロー。2つは後続のdddの音を際立たせるため です。


[714's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:26:868 (1,2,3) - oniと同様1と3を消して2をkにした方が良いと思います。
00:27:502 (1) -  move to 00:27:291 -
01:13:136 (1,1) - K dと言うよりも k Dの方が良いと思います。私がDと言った部分にはシンバル音があるので。

good luck
ranked ganbatte~_(:3 」∠)_
hs714
Lundlerol :3

Lundlerol wrote:

hi~
hs714's taiko mod req
hosichaaaaaaaan<3
lund channnnnnn! ヽ(*´∀`*)ノ

[General]
kitai timeは付けないんですか?
- Kiai Time追加しました!ありがとう!

[714's Taiko Oni]
00:09:967 (1,1) - k d ? このk dをd kにするとボーカルのアクセントにフィットする上に00:10:178 (1) - このクラップ音にも添えるので一石二鳥と思います。 - 直しました!
00:11:868 (1) -  k? ^と同じようにクラップにもボーカルにも添えるので良いと思います。 - ^
00:26:868 (2,3,4) -  2と4を消して00:26:974 (3) - ここをkに変更。叩きやすさを追求するなら4だけ消してdkの2連を作ってみるのはどうですか? - ごめんなさい、音取りはすごく正しいと思うのですが、基本的に青線の上に単発を置きたくないのでNoで..(´・ω・`)
00:27:502 (2) - delete.ここは無音なので無理にノーツを置く必要はないと思います。 - ^
00:49:052 (3) - k? アクセントはこちらと同じ気がします>00:42:291 (1) -    統一するならばdddをddkにした方が良いと思います。 - 直しました!
00:49:052 (3) - ^
00:56:446 (3) - delete? 00:56:235 (2,3) -  この部分はもちろんボーカル沿いというのはわかります。
しかしボーカルよりも 00:55:812 (1,2) - この2つのting音だけに合わせる方が聴こえも良いのでは? 3を消すことで次の 00:56:657 (1) - Kもより良く際立たせる事が出来ます。 - ^
01:00:037 (3) - k? ボーカルのアクセントとしてフィットします。 - ^
01:01:728 (1,1,1,1,1) - remove d Kの間のdはボーカルを強調させるのには不要だと思います。 - 試してみたのですが、ここの歌詞はただ伸ばして歌っているのとはまた違うような感じがするので、Noで..ごめんなさい。
01:06:375 (5) - k? ボーカルのアクセントとしてフィットします。 - そのすぐ後にkのリズムを入れているので、Noで..
01:09:544 (3) - ^ - ^
01:10:601 (3) - k クラップ音?の様な音がするのでkでフォローしてみては? - ^
01:13:136 (1) - remove f フィニッシュと言うよりも音が落ち着いているのでフィニッシュは外したほうが良いと思います。そして音が鈍いのでdにするのもありかもしれません。試してみてください。- dにしたのですが、鈍く響く音(?)が聞こえるので、Dに変更しました!
01:17:573 (3) -  k  この連打だけdだと今までの1/2のkの流れに違和感が生じるのでkにした方が良いでしょう。流れというのは01:16:728 (1) - この様な音が1/2間隔で続いてる事をいいます。そしてこの以前を見るとting音をkでフォローしているので01:17:784 (5) - ここもkにした方がいいかもしれません。 - 直しました!
01:22:221 (3) -  k ^と同じ様に流れを崩すのは少々気になるので。 - ^
01:22:432 (1) -  d 同じ音をした前の部分ではdでフォローされていたのでdにした方がいいのでは? - ^
01:22:643 (1) - k ^流れを崩さないため。流れ流れと言いましたが音もちゃんとkでフィットするので大丈夫です。 - ^

01:26:235 (1,2,3,4,5) - kkddd? 最初の2つをkにした理由は 1つはting音のフォロー。2つは後続のdddの音を際立たせるため です。 - ^


[714's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:26:868 (1,2,3) - oniと同様1と3を消して2をkにした方が良いと思います。 - ごめんなさい..(´・ω・`)
00:27:502 (1) -  move to 00:27:291 - - 聞いてみたらおかしかったので、Oniと同じ配置に変更しました..!
01:13:136 (1,1) - K dと言うよりも k Dの方が良いと思います。私がDと言った部分にはシンバル音があるので。 - 直しました!

good luck
ranked ganbatte~_(:3 」∠)_

Thanks for your mod! Lundlerol <33

please update :D
Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/2Pajk.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/2PajY.osu
Topic Starter
Beren
updated. :D
Scorpiour
bubbled~~
Topic Starter
Beren
thank you!! ;)
TKS
[General]
  1. Artist => カラフル・サウンズ・ポート
    "C.S.Port", the name that is use to reduce the number of characters...maybe :)
[Taiko]
  1. BGの顔が…
please not give kds.
hs714

TKSalt wrote:

[General]
  1. Artist => カラフル・サウンズ・ポート
    "C.S.Port", the name that is use to reduce the number of characters...maybe :)
[Taiko]
  1. BGの顔が…
please not give kds.
直すの忘れてました・・・orz
TKSaltさん、教えてくれてありがとうございました!


Sorry, Beren san! please update :cry:

Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/2Ta7r.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/2Ta7O.osu
Topic Starter
Beren
@TKSalt thank you! :D but i think artist is ok

@hs714 sorry,i'm late. >_< updated!
hs714

Beren wrote:

@hs714 sorry,i'm late. >_< updated!
no problem! thanks(*´∀`)ノ♥

btw, i'm not doing mod! :lol:
please Denied kudosu :D
vivicat
<3
Topic Starter
Beren

vivicat wrote:

<3
你复活了我真是太高兴了!
Scorpiour
Rebubbled~~
Faust
Could try to get those unsnapped inherited timing sections properly done though, especially the unused ones on Taiko which you probably should get removed.
Topic Starter
Beren

Faust wrote:

Could try to get those unsnapped inherited timing sections properly done though, especially the unused ones on Taiko which you probably should get removed.
fixed :D
Faust
It's taken a while, but we're here.
Unsnapped sections (Not kiai) tidied up and that leaves me with a single thing to do.

Ranked.
Topic Starter
Beren

Faust wrote:

It's taken a while, but we're here.
Unsnapped sections (Not kiai) tidied up and that leaves me with a single thing to do.

Ranked.
thank you!!!
alacat
Love Beren :3
spboxer3
風仁雷仁
hs714
Ranked!! Congratz Beren~~ヽ(*´∀`*)ノ♥
meiikyuu
grats ~
TKS
grats!!
風仁雷仁 is best BOF2010 song :)
Kiiwa
oh
my
god
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