Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-12-08T13:16:10+00:00

0.0/

mintong89

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mintong89 2012-12-08T13:30:09+00:00

are you accept any Taiko GD? 0.0

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2012-12-08T13:32:04+00:00

Sure, please do a Muzu diff if possible. You can make oni diff as an addition, but miuzu diff is a must. Thanks!

Curisu

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Curisu 2012-12-09T06:01:55+00:00

+2sp
HD diff accpeting?

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2012-12-09T06:22:36+00:00

ok

Curisu

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Curisu 2012-12-09T07:22:20+00:00

50% done 想確認下diff spread有冇問題

http://puu.sh/1ySPU

[Muzu]
00:13:758 (1,1,1,1) - dkdd
00:34:571 (1,1,2,1) - ddkd
00:56:696 (4) - d
01:03:352 - remove ; 01:03:727 - +k

Curisu

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Curisu 2012-12-14T12:47:53+00:00

~~http://puu.sh/1AMpu~~ 忘了video
http://puu.sh/1ANu8

done ~~善良图~~

Last edited by Curisu 2012-12-14T14:16:26+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

mintong89

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mintong89 2012-12-14T12:58:03+00:00

Curisu wrote:
50% done 想確認下diff spread有冇問題

http://puu.sh/1ySPU

[Muzu]
00:13:758 (1,1,1,1) - dkdd no. ~~放了有点不习惯.~~
00:34:571 (1,1,2,1) - ddkd ^
00:56:696 (4) - d 故意的.
01:03:352 - remove ; 01:03:727 - +k no. 我要和后面的一样. 而且觉得有点奇怪.

sorry btw no changed :/ .

wonders

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wonders 2012-12-14T14:05:28+00:00

感觉SV低了，有点卡。

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2012-12-15T06:42:58+00:00

angelfix wrote:
感觉SV低了，有点卡。

最近不太喜歡用高SV / \ 而且我用高SV拉不出slider T_T

No_Gu

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No_Gu 2013-01-07T12:59:16+00:00

小贤哥哥今年的第一次

tag you know

[Easy]
00:06:440 (1) - 没clap?
00:12:815 (1) - garven那样的肯定挑吧。。
01:16:940 (1) - NC干啥
01:20:502 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/560056 ?

[JPY]
00:09:815 (1) - 结尾不clap?
00:37:190 (1) - 不clap?
00:42:815 - 00:51:254这段空空的我觉得加soft的默认whistle跟音乐感觉更好
00:59:315 (1) - 你是不加还是落下，咋这么多。。
01:09:440 (4) - 都加上clap比较好
够霸气

[Hard]
00:22:565 (3) - 前面分数挡住了不太好读
00:53:971 (2) - 这时值也不太好读
好棒

[Curisu]
我觉得insane前奏就没必要空了
00:11:690 (5,6,1) - 老师说这个方的不咋地，无论从音效方面还是排版
00:12:815 从这开始的叮叮声。。好实说挺烦人
00:23:877 (4) - ctrl+g
00:24:815 这段求重新斟酌音效，这鼓打的一点感觉都没有
00:42:815 (1) - 切的不自然
01:09:815 (1) - 跪了
kiai段求删了normal默认whistle
虽然开放点不是错但是感觉有点过了，音效和排版。。当然我个人意见，看了别生气

[Insane]
00:42:815 我觉得这段音乐1/1都有的whistle挺出众的。。但是你没想跟感觉挺可惜
01:10:752 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然能听出来但是不得不说这段存在感挺弱的
01:21:627 (1) - 怒5%
发烧严重了就叫你肉偿

HakuNoKaemi

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HakuNoKaemi 2013-01-07T15:01:35+00:00

[General]

You should include White sliderborder with the custom skin. Add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" to the "[Colours]" Section of the .osu
You may include a "reversearrow.png"
Source of the Normal is "Suzuki Konomi" as now, correct it
Kiai isn't snapped on Muzukashii and it start on the wrong place in the Insane

[Easy]

00:20:690 (1,1,2,3) - Move them to 00:20:877 (1,1,2,3) and make (3) end 1/2 before. so the (1) follow that guitar and end on voice than 00:22:002 (1,2,3,1,2) - follow voice and end on drums
00:29:315 (4,5) Follow guitar with this too? ( delete (5) and make the slider 1/2 longer)
01:01:190 (3) - Doesn't seem perfectly blanketed
01:12:440 (1,2,3) - Seems boring in front of the rest of the difficulty... use a different rhythm?

[JauiPlaY's Normal]

00:05:315 (1,2,3) - Change the rhythm? It is maybe better to fully follow drums since you started when drums started

00:16:752 (3) - I don't pretty feel the antijump there while playing... You can try to do this?
SPOILER
00:17:315 (1) - It would be more consistent to use a NC at 00:16:752 (3) instead or to not use it directly
00:24:908 (1) - Uhm, you can make this end at 00:27:065 and add a spinner from 00:27:065 (1) and end in 00:29:690
00:39:252 (1,2) - Use a slider instead?
SPOILER
00:41:408 (1) - Make this start from 00:41:221 (1)
00:43:565 (1,2,3) - 00:49:565 (1,2,3) - why those low density sections?
01:10:190 (x) - Add an circle. You followed the drum stream, so this note is actually better to make the drum-vocal passage not rushy
01:21:656 (1) - Make the spinner end 1/2 after (in 01:22:940)

[mint's Taiko Muzukashii]

00:11:502 (1) - I'm sure a Slider that end in 00:12:440 here is better rhythmically
01:21:815 (1) - I don't see the need of using a muted spinner here, you can pretty much delete this or use a slider, but using a slider it'll make it maybe too hard.

[Hard]

00:16:377 (4) - Dividing it in a slider plus an hit should be better
00:21:252 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It'll follow the vocal better like this, you should still use a similar graphical pattern for a good flow
00:24:815 (x) - In fact, you made 00:24:252 (1) - following drums ( since it is a 1/4 slider ) and the (2) follow vocals too. But, since the next note is a drum note (and a vocal note too) at first i think there should be a note here (too because of the stack)
00:43:940 (5) - make this end to the "wo"

And maybe follow the drum note in 00:44:502 (x) too since the last and next notes are drums too. Or maybe use an antijump and don't add it :!
00:54:815 (1) - Make this end on 00:56:690 and add a note at 00:57:065 (1). The cymbal is at 00:56:690 actually, and following the vocals here will be better. You can add an NC at 00:58:190 (4) too after

[Taiko Oni]

01:21:815 (1) - Add one hit/make it 1/2 longer (ending to the white tick)

[Curisu]

00:22:940 It's not a good place to start an higher slider velocity section. Maybe start it from 00:24:440 (5) - ?
00:42:815 You don't really need to slowdown here, since there is no slowdown in the music ( and still... -0.5x is exaggerated)
[Rhythm]
1. 00:24:440 (5,1) - The fact you did follow voice, make people think to click this earlier. Try to follow vocals or don't use an antijump here
2. 00:25:377 (3,4) - You did, in fact, follow drums, it'll be better to end the slider at the red tick
3. 00:31:096 (2) - Play better without this blue tick
4. 00:42:065 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - It isn't better to separate the 2 streams? Without overmapping 00:42:346 (9) -
5. 01:21:656 (1) - Make the spinner end 1/2 after (in 01:22:940)
[Graphic]
1. 00:46:940 (4,1) - Curve (4) to make it end nearer to (1). So perceiving 00:47:315 (1,2,3,4) - become easier because there isn't a instantaneous change of spacing, but a more fluid and flowing one?
  SPOILER
2. 01:19:940 (5,1) - You used similar spacing in 01:19:377 (3,4), so it's better to use a different spacing there, people will click before otherwise

[Insane]

[Rhythm]

00:13:190 (3,4) - Should flow better reversed with Ctrl+G. Though you're following more the
00:52:565 (x) - Seems better to follow that vocal, since the distance between 00:51:815 (1,2,3) - is the same, some may misclick (3) thinking it follow the vocal
00:53:971 (2) - Add another repeat, since it's following the drums
01:21:627 (1) - It's probably one of those part where peoples expect to spin like crazy, so maybe adding a spinner instead would be better. At least make the slider(or spinner) end at 01:22:940

[Graphic]

00:34:377 (3) - It's not certainly the best shape you can do here, probably a normal 3-point circle stays better
SPOILER
01:00:440 (2) - You can try curve this
SPOILER
01:07:377 (4,1,2,3,4) - It's pretty confusing since there is nothing that make it readable as a back-forth in music. You can back-and-forth 2 times at 01:07:753 (2,3,4,1) - instead. like this
SPOILER

~ Incomplete~

Last edited by HakuNoKaemi 2013-01-16T10:56:35+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2013-01-07T17:01:01+00:00

Unrankable stuff中的意见是很有可能要修改的，如果你的map是要ranked的话。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解，如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[General]
这种前后颜色鲜明度对比的video让我想起高潮段转鲜艳颜色的combocolor的梗，有心的话不妨试下

[Easy]

Unrankable stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. None.
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:20:690 (1) - ..不压后面红线那音吗
2. 01:01:940 (4) - 这里凑个note然后slider移动到下小节开始，在vocal红线位结束如何？
Hitsounds
1. None.

[JauiPlaY's Normal]

Unrankable stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. AR跟slider速度差得有点远...可以考虑加AR or 加CircleSize or 降SV
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:12:815 (1) - 建议提前1/1结束然后这里加note?
2. 00:23:877 - ..这空的，能填吗
3. 00:49:565 (1,2,3) - 移前到00:49:190开始，然后00:51:440加一个note，没错就是24拍地方，这样节奏会顺很多
Hitsounds
1. None.

