Wait.. 7 months old?? I didn't know that map Koka!!
[General:]
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Tags: I'd add
LoL here. You know, some people prefer to use this to find 'League of Legends' songs or stuffs.
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BG: Why is your BG 1215x717? You should fix that
[Kanatan:]
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Settings:--> Increase the HP Drain Rate in 1 Tick because the diff. is really simple and easy (HP+1)
• 00:46:787
(x) - It is a really simple map and short song. I think a note here doesn't hurt and fits fine with the music as well
[Futsuu:]
• 00:00:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I prefer kats instead of dons in this pattern, they sound more suitable in my opinion
• 00:21:073 (1) - Following your patterns, this should be a big don
• 00:21:818 (1) - Move this Note 1/2 back, you always follow that sound in the music. If you do that, this note should be a big don too.
• 00:27:595
(x) - A note is pretty necessary here, and it won't be difficult for this difficult imo. So, I'd add a don here
• 00:30:762 (2,1,1) - I think the emphasize should be in the last one, listening the music. So, I'd try a d d k pattern instead
• 00:36:725 (2,1,1) - (^)
• 00:42:688 (2,1,1) - (^)
• 00:45:855 - 00:46:042
(x - x) - To make this pattern more enjoyable, because it is near to the end of the map, add a d k pattern here.
[Muzukashii:]
• 00:00:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as Futsuu.
• 00:17:532 (1) - I think a kat fits perfect with the instrumental, you should give it a try.
• 00:22:377 (1) - (^).
• 00:25:359 (2) - In this case, that katsu sounds a bit high to me and it doesn't represent the music properly. So, I'd use a don here
[Oni:]
• 00:00:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as Futsuu and Muzu
• 00:17:719 (1) - In this note in particular, I'd use a simple don instead, cymbals are not participating here
• 00:25:359 (1) - I'd use a don here, as I explained you in the Muzu.
• 00:31:042 (2) - I can't listen any sound here, listening the music in 25% playback. So, I'd move this note 1/4 back, will sound better imo
[Inner Oni:]
• 00:00:203 (1,2,3,4) - You should use kats in these objects
• 00:02:626 (1) - don..
• 00:03:185 (1,2,3,4) - kats instead
• 00:05:607 (1) - And don. Basically, the suggestion is pretty similar as above difficulties
• 00:17:719 (2) - As I said in the Oni, this should be a don
• 00:25:359 (3) - And.. As I said in Oni and Muzu, make this note a don
Technically, Nice map! Just little suggestions
So, Feel free to call me back after to check my mod