[Ranger] wrote:

As from M4M
Dreamy song.i like it

[Normal]
00:58:421 (2) - make bend this silder a little? Hmm, not really necessary imo.

01:31:541 (1) - add finish at the beginning? Done.
01:44:981 (2) - ^ Done.
03:17:861 (4) - i think this part is hard to beginner.how about make like this? Hmm, I think it fits well, if this was an Easy, I'd agree in changing it, but it fits well for a Normal

[Hard]
00:36:341 (2) - just suggestion.how about reduce 1 repeat? Not necessary, I like how it matches with the song.
00:43:301 (1,2) - i think this part is too easy.how about like this?that picture just exemple Thanks for the suggestion, but I really want those stacks.

01:29:381 (3,4) - ^ Same here either.
03:36:341 (2) - how about put a middle? Nah, the overlap here is intentional.

this map is clear enough.good job! Thanks!
☆

Aleks719 wrote:

General
4/3/4/5 in Normal, 6/3/6/6 in Hard and 6/4/7/6 in Insane. What a bad consistency in stats
use this: 3/3/3/3 for Normal, 5/4/6/5 for Hard, can leave same for insane... but still too low stats. Done.

Hard
Fixed.
02:55:061 (3,4) - don't stack with previous same pattern, try to make them symmetrical or not Worked into something different.
03:49:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - i can deal with 1/4 triples in Hard, especially in stack, even with short 5 note streams, but this place looks too hard. i'd make it easier :S Hmm, considering the fact that this is a hard, and I really wanted a challenge in the end of the map, I think there's no problem at all on this. This part used to have a long stream, which I removed because people were complaining it wouldn't fit in a hard.
03:52:181 (1,2) - 1/3, not 1/2, look same place in Insane Well, I've changed, but honestly, a 1/2 can fit well here, probably because of the violin that makes it a 1/3, but if you forgot the violin, this is pure 1/2.

Normal
03:42:112 - this kiai section is unsnapped Forgot this one, thanks.
01:30:341 (2) - mmm, better avoid 1/4 in Normals. use 1/1 : add clap on 2, whistle on 3 : http://puu.sh/1XMiY Done.
02:01:061 (1) - same, just add note at 02:01:301 + whistle Done.
02:07:541 (2) - i'd make 1/2 slider with reverse here, red tick has loud sound : http://puu.sh/1XMkI Not really necessary imo, I personally think it fits well here. I also added a finish at the end of the slider because I've forgot, so thanks anyways for for pointing out this one.
03:10:181 (1) - same about 1/4 here and next 1/4 too. turn them into 1/2 or 1/1, they give troubles in non osu modes Done.

Wolf wrote:

You were very fast Mystyk xD

Aleks719 wrote:

short recheck

Hard
03:52:181 (2) - uh, you have set 1/4 here, but should be 1/3 : http://puu.sh/1Yh30 Done.
about leaving hard parts : overall star rating is 4.13 here. it's kinda unexpwcted to see triples, short streams in diff with low rating. that's wy it confusing
About those triplets, people can get the idea right on the first kiai with 00:49:541 (2,3) - and then the actual first triplets (without stack) are only at 02:06:341 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
So when playing that part, at least on the end, should be expected. I really want them though, and I personally think they fit well for the hard.

rest is ok, no kd ofc

Aleks719 wrote:

bubbled~

1. Mind disabling the letterboxes during breaks? They cover the feet in the background, making it look like incomplete during breaks.

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Congratulations on get your first ranked map!