UnitedWeSin:
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wa_:
Well, I already applied the claps from UnitedWeSin's Mod, so no reason to write "fixed!" again xD.
Also fixed some suggestions.
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Lally:
Ok! Thanks very much! 3 helpful mods :3
Also updated GamerX4life's diff. Now waiting for Static Noise Bird.
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UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Beginner]
Map Design/RhythmHitsounds
- I think it's a bit difficult to be called Beginner because there are so many circles. Maybe change the name to Easy. It's rreeally for beginners since it's a lot more easier than some other Easy's. No problem here.. (might change if another modder has a problem with this)
- In general about this map, you can tell that much less time was spent on it than the others. It's a very boring map because you did not include any sort of creative sliders that you did in the Insane difficulty. I suggest going through and playing around with sliders here and placements to make it reflect your other maps. yes, it's probably boring for you, but I wanted to make it as Easy as possible for newbie players. Also, the slider velocity is so low that I can't create big creative sliders here.
- 00:08:581 (3,4) - Pretty large spacing increase here between the two. Fixed!
- 00:16:724 (6) - I really advise against using this upbeat slider because it feels very awkward in play. After a stream of notes such as 00:15:438 (3,4,5) the player will be anticipating the downbeat, but because the downbeat is on the end of the slider at 00:17:152 -, it is unstressed and feels confusing. I really suggest switching the placement of the 5 and 6 here so that we can have a new combo circle on the downbeat like this:
00:15:438 (3) to 00:18:438 (4). New combo at 00:17:152. Good Idea, Fixed!- 00:18:867 (5,6,1) - Again this rhythm is very strange and is disconnecting the player from the rhythm of the song. The 6 is an upbeat slider. I suggest deleting the 5 and moving the 6 to 00:18:867. Then move the 00:21:009 (1) to 00:20:581 and increase it's length so that it ends at 00:21:867. You would have this:
00:17:581 (2) to 00:22:295 (2).
You have the NC at 00:20:581 on the downbeat and we get to smash the slider there. This rhythm is very powerful with this section of the song.
Good Idea, Fixed!- 00:49:724 (1,2,3) - Make sure this spacing is consistent. As of now it's noticeably different. Fixed!
- 00:00:010 (1,3,4) - This section is a bit barren on hitsounds to me. Try making the tail of the 1 a normal hit using the sample set sector on the left side of the screen. Also try doing the same thing with the heads of the 3 and 4. So a normal hit at 00:00:867 and 00:01:724 and 00:02:581. Maybe even one at 00:04:295. These hits would hit along side the loud clashes in the music.
Added!- 00:10:295 (1) - Remove the finish here because it's sort of unnecessary and it's inconsistent with your hitsounding pattern used later. I suggest adding a finish at 00:13:724 instead. A finish every 4 measures makes more sense musically with this song. A finish at the beginning of every other measure can be boring in an easy imo. Fixed! // Funny fact: These hitsounds were suggestions in mods, lol.
- 00:22:295 (2) - Maybe add a clap on the end of this slider to continue your pattern of claps used earlier. Ok!
- 00:24:009 (1) - Remove the finish from the head. It's not really necessary. Ok!
- 00:34:295 (1,2,3,4) - I think claps on the ends of these sliders would fit very well with the claps in the music. Ok!
- 00:41:152 (1,2,3,4) - Same here, I think some claps on the ends would be nice. Ok! // Except for (4)
- 00:48:867 (5) - No clap here? There is a large clap in the music. Added!
- 00:50:581 (2) - Clap fits well imo. Ok!
- 00:52:295 (1) - Clap on the head to fit the musc. Ok!
- 00:54:867 (1,2) - Claps on the ends. I'll stop mentioning claps. Just add one when you hear a clap in the music just like at the end of these sliders. Ok! // Added a lot more claps to the rest!
- 01:27:438 (1) - Maybe consider making your clap the slidertick in a Normal Sample Set 2 so that you could have claps on the sliderticks for this slider. Don't sounds too well..
[Insane]
Map Design/RhythmHitsounds
- 00:04:724 (3,4) - Make this spacing larger so it's easier to read. Remade that part ...!
- 00:20:009 (1) - Remove combo here and add it to 00:20:581 (5). That would take some of the shock out of the first slider here because the SV is very large. Didn't remove the new combo, but added a new combo to the slider.
- 00:30:152 (1) - Remove the NC here and add it at 00:30:009 (7) to keep consistent with 00:29:009 (8,1). Ok!
- 00:37:152 (5) - Why not just reflect the 00:36:295 (3) here? It's weird that the 5 and the 3 are different sliders here. You should copy paste the 3 and flip it over. Ok!
- 00:41:152 (8) - I'd say NC here to keep consistent with 00:34:152 (1,2,3). Ok!
- 00:45:438 (1) - This slider looks a little funky, can you remake it as a symmetrical slider? Ok!
- 01:03:295 (1) - You shouldn't break your pattern here of 01:01:581 (1,2). It should repeat because the music is repeated. Actually I don't see a problem with using another pattern here, maybe some alternation?
- 01:29:152 (7) - NC imo. It would fit nicely and accent that finish.
Anyways, that's all I guess. I hope it's helpful. Very helpful. Thanks!
- 00:00:867 (4,10) - These should be claps and not whistles imo just like in the other diffs. I didn't use claps in Insane.
- 00:20:581 (5) - Missing finish on the head I think. Added!
- You use a lot of whistles instead of claps. I guess it sounds alright, it's just not consistent with the other difficulties that use claps. Not every difficulty has to use the same hitsounds!
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wa_:
Well, I already applied the claps from UnitedWeSin's Mod, so no reason to write "fixed!" again xD.
Also fixed some suggestions.
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Lally:
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Lally wrote:
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[General]
i'll suggest to add kiai time from 00:34:295 - to 00:59:152 I think about it with GamerX4life :3
[Beginner][Insane]
- 00:01:724 (3) - one grind left (grind lv 4) oke!
- 00:08:581 (3,4,1) - spacing is not consistent made more consistent!
- 00:18:438 (3,4) - spacing I changed the hitobjects here with UnitedWeSin's mod so I don't know what you mean sorry^^
- 00:46:295 (4,5) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/1LCHa Code would have been useful or at least the coordinates^^
- 01:03:438 (2) - a little bit to far from prev slider fixed!
- 01:12:010 (3) - make it more simmetrical no I don't want to have only symmetrical slider..
Hope it can be helpfull ;_; don't worry! thanks :3
- I think in the first 20 sec of diff are to many circles try to add some sliders the circle fit good..
- fom 00:00:010 - to 00:05:010 - spacing is really inconsistent ok remade that part!
- 00:35:152 (1) - useless red point at slider end whats the problem with that?!
- 01:12:867 (1) - useless red point at end of the slider ^
Ok! Thanks very much! 3 helpful mods :3
Also updated GamerX4life's diff. Now waiting for Static Noise Bird.