[Hard]

Unrankable stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. None.
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:21:627 (3) - 这个note如果删掉然后把后面那堆移过来就刚好合vocal了，不知道你是不是故意这么加一拍的
2. 00:23:877这里的空缺加个note?
3. 00:51:065 (6) - 这个slider的尾部...不如红色的支点可以向左再弯曲一点或者让下面的弧线更长，随便拉了一拉
  SPOILER
```
224,145,51065,2,0,P|232:184|220:207|220:207|233:243|210:259,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
4. 01:15:627 - 这里的vocal转music有点突兀..感觉加个note比较好
Hitsounds
1. None.

[Curisu]

Unrankable stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. 00:57:065 (1,2,3) - 这里的x0.75到x1.25的slider取消变速或者用其他梗比较好。因为1.在没多前的地方已经用过一次了2.上一次变速之后的节奏给人的感觉是speed up的，而且你使用感觉上speed up的节奏一直延伸到这个时间点，所以突然减速会让人很不习惯。之后的01:09:815 (1)也是一样，可能感觉有另外的奇效所以不说了。主要还是kiai前的那个建议修改。如果你想使用比较多的变速技巧还是先建议先在节奏上平滑地衔接上
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:11:690(5,6) - 感觉这两个折返slider可以转换成更多有趣的note组合或排列，至于换不换看你了
2. 00:24:627 - 前面的节奏铺垫+节奏后来是跟vocal的+这里两个note之间的spacing太短了而且是遮挡，这里这个空拍还是建议填掉
3. 00:41:877 (5,6) - 这里的spacing间距连减速段都比不上...而且也看不到缩短距离的意义，建议拉开
Hitsounds
1. 00:12:815 - 00:17:127 这里的叮叮声确实有点多...可以适当减少或者换梗

[Insane]

Unrankable stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. None.
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:06:815 (2) - 其实个人认为在1/2或者更密的节奏里比较暗色的nc不太醒目，提示遮挡的存在感比较弱，所以这里可以再考虑下是这里nc展现三角形跟小节开始好还是保持原状
2. 00:33:815 (1) - 不知道这个半stack是不是故意的，如果是的话可以摆得更开一点，因为时间间隔比较大目前打起来好像没区别
3. 00:52:752 (3) - 这梗略坑...拉开个半stack也好
4. 00:56:127 (3) - 虽说这里的123ds相同我感觉这里像是123/12/12这样的跳多点，所以建议这样nc一下，如果同意的话00:56:502 (2)也要nc
Hitsounds
1. None.

因为没有耳机只有音箱，所以我今天试了好久想听音效，但是写到一半还是算了，这套音效没耳机实在有点难，不好意思了

Last edited by SamiPale 2013-01-08T17:31:13+00:00, edited 10 times in total.

cirno-_old

cirno-_old 2013-01-07T22:46:20+00:00

I can't mod this since it's already too good o.o Besides a few things No_Gu pointed out, I didn't see anything. Sorry ;_;

Good map, Star`~

UnderminE

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UnderminE 2013-01-07T22:52:44+00:00

Move it to Pending ;_;

HakuNoKaemi

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Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2013-01-08T18:02:59+00:00

Ended modding Curisu ~!

kanpakyin

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Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2013-01-09T12:37:59+00:00

SamiPale wrote:
Unrankable stuff中的意见是很有可能要修改的，如果你的map是要ranked的话。
Map designing部分、Rhythm/Placing部分和Hitsounds部分的意见是我的个人见解，如果你觉得不好可以随时忽略。

[General]
这种前后颜色鲜明度对比的video让我想起高潮段转鲜艳颜色的combocolor的梗，有心的话不妨试下

[Easy]
Unrankable stuff
None.
Map designing
None.
Rhythm/Placing
00:20:690 (1) - ..不压后面红线那音吗 //不了, 紅線的話就要加 1/2 stack
01:01:940 (4) - 这里凑个note然后slider移动到下小节开始，在vocal红线位结束如何？//好
Hitsounds
None.
[Hard]
Unrankable stuff
None.
Map designing
None.
Rhythm/Placing
00:21:627 (3) - 这个note如果删掉然后把后面那堆移过来就刚好合vocal了，不知道你是不是故意这么加一拍的 //故意的
00:23:877这里的空缺加个note? //好
00:51:065 (6) - 这个slider的尾部...不如红色的支点可以向左再弯曲一点或者让下面的弧线更长，随便拉了一拉 //好
SPOILER
224,145,51065,2,0,P|232:184|220:207|220:207|233:243|210:259,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:15:627 - 这里的vocal转music有点突兀..感觉加个note比较好 //感覺不會啊
Hitsounds
None.
[Insane]
Unrankable stuff
None.
Map designing
None.
Rhythm/Placing
00:06:815 (2) - 其实个人认为在1/2或者更密的节奏里比较暗色的nc不太醒目，提示遮挡的存在感比较弱，所以这里可以再考虑下是这里nc展现三角形跟小节开始好还是保持原状 //nc了
00:33:815 (1) - 不知道这个半stack是不是故意的，如果是的话可以摆得更开一点，因为时间间隔比较大目前打起来好像没区别
00:52:752 (3) - 这梗略坑...拉开个半stack也好 //覺得有分別
00:56:127 (3) - 虽说这里的123ds相同我感觉这里像是123/12/12这样的跳多点，所以建议这样nc一下，如果同意的话00:56:502 (2)也要nc //好
Hitsounds
None.
因为没有耳机只有音箱，所以我今天试了好久想听音效，但是写到一半还是算了，这套音效没耳机实在有点难，不好意思了

No_Gu wrote:
小贤哥哥今年的第一次

tag you know

[Easy]
00:06:440 (1) - 没clap? //fixed
00:12:815 (1) - garven那样的肯定挑吧。。 //離中心很緊, 暫時還是保留..
01:16:940 (1) - NC干啥 //removed nc on 01:17:502 (2) -
01:20:502 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/560056 ? //k

[Hard]
00:22:565 (3) - 前面分数挡住了不太好读 //這個暫時保留
00:53:971 (2) - 这时值也不太好读 //換了一下NC
好棒

[Insane]
00:42:815 我觉得这段音乐1/1都有的whistle挺出众的。。但是你没想跟感觉挺可惜 //...算是修了一下吧
01:10:752 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - 虽然能听出来但是不得不说这段存在感挺弱的 //這個果斷不換
01:21:627 (1) - 怒5% //不要- -

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[General]
You should include White sliderborder with the custom skin. Add "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" to the "[Colours]" Section of the .osu //done
You may include a "reversearrow.png"
Source of the Normal is "Suzuki Konomi" as now, correct it //fixed.
Kiai isn't snapped on Muzukashii and it start on the wrong place in the Insane //fixed
[Insane]

[Rhythm]
00:13:190 (3,4) - Should flow better reversed with Ctrl+G. Though you're following more the //k
00:52:565 (x) - Seems better to follow that vocal, since the distance between 00:51:815 (1,2,3) - is the same, some may misclick (3) thinking it follow the vocal //I prefer following the drum here.
00:53:971 (2) - Add another repeat, since it's following the drums //2 repeat have already fitted the drum sound very well.
01:21:627 (1) - It's probably one of those part where peoples expect to spin like crazy, so maybe adding a spinner instead would be better. At least make the slider(or spinner) end at 01:22:940 //I don't really want to change it into spinner because the slow down of the slider really suits the song.
[Graphic]
00:34:377 (3) - It's not certainly the best shape you can do here, probably a normal 3-point circle stays better //I make this slider because it flows better imo, so no change here.
SPOILER
01:00:440 (2) - You can try curve this //did some adjustment here but no exactly the same.
SPOILER
01:07:377 (4,1,2,3,4) - It's pretty confusing since there is nothing that make it readable as a back-forth in music. You can back-and-forth 2 times at 01:07:753 (2,3,4,1) - instead. like this //I have found a lot of players to test this out and they all though that it was no problem so I would like to keep this for now.
SPOILER

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2013-01-09T13:35:07+00:00

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[Insane]

[Rhythm]
00:52:565 (x) - Seems better to follow that vocal, since the distance between 00:51:815 (1,2,3) - is the same, some may misclick (3) thinking it follow the vocal //I prefer following the drum here. Adjust the spacing accordingly ( even a bit less or a bit more work )
01:21:627 (1) - It's probably one of those part where peoples expect to spin like crazy, so maybe adding a spinner instead would be better. At least make the slider(or spinner) end at 01:22:940 //I don't really want to change it into spinner because the slow down of the slider really suits the song.
Make it end on 01:22:940 anyway since the voice do continue for a bit ~
[Graphic]
00:34:377 (3) - It's not certainly the best shape you can do here, probably a normal 3-point circle stays better //I make this slider because it flows better imo, so no change here. More than anything, something fatter(in this case, You have that nice blanket too) should flow in the same way and be nicer ( still, the "o" shape during an "o~" was the same )
SPOILER
01:07:377 (4,1,2,3,4) - It's pretty confusing since there is nothing that make it readable as a back-forth in music. You can back-and-forth 2 times at 01:07:753 (2,3,4,1) - instead. like this //I have found a lot of players to test this out and they all though that it was no problem so I would like to keep this for now. More than anything, it do flow better like I said, since it goes back and forth following music (so it's more
SPOILER

kanpakyin

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Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2013-01-09T14:21:26+00:00

Further fixing. For 01:07:565 (1,2,3,4) - I designed like this because the pitch of 01:08:315 - is higher than 01:07:753 (2,3,4) - , so that the music can be prominent by a simple jump. yeah, I would keep that for now and see how it is going and I would like to see other modder's opinion. Anyway, thanks for modding and further explanations.

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2013-01-09T15:46:42+00:00

Ah, so you can only use a normal spacing in 01:07:377 (4,1) - and use a jump in 01:07:565 (1,2) -

(Ended modding muzukashii, oni and hard. Pardon me if I'm taking some days to complete it)

climbb65588

435 posts

Joined August 2008

climbb65588 2013-01-10T10:12:10+00:00

little mod

[Oni]

00:31:565 - Add a d?
00:53:127 - ^

[Muzu]
00:24:252 - 00:24:440 - ddk?
01:08:690 - add a k?

mintong89

3,698 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-01-10T10:59:23+00:00

climbb65588 wrote:
little mod

[Muzu]
00:24:252 - 00:24:440 - ddk? 故意的. 看下面怎么说
01:08:690 - add a k? ok~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[mint's Taiko Muzukashii]
00:11:502 (1) - I'm sure a Slider that end in 00:12:440 here is better rhythmically ok~
01:21:815 (1) - I don't see the need of using a muted spinner here, you can pretty much delete this or use a slider, but using a slider it'll make it maybe too hard. need comfirm

thanks for mod.
change some hitsound.

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ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
