さーぽーとだ!!頑張ってください!
頑張ります!Heart-Under-Blade wrote:
さーぽーとだ!!頑張ってください!
(なんと!)AtonoMatsuri wrote:
どんな魔法を使って僕を惹きつけている?(nice map)
Easy is fixed. normal is no change.Cancel wrote:
Easy
01:30:869 - End kiai time.
Normal
00:35:722 - Change volume to 5%
Good Luck!
http://puu.sh/1TlG3Laurier wrote:
phoon's Hard
00:12:561 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - (3)だけ飛ばすなら最初のも fixed
01:34:399 (1) - わざわざ01:33:958 (2) - に被らせなくてもいいような...01:35:943 (2,1) - この辺と順番入れ替えましょう fixed
thanks for modding~Laurier wrote:
Easy
00:08:369 (3,2) - (3)押してる時に(2)がのsliderが画面上に表示されると思いますが、この2つの形が適当に作られてるようでいびつに見えます。00:08:369 (3) - をコピーして上下反転+CTR+Gしたものを00:10:134 (2) - と差し替えて見てください。その時に(3)のendと(2)のStartがX軸上でおらじラインに来るようにおければgood fixed
00:14:767 (4) - これの開始の音はCS:2のホイッスルでフォローしてあげてたほうがいいのではないでしょうか。あと音取りはhttp://puu.sh/1TezZこんな感じのほうがbetter. 現状じゃ中途半端にvolacとBGM拾っている感じになっています。むしろEazyだし無理に1/2配置しなくてもいいぐらいだと思います。 後ろの音を拾っているのでこのままで。
00:37:928 (3) - slider end に finish added
00:48:958 - 1/2 間隔で note 置くのに抵抗がないようなので、ここもnote追加してvocalフォローしてあげてください キーボード?のような高い音を拾っているのでこのままで。
01:20:281 (1) - finish 追加 added
Hard
OD-1? 似たような設定のfiddばっか作ってもあれなのでゲストのhardと違いつけてもいいかなーと そこらのバランスはphoonさんと相談してみます。
00:04:178 (5) - CTR+J 流れが悪いのでこっち向きのほうがまだ大丈夫かなーと思います fixed
00:41:899 (3,4) -00:45:428 (3,4) - jump作るならこの2つは同じ構成にしてあげたほうがいいと思います コピペするような配置はあまり好きではないのとShort Verなので少しでもいろんな配置を置きたいのでNoで。
00:59:105 (1,2,3) - 前の(5,6,7,8)より音が強いのでより大きなジャンプにしてあげたほうがbetter.個人的には00:58:222 (5,6,7,8) - がちょっとスペーシング広すぎでアンバランスになってるように思います (8)のスペーシングを変えました。
thanks modding~Laurier wrote:
Normal
00:12:120 (4) - このnoteが何の音もフォローしていません。00:11:899 - 開始の1/1 sliderに変更したほうがいいと思います feelingの話になってしまうのですがプレイにも特に支障なく違和感もないと思うのでこのままで~
00:24:472 (3) - こだわりとかじゃなかったら重ねないほうがbetter ちょっとだけずらしました
01:05:061 (2) - リバース部分がvocalの強い音なので、noteの開始に持ってきましょう。http://puu.sh/1Tf6G 盛り上がっていく場所なので01:05:281 - と 01:06:164 - の場所にふにっしゅ追加するのもいいかもしれません 音取りに関しては現在のほうがしっくりくるのでこのままに、フィニッシュは両方とも追加しました
01:10:575 (3) - 頭とけつにホイッスル追加するのはどうですか けつだけつけました
01:25:134 (4) - けつにfinish ok
Modありがとう助かりましたCilvery wrote:
いんさね
00:16:311 - 1/8にしては? 1/4の連打がフィットしてると思うのでこのままで
00:28:002 - ほいっする いれた
00:31:752 - ^ ^
00:44:987 - ^ Normal-hitnormalで音付けてるのでこのままで
00:45:649 - ^ ^
00:56:237 - whistle or finish ^o^ :個人的にはふぃにsっしゅはいってる方が好き完全にこのみ いれた
01:00:869 - ほいっする ^
01:35:061 - ふぃにっしゅはいってる方が好きです!!!! フィニッシュ鳴らしまくるのあまり好きではないのでこのままで
ふぁいてぃん
thanks for modding RotteRotte wrote:
Hi~ hihi~
[General]
Plz remove the letterbox currently, don't have to remove letterbox
This diff spread...I think you are better add a hard diff...... I was making a Hard dif while you were modding. sry for didn't tell you about hard diff D:
[Easy]
Tick 1 is a good choice.
