认真看会...这歌不要下蓝线比较好。节奏不合适
间距器你平时调1.0x,到了一句歌词的末尾/高音你可以调大间距继续摆完剩下的歌词/音
间距器你平时调1.0x,到了一句歌词的末尾/高音你可以调大间距继续摆完剩下的歌词/音
ok 了解 我會斟酌看看lkx_Shore wrote:
认真看会...这歌不要下蓝线比较好。节奏不合适
间距器你平时调1.0x,到了一句歌词的末尾/高音你可以调大间距继续摆完剩下的歌词/音
xxhckxyz wrote:
yukiSPOILER00:05:177 (1) - 未端可以考慮放到前面紅線上
00:41:114 (1) - 開頭在藍線上
02:02:677 (6) - 好像離之前的太遠了
OK 我會看一下
two week yunoSPOILER00:52:156 (1) - 藍線
01:01:635 (7) - 這個的感覺有些奇怪
01:02:052 (8) - 放在01:01:843比較好?
01:09:760 (3) - 放在01:09:552比較好?
01:52:677 (3) - 藍線
02:07:781 (2) - 藍線
03:00:697 (1) - 藍線
有空看一下
yuki and yunoSPOILER00:02:984 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這幾個拍子有點亂
00:05:276 (1) - 結尾在藍線 應該減少一個循環
00:27:776 (1,2) - 有點奇怪的感覺
..................我終於知道奇怪的感覺在哪裡產生...
同樣地 每個發聲位都在藍線上...
00:34:442 (1) - 尾放歪了
......而且一連幾個都藍線...這首你最好全首整理一下....
..................
往後的大部份都在藍線上 不知道是刻意還是如何...我不知道應該怎樣mod了
還有...某些SLIDER的尾部放不中紅白或藍線上
00:41:526 (2) -
嗯....不是某些 是大部份.....應該是SV週整了的問題吧....
我之前把SV由1.4調到0.8時 可是把整張地圖都改了啊
這個...努力吧....
xxhckxyz wrote:
:)
YUKISPOILER00:26:843 (6) - 在00:27:260 - 完比較好
00:35:802 (4) - 在00:36:010 - 會否比較好?
00:44:343 (1) - 在00:44:552 - 開始??
00:45:177 (2) - 在00:45:593 - 完比較好?
00:52:260 (3,4) - 這兩個好奇怪的感覺...就是不合群的感覺
01:00:593 (2) - 這個可以考慮縮短一點啊
01:08:718 (2) - 同上吧~~
01:14:552 - 這個放NOTE會否比較好? 後面的長音繼續用SLIDER
01:15:385 (4) - 奇怪的感覺...?
01:18:093 (3) - 在01:18:510 - 完? 然後01:19:135 (4) - 移到01:18:927 - ?
之後的重覆不看了
2 WEEK GASAI YUNOSPOILER00:30:385 (3,4) - 連續兩個FINISH好突兀的感覺
00:36:218 (6) - 這個SLIDER中間感覺上可以放一點東西
00:46:843 (1) - 感覺這個可以做得跟00:48:510 (5,6) - 相似,...
00:50:177 (1) - 這些位置都放一個彎彎的SLIDER感覺很沒新鮮感...純粹吐糟
00:52:572 (2,3) - 這兩個...
01:00:802 (5) - 這個位好靜....
01:16:427 (4,5) - 對於FINISH等聲音的用法可以請教一下leon1341414大大...看過他的圖感覺用得很不錯...他那個很高SP的圖有人曾講過怎樣用 但是那是英文 如果看不懂可以找我 我看得懂 按我即到該處
下面重覆吧...
1WEEK YUNOSPOILER00:23:718 - 感覺這個位可以放NOTE然後00:23:718 (9) - 移到00:23:927 -
00:28:718 (4,5) - 這個應該是刻意的吧!?! 還有00:45:385 (1,2) - 不過也不要緊 這是INSANE吧...而且感覺出現了很多次這個...不過應該沒有問題...還是那句 純粹吐糟...
00:42:677 (1) - 你是想重疊上2吧...歪了
00:58:302 (6,7,8) - 感覺這三個放得很沒美感
01:05:177 (5,6,7) - 聲音方面我上面有說過...