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Version:mint's Taiko Muzukashii
Source:Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo
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哦对了about Taiko Oni. 00:03:440 - 删除 and 00:03:908 - add note 感觉比较好....

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2013-01-10T17:43:04+00:00

savelog

MoeSamiBangBangBang wrote:
[General]
这种前后颜色鲜明度对比的video让我想起高潮段转鲜艳颜色的combocolor的梗，有心的话不妨试下

最少我的diff我有这样但是因为是GD不能custom 2/4转换还是太可惜

[Curisu]
Map designing
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - 这里的x0.75到x1.25的slider取消变速或者用其他梗比较好。因为1.在没多前的地方已经用过一次了2.上一次变速之后的节奏给人的感觉是speed up的，而且你使用感觉上speed up的节奏一直延伸到这个时间点，所以突然减速会让人很不习惯。之后的01:09:815 (1)也是一样，可能感觉有另外的奇效所以不说了。主要还是kiai前的那个建议修改。如果你想使用比较多的变速技巧还是先建议先在节奏上平滑地衔接上[/list]

好的懂啥意思

Hitsounds
00:12:815 - 00:17:127 这里的叮叮声确实有点多...可以适当减少或者换梗[/list][/list]

如果同时被提出多次的mod那看来还真是自己的问题不过这里whis本来就是自己加的custom所以可能不会改太多

No_Gu wrote:
[Curisu]
我觉得insane前奏就没必要空了
虽然开放点不是错但是感觉有点过了，音效和排版。。当然我个人意见，看了别生气

~~睡不着随便说下~~

前奏没梗我想想怎么下吧恩

说真的我自己也知道这次的spac下的反自己风格所以ry
不是很高兴的还是hitsounds modding
我不明白这没感觉太吵人blah blah是想表达什么
hs没有绝对的对错其实是mapping都没有绝对的对错
至少modding是给出一个建议阐述modder思想的一种表现
而不是抛个section直接叫remap 这相当于直接无视mapper的想法多多少少有一点伤人

anyway thx

@kpy 明天弄这个

*股 wrote:
[Curisu]
我觉得insane前奏就没必要空了缺梗
00:11:690 (5,6,1) - 老师说这个方的不咋地，无论从音效方面还是排版见下文
00:12:815 从这开始的叮叮声。。好实说挺烦人 ^
00:23:877 (4) - ctrl+g k
00:24:815 这段求重新斟酌音效，这鼓打的一点感觉都没有 详见savelog
00:42:815 (1) - 切的不自然 ~~blanket问题? 暂时没动~~ 改梗
01:09:815 (1) - 跪了 ...~~求求说清楚 SV这里是接长音所以ry~~看完sami的突然怒懂
kiai段求删了normal默认whistle nope.
虽然开放点不是错但是感觉有点过了，音效和排版。。当然我个人意见，看了别生气 ry

moeSami wrote:
[General]
这种前后颜色鲜明度对比的video让我想起高潮段转鲜艳颜色的combocolor的梗，有心的话不妨试下 ~

[Curisu]
Unrankable stuff
None.
Map designing
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - 这里的x0.75到x1.25的slider取消变速或者用其他梗比较好。因为1.在没多前的地方已经用过一次了2.上一次变速之后的节奏给人的感觉是speed up的，而且你使用感觉上speed up的节奏一直延伸到这个时间点，所以突然减速会让人很不习惯。之后的01:09:815 (1)也是一样，可能感觉有另外的奇效所以不说了。主要还是kiai前的那个建议修改。如果你想使用比较多的变速技巧还是先建议先在节奏上平滑地衔接上本来这两个梗应该是对照的知道为什么这里取消变SV 后面的没改
Rhythm/Placing
00:11:690(5,6) - 感觉这两个折返slider可以转换成更多有趣的note组合或排列，至于换不换看你了恩这里想好梗就填上
00:24:627 - 前面的节奏铺垫+节奏后来是跟vocal的+这里两个note之间的spacing太短了而且是遮挡，这里这个空拍还是建议填掉 fixed vocal突然切到鼓声确实2b
00:41:877 (5,6) - 这里的spacing间距连减速段都比不上...而且也看不到缩短距离的意义，建议拉开直接换了套梗
Hitsounds
00:12:815 - 00:17:127 这里的叮叮声确实有点多...可以适当减少或者换梗适当除去 vol-10

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
00:22:940 It's not a good place to start an higher slider velocity section. Maybe start it from 00:24:440 (5) - ? nope.
00:42:815 You don't really need to slowdown here, since there is no slowdown in the music ( and still... -0.5x is exaggerated) ^ -0.5x for vocal
[Rhythm]
00:24:440 (5,1) - The fact you did follow voice, make people think to click this earlier. Try to follow vocals or don't use an antijump here already fixed
00:25:377 (3,4) - You did, in fact, follow drums, it'll be better to end the slider at the red tick no
00:31:096 (2) - Play better without this blue tick k
00:42:065 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - It isn't better to separate the 2 streams? Without overmapping 00:42:346 (9) - k
01:21:656 (1) - Make the spinner end 1/2 after (in 01:22:940) ^
[Graphic]
00:46:940 (4,1) - Curve (4) to make it end nearer to (1). So perceiving 00:47:315 (1,2,3,4) - become easier because there isn't a instantaneous change of spacing, but a more fluid and flowing one? nope. shouldn't be curved according to 00:45:627 (5)
SPOILER
01:19:940 (5,1) - You used similar spacing in 01:19:377 (3,4), so it's better to use a different spacing there, people will click before otherwise overlapped it.
~~→unfinished→~~

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Source:Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo
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256,304,39252,1,2,0:0:0
256,304,39440,6,0,P|144:320,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
32,144,39815,2,0,P|96:224|160:208,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,198,40190,1,8,0:0:0
188,178,40283,1,0,0:0:0
220,165,40377,38,0,P|294:167|326:236,1,150,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0
326,258,40752,2,0,P|289:199|324:134,1,150,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0
353,138,41127,2,2,P|270:222|214:193,1,200,2|0,2:1|0:0,0:0:0
96,160,41690,1,0,0:0:0
208,112,41877,1,0,0:0:0
106,269,42065,5,2,0:0:0
105,255,42159,1,8,0:0:0
104,241,42252,1,8,0:0:0
185,310,42440,1,8,0:0:0
187,324,42533,1,8,0:0:0
189,338,42627,1,2,0:0:0
190,352,42721,1,2,0:0:0
191,363,42815,38,0,P|130:377|75:340,1,120.000004577637,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
106,269,43377,1,0,0:0:0
132,188,43565,2,0,P|193:174|248:211,1,120.000004577637,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
391,241,44315,5,0,0:0:0
448,96,44690,1,2,0:0:0
370,86,44877,1,0,0:0:0
399,158,45065,2,0,P|399:222|383:286,1,120.000004577637,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
315,308,45627,2,0,P|261:317,2,40
386,276,46002,1,0,0:0:0
451,319,46190,37,2,0:0:0
451,319,46565,1,0,1:0:0
386,276,46752,1,2,0:0:0
315,309,46940,2,0,P|231:318,1,60.0000022888184,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
247,237,47315,5,2,0:0:0
185,284,47690,1,2,0:0:0
107,293,48065,1,2,0:0:0
37,258,48440,1,2,0:0:0
23,120,48627,1,0,1:0:0
38,137,48721,1,0,1:0:0
55,153,48815,38,0,P|111:179|170:174,1,120.000004577637,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,113,49377,1,0,0:0:0
294,116,49565,2,0,P|413:136,1,120.000004577637,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
509,13,50315,5,2,0:0:0
437,42,50502,1,0,0:0:0
494,95,50690,2,0,P|478:175|477:213,1,120.000004577637,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0
401,196,51252,1,0,0:0:0
422,271,51440,1,8,0:0:0
422,271,51627,1,0,0:0:0
346,252,51815,38,0,P|289:265|221:260,1,120.000004577637,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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92,132,52565,6,0,P|170:157|247:160,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
319,97,53127,1,2,0:0:0
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120,35,53971,1,2,0:0:0
120,35,54065,2,0,P|111:86,2,50,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
45,129,54440,1,8,0:0:0
45,129,54627,1,2,0:0:0
106,232,54815,38,0,P|104:288|99:336,1,100
179,114,55190,2,0,P|181:170|186:218,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
241,371,55565,2,0,P|245:327|247:271,1,100
320,153,55940,2,0,P|322:209|327:257,1,100
415,333,56315,6,0,P|413:277|408:229,1,100
413,218,56596,1,0,0:0:0
417,203,56690,1,0,0:0:0
421,188,56783,1,0,0:0:0
426,173,56877,1,0,0:0:0
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321,154,57440,2,0,P|272:207|201:195,1,150,2|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
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449,84,58377,1,0,0:0:0
336,32,58565,2,0,P|240:64,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,32,58940,2,0,P|64:128,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
54,155,59221,1,0,0:0:0
44,183,59315,6,0,P|94:193|146:186,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,80,59690,2,0,P|240:96|192:96,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
373,31,60065,2,0,P|380:80|394:129,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
480,320,60440,2,0,P|473:271|459:222,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
431,210,60721,1,0,0:0:0
400,210,60815,6,0,P|327:207|240:210,1,160,2|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
128,240,61377,1,2,1:0:0
224,192,61565,2,0,P|278:189|324:191,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
474,353,61940,2,0,P|419:355|373:353,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,289,62315,1,2,0:0:0
444,235,62502,1,2,0:0:0
424,240,62596,1,0,0:0:0
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80,256,63065,5,2,0:0:0
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272,289,63440,2,0,P|384:336,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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304,144,64377,1,2,1:0:0
304,272,64565,2,0,P|320:320|352:368,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
386,361,64846,1,0,0:0:0
421,343,64940,6,0,P|497:270,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
355,282,65315,2,0,P|237:304,2,100,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,208,65877,2,0,P|176:224|257:216,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,192,66252,1,2,0:0:0
192,144,66440,2,0,P|158:142|94:126,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,32,66815,5,2,0:0:0
39,158,67002,2,0,P|64:99|84:69,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
142,158,67377,2,0,P|180:209|196:241,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,353,67752,2,0,P|188:355|251:347,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
449,270,68127,5,8,0:0:0
429,274,68221,1,8,0:0:0
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480,176,68690,1,8,0:0:0
440,183,68877,2,0,P|388:190|335:195,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
491,77,69252,1,8,0:0:0
451,84,69440,2,0,P|399:91|346:96,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,88,69721,1,8,0:0:0