Useless Green line
00:11:458 -
00:39:031 -
00:47:634 -
00:53:811 -
00:59:105 -
01:33:737 -
fixed all
[Insane]
OD-1
Useless Green line
00:39:693 -
00:54:252 -
01:11:458 -
fixed all
Rhythm
00:02:414 - Consider add a circle in this place,beacuse I think you want to flow the "ding"sound,not the "dong" sound. I want to keep my pattern ><
00:08:369 (6,7) - If you want to blanket this circle,plz fixed. fixed
00:32:524 (8) - This circle is not fit the rhythm or vocal imo. I'm following vocal. try listening carefully.
01:12:340 (8) - If I were you ,I'll NC in this circle to show the rhythm section. i'll fix it if anybody else says so
Sound Effect
00:44:987 (1,2,3,4) - the same as hard ^
Others
01:01:311 (2) - Consider to mod it,because of the circle covers the hp bar. ^
Nice map! Like this mapset and music
http://puu.sh/1WzjZRotte wrote:
[phoon's Insane]
Useless Green line
01:22:708 - removed
Rhythm
00:09:252 (5) - This part should NC in circle 5 imo,this is a jump fixed
00:12:561 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I like this idea >.<
00:52:267 (5) - This place is a blank rhythm,shoule be NC imo. fixed
Sound Effiect
00:03:737 (4) - I'm recommended to add a clap in this circlr,flowed this music. fixed
00:44:987 (1,2,3,4) - I recommend to use fade-in volume,like 1 40% 2 50% 3 60% 7 70% fixed
00:40:796 (4) - Why not add clap in this circle? feel that music is not suited
01:12:561 - and 01:12:781 (2) - should be use the clap to flow music? 01:12:781 (2) - add clap
http://puu.sh/1WLgdRotte wrote:
[Ryafuka's Normal]
Useless Green line
00:53:700 - okay.
Rhythm
00:58:664 (2,3,4) - Rhythm is weird... changed pattern but not follow your suggestion..
thanks for checking!!Melophobia wrote:
どーん
Note: all screen shots are just example of how to fix. You're free to fix accordingly or in your own way, or totally ignore.
[General][Insane]
- I do not recommend you to use default sampleset because it make sliderslide to sound; This song is kinda soft thus it might sound so bad. added soft-sliderslide4. pls redownload map after checked this reply.
- According to where change of melody is, the kiai time should end at 01:27:340 - imo. But if you want the spinner to have kiai effect, then it's fine as it is. fixed all diffs.
- Considering that the original video has 16:9 ratio, your video shouldn't have a different ratio; It needs to be 16:9 if 4:3 video is unrankable, I will delete the video D:
- offset is obviously off. it should be 852 (-18 from the current offset.) double checked with popner. No need to touch anything untill you have a look everything I mention; I'm using the current timing while modding. Be sure to resnap everything after changes. before, I asked to suzully about offset. he said "current offset is fine." I'm very confused because everyone saying "wrong this offset." to me.
- I roughly modded a few placements over IRC long time ago. I've lost the log but whatever. it doesn't matter much, I think. I was forgot savelog. sry my bad.
