Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Gu's Normal]
00:22:145 (2) - Flip horizontally for better flow? I think it is fine
02:39:665 (1) - Add finish for emphasis? finish kinda weird here


[TuHard]
00:53:825 (6) - Make a slider like this to make a better flow for next slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687777 nah I don't think blanket is needed here
01:07:265 (3) - Add clap at end added
01:47:585 (6) - Move to X:420 and Y:60 for better flow? I think current is better
02:04:385 (8) - This position of slider can break the flow. Reverse the slider to fix it?
03:27:905 (5) - ^ I think a jump seems fine for the flow


[Insane]
00:06:545 (3,4) - Jump here is doesn't fit. It doesn't have a *pop* sound (like the sound effect at 00:07:745) change the spacing
00:39:425 (3) - Snap the end slider at blue tick isn't fit to the song, IMO hmm I think it is fine though
02:15:425 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump? nah this spacing can hardly be called a jump, so I think new combo seems weird here


Good luck

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
offset=56(-9) is better imo k

[Gu's Normal]
AR-1? 5 is kinda high to this diffk
03:27:185 (3,4) - slider first and then citrcle later, rhyme'll be better imok
04:24:005 - spinner end at here(1/8 snap)? it'll fit the song better imo well feel aliitle weird about this one,so keep it

[TuHard]
00:51:905 (2) - I suggest you ctrl+g on this slider. the jump is not too hard to play as a Hard diff, but it doesn't fit the song at all, I don't know why to add a jump here.. k
04:24:005 - same as Normal

[Insane]
00:13:145 - add a note? do the same things you did at 00:12:665 - k
01:20:945 - 因为这里有个vocal，所以我建议这里用3连+单点或者单点+3连好点，2连+2连感觉不太合曲，因为这附近你基本跟的都是vocal
01:34:145 - 感觉spinner end没必要这么小声个人爱好
01:42:305 (2,3) - wrong spacing? k
02:07:985 (6) - change a shape or direction please, the slider's end touched HP bar(with default skin) k
04:24:005 - same as Normal

我今天有点喝多了0.0

1. Suggest to uncheck letterbox during breaks since there're some short breaks not fit for that

1. 00:53:816 (1) - make it curved a bit? like
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:57:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - about here, i'd like to move (1) - to 257:71 (00:56:696 (3) - 's end), and then make a square jump like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:02:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
4. 01:10:136 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to move the triplet to red-tick
5. 01:14:936 (1) - apply a red anchor? also 01:15:656 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:20:216 (6) - also, ctrl+g for flow?

1. CS-1?

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Suggest to uncheck letterbox during breaks since there're some short breaks not fit for that well I think it is ok :>

[Insane]

1. 00:53:816 (1) - make it curved a bit? like
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:57:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - about here, i'd like to move (1) - to 257:71 (00:56:696 (3) - 's end), and then make a square jump like this: remake this pattern to another type, didn't follow the image though..
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:02:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
4. 01:10:136 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to move the triplet to red-tick this one is trying to follow vocal so
5. 01:14:936 (1) - apply a red anchor? also 01:15:656 (2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:20:216 (6) - also, ctrl+g for flow?

[Gu's Normal]

1. CS-1?

dominopongo wrote:

There's typ-o in title - it should be "VocaloidP" not "VocaliodP".
Congratulations on having it ranked though.

goodbye wrote:

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