TicClick wrote:

Soooo I retimed it using less timing points and fixing early/late offsets. Remove all the red lines you have and copy and paste these:

SPOILER

12762,795.865968169761,4,2,0,30,1,0
15930,795.755968169761,4,2,0,30,1,0
19641,795.755968169761,4,2,0,30,1,0
22305,796.28400796284,4,2,0,30,1,0
23116,796.28400796284,4,2,0,30,1,0
23924,796.28400796284,4,2,0,30,1,0
28419,796.812749003984,4,2,0,30,1,0
32675,796.812749003984,4,2,0,30,1,0
38262,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,1
38394,-100,4,1,0,60,0,0
59008,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
63804,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
70193,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
74970,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,0
76553,797.755968169762,4,1,0,60,1,1
81329,792.602377807133,4,1,0,60,1,1
82914,790.513833992095,4,1,0,60,1,1
86063,787.40157480315,4,1,0,60,1,1
88415,787.40157480315,4,1,0,60,1,1
89190,786.369593709043,4,1,0,60,1,1
94163,787.40157480315,4,1,0,60,1,1
95469,781.046602447279,4,1,0,60,1,0
106664,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
107965,781.25,4,2,0,60,1,0
118891,780.234070221066,4,1,0,60,1,0
120184,777.20207253886,4,1,0,60,1,0
123286,774.193548387097,4,1,0,60,1,0
124834,774.193548387097,4,1,0,60,1,0
126636,775.193798449612,4,1,0,60,1,0
132837,778.210116731518,4,1,0,60,1,0
135705,773.19587628866,4,1,0,60,1,0
138282,718.562874251497,4,1,0,60,1,0
139000,780.234070221066,4,1,0,60,1,0
142120,779.220779220779,4,1,0,60,1,0
145254,820.232399179768,4,1,0,60,1,0

READ THIS BEFORE APPLYING

It ruins some of your sliders, making them sound mistimed, having wrong length etc. If you experience any difficulties with fixing/remapping your patterns that go off, contact me.

Bonus (Hard difficulty)

01:41:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - тут должно быть четыре куска по четыре ноты, а не четыре по пять. Лучше либо делай четыре ноты, либо три ноты и короткий слайдер

• Helldawn's Easy

1. 02:10:511 (3) - Here's clearly missing a clap. You can add it by yourself Sieg, it's inconsistent and he probably forgot to add it.

• Normal

1. 00:52:621 (4) - This pattern would flow much better if you ctrl+g this slider.
2. 01:15:767 (3) - Move 1 grid down for a perfect blanket. Yeah I'm very nazi because these are the final polishments for the diff.
3. 01:34:163 (2) - I personally dislike this slider. Too many repeats that may be unpredictable for a beginner, but I guess it's fine.

• Hard

1. 01:44:060 (5,6,7,8) - Make this stream with a good curved shape? looks a bit messy due to 01:44:320 (7)'s placement. Small change.
   
   Lol nothing else, just that. :3

Kei wrote:

Finally! I've been waiting for this for so many days.
:3

• Helldawn's Easy

1. 02:10:511 (3) - Here's clearly missing a clap. You can add it by yourself Sieg, it's inconsistent and he probably forgot to add it.
   done

• Normal

1. 00:52:621 (4) - This pattern would flow much better if you ctrl+g this slider.
   indeed
2. 01:15:767 (3) - Move 1 grid down for a perfect blanket. Yeah I'm very nazi because these are the final polishments for the diff.
   same, I guess this just shifted because of timing :3
3. 01:34:163 (2) - I personally dislike this slider. Too many repeats that may be unpredictable for a beginner, but I guess it's fine.
   That slider even loose 1 repeat on new timing

• Hard

1. 01:44:060 (5,6,7,8) - Make this stream with a good curved shape? looks a bit messy due to 01:44:320 (7)'s placement. Small change.
   fixed
   
   Lol nothing else, just that. :3

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Yey! Let's see this again :3 (No kds in this post pls)
Hey :3

General:

• 01:48:062 (Break) - You can do a good thing with the break. If you listen the music properly, you will listen a different pitch since 01:48:550 - (Setting the Beat Snap Divisor in 1/4), so would be a good idea if you drag the Break start till 01:48:550
done

Helldawn's Easy:

• 01:29:976 (1) - I think you are missing a Clap at the Slider start, should be better if you add one in this point
done

Normal:

• 01:25:549 (3) - I didn't find the reason to reduce the volume at the Slider start. I think that in 60% provides a good sound listening Vocals and Instrumentals. So, I'd leave it in 60% in this place as well
raised to 40%, 60 sounds too loud as for me, this was repeat slider btw before timing fix

Hard:

• 01:24:495 (3,4) - Ugh.. This antijump plays akwardly to me, is kinda big for a pretty dinamic map. You can maybe add 2 Notes, one in 01:25:549 and other one in 01:25:812 to avoid the antijump, or invent another kind of thing if you want. But I highly suggest you to fix that!
Uh... but I really love the way this made This circle fits this pause I want to make and placement increases this pause. eh... so much intended trick want to keep this.

Minor things, but would be better if you fix all of them before the rank . Call me back again when you are ready

Thanks Mancuso
updated

Sieg wrote:

;_;

inverness wrote:

Congratulations Sieg.

Royston wrote:

"the most loneliest day of my life"

the grammar there kind of amused me