273,75,69815,6,0,P|216:90|139:94,1,120.000004577637,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
21,46,70377,1,2,0:0:0
41,185,70565,2,0,P|43:240|42:294,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,272,70940,2,0,P|272:320,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,208,71315,5,2,0:0:0
422,191,71502,1,2,0:0:0
480,295,71690,1,8,0:0:0
264,317,71877,2,0,P|205:334|153:328,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
9,242,72252,2,0,P|68:225|120:231,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,240,72627,1,2,0:0:0
352,272,72815,6,0,P|384:208|368:112,1,160,2|0,2:1|0:0,0:0:0
272,48,73377,1,2,2:1:0
352,192,73565,2,0,P|464:192,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,320,73940,2,0,P|144:320,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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384,192,76940,1,8,0:0:0
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448,288,81633,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,81656,12,4,82940,0:0:0

Last edited by Curisu 2013-01-11T13:25:02+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

HakuNoKaemi

3,828 posts

Joined October 2009

HakuNoKaemi 2013-01-10T20:52:22+00:00

If you can't understand something in my mod, you can ask for clarifications

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,231 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2013-01-11T14:33:43+00:00

climbb65588 wrote:
little mod

[Oni]

00:31:565 - Add a d?
00:53:127 - ^ //both done.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:
[Hard]
00:16:377 (4) - Dividing it in a slider plus an hit should be better //k
00:21:252 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - It'll follow the vocal better like this, you should still use a similar graphical pattern for a good flow
00:24:815 (x) - In fact, you made 00:24:252 (1) - following drums ( since it is a 1/4 slider ) and the (2) follow vocals too. But, since the next note is a drum note (and a vocal note too) at first i think there should be a note here (too because of the stack)
00:43:940 (5) - make this end to the "wo" //k

And maybe follow the drum note in 00:44:502 (x) too since the last and next notes are drums too. Or maybe use an antijump and don't add it :!
00:54:815 (1) - Make this end on 00:56:690 and add a note at 00:57:065 (1). The cymbal is at 00:56:690 actually, and following the vocals here will be better. You can add an NC at 00:58:190 (4) too after //k
[Taiko Oni]
01:21:815 (1) - Add one hit/make it 1/2 longer (ending to the white tick) //nope, since the vocal stop at 01:22:752 - , and 01:22:940 - is echo only.

NewRulerNA

1,301 posts

Joined December 2010

NewRulerNA 2013-01-12T08:46:32+00:00

hi
I found some little issue.

[JauiPlaY's Normal]

Artist Unicode is not same as other diffs. you should fix this.

[Curisu]

01:21:633 (3) - unsnaped note.
01:21:656 (1) - ^

good luck
awesome maps o.o
/me runs away.

kanpakyin

Global Moderator

4,231 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

kanpakyin 2013-01-12T08:52:46+00:00

NewRulerNA wrote:
hi
I found some little issue.

[JauiPlaY's Normal]
Artist Unicode is not same as other diffs. you should fix this.
[Curisu]
01:21:633 (3) - unsnaped note.
01:21:656 (1) - ^
good luck
awesome maps o.o
/me runs away.

Done

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Lan wings 2013-01-12T09:48:30+00:00

kpy

16:15 kanpakyin: .求mod~
16:15 Lan wings: 0.0
16:15 Lan wings: 很急么0.0
16:15 kanpakyin: 0.0
16:15 kanpakyin: 不會....
16:15 Lan wings: irc如何0.0
16:15 kanpakyin: 可~
16:16 Lan wings: dl
16:16 *kanpakyin is listening to Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size)
16:17 Lan wings: 25分钟_(:3 」∠)_
16:17 kanpakyin: - -....
16:17 kanpakyin: down no video ver
16:18 Lan wings: 4分钟
16:26 *Lan wings is playing Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size) [Insane] +DoubleTime
16:26 Lan wings: 咦
16:26 kanpakyin: 0.0
16:26 Lan wings: 我什么时候上了DT
16:30 kanpakyin: 善良圖

16:31 Lan wings: 好吧｀｀玩脱了
16:31 kanpakyin: lol
16:33 Lan wings: kiai的音效不够燃
16:34 kanpakyin: .__.
16:34 Lan wings: 还是用whistle感觉不太合适
16:34 Lan wings: 有点沉
16:34 kanpakyin: 我是配搭normal一起用的
16:34 kanpakyin: kiai
16:35 Lan wings: 00:06:815 (1)- finish
16:35 Lan wings: shift+e
16:35 kanpakyin: finish okay
16:36 Lan wings: 感觉排列没法挑
16:36 kanpakyin: 為甚麼 lol
16:36 Lan wings: 我排列渣
16:37 kanpakyin: 同渣

16:37 Lan wings: 00:21:440 (5,6,7)-
16:37 Lan wings: 这里故意的么
16:37 kanpakyin: 恩
16:37 kanpakyin: 打起來stack會好看一點
16:39 Lan wings: 00:30:533 (3)- 这里节奏不爽
16:40 kanpakyin: 晤...這裡有點難改 lol
16:40 Lan wings: 00:30:252 (2)- 如果你愿意改这个slider的话
16:41 kanpakyin: 換成circle怎樣?
16:41 Lan wings: slider拆开两个circle
16:42 Lan wings: 00:30:440 然后这里的话是放两个slider还是放一个5连还是放一个折返slider就随你了
16:42 Lan wings: 00:30:440
16:42 Lan wings: 00:30:440
16:42 kanpakyin: 換成2連-3連這樣子
16:42 kanpakyin: 1/4小跳弄走了
16:43 Lan wings: 00:38:690　　
16:43 Lan wings: 00:38:690　　
16:43 Lan wings: ..
16:43 Lan wings: 00:38:690
16:43 Lan wings: 老按不出空格
16:45 kanpakyin: 這個暫時保留- - (因為排班問題
16:45 Lan wings: 所以我也想不到该说啥了..
16:45 Lan wings: 一看就是为了排版搞这节奏_(:3 」∠)_
16:45 kanpakyin: >_>
16:46 Lan wings: 00:39:627 (4,1,2)- 试下把这3个slider的尾巴间距相同
16:47 Lan wings: 00:52:565
16:47 Lan wings: 这里可以的话加个circle跟00:52:752 (1)- ｓｔａｃｋ
16:49 Lan wings: Curisu
16:50 kanpakyin: Curisu你還是post - -
16:50 Lan wings: gd?
16:50 kanpakyin: 我不改guest
16:50 kanpakyin: 恩
16:51 Lan wings: 中文还是英文
16:51 kanpakyin: 中文
16:51 Lan wings: 唔
16:51 Lan wings: 那我先不看了
16:52 Lan wings: taiko我没法破
16:52 kanpakyin: 恩恩
16:53 Lan wings: Hard
16:53 Lan wings: 00:06:252
16:53 Lan wings: 搞个slider跟音乐比较好
16:53 Lan wings: 00:06:440 (3)- 这里结束
16:54 Lan wings: 唔``如果改的话记得减速
16:54 kanpakyin: ....我覺得1/1 會好一點, 先保留一下 lol
16:54 Lan wings: 这里的音比较明显..
16:54 Lan wings: 1/1会显得很空
16:55 Lan wings: 而且1/2不会影响难度
16:55 kanpakyin: 加note
16:56 Lan wings: 还是slider好一点.-.
16:56 Lan wings: 这是一个拖的音
16:56 kanpakyin: 平排的note lol 可以了
16:56 Lan wings: 00:24:815
16:56 Lan wings: 这里也一样
16:56 Lan wings: 虽然知道你是跟的歌词stack
16:57 Lan wings: 00:24:627 (2)- 或者试一下这个改为慢速slider
16:57 kanpakyin: 歌詞這裡挺強的....所以...
16:57 Lan wings: 00:25:002 (3)- 这里结束
16:57 Lan wings: 这样不会添加节奏了
16:58 kanpakyin: ...晤我考慮一下
16:58 Lan wings: 00:41:596 (1)- 推后1/4
16:58 kanpakyin: 可
16:59 Lan wings: 00:53:971 (1)- 蓝线开头
16:59 Lan wings: 玛德还说自己善良
17:00 kanpakyin: 感覺這裡不難抓啊- -
17:00 kanpakyin: 而且音樂是這樣走的 >_>
17:00 Lan wings: 唔``
17:00 Lan wings: 那或者试一下之前insane原来那样?
17:00 kanpakyin: Curisu上線了 lol
17:00 kanpakyin: 你可以找他mod
17:01 Lan wings: 一个3/4slider 然后一个折返slider
17:01 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565805
17:02 kanpakyin: 我縮短間距
17:02 Lan wings: 我的排列无视
17:02 Lan wings: 看节奏就好
17:03 Lan wings: 01:12:252 (3)-
17:04 Lan wings: 唔``这个怎么说好呢..
17:04 Lan wings: 01:10:752 (3)- 120°
17:05 Lan wings: 01:11:502 (3)- 得出这个
17:05 Lan wings: 然后再转120°
17:05 Lan wings: 01:12:252 (3)- 得出这个``
17:05 Lan wings: 然后延迟
17:05 Lan wings: 延长
17:05 Lan wings: 01:12:815 (1)- 然后复制翻转
17:06 Lan wings: 能懂么0.0
17:07 Lan wings: Easy
17:07 kanpakyin: = = 這裡...我想保留
17:07 Lan wings: 00:03:815 (1,2)- Blanket
17:07 Lan wings: 嫌麻烦么.-.
17:07 kanpakyin: 不- -
17:09 kanpakyin: blanket fixed
17:09 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565813
17:10 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565814
17:10 Lan wings: 01:13:565 (2,3,1,2,3)- 然后这里旋转下角度把overlap搞定就好了嘛
17:12 Lan wings: 01:10:565 (3,4)- easy 也是blanket
17:13 Lan wings: 好了我去找Curisu
17:13 kanpakyin: en~

Curisu

17:13 Lan wings: hi
17:13 Curisu: hi
17:13 Curisu: >.<?
17:13 Lan wings: as kpy's request
17:14 *Lan wings is editing Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size) [Curisu]
17:14 Curisu: lol

17:14 Lan wings: 来发irc
17:14 Curisu: 请多指教(鞠躬
17:14 Lan wings: 00:11:690 (5)-
17:14 Lan wings: 00:11:596
17:14 Lan wings: 移到这里
17:15 Lan wings: 如果改的话记得改排列
17:15 Curisu: ...为啥前移1/4
17:16 Lan wings: 节奏
17:16 Curisu: ...我意图是在长白线起手好些 00:11:596- 感觉有点别扭
17:16 Lan wings: 哦``忘了说了
17:16 Lan wings: 再加个折返
17:17 Curisu: 这个我想到了:P
17:17 Lan wings: 00:11:971- 然后这里改成默认的soft-whistle
17:18 Curisu: 只是觉得拖拽音符在长白线开始好点或者596+circle也可以
17:18 Lan wings: 本身就够鬼畜了_(:3 」∠)_
17:18 Lan wings: 还怕啥
17:19 Curisu: ...不是鬼畜的问题D:
17:19 Curisu: 明明超善良的:P
17:19 Lan wings: 00:11:127 (4)-
17:19 Lan wings: 其实可以当成是一个二连
17:19 Lan wings: 这样蓝线节奏就不会觉得有什么问题了
17:20 Curisu: 如果00:11:596 这个点加节奏点我还是觉得circle会好些
17:20 Curisu: ...怎么全变蓝了
17:21 Lan wings: 无所谓啊 :3 补充个节奏就好了
17:21 Curisu: 或者说拖拽音符打图上可以简化成只有起始点和结束点相当于长白线缺音
17:21 Curisu: 好的
17:21 Lan wings: 596空掉一个节奏会不舒服
17:22 Curisu: 懂
17:22 Lan wings: 00:28:565- 我觉得这个音不应该放过
17:22 Curisu: 00:11:971- 默认whis?
17:22 Lan wings: 嗯
17:22 Lan wings: 默认whistle
17:23 Curisu: ...k
17:23 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 这里试下缩短一下?
17:23 Lan wings: 然后中间加个circle
17:23 Curisu: 00:28:565- 这里为啥
17:24 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 如果修改的话就把whistle去掉
17:24 Curisu: 说起这个想起前面的mod有吐槽过00:25:377 (3,4)- 这1/4很奇怪
17:24 Lan wings: 如果不修改*
17:25 Curisu: 算了我改掉把统一一下这两个2连样式
17:25 Lan wings: 那位置放whistle不适合
17:25 Lan wings: 00:28:658-
17:26 Curisu: 等等我做一下刚才那里的blanket
17:26 Lan wings: 00:25:377 (3,4)- 这里的话如果你想保留1/4的话
17:27 Lan wings: 00:25:752 (4)- 就把这个改成slider
17:27 Curisu: 没我去掉了
17:27 Lan wings: 00:25:846- 这里结束
