thanks for checking!!Melophobia wrote:
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Note: all screen shots are just example of how to fix. You're free to fix accordingly or in your own way, or totally ignore.
[General][Insane]
- I do not recommend you to use default sampleset because it make sliderslide to sound; This song is kinda soft thus it might sound so bad. added soft-sliderslide4. pls redownload map after checked this reply.
- According to where change of melody is, the kiai time should end at 01:27:340 - imo. But if you want the spinner to have kiai effect, then it's fine as it is. fixed all diffs.
- Considering that the original video has 16:9 ratio, your video shouldn't have a different ratio; It needs to be 16:9 if 4:3 video is unrankable, I will delete the video D:
- offset is obviously off. it should be 852 (-18 from the current offset.) double checked with popner. No need to touch anything untill you have a look everything I mention; I'm using the current timing while modding. Be sure to resnap everything after changes. before, I asked to suzully about offset. he said "current offset is fine." I'm very confused because everyone saying "wrong this offset." to me.
- I roughly modded a few placements over IRC long time ago. I've lost the log but whatever. it doesn't matter much, I think. I was forgot savelog. sry my bad.
- AIBat found several unsnapped notes/inherited sections. Please fix them up. fixed all
SPOILERSnapping
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:51:384 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:43:345 - snap to 00:43:333 fixed- 00:09:031 (7,8,9,1) - This quadrilateral pattern looks so unequal and a bit messy. I suppose it wouldn't hurt or break anything to make it more equel. fixed placement used main spacing.
- 00:17:855 - There's no any bussdrum or anything strong enough for you to use this clap, how about setting sampleset to S:C2? Once you have a carefull listen, you'll notice that this percussion is very similar to 00:18:075 - . and I think that way it sounds a lot better.sry, watashi ha kagirareta basho nomi C:2 wo tukau kotoni siteimasu.
Also you need to set sampleset to S:C2 at.. some changed sampleset.SPOILER00:25:134 (4) -
00:32:193 - fixed
00:39:252 -
01:19:840 -
01:26:899 (5) - fixed
01:33:958 -- 00:25:134 (6) - This note is placed too close to the next objects - feels too narrow and uncomfortable to me. Please space it at larger spacing, or move further away. I'd do something like this if I were you. changed by myself
- 00:28:002 - Considering the melody this normal finish is obviously wrong. and doesn't fit at all with the song. soft one will be a lot better I think. fixed
- 00:28:664 (4) - Frankly speaking, This stacking makes this pattern quite uncomfortable as next pattern has a huge spacing. It'd be nice if you did something like this, it's just a suggestion though. changed by myself
- 00:53:149 (5,6) - This large spacing is quite uncomfortable to me, and makes no sense imo. fixed
- 00:59:767 (4) - How about shortening this slider by 1/4 beat and add another note at 01:00:208 - so that the rhythm can fit better with the percussion? fixed. but I might misunderstanding.
- 01:07:487 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move this pattern rightward by 1 grid so that the beginning of 01:08:369 (8) - can be stacked with the end of 01:07:046 (2) - . fixed
- 01:18:075 (7,8) - Avoid placing these notes below 01:17:634 (6) - for better flow. I'd do something like this (if you think this one looks messy then it's fine as it is.)changed placement.
- 01:22:267 (7) - There should be a newcombo here according to your newcombos pattern in the kiai time (all other newcombos are coming every downbeat) fixed
- 01:24:472 (4,5,6,7,8) - It wouldn't really hurt anything to move this jump pattern right/upward so that (6) can be stacked under the end of 01:23:811 (3) - . fixed
- 01:37:487 (6) - As far as I listen, this percussion is quite similar to that of 00:02:193 (4) - . So the normal finish doesn't fit very well with it imo. How about setting sampleset to S:C2 and add both clap and finish here? nice suggestion. fixed
- And some hitsound suggestion. Remember, everything is based on my taste, feel free to ignore.
- 00:05:281 - Add whistle
- 00:06:825 - Remove whistle
- 00:07:046 (3) - Add whistle
- 00:11:678 - Add default whistle
- 00:13:222 - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 00:20:943 - Add soft whistle
- 00:23:811 (1) - Add whistle
- 00:31:311 (2) - ^
- 00:31:531 (3) - Remove whistle
- 00:38:149 (4) - Add whistle
- 00:49:178 - ^
- 00:49:619 - ^
- 00:50:281 - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 00:51:164 - ^
- 00:56:237 - Add soft whistle instead of normal finish
- 01:00:208 - Add whistle
- 01:01:752 (3) - ^
- 01:02:634 (1) - ^
- 01:03:296 - Add soft whistle
- 01:04:399 - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 01:05:281 - Add whistle
- 01:06:164 - ^
- 01:07:046 - ^
- 01:07:487 (3) - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 01:08:369 - Add default whistle
- 01:09:252 - ^
- 01:09:693 - ^
- 01:10:134 - ^
- 01:11:568 (2) - ^
- 01:11:789 (4) - ^
- 01:12:119 (7) - ^
- 01:12:561 (10,11) - Add custom whistles (S:C2) maybe lower volume would be nice
- 01:13:884 - Add whistle
- 01:14:325 - Add default whistle
- 01:14:987 (1) - Add soft whistle
almost fixed your whistle suggestion. sry I forget changed the place
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