01:06:531 (1) - 感覺有點怪...要是可以的話可在01:06:427 - 加多一個NOTE
01:29:968 (3,4,5) - 感覺地圖上用了很多種這個 感覺很突兀...但這沒有什麼問題的...純粹吐糟....可以不用理會.........真的很多....由1:50至到2:10之間都有幾個....這不是什麼問題 但感覺可以考慮多一點變化~~
01:31:322 (9) - 這個....?
02:08:927 (6,7) - 我會把這兩個的位置換一下..
02:14:656 (7) - 這個........
02:24:031 (4,5) - 同之前一樣...這樣變化雖然不太多..但有點怪...只不過之前我也曾在其他地圖看過類似的東西 所以就不說太多話了...
03:18:093 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 這個做得很帥...不用改...想說很帥而已
另一個你是否還未改好? 是的話我先不MOD了...
感覺你很愛用2note+slider....這沒什麼問題 但把同一個梗用太多次總感覺不太好...
ok我會盡量減少一些xxhckxyz wrote:
YUKISPOILER00:30:177 - 加note?
00:32:677 - ^
00:32:885 - ^
00:33:093 - ^
01:10:385 (3) - 疊位問題
這個我再看看 目前已經是定案 應該沒什麼遺漏的
TWO WEEK YUNOSPOILER還是聲音的問題吧...應該不用每個聲都加whistle...用法可以參考昨天所說的
note都差不多了 只剩下聲音 時間線(只是把多的刪掉而已)
YUKI AND YUNOSPOILER00:18:302 (3) - 未疊好??
00:35:593 - 這附近可以加note?
00:35:801 (2) 00:53:718 (2,5) - - 這個slider的尾部放歪了 不是在紅線上
00:37:543 (7) - 這個...刻意的?
01:01:010 (5,1) - 很怪...
感覺上好像還沒改完...還是先不mod了...太多不合拍的地方...不好說...
恩阿還沒改完 我上面有寫先no mod 還在改中
ONE WEEK YUNOSPOILER還是老問題吧...音聲方面啊....finish等聲音很亂....
可以去改一下像00:50:281 (1,2,3) - 的地方...真的太多了....不過不用急在一時的
yuki & yuno 還沒改好 是說先不用MOD的意思 想換全新xxhckxyz wrote:
no mod是指不用mod還是欠缺mod...?
yuki and yuno 還是等你改好我再mod吧~~改好記緊通知我啊
yukiSPOILER00:03:927 (3,1) - 太近?
00:27:885 (1) - 和 00:33:302 - 之間好像太空了...可以加note?
01:03:718 (1,2,3,4) - 感覺上可以用note代替某些slider?
01:10:385 (3) - 這個乾脆疊到 01:10:802 (1) - 的尾部吧...
02:00:177 (1,2,3) - 感覺好多短slider....
2week yunoSPOILER00:52:260 (1,2,3) - 有點奇怪 但說不出怪在哪
感覺可以在kiai時加一些clap 太靜了...
1week yunoSPOILER01:05:177 (5,6,7) - 這連續三個FINISH很刺耳
看了一遍 基本上也找不到有什麼我認為有問題的地方 就是有些位置比較怪 例如這段 01:46:635 (7,8,9) -
真的感覺這首歌不太適合放太多東西在藍線上...
像01:48:927 (3,4,5) - 這種排法反而比上面那種好一點...