17:27 Lan wings: 如果不要的话直接slider延长吧=w=
17:27 Lan wings: 00:34:377 (3)-
17:28 Curisu: http://puu.sh/1MIUo 好像有点违和
17:28 Lan wings: ?
17:28 Curisu: 34:377怎么了
17:28 Curisu: blanket?
17:28 Curisu: 00:34:377-
17:29 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 这里违和？
17:29 Curisu: 我说那张图我现在的方案
17:29 Lan wings: 排列?节奏?
17:29 Curisu: ...
17:29 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/1MIUo
17:30 Curisu: 对这个
17:30 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 这截图不是这里的么
17:30 Curisu: 是
17:30 Curisu: ...我们一个个解决先
17:30 Lan wings: 先解决前面这个呗
17:30 Curisu: 00:28:377 (3)- 我不确定这个我这样放会不会违和
17:31 Lan wings: 你是指节奏方面还是排列方面的违和
17:31 Curisu: 排列
17:31 Lan wings: 0.0
17:31 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565830
17:31 Lan wings: 这样呢?
17:32 Lan wings: 就按你原来的拉短点然后加中间
17:32 Curisu: 等等先这combo color怎么回事
17:32 Curisu: kpy改了?
17:32 Lan wings: 我删皮肤了
17:32 Lan wings: 玩的时候
17:32 Curisu: ......
17:33 Lan wings: 删皮肤会改成默认的ｃｏｍｂｏｃｏｌｏｕｒ
17:33 Curisu: ...这样感觉更违和了
17:33 Lan wings: 唔｀｀那我没办法了0.0
17:33 Curisu: 0.0我先保留着先
17:33 Lan wings: 或者不要三连做个跳
17:34 Curisu: k
17:34 Lan wings: 00:28:658- 反正如果是我``我这里不会下节奏
17:34 Curisu: 好的00:34:377- 是啥
17:34 Lan wings: 00:34:377 (3)- 唔``继续这里
17:35 Curisu: 恩恩
17:35 Lan wings: 00:34:565-这里中间有个比较重的音
17:35 Lan wings: 建议在slider中间部分拉一个锐角
17:35 Lan wings: 红点
17:35 Curisu: ...这个不想
17:35 Curisu: 我全图都没红点
17:36 Curisu: 有一两个
17:36 Lan wings: 这又不是啥理由
17:36 Curisu: 很格格不入
17:36 Curisu: 我一般不用红...所以ry
17:36 Lan wings: 你不想加就算了``
17:36 Curisu: ...
17:38 Lan wings: 00:58:565 (3)- 这里来一点点弧度
17:38 Lan wings: 直的不好看
17:38 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565838
17:39 Lan wings: 00:58:940 (4)- 这里直的也不好看｀｀不过不知道弧度往哪歪比较好
17:39 Lan wings: 01:03:440 (3,1)- 这里可以blanket
17:40 Curisu: 一个一个先..
17:40 Lan wings: 我说我的
17:40 Curisu: .....
17:40 Lan wings: 你看着改或者不改就好
17:40 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565841
17:40 Curisu: 00:58:565 (3)- fixed
17:41 Lan wings: 01:12:815 (1,3)- 这两个也可以blanket
17:41 Curisu: 00:58:940 (4)- fixed
17:42 Lan wings: 01:14:971- add circle stack
17:42 Curisu: 01:03:440 (3,1)- 这里怎么
17:42 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565841
17:42 Lan wings: blanket
17:43 Curisu: k
17:43 Lan wings: 01:03:440 (3)- 成弧形包围01:03:815 (1)- 的slider头
17:43 Lan wings: 01:17:127 (5)- slider头finish
17:44 Lan wings: 没了
17:44 Curisu: 01:13:565 (3,4)- nope
17:44 Lan wings: 这里overlap不好看
17:44 Curisu: 01:14:971- fixed
17:45 Curisu: 01:17:127 (5)- 忘了 fixed
17:45 Curisu: 哪里
17:46 Lan wings: 01:12:815 (1,3)-
17:46 Lan wings: 你刚才说不改的地方
17:46 Curisu: 01:13:565 (3)- 不准备改方向地方挪下来了一点
17:47 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565848
17:48 Curisu: k

~~基片鸭的应该没啥吧(反正normal)``我姐要用电脑了``闪人~~

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2013-01-12T09:48:52+00:00

翅膀 IRC Modded

17:11 Lan wings: hi
17:11 Curisu: hi
17:11 Curisu: >.<?
17:11 Lan wings: as kpy's request
17:11 *Lan wings is editing Suzuki Konomi - DAYS of DASH (TV Size) [Curisu]
17:12 Curisu: lol

17:12 Lan wings: 来发irc
17:12 Curisu: 请多指教(鞠躬
17:12 Lan wings: 00:11:690 (5)-
17:12 Lan wings: 00:11:596
17:12 Lan wings: 移到这里
17:13 Lan wings: 如果改的话记得改排列
17:13 Curisu: ...为啥前移1/4
17:14 Lan wings: 节奏
17:14 Curisu: ...我意图是在长白线起手好些 00:11:596- 感觉有点别扭
17:14 Lan wings: 哦``忘了说了
17:14 Lan wings: 再加个折返
17:15 Curisu: 这个我想到了:P
17:15 Lan wings: 00:11:971- 然后这里改成默认的soft-whistle
17:16 Curisu: 只是觉得拖拽音符在长白线开始好点或者596+circle也可以
17:16 Lan wings: 本身就够鬼畜了_(:3 」∠)_
17:16 Lan wings: 还怕啥
17:17 Curisu: ...不是鬼畜的问题D:
17:17 Curisu: 明明超善良的:P
17:17 Lan wings: 00:11:127 (4)-
17:17 Lan wings: 其实可以当成是一个二连
17:17 Lan wings: 这样蓝线节奏就不会觉得有什么问题了
17:18 Curisu: 如果00:11:596 这个点加节奏点我还是觉得circle会好些
17:18 Curisu: ...怎么全变蓝了
17:19 Lan wings: 无所谓啊 :3 补充个节奏就好了
17:19 Curisu: 或者说拖拽音符打图上可以简化成只有起始点和结束点相当于长白线缺音
17:19 Curisu: 好的
17:19 Lan wings: 596空掉一个节奏会不舒服
17:20 Curisu: 懂
17:20 Lan wings: 00:28:565- 我觉得这个音不应该放过
17:20 Curisu: 00:11:971- 默认whis?
17:20 Lan wings: 嗯
17:20 Lan wings: 默认whistle
17:21 Curisu: ...k
17:21 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 这里试下缩短一下?
17:21 Lan wings: 然后中间加个circle
17:21 Curisu: 00:28:565- 这里为啥
17:22 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 如果修改的话就把whistle去掉
17:22 Curisu: 说起这个想起前面的mod有吐槽过00:25:377 (3,4)- 这1/4很奇怪
17:22 Lan wings: 如果不修改*
17:23 Curisu: 算了我改掉把统一一下这两个2连样式
17:23 Lan wings: 那位置放whistle不适合
17:23 Lan wings: 00:28:658-
17:24 Curisu: 等等我做一下刚才那里的blanket
17:24 Lan wings: 00:25:377 (3,4)- 这里的话如果你想保留1/4的话
17:25 Lan wings: 00:25:752 (4)- 就把这个改成slider
17:25 Curisu: 没我去掉了
17:25 Lan wings: 00:25:846- 这里结束
17:25 Lan wings: 如果不要的话直接slider延长吧=w=
17:25 Lan wings: 00:34:377 (3)-
17:26 Curisu: http://puu.sh/1MIUo 好像有点违和
17:26 Curisu: 34:377怎么了
17:26 Lan wings: ?
17:26 Curisu: blanket?
17:26 Curisu: 00:34:377-
17:27 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 这里违和？
17:27 Curisu: 我说那张图我现在的方案
17:27 Lan wings: 排列?节奏?
17:27 Curisu: ...
17:27 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/1MIUo
17:28 Curisu: 对这个
17:28 Lan wings: 00:28:377 (3)- 这截图不是这里的么
17:28 Curisu: 是
17:28 Curisu: ...我们一个个解决先
17:28 Lan wings: 先解决前面这个呗
17:28 Curisu: 00:28:377 (3)- 我不确定这个我这样放会不会违和
17:29 Lan wings: 你是指节奏方面还是排列方面的违和
17:29 Curisu: 排列
17:29 Lan wings: 0.0
17:29 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565830
17:29 Lan wings: 这样呢?
17:30 Lan wings: 就按你原来的拉短点然后加中间
17:30 Curisu: 等等先这combo color怎么回事
17:30 Curisu: kpy改了?
17:30 Lan wings: 我删皮肤了
17:30 Lan wings: 玩的时候
17:30 Curisu: ......
17:31 Lan wings: 删皮肤会改成默认的ｃｏｍｂｏｃｏｌｏｕｒ
17:31 Curisu: ...这样感觉更违和了
17:31 Lan wings: 唔｀｀那我没办法了0.0
17:31 Curisu: 0.0我先保留着先
17:31 Lan wings: 或者不要三连做个跳
17:32 Curisu: k
17:32 Lan wings: 00:28:658- 反正如果是我``我这里不会下节奏
17:32 Curisu: 好的00:34:377- 是啥
17:32 Lan wings: 00:34:377 (3)- 唔``继续这里
17:33 Curisu: 恩恩
17:33 Lan wings: 00:34:565-这里中间有个比较重的音
17:33 Lan wings: 建议在slider中间部分拉一个锐角
17:33 Curisu: ...这个不想
17:33 Lan wings: 红点
17:33 Curisu: 我全图都没红点
17:33 Curisu: 有一两个
17:34 Lan wings: 这又不是啥理由
17:34 Curisu: 很格格不入
17:34 Curisu: 我一般不用红...所以ry
17:34 Lan wings: 你不想加就算了``
17:34 Curisu: ...
17:36 Lan wings: 00:58:565 (3)- 这里来一点点弧度
17:36 Lan wings: 直的不好看
17:36 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565838
17:37 Lan wings: 00:58:940 (4)- 这里直的也不好看｀｀不过不知道弧度往哪歪比较好
17:37 Lan wings: 01:03:440 (3,1)- 这里可以blanket
17:38 Curisu: 一个一个先..
17:38 Lan wings: 我说我的
17:38 Curisu: .....
17:38 Lan wings: 你看着改或者不改就好
17:38 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565841
17:38 Curisu: 00:58:565 (3)- fixed
17:39 Lan wings: 01:12:815 (1,3)- 这两个也可以blanket
17:39 Curisu: 00:58:940 (4)- fixed
17:40 Lan wings: 01:14:971- add circle stack
17:40 Curisu: 01:03:440 (3,1)- 这里怎么
17:40 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565841
17:40 Lan wings: blanket
17:41 Curisu: k
17:41 Lan wings: 01:03:440 (3)- 成弧形包围01:03:815 (1)- 的slider头
17:41 Lan wings: 01:17:127 (5)- slider头finish
17:42 Lan wings: 没了
17:42 Curisu: 01:13:565 (3,4)- nope
17:42 Lan wings: 这里overlap不好看
17:42 Curisu: 01:14:971- fixed
17:43 Curisu: 01:17:127 (5)- 忘了 fixed
17:43 Curisu: 哪里
17:44 Lan wings: 01:12:815 (1,3)-
17:44 Lan wings: 你刚才说不改的地方
17:44 Curisu: 01:13:565 (3)- 不准备改方向地方挪下来了一点
17:45 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/565848
17:46 Curisu: k
17:46 Lan wings: 没什么我闪了

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spboxer3

Global Moderator

3,616 posts

Joined November 2009

spboxer3 2013-01-12T16:17:04+00:00

[mint

]
00:16:752 (2,1,2,1,1,2) - 就這段節奏來看既然00:16:565 - 已經決定空白不跟鼓點跟vocal了那不如將00:17:315 (1) - 改到00:17:315 (1) - 來的好些

00:27:252 (2,1,1,2,3,1,1) - 節奏不如這樣來的順暢這麼說吧00:27:627 - 到00:27:815 - 之間是歌詞但是都同一個字只是拖延了些,但是相對於我所建議的位置那個點卻分得很清楚因此我推薦使用下方這樣的節奏 (我發現你前頭使用的是xx xxxx或是xx xx x類型的節奏可是這地方是第2小節連結第3小節處做出點變化並不會讓人感到違和)

00:43:190 (1) - 吐槽一下為什麼是whistle lol

00:53:315 (1) - 若是在00:51:815 (1) - 使用了finish 在後段會顯得較無力些若是在00:53:315 (1) - 加上finish可以調節一下這種頭重腳輕的情況

01:16:377 (1,1) - 上finish吧以音樂性來說與01:15:815 (1) - 的音色/力道都是一樣的所以再擺放時建議使用同樣的擺法而且這種排法在Muzukashii並沒有說真的很難

[loli's Oni

]
音色soft->Normal 60~70%

00:29:877 (153,154,155,156) - 建議相反使用意思是dk kd, 可以很明顯的聽出00:29:690 (152,153) - 是屬於不同音色可是卻用同種音效會讓人感到不和諧感

00:30:440 (157,158,159,160,161) - 坑爹呢這是... 聽起來前兩個明明是小鼓卻用不同音效建議使用pattern: kkddk,kkdkd

00:53:971 (126,127,128,129) - 以音色看kdkd會比kkdk聽起來更悅耳也更適合 (事實上爵士鼓打法也是這麼打的... )

(建議) 00:55:190 - 不如在00:55:190 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - ,00:56:877 - ,00:58:002 - 使用速度漸增讓玩家感覺進入副歌時有種壓力釋放的感覺

01:09:252 (217,218) - 建議使用d K的排法 01:08:315 (214) - 孤獨的finish阿明明與後兩點是同樣的感覺卻被孤立開了看著都要哭了至少給最後一個加上finish吧這樣才不會讓這個位置太突出畢竟是同一段阿

01:21:065 (281) - d 背景如此,建議使用

good luck

loveFantasy

526 posts

Joined August 2008

loveFantasy 2013-01-12T17:01:44+00:00

[Easy]

00:51:815 (3) - 這個在做什麼..曲折的地方都是vocal發音處的話會挺不錯的, 現在52:565那個點在中間

[JauiPlaY's Normal]

00:05:315 (1) - 不覺得真的很違和嗎..何必刻意不弄成1/2長
00:08:315 (4) - 後面的NC提前來這
00:11:127 (X) - 建議spinner start在這裡
00:17:315 (1) - slider end whistle
00:20:315 (3,4,1) - 這個配置難度上有讀譜的顧慮
00:22:752 (3) - 起頭finish收效不錯, 加上音樂本身就有
00:41:408 (1) - spinner start建議白線
00:47:127 (3) - 去whistle, 後面三個樂器音才容易被whistle強調
01:05:315 (4) - 這裡的finish某種程度上是讓後面01:06:815 (1) - 的finish變得不出色
01:12:815 (1) - 也是有點奇怪的配置, 要也是SC2 finish更適合吧
01:17:127 (4) - finish好位置, 同22:752
01:19:752 (4) - 同上, 這裡是擺slider end

[Hard]

00:05:502 (2) - 這條綠線前面的所有綠線我建議降到25%-30% vol
