Dark Fang wrote:

HAI ~

[General]

offset +14 (287) Check your offset You're right. Fixed

[Easy]

00:20:273 (1) - put this circle more upper place from 00:18:606 (3) - . and 00:21:106 (2) - respacing this note be covered by 00:18:606 (3) -
00:36:939 (1) - don't touch (3) slider, move to (192,164) and adjust next notes

[Normal]

00:27:356 (1) - tilt a little angle to downwards -cover round 00:25:272 (3) - slider's tail
wow good diff

Dark Fang wrote:

HAI ~
[shikyu's Hard]

00:11:939 (4) - i guess you can try make more pretty this slider it has same shape with 00:12:578 (5) and still blanket each other
00:27:148 (2) - remove this note? i don't know thie circle is useful for music flow there's smething to follow and imo feel empty if it doesn't filled
01:15:897 (1) - remove NC and 01:16:939 (5) - NC here. IMO no, NC based on lyric, beside there's jump before this note and anti jump after this
01:21:939 (1) - Ctrl + G ? i think if you reverse this note, flow more good k

Saten wrote:

Hello~

[General]
imo, the offset sounds a bit late. It should be something like 279 (-8ms)

[Hard]
00:41:953 (3,4) - stack these properly ok

SPOILER

You might wanna keep 00:43:620 (1,2) - stacked together as well

00:52:786 (6) - remove the claps except the last one. Three 1/4 claps in a row sounds weird imo with the selected type of clap sound use them 'cause it follow drum
00:52:786 (6,7,8) - gradually increase the spacing on these so it blends it with the chorus ok
01:15:911 (1) - remove NC? to be consistent since so many people said this, changed
01:16:745 (5) - NC here instead ^
01:11:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - How about making a horizontal flip here? Fits pretty well with the previous combo. I'm not sure about the following one though, but that's for you to decide hm, not really fit, and if follow this spacing between 01:10:911 (4) and 01:11:536 (1) become too big

Nice mapset, seems pretty solid
Good luck!

Saten wrote:

Hello~

[General]
imo, the offset sounds a bit late. It should be something like 279 (-8ms)

[Normal]
00:05:287 (4) - whistle on end
00:14:870 (2) - Remove clap? It kinda goes against your usual pattern You mean whistle? Fixed
00:52:578 (2) - remove clap from end You mean whistle? Fixed and add clap
01:21:120 (1,2,3) - The spacing is not that equal here

[Easy]
00:06:537 (3) - no need for a whistle here imo
00:11:945 (3) - same here feels empty ><
00:31:537 (2) - ^


Nice mapset, seems pretty solid
Good luck!

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue!

Hard

00:03:612 (1) - Remove NC add on next element NC consistent at big white tick
00:05:279 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:22:570 (5) - Delete this slider, the vocal ends with the circle before it follow instrument, I know vocal end there but other pattern before this follow both vocal and instrument
01:08:612 (7) - NC remove next NC based on lyric
01:10:278 (3) - ^ ^ even it jump, but stil readable

Well done! Inform me once its fixed and i will recheck and then tell jericho2442 to check it

shikyu wrote:

BounceBabe wrote:

00:22:570 (5) - Delete this slider, the vocal ends with the circle before it follow instrument, I know vocal end there but other pattern before this follow both vocal and instrument

BounceBabe wrote:

I still suggest to remove it, the "instrument" is too weak to hear during gameplay :s

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

OD -1 imo is better.

01:03:612 (1,2) - Wrong spacing.

~Normal~

HP Drain +1 imo is better.

~shikyu's Taiko Futsuu~

Resnap all notes, everything is unsnapped.

Modded it together with Lally :3

Andrea wrote:

~shikyu's Hard~

HP Drain +1 imo is better.

00:41:945 (3,4) - Align them better.
00:51:945 (4) - New combo.

Modded it together with Lally :3

Aleks719 wrote:

Normal
01:25:279 (1) - add soft whistle to the end of this spinner? it fits imo. same suggestion for easy as well!
00:27:362 (1) - add whistle to the reverse
01:10:278 (1) - imo, finish here sounds too loud. try normal-finish here? I don't really like normal-finish here ><. So reduce the volume instead
01:13:612 (1) - same, try, maybe you will like it same reaseon as above
01:24:029 (1,2) - this place plays better with notes only(like a pam pam pam pam, every single beat) : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/619619
+ whistle on every note. (and yes, you should make spinner a bit shorter :3) . Same for easy. but there make two 1/1 sliders with whistles instead of one with reverse!

Hard
01:16:529 - add note please. you use 1/1 pause between red ticks, and next red tick gives us 1/4 stack, hard to catch. easier with keeping 1/2 rhythm shikyu said she follow the lyric. So no fix

rest is okay! fix and poke me