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Leorda
Hi there

[Gu's Normal]
00:22:145 (2) - Flip horizontally for better flow?
02:39:665 (1) - Add finish for emphasis?


[TuHard]
00:53:825 (6) - Make a slider like this to make a better flow for next slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687777
01:07:265 (3) - Add clap at end
01:47:585 (6) - Move to X:420 and Y:60 for better flow?
02:04:385 (8) - This position of slider can break the flow. Reverse the slider to fix it?
03:27:905 (5) - ^


[Insane]
00:06:545 (3,4) - Jump here is doesn't fit. It doesn't have a *pop* sound (like the sound effect at 00:07:745)
00:39:425 (3) - Snap the end slider at blue tick isn't fit to the song, IMO
02:15:425 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump?


Good luck
Topic Starter
Nymph

elinia wrote:

[Gu's Normal]
01:12:065 (2,3,4) - 做成这样感觉好些?yes fixed

04:06:785 (5) - 再多个折返?然后摆成这样子 这个感觉还是不要 尤其低难度我觉得尽量避免多折返
虽然easy normal确实该多放滑条,但还是感觉滑条太多了点orz 个人风格问题 我自己做的话也很愿意放slider

[TuHard]
00:12:545 (1,2,3) - a little bit boring, change the style? 比如说三角形 开头嘛 我觉得还好
04:19:385 (1) - 在这里04:22:145结束?这个一说我才想起来转盘时间不一样 我把normal的过跟其他dif统一了

[Insane]
00:44:465 (2) - 拖到x:92 y:68?其实这个梗故意的 就算你问为什么这么诡异我也说不出来啊
02:07:985 (6) - 这个如果别人的皮肤比较大圈会被挡住的啊……收缩圈更是
02:19:265 (4) - ^ 这个很普通吧 还是不要
02:39:185 (8,1) - 这样更合vocal些?感觉玩起来有点怪 先保留意见

03:55:985 (3,1) - ^
02:54:785 (1) - 02:58:625 (1) - 为啥不用reverse或是note+短滑条0.0反正减了SV 我也不知道啊 反正就随手下了节奏
04:11:585 (1,2,3,4) - 连续的在下面的note好不舒服……把2和3往上移一些?换了下位置 往上摆了摆
04:19:265 (1) - 在这里04:22:145结束?
另外感觉这个insane有点偏容易了0.0 嘛BPM就这样

[Others]
愚人节快乐 :) 多谢多谢~
thanks~
Topic Starter
Nymph

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Gu's Normal]
00:22:145 (2) - Flip horizontally for better flow? I think it is fine
02:39:665 (1) - Add finish for emphasis? finish kinda weird here


[TuHard]
00:53:825 (6) - Make a slider like this to make a better flow for next slider? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/687777 nah I don't think blanket is needed here
01:07:265 (3) - Add clap at end added
01:47:585 (6) - Move to X:420 and Y:60 for better flow? I think current is better
02:04:385 (8) - This position of slider can break the flow. Reverse the slider to fix it?
03:27:905 (5) - ^ I think a jump seems fine for the flow


[Insane]
00:06:545 (3,4) - Jump here is doesn't fit. It doesn't have a *pop* sound (like the sound effect at 00:07:745) change the spacing
00:39:425 (3) - Snap the end slider at blue tick isn't fit to the song, IMO hmm I think it is fine though
02:15:425 (4) - New combo? Since it's jump? nah this spacing can hardly be called a jump, so I think new combo seems weird here


Good luck
thanks~
wcx19911123
as your request

[General]
offset=56(-9) is better imo

[Gu's Normal]
AR-1? 5 is kinda high to this diff
03:27:185 (3,4) - slider first and then citrcle later, rhyme'll be better imo
04:24:005 - spinner end at here(1/8 snap)? it'll fit the song better imo

[TuHard]
00:51:905 (2) - I suggest you ctrl+g on this slider. the jump is not too hard to play as a Hard diff, but it doesn't fit the song at all, I don't know why to add a jump here..
04:24:005 - same as Normal