00:08:877 (1) - del new combo
00:09:815 (3) - add new combo
00:39:627 (3) - slider start whistle
00:41:690 (1) - 這個有點硬塞的感覺, 不如用circle/slider穩穩map, 現在這樣讓人不知道slider跟啥spinner又跟啥
00:47:127 (1) - SC1 whistle, 理由同Normal..NC也可以移去後面的(3)
00:49:190 (1) - 為什麼他有自己一個NC?
01:09:815 (5) - 這裡用低音量的N finish不如用高音量的S finish明顯點, 也跟KIAI起頭一致, 其他N finish的位置就都挺好的

[Curisu]

00:11:690 (6) - 藍線上的whistle真的很奇怪
00:41:127 (3,4) - 相當不自然
00:53:877 (2) - 改用S whistle, (6)也可以考慮
01:08:690 (4,5,6,7) - 排版有點太刻意了, (7)可以考慮下finish
01:17:502 (1) - 某種程度上, 雖然他守spacing但容易被讀錯, 建議用0.9x-1.0x

[Insane]

起頭音量同Hard
00:37:377 (4,5) - 為啥要突然來這麼一下
00:41:127 (3) - S finish收效都要比whistle好的感覺
00:46:940 (3) - 同前面的難度, 建議尾別用S whistle
00:47:315 (1) - 尾whistle
01:09:815 (7) - slider start finish

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2013-01-13T05:02:30+00:00

00:41:127 (3,4) - 相當不自然
00:53:877 (2) - 改用S whistle, (6)也可以考慮

这两个没改

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154,163,17877,1,2,0:0:0
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161,335,18627,1,0,0:0:0
176,332,18721,1,0,0:0:0
191,327,18815,38,0,P|241:306|243:207,1,160,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0
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397,91,19940,1,0,1:0:0
402,101,20033,1,0,0:0:0
407,111,20127,1,0,0:0:0
412,121,20221,1,0,0:0:0
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270,287,21440,1,2,0:0:0
188,236,21627,1,0,1:0:0
172,233,21721,1,0,1:0:0
155,232,21815,2,0,P|115:232|86:242,1,60.0000022888184,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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24,109,22377,2,0,P|97:124|179:107,1,160,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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160,198,40190,1,8,0:0:0
188,178,40283,1,0,0:0:0
220,165,40377,38,0,P|294:167|326:236,1,150,2|0,2:1|2:0,0:0:0
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132,188,43565,2,0,P|193:174|248:211,1,120.000004577637,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0
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386,276,46002,1,0,0:0:0
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451,319,46565,1,0,1:0:0
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224,240,72627,1,2,0:0:0
352,272,72815,6,0,P|384:208|368:112,1,160,2|8,2:1|0:0,0:0:0
272,48,73377,1,2,2:1:0
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272,320,73940,2,0,P|144:320,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
16,272,74315,5,2,0:0:0
64,160,74502,1,2,0:0:0
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16,272,74877,1,2,0:0:0
16,272,74971,1,2,0:0:0
224,48,75158,5,2,0:0:0
224,48,75252,1,2,0:0:0
295,144,75440,2,0,P|416:128,1,100,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
464,272,75815,6,0,P|416:304|368:304,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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384,192,76940,1,8,0:0:0
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301,267,77502,5,2,0:0:0
112,320,77690,1,8,0:0:0
330,287,77877,1,2,0:0:0
181,190,78065,2,0,P|69:158|16:208,1,200,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
59,320,78627,1,2,0:0:0
176,345,78815,6,0,P|216:343|264:311,1,100,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,208,79190,1,8,0:0:0
240,288,79377,2,0,P|192:320|96:304,1,150,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,288,79752,1,2,0:0:0
176,128,79940,2,0,P|157:237,1,100,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
158,226,80502,1,2,0:0:0
160,96,80690,1,8,0:0:0
80,192,80877,2,0,P|32:208,2,50,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,128,81252,21,8,3:0:0
336,128,81440,1,8,3:0:0
448,288,81633,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,81656,12,4,82940,0:0:0

thx lF

Last edited by kanpakyin 2013-01-13T12:00:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2013-01-13T07:20:07+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
[loli's Oni]
音色soft->Normal 60~70% //現在的音量很合適了

00:29:877 (153,154,155,156) - 建議相反使用意思是dk kd, 可以很明顯的聽出00:29:690 (152,153) - 是屬於不同音色可是卻用同種音效會讓人感到不和諧感 //感覺kd有違和感...

00:30:440 (157,158,159,160,161) - 坑爹呢這是... 聽起來前兩個明明是小鼓卻用不同音效建議使用pattern: kkddk,kkdkd //k

00:53:971 (126,127,128,129) - 以音色看kdkd會比kkdk聽起來更悅耳也更適合 (事實上爵士鼓打法也是這麼打的... ) //k

(建議) 00:55:190 - 不如在00:55:190 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - ,00:56:877 - ,00:58:002 - 使用速度漸增讓玩家感覺進入副歌時有種壓力釋放的感覺 //我不太想在oni玩變速

01:09:252 (217,218) - 建議使用d K的排法 01:08:315 (214) - 孤獨的finish阿明明與後兩點是同樣的感覺卻被孤立開了看著都要哭了至少給最後一個加上finish吧這樣才不會讓這個位置太突出畢竟是同一段阿 //finish我一般是放在重音上...

01:21:065 (281) - d 背景如此,建議使用 //k

good luck

loveFantasy wrote:
[Easy]
00:51:815 (3) - 這個在做什麼..曲折的地方都是vocal發音處的話會挺不錯的, 現在52:565那個點在中間 //changed pattern
[Hard]
00:05:502 (2) - 這條綠線前面的所有綠線我建議降到25%-30% vol //done
00:08:877 (1) - del new combo //done
00:09:815 (3) - add new combo //added it on 00:09:440 (1) - instead.
00:39:627 (3) - slider start whistle //k
00:41:690 (1) - 這個有點硬塞的感覺, 不如用circle/slider穩穩map, 現在這樣讓人不知道slider跟啥spinner又跟啥 //k
00:47:127 (1) - SC1 whistle, 理由同Normal..NC也可以移去後面的(3) //不, 用自訂的可以撐托出高音
00:49:190 (1) - 為什麼他有自己一個NC? //removed
01:09:815 (5) - 這裡用低音量的N finish不如用高音量的S finish明顯點, 也跟KIAI起頭一致, 其他N finish的位置就都挺好的 //k
[Insane]
起頭音量同Hard //k
00:37:377 (4,5) - 為啥要突然來這麼一下其實我覺得這個可以接受阿...
00:41:127 (3) - S finish收效都要比whistle好的感覺 //^
00:46:940 (3) - 同前面的難度, 建議尾別用S whistle //同前難度
00:47:315 (1) - 尾whistle //不太合音樂..
01:09:815 (7) - slider start finish //k

Thanks

mintong89

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Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-01-13T12:17:46+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
[mint]
00:16:752 (2,1,2,1,1,2) - 就這段節奏來看既然00:16:565 - 已經決定空白不跟鼓點跟vocal了那不如將00:17:315 (1) - 改到00:17:315 (1) - 來的好些 .....?

00:27:252 (2,1,1,2,3,1,1) - 節奏不如這樣來的順暢這麼說吧00:27:627 - 到00:27:815 - 之間是歌詞但是都同一個字只是拖延了些,但是相對於我所建議的位置那個點卻分得很清楚因此我推薦使用下方這樣的節奏 (我發現你前頭使用的是xx xxxx或是xx xx x類型的節奏可是這地方是第2小節連結第3小節處做出點變化並不會讓人感到違和) ok~ 0.0

00:43:190 (1) - 吐槽一下為什麼是whistle lol 额....Big Kat =w=. Big Kat 时我只用 Finish + Whistle lol

00:53:315 (1) - 若是在00:51:815 (1) - 使用了finish 在後段會顯得較無力些若是在00:53:315 (1) - 加上finish可以調節一下這種頭重腳輕的情況好吧就加 0.0

01:16:377 (1,1) - 上finish吧以音樂性來說與01:15:815 (1) - 的音色/力道都是一樣的所以再擺放時建議使用同樣的擺法而且這種排法在Muzukashii並沒有說真的很難好好就加~

谢mod的喵~~~

SPOILER

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Title:DAYS of DASH (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:DAYS of DASH (TV Size)
Artist:Suzuki Konomi
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:kanpakyin
Version:mint's Taiko Muzukashii
Source:Sakurasou no Pet na Kanojo
Tags:mintong89 Curisu JauiPlaY yangzd88 Kanda Sorata Shiina Mashiro Aoyama Nanami Kamiigusa Misaki Mitaka Jin Akasaka Ryuunosuke Hata Aki Shirato Yuusuke
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Last edited by kanpakyin 2013-01-14T13:30:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

kosiga

1,548 posts

Joined May 2011

kosiga 2013-01-13T20:28:59+00:00

Hi~ kanpakyin

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

Video - Do you use it for taikomap intentionally? so there is no problem
Song Setup - Stack Leniency - You are using 0.3 diff except Curisu's diff. This setting is too low to use it in all diff.
This is not a thing giving difficulty. When it thought that an appearance is bad, you can use this. so
Easy: do not have a stack. so There is not the meaning to use 0.3
Normal: have some stack. but given only difficulty that use 0.3 i think.
Hard: have many stack. but this is hard diff. I feel a high degree of difficulty that use 0.3
insane: If you really want to use, I do not say anything

[Easy]

00:02:315 (3) - I feel that the sound of slider end is too loud. The one that lowered volume becomes natural. ( about 10~20%) or If you use 50%, 00:02:315 - I thought that it was enough just to put circle here
00:10:190 (2,1,1) - I thought this pattern to be slightly difficult for easy ==; 00:11:127 (1,1) - note after the spinner in particular is fast. It has no space after spinner. The score of the spinner is not high with 6000, too. and 00:10:190 (2) - This slider is placed on the edge. I worry about whether it can perform the action of the spinner immediately. so I suggest that it be at least close to the center. http://puu.sh/1Nc0d
SPOILER
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00:14:315 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - I feel some strange rhythm here =~=; 00:15:815 - vocal sound should be emphasized, 00:17:690 (4,1),00:19:752 (2,1) - also felt strangely blank here. 00:12:815~00:24:815 - I thought this part to put a sound in vocal main is better
for ex: http://puu.sh/1NcNQ , http://puu.sh/1NcOL
00:23:408 - Green lines with no meaning. Although there is no problem to leave, just pointing out. with↓
SPOILER
・00:57:158

00:40:565 (5,1,1) - same reason as 00:10:190 (2,1,1). http://puu.sh/1NcZt

SPOILER

263,323,39815,2,0,P|184:344,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,272,40565,2,0,P|227:251,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

00:42:815 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. maybe you forget it from your others diff o.o?
