Melophobia wrote:

[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:12:120 (4) - What the heck is this note folowing? うーむむ・・・他の人にも言われてたので、悩みましたが変更しました。
00:15:428 (3) - I feel like adding a finish here.added~
00:59:546 - It'd be a nice accent if there's a note here. 前のと区別化するためにもnote置いていいと思う。 ここも同じく他の人にも言われていたので変更しました。
01:15:869 (6) - Move this note forward by 1/2 beat.今のほうが曲に合っていると思うのでこのままで。
01:19:178 - Add a whistle or finish? add finish.
01:33:958 - This whistle sounds strange.deleted.
01:37:487 - A whistle would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty. Added~
It would be better if there are some more whistles in the kiai part and the following part (01:30:869 ~). フィットするパターンが作れないのでこのままで・・

Melophobia wrote:

[phoon's Insane]
01:06:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the current rhythm is a bit awkward to me, how about doing like this? fixed

SPOILER

01:13:112 (2,3) - You should place this note at x:172 y:128 so that the spacing of this stream looks consistant. fixed
01:37:487 - clap? 違和感を感じたのでno change

Melophobia wrote:

Recheck, no kudosu please! hoi

[General]
Timing: 852 (-18)
And add extra red lines at 2616 and 73205 to correct beats. Be sure to resnap everything after changes.
As I explained over IRC, rearrange audio lead-in please.
all fixed

[Insane]
01:37:487 - Finish added

あと前のModで提案したHitsoundをHardとEasyにも適用させといて下さい（もう１回書くの面倒くさい・・） some fixed in easy and changed by myself in Hard.
Call me back when you're done with fixes~ come on come on come on

Melophobia wrote:

なんか緑線が1msズレてて大変なことになってたから直してきた　http://puu.sh/22VvN　正しく音が鳴ってるか自信ないからそっちで
お手数かけました、ありがとう。確認しました。たぶん大丈夫です。たぶん。
Hard:
前のmodはno change?　前のPostに青字で書いてると思うけど参考にして自分なりに変えた。
00:24:674 (4) - move this forward by 1 tick　
01:10:777 (4) - ^
01:16:513 (10) - ^
01:26:219 (3) -
01:20:262 - Finish
01:37:469 (10) - Use the same hitsound pattern as Insane
all fixed.
the rest looks fine~

Melophobia wrote:

Normal:
00:11:880 (4) - Missing clap? ok
00:36:145 - Start the break from here? ok
01:00:851 (1) - I'm sure this is still rankable but it wouldn't hurt anything to move this slider away in order to avoid overlapping. 01:02:836 (3) - ここoverlapしないようにスライダーに変えました
01:37:468 - Finish will fit better than whistle.ok

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Ryafuka's Normal]

1. OD+1 for better diff spread.
2. 01:27:322 - Unsnapped kiai time end point.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[phoon's Insane]

1. 01:24:675 (5) - Try use ctrl+g,flow much better.
2. 01:37:468 - Add clap,sound much better.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Rare ~ hi rika~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Use original artist : ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織

fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:37:468 - Add clap,sound much better.

added S:C2 clap there

OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map and moe song ~

Call me back ~