感覺比之前好多了 我也挑不出什麼大問題
明天開始我會比較忙 但會盡量抽時間給你MOD的
Shana Aisaka wrote:
[General]
All seems fine songs and picture but only the diff are really need to fix
Some of the timing aren't the same? fix this as well ! :3
Sounds also need to fix cause there are some notes needed and some of it please remove if not necessary
整体看起来还好,timing没有统一需要修正,另外有些note需要做一些增减的修正。
[Yuki]
This is easy right? You should make it easy to play Make it three star cause minimum is three star for easy/normal
这个是Easy吧,要做到3星以下
00:53:718 - I think you should put notes instant of spinner here 我认为你需要在spinner后面放个note (补充,E/N里不建议spinner后面直接放note)
00:55:177(1) - Remove it 删掉
02:41:845(2) - This doesn't seems like easy/normal already .... Please remove it or fix it 这个看起来不怎么Easy,删了
[Two Weeks Gasai Yuno]
Please don't forget to Distance Snap 别忘了DS
01:08:718(2) - Slider looks ugly please fix it - slider形状难看
01:18:093(1) - Remove NC - 去掉NC
01:31:635(7) - No beats here please remove note - 这里没有节奏,去掉note
02:09:968 - spinner start here (u may also can put notes here) - 把spinner放到这里开始
02:13:302(1) - Seems really confuse here make it easy to click - 读图有困难点不到
03:03:718(1) - lol this is too hard xD please fix it. - 太难了
[b][Yuki & Yuno]
[color=#FF0000]Please Snapped all the notes. - note没有对齐到时间轴
I think you should make Slider Velocity 1.60 or more than 1.40 and Slider Tick make it 1 only or 2 - 建议用1.6的sv,Slider Tick Rate用1或者2
Timing no need to put x1.10 - 时间线没必要放到1.10x
00:52:052(7) - NC
00:54:968(7) - NC
01:00:802 - Kiai Time should start here - kiai从这里开始
03:50:802 - Put timing here same as Two Weeks Yuno Gasai diff
[One Weeks Gasai Yuno]
Please don't forget to snapped your object http://puu.sh/1VgcQ
00:05:663(1) - Put finish at the end of the slider
00:21:218(1) - DS (Distance Snap)
00:50:177 - do like this is much better http://puu.sh/1Vgbc
01:32:260 - add note
01:52:190(4) - Remove note there's no beat here
02:41:843(2) - Slider looks ugly fix it
03:28:302(8) - NC (New Combo)
03:50:802 - Timing as well
Okay that's all ~
Good Luck ! :3
還沒做完 能拿去pending放?YuZuKi Kenny wrote:
怎麼不移去pending呢
lead8964878 wrote:
嗨 回訪 有點忙所以晚了點.x.
恩...關於Pending的話 我個人認為 節奏排好就可以了 HS那些都是MOD的 不過要不要移也隨意ˇ
General
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Non
1'week那張圖~ww
Normal
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01:32:677 (2) - 這個用成Reverse 不用 沒關係
02:28:927 - 換Slider到這裡? 不用
02:31:218 - 縮短到02:31:427這
02:31:635 - ^如果採用就加Note 有縮短 沒+
Normal+
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03:18:927 - 或許改成Slider到(1). OK 修改
Hard
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好恐怖的綠線團-e- 電G那段配的不錯 謝誇獎XD
01:40:385 - 縮到01:40:593
01:40:802 - ^如果採用就加Note
03:12:052 - 縮到03:12:260
03:12:468 - ^如果採用就加Note
Insane
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02:51:218 - Finish 有點太多了
其他都OK~
抱歉我看不出什麼大端倪 就這樣吧(?
恩阿 好歌yfvail wrote:
未来日记~!!
i kick Miomio Chii and throw her out on the road.- Miomio Chii - wrote:
/me bite smallboat and run away
/me shout " Baka " and run away.smallboat wrote:
i kick Miomio Chii and throw her out on the road.- Miomio Chii - wrote:
/me bite smallboat and run away
osu file format v12
[General]
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[Metadata]
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TitleUnicode:Happy Fate
Artist:Choucho
ArtistUnicode:Choucho
Creator:smallboat
Version:说好的建议
Source:Mirai Nikki
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138,314,53718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,316,54135,6,0,P|183:271|248:241,1,127.5
279,236,54552,2,0,P|343:283|432:269,1,170
433,279,55177,6,0,P|453:310|495:347,1,85
339,317,55593,2,0,P|259:338|205:308,1,127.5
183,306,56010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
103,161,56218,2,0,L|92:112,2,42.5
103,161,56635,6,0,P|158:173|208:167,1,85
282,103,57052,2,0,P|300:168|300:207,1,85
244,297,57468,6,0,P|297:333|396:298,1,170
happy623 wrote:
巨遲到對不起;w;/
好吧我承認我懶了;w; 我mod最低跟最高難度吧
嗯嗯 已加 多指教嚕!Koaxx wrote:
顺便求mutual交流mapping心得 ^>^
tks mod!happy623 wrote:
巨遲到對不起;w;/
好吧我承認我懶了;w; 我mod最低跟最高難度吧
[General]勉強看得懂一些英文..