00:45:440 (3) - It is match even if do not put this. just said
01:01:940 (4,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1Ndoc i thought suddenly switched to vocals follow == 01:02:315~01:04:190 - This is one set of the vocal.
01:04:565 (3) - I prefer using the whistle here ( Sample:S vol50%). You match front and back with a vocal so There is a sense of unity here also prefer to use the whistle.
01:08:315 (1) - remove NC and 01:09:815 (2) - add NC. just i prefer than now. and 01:08:315 (1) - As the slider start, it is fit even if use finish for slider end.
01:21:815 (1) - Is score 4000 not too short for easy diff o.o? I think that this is enough http://puu.sh/1NdMT =~=; or like normal diff, start 01:21:627 at least.

[JauiPlay's Normal]

00:05:315 (1) - I think the end of the slider have not been able to follow any sound >_<; Suggestion of the rhythm with 00:06:065 (2) - : http://puu.sh/1Nex7 ( and 00:05:315 (1) - add finish to end of the slider )
00:07:940 (3) - circle is overlaps on the way of the slider. I cannot recommend that you use this pattern for normaldiff in a rule.
Rule
Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.
00:11:315 (1) - i think spinner start 00:11:127 is better. because have finishsound here. i feel the beginning of spinner is late a little.
00:13:190~00:24:815 - I felt a slightly random whistle to be. Suggestion of the hitsound;
SPOILER
・00:13:377 (2) - add whistle to start of the slider
・00:16:377 (2) - add whistle
・00:17:127 (4) - remove whistle
・00:17:315 (1) - add whistle to start of the slider
・00:17:877 (2) - add whistle
・00:19:377 (2) - add whistle to start of the slider
・00:21:252 (1) - add whistle to start and end of the slider
・00:23:690 (2) - add whistle to end of the slider
・00:24:252 (3) - remove whistle to end of the slider
00:24:908 (1) - 00:23:690 (2,3,4,1) - The end of these vocals is 00:26:877. I think the current way to end it a little strange. because once the vocal is over, and it is finished at the beginning of the next vocal. If you do not change, I think you should lower the volume =.=
00:35:690 (1) - remove NC and 00:36:065 (2) - add NC. follow the vocal and 00:36:065 (2) - emphasize the rhythm of this
00:41:408 (1) - spinner start 00:41:315. 00:41:127~ Spinner is placed in accordance with the vocals from here. If this is intentional, delaying the spinner is that there is no meaning
00:44:315 (2) - add whistle. 00:41:408 (1) - If you put the whistle rather than finish here, I think you also need here.
00:50:315 (2) - ^
01:20:502 (1,2,3) - i think such a pattern at the end of the map is very unkind. confusing arrangement at the end of the map, i thought that there was neither the need nor the meaning =.=;

[Hard]

AR -1 SV of normal and hard is not much different. but the differences with AR are too much different. and The balance between normal,hard,insane is not good, too.
00:02:315 (4) - same as easy diff. or 00:00:815 (1,2) - The same pattern matches well. http://puu.sh/1NfJn
00:14:877 (4) - I prefer a thing of a position like this http://puu.sh/1NfIJ
00:21:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1NfO4 I think more fit for vocal
00:41:127 (7,1) - i think this spinner do not match a little. If you want to match it with a vocal, it should match the beginning of the vocal: http://puu.sh/1Ngfi If put it halfway; a thing nonsense as for it. or If this is not in accordance with the vocal: http://puu.sh/1NgkC This is enough. I thought would not fit spinner, and too short >.<
00:48:252 (4) - add NC. 00:47:690 (3,5) - This pattern is a little hard to see.
00:52:565 (x) - You do not match this part with a vocal. but it seem to push the rhythm by a sense here wrong. Because there has vocals easy to hear x.x
00:58:190 (4) - add NC.
01:06:065 (5) - use sample:S whistle instead. 01:05:315 - sound are similar, I think it sounds very nice and put together
01:06:440 (6,1) - hmm... many short spinner =~=; http://puu.sh/1NgX6 This also fits well. Proposal to increase the score a little.
01:19:190 (2) - Suggestion of the flow: http://puu.sh/1Nh80 Flow a little cramped
01:21:627 - add green line. kiai time end. Only this diff is different from others in kiai. It is the degree of completion of the map is reduced.

[Curisu]

00:47:315 (1,2,3,4) - sound is slightly small.(In particular 00:48:440 (4) - ) i think it is right to raise volume here. for ex: 40,50,60,70
00:52:377 (2) - 00:53:127 (2) - I suggest that you use these by the same pattern. http://puu.sh/1Ni54 00:51:815 (1,2,1,2,1) - A sense of unity is reflected with these sets very much.
00:57:065 (6) - add NC and 00:57:440 (7) - add NC. Improved appearance ? haha just suggestion.
01:08:315 (2) - add finish. 01:09:440 (6) - Because you put finish here, have the same sound there.
01:11:315 (1,3) - i suggest exchange positions. http://puu.sh/1NiR5 i think it creates the flows that are more natural than now.
01:12:815 (1,2) - Different set of sound from others. or is this intentional? ( 01:00:815 (1,2) - 01:03:815 (1,2) -
01:21:633 (3) - unsnapped from AIBat; plzp move to 01:21:627.
01:21:656 (1) - ^ this,too. If you want to put it with 1/16, move to 01:21:650. but I think that 01:21:721 is enough.
and this is using the same as other diff. so you should unify end of the spinner. ( end 01:22:752 from oters diff. )

[Insane]

00:02:502 (4) - same as easy,hard.
01:21:627 (6) - add NC. It is very slow compared to the speed of the previous. I think you need to put NC at least as hard diff.

others fine

good map :3 star☆~

Good luck~

BounceBabe

1,626 posts

Joined October 2010

BounceBabe 2013-01-13T20:41:18+00:00

Hi from the Queue!

General

Right Timing:
1. Offset: 829ms BPM: 160,00
Resnap notes after and then put the timing point to the right position again

Easy

00:11:141 (1) - Beginners need time to prepare themselves for the incomming elements after, make at least one white tick space between slider end and next element
00:15:454 (1) - I suggest move this a half beat forward to 00:15:641 - since there starts the vocal
00:18:266 (1) - ^
00:20:704 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:141 (1) - Like 00:11:141 (1) -
00:47:704 (1) - Remove NC
00:50:329 (1) - ^
00:59:704 (1) - ^
01:08:329 (1) - ^
01:09:829 (2) - Add NC
01:18:829 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:829 (1) - Make this spinner longer or add a slider instead since its too short for beginners to finish

Normal

00:06:078 (2) - Actually this music stream starts at 00:05:890 - and should be there, it sounds odd, fix this
00:11:328 (1) - Beginners need time to prepare themselves for the incomming elements after, make at least one white tick space between slider end and next element
00:17:328 (1) - Remove NC

Hard

00:11:596 (1) - This spinner is too short, when you play you also have to focus on preparing for next elements, this doesnt play good
00:14:315 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:690 (7) - NC
00:20:315 (1) - Remove NC
00:41:690 (1) - Like 00:11:596 (1) -
00:48:440 (5) - Dont let this slide overlapp with preview one, its not visible enough
00:49:752 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:065 (1) - ^
01:03:252 (1) - ^
01:06:815 (1) - Like 00:11:596 (1) -
01:12:815 (1) - Remove NC., also fix the spacing please, its too far away imo
01:18:346 (2) - Doesnt fit at all, remove this circle
01:19:002 (1) - Remove NC

Curisu

00:22:940 (1) - Remove NC
00:30:440 (4,5,6,7) - Let this stream overlapp with following slider, since it plays odd and the spacing is also not perfect
00:40:752 (2,3) - This pattern is too confusing due to overlapping, move them away from each other to fix this
01:09:815 (1) - This is a really sudden slowdown, i dont suggest making it slow, might confuse the player and cause a miss
01:15:158 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:690 (7) - NC remove next
01:21:656 (1) - This spinner is longer than the others, try to fix this by using this lenght on the other diffs too!

Insane

00:18:815 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
00:21:440 (5,6,7) - This is totally unreadable, move the second slider away
00:21:815 (7) - NC remove next
00:28:377 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:377 (3) - This slide confuses me, try making another please, it could cause a miss while playing
00:35:127 (1) - Remove NC
00:36:440 (1) - ^ Nc at 00:37:002 (2) -
00:39:627 (4) - NC remove next
00:54:440 (1) - Remove NC
00:55:752 (1,1) - ^
01:07:565 (1,2,3,4) - This is not perfectly visible due to hitburst, try making them more visible by moving them

Good luck, call me back when fixed

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2013-01-14T13:27:00+00:00

so many diffs.. :p
okay, let's see.~

[

General]
　

Clear~

　
[

Easy]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:47:690 (1) - seems not aligned with the previous slider~ maybe you can try to move the anchor which on that end to x:387 y:52 .
2. 00:19:752 (2) - same thing as above~ x:239 y:22 ?~
