1. Insane (5 stars, 596 notes)

marcelosina1 wrote:

Wow, I haven't seen any bad point in this beatmap at all!
I just have one question: Will you make the collab one longer?

~Aya

1. Should the name of the song be Beautiful ground?
   
   
2. Also, add yuyoyuppe to tags. And you can add nanoir, it's an album

1. Circle size -1? They are too big for insane, but it's your call
2. 00:01:105 (1) - finish on first note
4. 00:03:577 (1) - ^
5. 00:04:731 - you should have note here to follow your rhythm
6. 00:05:390 - ^ as there is beat in music
7. 00:11:242 (8) - finish in the end
8. 00:21:874 (1) - this note seems out of rhytm, add note 00:21:709 - here and 00:22:039 - here:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:22:203 (1) - finish here
10. 00:27:478 (1) - ^
11. 00:29:786 (4,1) - do you see that they have 1/1 distance between them, but it has the same distance as between 00:30:445 (1,2,1,2). Why? Move it further
12. 00:37:368 (1,2,3,4,5) - too many finishes in the stream D: sound awful, remove them
13. 00:41:654 - I expected a note here, maybe add one?
14. 00:43:302 (1) - finish
15. 00:45:940 (9) - new combo!
16. 00:51:214 (4) - shorten it to 00:51:544 - and add note on red tick
17. 00:52:368 - add note here too
18. 00:52:698 (9) - new combo
19. 00:53:852 (1) - finish
20. 00:57:148 - note, it's not good to leave blanked space more than 1/1
21. 01:01:599 (5) - uhh, if you want to leave this, it's ok, but maybe split it into different notes?
22. 01:04:401 (6) - new combo?
23. 01:11:984 - add note
24. 01:12:313 (11) - move it further
25. 01:12:396 - maybe start spinner here? or here 01:12:478 -
26. 01:22:863 (2) - finish
27. 01:28:137 (4) - ^
28. 01:31:929 (6) - ^
29. 01:35:473 (10,11) - move them like this:
    
    SPOILER

    
30. 01:37:698 (8) - move it so that 01:37:203 (6) - won't overlap it
31. 01:44:621 - note!
32. 01:45:445 (5) - again, move it, such overlaps look bad
33. 01:46:599 (9) - new combo and finish
34. 01:49:236 (8) - ^
35. 01:54:511 (1) - finish
36. 01:57:148 (3) - new combo
37. 02:09:346 (11) - don't fit. change, please D:
38. 02:07:698 (5) - new combo
39. 02:12:808 (1) - shorten to 02:13:137 -
40. 02:14:951 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move it like here (as previous hitburst of notes overlap it)
    
    SPOILER

    
41. 02:33:083 (1) - start spinner from 02:34:154 - and map this part:
    
    SPOILER

    
42. 02:36:709 (2) - finish
43. 02:41:984 (1) - ^
44. 02:47:258 (10) - new combo
45. 02:49:566 (1) - finish on reverse
46. 02:55:170 (1) - finish
47. 02:57:808 (1) - ^
    
    Also, you should improve your hitsounds. Try to experiment with soft and whistles and claps and so on, with volumes.
    Good luck!

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  Rhythm and placement

1. 00:01:929 (2) - It's not good using many slider's return such timing. I suggest this
2. 00:03:577 (1,2,3,4) - This part of sound is changing compared to previous one. I suggest using little jump.
3. 00:52:368 ~ 00:52:368 - This space is not good, I think. Because there is voice. I suggest this
4. 01:52:203 (1,2,3) - I can't understand which sound you catch. I suggest adding circle 01:52:368 {same position as 01:52:203 (1)} and moving 01:52:533 (2,3) to 01:52:698.
5. 01:58:467 - If you use the guitar line, need slide here. slider start=01:58:467 , end=01:58:632.
6. 02:29:951 (8,1) - These are not fit to voice line. I suggest removing 02:29:951 (8), moving 02:30:115 (1) to 02:29:951 and adding circle here=02:30:775
7. 02:33:083 (1) - this spinner is not fit to the sound there. I suggest put normal notes 02:32:753 ~ 02:34:072 and starting spinner here=02:34:072.
8. 02:26:159 (6,7) - stack?
9. 02:36:214 - need circle.
10. 03:08:028 (2,3) - There are strong drum sound. I'd like to use jump!

1. 00:09:017 (3) - NC. For example you use here 00:03:577 - .
2. 00:45:280 (6) - NC. use long combo in later.
3. 00:47:918 and 00:48:577 - change NC. From timing of voice.
4. 00:50:061 and 00:50:555 - same reason as upward.="^"
5. 01:00:610 and 01:00:940 - ^
6. 01:03:742 and 01:04:401 - ^
7. 01:09:676 and 01:10:500 - ^
8. 01:26:819 - NC. use long combo.
9. 01:27:808 and 01:28:137 -change NC. It's not good separateing 01:27:478 (9,10,11) and 01:27:808 (1,2,3).
10. 01:34:566 (7) - NC. use long combo.
11. 01:35:720 and 01:36:050 - change NC. same reason as 01:27:808 and 01:28:137 -
12. 01:38:522 and 01:39:511 - change NC. from timing of voice.
13. 01:41:324 and 01:41:984 - ^
14. 01:46:599 (9) - NC. use long combo.
15. 01:48:247 and 01:49:236 - change NC. change sound here=01:49:236 -
16. 01:50:720 and 01:51:214 - change NC. For example you use here 00:03:577.
17. 01:51:874 and 01:52:203 - change NC.
18. 02:00:445 - NC. It's kindness.
19. 02:01:269 and 02:01:434 - change NC. there are sound space here=02:01:269.
20. 02:36:709 - NC. change sound clearly.
21. 02:47:258 - NC. starting voice.

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  It's a fun map overall, but i'd stick a little bit more with distance snap on some places

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  00:02:423 (4) - ctrl+G this slider and fix it to make nice blanket (http://puu.sh/2bD2p)
  00:07:698 (6) - ^ (http://puu.sh/2bD4k)
  00:22:203 (4) - ctrl+G
  00:24:017 (4) - this feels kinda weird the way it is, I'd make into something like this: http://puu.sh/2bDeX
  00:27:808 (2) - ctrl+G
  00:29:126 (2) - ctrl+G
  00:33:083 (2) - ctrl+G
  00:50:885 (3) - ctrl+G
  00:55:006 (8) - I don't see any reason to make the slider all wiggled like this, i think a normal slider here would fit best to her voice
  00:56:654 (1) - why NC? remove nc here or remove it here 00:56:984 (1) -
  00:59:456 (7) - ctrl+G
  01:01:599 (5) - NC
  01:01:764 (1) - Remove NC
  01:31:599 (5) - ctrl+G and I would change this and make it into something like this: http://puu.sh/2bDAQ
  01:31:929 (1) - NC
  01:43:632 (7) - ctrl+G and same thing as above (http://puu.sh/2bDFo)
  01:59:786 (3) - NC
  02:31:929 (6) - ctrl+G
  02:36:709 (2) - NC
  03:04:896 (5) - ctrl+G
  03:05:390 (6) - ctrl+G