This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月11日 at 19:18:06

Artist: Anna
Title: Hoshi no Kakera
Source: To LOVE Ru Doki Doki Rinkai Gakkou Hen
Tags: Helldawn
BPM: 139
Filesize: 7415kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Full LOVE (4.96 stars, 602 notes)
2. LOVE (4.75 stars, 496 notes)
3. Normal (3.84 stars, 338 notes)

Download: Anna - Hoshi no Kakera
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PSPゲーム [To LOVE Ru ドキドキ　臨海学校編] テーマ曲
Easy is working in progress

沙發>w</(喂)
好多星了:OOOOOOO

哇

哇 ababa!

hi

[Easy]
01:53:121(5)-(1) I think it wrong. suggestion→ http://puu.sh/eUv6
a lot of long sliders are centered, move sideways?

[Normal]
00:20:710(4) move on top of (5), I think it will be better
02:44:488(1)-02:51:394 uncomfortable feelng,so my idea→ http://puu.sh/eUIe http://puu.sh/eUIn
03:05:639(1)-03:08:066(1) also my idea→ http://puu.sh/eUMl
3:46:214(1) move to this point and delete 03:46:862(2)
3:48:157-03:48:588 add slider and delete circle 03:48:372


Sorry for my poor English and noob modding.so if you cant understand,ignore or tell me pls
These are my rhythm, for reference.
nice song, fight for ranked~


my pending :3
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43655

graveyard, nooooo...><

I digged it up but forgot to bump it >_>

It would be better if you add kiai time.

Normal

00:37:329- finish ?
00:44:235- 1 grid left
00:58:264- finish ?
02:07:149- 1 grid left
02:42:761- finish
03:19:020- Break drag to here
04:16:040- remove finish, add clap ?

Love

00:50:926- finish ?
03:19:020- Break drag to here
03:57:869- finish ?

Full love
03:19:020- break drag to here :S
nice diff :3

@ Helldawn I still don't like Kiai time :s

I prefer the hitsound made now so I will keep it, but that's fine for breaktime during so fixed. Thanks

[General]

All diffs have no kiai time? I suggest put it here: 00:52:221 - 01:23:337 and 02:15:135 - 02:45:998 - and 03:32:833 - 04:03:912
How about put in Creator's Words real names of diffs? I mean "Love - hard, Full Love - Insane"

[HellDawn's Easy]

Your hitsounds sounds very loud for me, i suggest you reduce them to 75-80%

00:14:235 (2) - Probably NC should be here follow the music
00:15:962 (1,3) - Very ugly overlap as for me, i suggest move 00:18:552 (3) out from slider's body.
00:34:092 - Add a note? You miss strong beat here.
00:38:408 - ^ Here it makes even more better rhytm.
00:41:430 (4) - NC follow music?
01:07:761 (1) - Try to make arc here bigger. For now it can confuse beginners, bigger arc will help for better slider's readability
02:09:955 (2) - ^
02:38:444 (4) - Not sure that it is a really good idea to make patterns like this. My propose:
03:13:840 (4) - NC should begins here, not at 03:14:272 (1)
03:38:013 (1) - same about arc in slider
03:46:646 (2) - new combo here follow music?
03:57:006 (4) - NC should begins here, not at 03:58:301 (1)
04:00:459 (1) - Map this part, please :\ 2 spinners looks too boring and they really not so good fits here.

[Normal]

Reduce all hs volume by 5-10% because they all are too loud for now
Reduce OD by 1 for better balance between diffs.

00:22:653 (3) - Begin those slider on a red tick, sounds better for me
03:06:934 (3) - Try to silence sliderticks here, they sounds bad for me
04:17:767 (3) - missed finish?

[LOVE]

LOVE this diff xD

Increase HP Drain by 1 for better balance between diffs.

01:04:523 - Add note for better rhytm?
01:53:121 (6,7,8) - i'd duggest you use drum saple in all those notes (in case of slider only in ending) - sounds really better for me
01:55:711 (5) - nc follow music & pattern?
02:11:898 (7) - ^
03:14:703 (7,8) - Replace it with 1/4 slider?


03:31:106 (9) - nc since you use slowdown here
03:52:042 (6) - nc follow music?

[Full LOVE]

awesome diff <3

HP Drain feels to high, reduce it by 1 tick for better balance between diffs and for better playability

01:03:444 (6) - nc follow pattern?
02:26:358 (7) - ^
02:40:171 (4) - ^
02:43:624 (4) - imho nc should begins here, not at 02:44:488 (1)
03:25:926 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Hmm, just suggestion: what if make all thise squares expanding? I mean do it all from smaller to bigger.
03:31:106 (5) - NC here because you use slowdown
03:44:056 (6) - nc follow music & pattern
03:57:869 (4) - ^
04:01:322 (4) - ^

Very good mapset, i like it. Want to star but sadly have no kd for now :<

>Kodora
difficulties setting change, most NC change, but i still not willing to add kiai time :s
difficulty name following this map when i start it.

thanks!

GOOD SONG.
im looking forward to the rank this map ></

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