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:42:815 (1) - i think that i can heard a finish here~ so why not setting a finish on that head to follow the bgm(or use S:C2 finish with whistle to consistent with 00:48:815 (1) 's start)? depend on you~ :3

　
[

JauiPlaY's Normal]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:11:315 (1) - hmm, from the bgm, i prefer to bring forward the spinner to make it begin at 00:11:127 , so that it can catch the drum beat.(and also more comfortable to play i feel..) :3
2. 00:12:440 - idk.. but i feel the spinner should be end at here. ; A;.. try it and make a choice?~
3. 00:12:815 - yea, if you changed above, add a circle here to fill the ryhthm.~ (i prefer to put it at x:400 y:149 so that it can be stacked under slider (3)'s tail.
4. 00:25:002 (1) - also a spinner issue~~ i feel that delaying the spinner 1/4 tick to make it start at red line can catch the vocal more accurate.(and also 1/4 shorten that.~
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:23:690 (2) - i think it would be sounds very nice if you add a whistle on that tail, fit the impassioned vocal here.~ xDD
2. 00:37:377 (2) - sounds like there should be a whistle(or clap?) on that tail..
3. 00:39:627 (3) - same thing on that repeat~
4. 01:03:815 (1) - set a N:C2 finish on that head to consistent with 01:00:815 and 01:06:815 ? i can also heard a sound like finish here~ :p so, why not?

[

Hard]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:21:721 - i can heard a beat from the drum of bgm~ adding a circle to stack with (3) will be better imo~ (if you don't think it break the whole difficulty~.
2. 00:24:815 - a bit wired~ i'd prefer this rhythm~ :3
  SPOILER
3. 00:26:502 (2,4) - ctrl+G? anticlockwise make me feel much more difficult than clockwise.. idk.. maybe flows better?~ lol
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:02:315 (4) - how about to decrease the whistle's volume on that slider's head? a bit loud for me.. i suggest that to reduce the volume to 25%~30% here~
2. 00:06:815 (1) - so normal for the burst of music, i'd prefer to set a finish here.~ xDD

　
[

Curisu]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. OD+1, if you don't wish the #40 of ranking is silver SS with hr+hd..
2. 00:09:065 (4) - random? why not to make it symmetrical with (5)?
  SPOILER
3. 00:11:127 (4) - make the small curve upward seems really better and better(you sure?) flow. xDD (pia
  SPOILER
4. 00:37:190 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g and move the (4) after (3)'s tail? if you can make a flow, why jump anti?
  SPOILER
5. 00:39:346 - add a circle here?~ it can bring the notes fluency imo and plays comfortable. :3
6. 01:02:315 (5) - the spacing and flow is very wired for me..
  the parttern you use for now.
  
  my way.
7. 01:11:502 (2,3) - yea, ctrl+g can make a better flow imo.
8. 01:15:158 (1,2) - the spacing is a bit large for me.. idk.. it's ok i think. :3
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:06:252 (6) - the whistle doesn't work well i feel.. i mean.. it would be much better if you change it to clap. :p
2. 00:17:877 (2) - useless whistle.. sounds wired.. :d
3. 00:22:377 (2) - idk.. maybe change it to whistle will be sounds better?.. now make me feel awkward because the clap is out of the bgm..

　
[

Insane]
　

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:53:971 (2) - i think that it will be much easy to read and catch if you just move upward it 1/4 and add a repeat~(and adjust the spacing~ :3
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. clear.

[

mint's Taiko Muzukashii]

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:21:627 (1,2,3) - a bit overmap and i don't feel this stream is necessary..can't heard any different point from vocal also. after that, i feel there should be a beat at 00:22:002 .. so.. maybe you can try to remove 00:21:721 (2,3) and then add a d at 00:22:002 ?~
2. 01:00:065 (1) - move the d to 00:59:877 ? sounds more suitable..
3. 01:02:877 (1) - umm.. same as above.. move forward 1/2 tick?
4. 01:03:252 (1) - yea if you followed above(i mean 01:02:877), it will be better if you change the k to d i feel. :3
5. 01:06:721 (2) - useless for a bit overmap i think.. maybe you can remove it?
6. 01:11:877 (1) - same as 01:00:065 ..
7. 01:15:065 (1) - ^
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:10:752 (2) - k is better for the bgm i feel~
2. 00:29:315 (2) - k?
3. 00:42:252 (1,2,3) - ddk
4. 00:47:127 (2) - d
5. 01:06:815 (3) - D
6. 01:16:377 (1) - ^
7. 01:17:127 (1) - ^
8. 01:19:377 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:127 (1) - ^ (if you hate Big Don, ignore these suggestions about D.. sorry for that, but i feel they are really suitable from my heard. try them plz..

　
[

Taiko Oni]

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. None!
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:33:065 (173) - k?
2. 01:09:815 (379) - since you use a K on 01:08:315 (372), i feel that it would be better if you set a D here~

　　--------------------------------------------------------
nice song and excellent map..
~~so tired.. xD~~

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2013-01-15T07:12:59+00:00

as your request here o.o

[General]
有些难度里lead-in=1750稍微好点，2000有点久
Hard的 kiai end确定没snap错么
offset感觉早了点点，建议用821~823左右(+6~+8)

[Easy]
AR建议+1，,2实在是太慢了0.0

[Hard]
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - 这里建议用跳，stack不太合曲的感觉
01:06:815 (1,1) - circle实在是太远了，而且在红线上，spinner又短，节奏实在太难读，很容易读成spinner停在白线上或者circle在白线上。建议放近点，或者稍微改改节奏0.0

[Curisu]
01:21:252 - 建议把这个NC挪到01:20:502 - ，方便读图，顺带平衡下combo长度

[Insane]
其实我觉得萌妹那个打起来难点，要是不介意的话我建议互换下setting
00:21:440 (5,6,7) - 这里没叠好的感觉，如果为了兼顾stack自动偏移，6跟7应该要完美重叠，然后在5的右下一点点0.0
00:53:971 (2) - 这里我建议拆成circle+折返sldier。这种短的折返slider，不管多么合曲，只要是蓝钱起就不利于读图，而且打起来会感觉很奇怪

好了在找我呗0.0

Melophobia

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2,230 posts

Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2013-01-15T14:03:21+00:00

no time to do a full-mod so I had a quick look.. I'm sorry T_T

[General]

The video has a wrong ratio; it needs to be 16:9

[Insane]

I thought there could be more finishes on the emphasises and the beginning of new stanza; consider adding some more? (ex. 00:12:815 - ,00:24:815 - etc.)
00:42:065 (3) - change this slider into a triple so that there can be a clap at 00:42:158 - ?
00:42:627 (5) - Honestly I think this pattern is hard to hit and kinda uncomfortable for playing as (4,5,1) is nearly rectilinear. How about placing this note at x:240 y:252?
00:48:252 (3) - This note cannot be stacked with the beginning of the previous (3)?
01:02:315 (5) - Feels too close to (4) and spacing around here looks messy. probably a small jump would be great; I would prefer something like this.
SPOILER
01:05:127 (4,5) - Kinsa same as above; I guess that's because (3,4) has a larger spacing. I think this one flows better.
SPOILER
01:09:721 - There should be clap here as well according to the drum sound in the song.
nice use of small jumps

[Curisu]

00:56:315 (1) - Makes more sense if newcombo is placed on 00:57:065 (6) - instead of this slider; this slider is still a part of previous pattern
01:08:315 (2) - Obviously there should be a finish; why not?
01:09:815 (1) - What sense does this speed-down make?

[Hard]

00:11:127 - Add a finish here for the sake of consistency with the Insane diff
00:18:627 (9,1) - swap these newcombos to match it better with vocal?
00:52:565 - since you have added a note here in the Insane maybe you want to add it here as well?
01:10:377 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - feels too close and crowded, maybe larger spacing would be better.
SPOILER

[JauiPlaY's Normal]

HD4+OD3 is better imo considering the setting of Hard diff.
I thought there could be more finishes on the emphasises and the beginning of new stanza; consider adding some more? (ex. 00:12:815 - ,00:22:752 - etc.)
00:05:315 (1) - This slider end doesn't follow anything noticeable, maybe better to shorten this by 1/2 so it can follow the emphasis at 00:05:502 -
00:08:690 (2,3,4) - awkward rhythm
SPOILER
00:11:127 (1) - how about ending this spinner at 00:12:440 - and then adding note to 00:12:815 - ? I'd highly suggest this because it'll follow guitar better and I think following the heavy beat with spinner end isn't that good.
01:18:065 (6) - what about clap instead of whistle?

[Easy]

AR+1. the current setting is too slow.
00:07:190 (3) - how about ctrl+h so that (3)'s shape can fit nicely with (4)?
SPOILER
00:11:127 (1,1) - can you please give beginners longer recovery time? >_<
00:42:815 (1) - ^
00:20:690 (1) - this newcombo cannot seem to be necessary.
00:34:377 - this whistle is a bit too sudden and sounds strange.
01:21:815 (1) - this short spinner isn't a good idea and some beginners might not be able to get 300/pass it I think. better to use a long slider for this.

super tired today so that's all for now. looks like wcx is willing to recheck, but you can call on me for it if you want. starred~

popner

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popner 2013-01-15T17:13:46+00:00

有2个MAT要给你recheck无法直视
还要我mod不？

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