- AIBat found several unsnapped notes/inherited sections. Please fix them up. fixed all
SPOILERSnapping
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
00:46:311 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:51:384 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:00:428 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at: 00:43:345 - snap to 00:43:333 fixed- 00:09:031 (7,8,9,1) - This quadrilateral pattern looks so unequal and a bit messy. I suppose it wouldn't hurt or break anything to make it more equel. fixed placement used main spacing.
- 00:17:855 - There's no any bussdrum or anything strong enough for you to use this clap, how about setting sampleset to S:C2? Once you have a carefull listen, you'll notice that this percussion is very similar to 00:18:075 - . and I think that way it sounds a lot better.sry, watashi ha kagirareta basho nomi C:2 wo tukau kotoni siteimasu.
Also you need to set sampleset to S:C2 at.. some changed sampleset.SPOILER00:25:134 (4) -
00:32:193 - fixed
00:39:252 -
01:19:840 -
01:26:899 (5) - fixed
01:33:958 -- 00:25:134 (6) - This note is placed too close to the next objects - feels too narrow and uncomfortable to me. Please space it at larger spacing, or move further away. I'd do something like this if I were you. changed by myself
- 00:28:002 - Considering the melody this normal finish is obviously wrong. and doesn't fit at all with the song. soft one will be a lot better I think. fixed
- 00:28:664 (4) - Frankly speaking, This stacking makes this pattern quite uncomfortable as next pattern has a huge spacing. It'd be nice if you did something like this, it's just a suggestion though. changed by myself
- 00:53:149 (5,6) - This large spacing is quite uncomfortable to me, and makes no sense imo. fixed
- 00:59:767 (4) - How about shortening this slider by 1/4 beat and add another note at 01:00:208 - so that the rhythm can fit better with the percussion? fixed. but I might misunderstanding.
- 01:07:487 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Move this pattern rightward by 1 grid so that the beginning of 01:08:369 (8) - can be stacked with the end of 01:07:046 (2) - . fixed
- 01:18:075 (7,8) - Avoid placing these notes below 01:17:634 (6) - for better flow. I'd do something like this (if you think this one looks messy then it's fine as it is.)changed placement.
- 01:22:267 (7) - There should be a newcombo here according to your newcombos pattern in the kiai time (all other newcombos are coming every downbeat) fixed
- 01:24:472 (4,5,6,7,8) - It wouldn't really hurt anything to move this jump pattern right/upward so that (6) can be stacked under the end of 01:23:811 (3) - . fixed
- 01:37:487 (6) - As far as I listen, this percussion is quite similar to that of 00:02:193 (4) - . So the normal finish doesn't fit very well with it imo. How about setting sampleset to S:C2 and add both clap and finish here? nice suggestion. fixed
- And some hitsound suggestion. Remember, everything is based on my taste, feel free to ignore.
- 00:05:281 - Add whistle
- 00:06:825 - Remove whistle
- 00:07:046 (3) - Add whistle
- 00:11:678 - Add default whistle
- 00:13:222 - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 00:20:943 - Add soft whistle
- 00:23:811 (1) - Add whistle
- 00:31:311 (2) - ^
- 00:31:531 (3) - Remove whistle
- 00:38:149 (4) - Add whistle
- 00:49:178 - ^
- 00:49:619 - ^
- 00:50:281 - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 00:51:164 - ^
- 00:56:237 - Add soft whistle instead of normal finish
- 01:00:208 - Add whistle
- 01:01:752 (3) - ^
- 01:02:634 (1) - ^
- 01:03:296 - Add soft whistle
- 01:04:399 - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 01:05:281 - Add whistle
- 01:06:164 - ^
- 01:07:046 - ^
- 01:07:487 (3) - Add default/custom whistle together if possible
- 01:08:369 - Add default whistle
- 01:09:252 - ^
- 01:09:693 - ^
- 01:10:134 - ^
- 01:11:568 (2) - ^
- 01:11:789 (4) - ^
- 01:12:119 (7) - ^
- 01:12:561 (10,11) - Add custom whistles (S:C2) maybe lower volume would be nice
- 01:13:884 - Add whistle
- 01:14:325 - Add default whistle
- 01:14:987 (1) - Add soft whistle
almost fixed your whistle suggestion. sry I forget changed the place
http://puu.sh/22nsSMelophobia wrote:
[Ryafuka's Normal]
00:12:120 (4) - What the heck is this note folowing? うーむむ・・・他の人にも言われてたので、悩みましたが変更しました。
00:15:428 (3) - I feel like adding a finish here.added~
00:59:546 - It'd be a nice accent if there's a note here. 前のと区別化するためにもnote置いていいと思う。 ここも同じく他の人にも言われていたので変更しました。
01:15:869 (6) - Move this note forward by 1/2 beat.今のほうが曲に合っていると思うのでこのままで。
01:19:178 - Add a whistle or finish? add finish.