- 個人覺得bg1,bg3,bg4這3個背景圖的質素有點低, 有點朦朦的, 強烈建議更換ww'' 嗯嗯 還在找說 你那圖我下次更新再更換
- Artist 加一下日文吧0 0 fixed
- tags裡的song, Mirai, Nikki可以刪去 fixed
- 整張圖多加些音效owo, 可以讓圖的完成度高點, 可參考這個 http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Music_Theory
[Normal]fixed
- OD-1?
- 00:29:552 (1) - 消去NC (感覺沒有需要 fixed
- 00:31:218 (1) - ^ fixed
- 00:36:218 (1) - ^ fixed
- 00:37:885 (1) - ^ fixed
- 00:42:052 (2,3,4) - 個人覺得有點太難了, 換成折返slider? fixed
- 00:42:885 (1) - remove NC fixed
- 00:50:802 (1) - 要是前面stack的話, 這個不妨也stack一下? fixed 話說stack是什麼意思(搔頭
- 00:55:593 (3) - 這個短的slider折返有點太多, 保持1次折返就好 fixed
- 00:58:718 (1) - 刪去NC fixed
- 00:59:968 (1) - ^ fixed
- 01:00:802 (2) - 這裡NC fixed
- 01:02:052 (1) - 刪走NC fixed
- 01:09:552 (1) - ^ fixed
- 01:19:135 (3) - 這裡的slider扭成跟01:18:302 (2) 一樣會美觀一點, 可以用copy 0 0 fixed
- 01:29:760 (1) - remove NC fixed
- 01:34:135 (4) - 這裡NC, 刪去01:34:552 (1) 的NC fixed
- 01:36:010 (1) - 刪去NC, 一般來說都是白線NC fixed
- 01:37:885 (1) - ^ fixed
- 01:47:468 (6) - NC, 消走01:47:885 (1) 的NC fixed
- 01:49:552 (1) - 刪去NC (以下不看nc了,跟著大白線試試放;w;) fixed
- 02:06:635 - 這個break有點突然;w; 不建議這裡起break fixed
- 02:12:260 (2) - 這個slider折返位不對音;w; fixed
- 02:51:635 (2,3,4) - note與slider overlap不太好, 建議把滑條拖開一點
[1 Week Yuno's Insane]fixed
- 00:09:343 (5) - 放在這裡有點怪怪的;w; 可以試一下放在00:08:718 (4) 的中間把它包住, 像這樣 http://puu.sh/3wp7g.jpg fixed
- 00:10:802 (1,2) - 可以把它們包好 http://puu.sh/3wp9B.jpg fixed
- 00:12:468 (7) - 多了紅點在尾巴;w; , 還有NC? 感覺combo數有點多ww fixed 紅點是指?
- 00:18:510 (5) - 放在這? http://puu.sh/3wpdu.jpg 然後NC~ fixed
- 00:26:010 (6) - 放高一點不要跟00:26:218 (7) overlap較好0 0 fixed
- 00:31:635 (1) - 跟前面的distance spacing(ds)一樣放較好 例如這樣 http://puu.sh/3wpmA.jpg , 改的話00:32:052 (2,3) 也要一起走~ fixed
- 00:33:927 (2) - http://puu.sh/3wpoC.jpg fixed
- 00:56:010 (10) - 跟ds? fixed
- 01:14:135 (1) - copy 01:13:510 (6) ? fixed
- 01:47:468 (9) - finish fixed
- 01:59:135 (10) - NC? fixed
- 02:06:843 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/3wpw9.jpg fixed
- 02:40:176 (1,2) - 不要overlap會好看一點w fixed
- 02:48:301 (1,2) - ^ fixed
- 02:53:927 (2) - 尾巴finish fixed
- 02:53:927 (2) - 感覺這個折返點被擋住 有點難讀 fixed
- 03:35:801 (5) - http://puu.sh/3wpCP.jpg fixed
- 03:38:718 (6) - http://puu.sh/3wpDl.jpg fixed
- 03:39:760 (1) - 被03:39:135 (8) 擋住不夠好看;w;
先這樣~Good Luck