~Easy~
00:21:305 (3) - This slider touches the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
~Normal~
00:19:400 (1,3) - Try to avoid the overlap between these sliders if possible.
00:27:019 (5) - New combo should go there.
01:47:495 (1) - This is a bit too hard to hit after spinner, consider centering it a bit more.
01:53:686 (3) - I'd remove the whistle from this slider body.
02:38:448 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza.
02:40:352 (1) - Remove this useless new combo.
~Haruka's Oni~
01:23:686 (1) - I'd remove this spinner and add a slider instead.
~Hard~
00:13:924 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
00:23:210 (1) - Ugly slider, try a better shape.
00:25:114 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
00:27:972 (3) - I'd make this slider straight and not curved a bit like you did.
00:52:733 (4) - Again, ugly slider imo.
00:56:543 (4) - ^ You know what I'm going to say.
01:00:829 (8) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern, perhaps? It seems good.
01:11:781 (4) - Same ugly slider again, though curved in this way doesn't look that bad.
01:54:638 (5) - ^ Why did you use so many of them? D:
01:58:448 (5) - ^ You know.
02:08:686 (4) - Make this circle spaced equally between the circle before and after.
02:24:638 (8) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern, again.
02:40:114 (1) - I don't think this new combo is needed.
Good luck, Kite.
00:21:305 (3) - This slider touches the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
~Normal~
00:19:400 (1,3) - Try to avoid the overlap between these sliders if possible.
00:27:019 (5) - New combo should go there.
01:47:495 (1) - This is a bit too hard to hit after spinner, consider centering it a bit more.
01:53:686 (3) - I'd remove the whistle from this slider body.
02:38:448 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza.
02:40:352 (1) - Remove this useless new combo.
~Haruka's Oni~
01:23:686 (1) - I'd remove this spinner and add a slider instead.
~Hard~
00:13:924 (2) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, move it down a bit.
00:23:210 (1) - Ugly slider, try a better shape.
00:25:114 (1) - ^ Same for this one.
00:27:972 (3) - I'd make this slider straight and not curved a bit like you did.
00:52:733 (4) - Again, ugly slider imo.
00:56:543 (4) - ^ You know what I'm going to say.
01:00:829 (8) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern, perhaps? It seems good.
01:11:781 (4) - Same ugly slider again, though curved in this way doesn't look that bad.
01:54:638 (5) - ^ Why did you use so many of them? D:
01:58:448 (5) - ^ You know.
02:08:686 (4) - Make this circle spaced equally between the circle before and after.
02:24:638 (8) - New combo due to the jumpy pattern, again.
02:40:114 (1) - I don't think this new combo is needed.
Good luck, Kite.