01:33:958 - This whistle sounds strange.deleted.
01:37:487 - A whistle would fit nicely with the last of this difficulty. Added~
It would be better if there are some more whistles in the kiai part and the following part (01:30:869 ~). フィットするパターンが作れないのでこのままで・・
http://puu.sh/22rEaMelophobia wrote:
[phoon's Insane]
01:06:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the current rhythm is a bit awkward to me, how about doing like this? fixed
01:13:112 (2,3) - You should place this note at x:172 y:128 so that the spacing of this stream looks consistant. fixed
01:37:487 - clap? 違和感を感じたのでno change
thanks for recheck!! I'm looking for your bubble ></Melophobia wrote:
Recheck, no kudosu please! hoi
[General]
Timing: 852 (-18)
And add extra red lines at 2616 and 73205 to correct beats. Be sure to resnap everything after changes.
As I explained over IRC, rearrange audio lead-in please.
all fixed
[Insane]
01:37:487 - Finish added
あと前のModで提案したHitsoundをHardとEasyにも適用させといて下さい(もう1回書くの面倒くさい・・) some fixed in easy and changed by myself in Hard.
Call me back when you're done with fixes~ come on come on come on
thanks for recheck. I call you when I'm ready.Melophobia wrote:
なんか緑線が1msズレてて大変なことになってたから直してきた http://puu.sh/22VvN 正しく音が鳴ってるか自信ないからそっちで
お手数かけました、ありがとう。確認しました。たぶん大丈夫です。たぶん。
Hard:
前のmodはno change? 前のPostに青字で書いてると思うけど参考にして自分なりに変えた。
00:24:674 (4) - move this forward by 1 tick
01:10:777 (4) - ^
01:16:513 (10) - ^
01:26:219 (3) -
01:20:262 - Finish
01:37:469 (10) - Use the same hitsound pattern as Insane
all fixed.
the rest looks fine~
thanks moddingMelophobia wrote:
Normal:
00:11:880 (4) - Missing clap? ok
00:36:145 - Start the break from here? ok
01:00:851 (1) - I'm sure this is still rankable but it wouldn't hurt anything to move this slider away in order to avoid overlapping. 01:02:836 (3) - ここoverlapしないようにスライダーに変えました
01:37:468 - Finish will fit better than whistle.ok
fixed all.Kawayi Rika wrote:
[Ryafuka's Normal]
- OD+1 for better diff spread.
- 01:27:322 - Unsnapped kiai time end point.
all fixedKawayi Rika wrote:
[phoon's Insane]
- 01:24:675 (5) - Try use ctrl+g,flow much better.
- 01:37:468 - Add clap,sound much better.
thanks for checking~Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ Rare ~ hi rika~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestionsfixed[General]
- Use original artist : ave;new feat. 佐倉紗織
added S:C2 clap there[Easy]
- 01:37:468 - Add clap,sound much better.
OK ~ That's all ~ Pretty nice map and moe song ~
Call me back ~