[Insane]
00:13:145 - add a note? do the same things you did at 00:12:665 -
01:20:945 - 因为这里有个vocal,所以我建议这里用3连+单点或者单点+3连好点,2连+2连感觉不太合曲,因为这附近你基本跟的都是vocal
01:34:145 - 感觉spinner end没必要这么小声
01:42:305 (2,3) - wrong spacing?
02:07:985 (6) - change a shape or direction please, the slider's end touched HP bar(with default skin)
04:24:005 - same as Normal

我今天有点喝多了0.0
Topic Starter
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
offset=56(-9) is better imo k

[Gu's Normal]
AR-1? 5 is kinda high to this diffk
03:27:185 (3,4) - slider first and then citrcle later, rhyme'll be better imok
04:24:005 - spinner end at here(1/8 snap)? it'll fit the song better imo well feel aliitle weird about this one,so keep it

[TuHard]
00:51:905 (2) - I suggest you ctrl+g on this slider. the jump is not too hard to play as a Hard diff, but it doesn't fit the song at all, I don't know why to add a jump here.. k
04:24:005 - same as Normal

[Insane]
00:13:145 - add a note? do the same things you did at 00:12:665 - k
01:20:945 - 因为这里有个vocal,所以我建议这里用3连+单点或者单点+3连好点,2连+2连感觉不太合曲,因为这附近你基本跟的都是vocal
01:34:145 - 感觉spinner end没必要这么小声个人爱好
01:42:305 (2,3) - wrong spacing? k
02:07:985 (6) - change a shape or direction please, the slider's end touched HP bar(with default skin) k
04:24:005 - same as Normal

我今天有点喝多了0.0
多谢
wcx19911123
bubbled
Elinia
lol :)
Scorpiour
hi there~~random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Suggest to uncheck letterbox during breaks since there're some short breaks not fit for that
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:816 (1) - make it curved a bit? like
  2. 00:57:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - about here, i'd like to move (1) - to 257:71 (00:56:696 (3) - 's end), and then make a square jump like this:
  3. 01:02:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  4. 01:10:136 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to move the triplet to red-tick
  5. 01:14:936 (1) - apply a red anchor? also 01:15:656 (2) -
  6. 01:20:216 (6) - also, ctrl+g for flow?
[Gu's Normal]
  1. CS-1?
Topic Starter
Nymph

Scorpiour wrote:

hi there~~random bubble check

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions


[General]
  1. Suggest to uncheck letterbox during breaks since there're some short breaks not fit for that well I think it is ok :>
[Insane]
  1. 00:53:816 (1) - make it curved a bit? like
  2. 00:57:656 (1,2,3,4,5) - about here, i'd like to move (1) - to 257:71 (00:56:696 (3) - 's end), and then make a square jump like this: remake this pattern to another type, didn't follow the image though..
  3. 01:02:936 (6) - ctrl+g for better flow?
  4. 01:10:136 (3,4,5,6) - i'd like to move the triplet to red-tick this one is trying to follow vocal so
  5. 01:14:936 (1) - apply a red anchor? also 01:15:656 (2) -
  6. 01:20:216 (6) - also, ctrl+g for flow?
[Gu's Normal]
  1. CS-1?
别的都改了 :>
Scorpiour
Ranked~~!!
Satellite
congratz!
Shaburase
There's typ-o in title - it should be "VocaloidP" not "VocaliodP".
Congratulations on having it ranked though.
Irreversible
i actually think it's meant to be vocaliodp
Kyouren
gratz!!!!! :) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Nymph

dominopongo wrote:

There's typ-o in title - it should be "VocaloidP" not "VocaliodP".
Congratulations on having it ranked though.
at first I thought its typo like you did, but after I checked and found out VocaliodP is correct :>

and thanks guys~
Pokie
恭喜妮妮
Aurele
Is it mapped on 1/6?

/me RUNS*

Edit: VocaliodP is indeed correct.
Topic Starter
Nymph
波奇姐你懂我想法的zzz and baka Gabe ^^
Aurele
<:
eveless
哎妮妮为什么这么萌
andromeda2020
Ah my favorite miku song <3! congrats :)
Colin Hou
什么时候结婚呀
Topic Starter
Nymph
怒火 我还年轻
Elinia
恭喜~
x847606653
教练快把网搞好啊
raririn

goodbye wrote:

哎妮妮为什么这么萌
Lan wings
聽了就香草妮妮
Fuwa
My song prefer to hatsune miku *o*
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