DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

Mod time /o/

[Easy]
00:06:522 (1) - You can make this in a softer curve. okay
00:10:272 (1) - ^ ^
00:17:483 (1,2) - Try avoid overlaps like this in an Easy, you can move (2) in a way that it would be totally visible, it will give a nice looking to this part. fixed
00:23:540 (1,2) - Maybe this can go in a zigzag. sure
00:39:694 (2) - You can make this in a softer curve. I think it fits fine how it is at the moment.

[Normal]
00:10:272 (1) - You can make the curve open in the other side and make it softer, letting the flow of the curve go to the circles, like this good idea, fixed!

00:53:251 (2) - Don't make the curve too closed for this kind of sliders, make it soft. opened it up a little
01:21:518 (1) - You can make the 1st node of this a bit to the left, softening the curve here. fixed
01:24:403 (2,3,4) - This can be a little confusing for some players, you can arrange it in a different way. I dunno, I feel it's okay because of how it flows and the predictable rhythm. not really sure how I would change it anyway

[Hard]
00:27:867 (1) - osu! (auto) doesn't achieve 1000 bonus points in this spinner. I suggest changing it for an slider. It does get 1000 points, barely. http://puu.sh/1DMHG
00:17:338 (2) - This looks a bit squeezed, you can make it in a straight line. sure
00:40:414 (2) - ^ ^
00:45:174 (1) - Here you can make the curve similar to 00:44:597 (7), something like this done

00:48:058 (2,3,4,5) - These could be better arranged in a zigzag pattern. Um, I guess. But I'm fine with how they are now honestly
00:54:116 (5) - Same as I said before, make this go in a straight line. fixed
00:56:712 (1) - You can move the 1st node down to match the line that 00:56:424 (7,8) are doing okay
01:12:000 (1,2) - You can make this go in a straigh line. okay

That's all from my part, good luck \o\ Thanks for the mod!

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana Here From My Queue

[General]

none

[Hard]

00:08:397 - here can place a 1/4 slider to go with the music, as it is a hard level, i think you can make it explicit sounds a bit awkward imo
00:12:147 - same reason as above, add a circle, ^
01:01:760 - you clap the blue tick here, and two clap is a bit loud to me, and my suggestion is to add a green line with volume of 23% here
01:02:914 - same reason, add a 18% volume green line sounds a lot better, thanks!
01:23:826 (1) - slider head, i think soft whistle suits better, as you did at 01:33:057 (1), and if you keep the hitsound consistency, both are ok, changed in other difficulties also.
01:33:345 (2) - between (1,2) is a normal spacing, while before and after them are jumps, it is strange to make such a pattern to go with the continious music. and my suggestion is to stack (2) with (3)'s head The reason I did this spacing here is because in the previous rhythm pattern there usually wasn't a note at this point and having it 2.0x might confuse the player. I stacked it with (1) though, which achieves the same effect.
01:41:855 - spinner end here? (all levels) nah, if you listen at 50% speed you can hear what I'm ending it on
[Normal]

00:16:618 (1) - move the last slider point a grid up and a grid left to avoid touching the following (3) fixed
00:39:694 (2) - add whistle on slider head okay, added in all difficulties
00:45:462 - unused green point moved to 00:45:174 to end Kiai
01:21:518 - seems you want to make the hitsound go with the pitch, acctually, you need to go accompany with the music with the hitsound.
tune or pitch is change, but rhythm is no change during these sections, and the hitsound here should not change from section to section. Reworked the hitsounds here

[Easy]

00:39:694 (2) - whistle the slider head fixed
00:45:462 - unused green point ^

good luck~ Thanks for modding!

dragonxcz wrote:

[Hard]

00:31:040 (4) - Linear patterns are weird, exactly this so it's better if you move (4) on 256;192 okay, although I'm a little worried about about the hitburst from 00:30:174 (2) confusing players, so I moved it to 256:114 to mirror the new posistion of 00:34:790 (4)
00:33:348 (1) - Move this on 210;163 it's much better blanket than before. And it follows symmetry style which you're using in next part. sure
00:34:790 (4) - Move on 256;270 because how I said, linear patterns are weird. fixed
00:37:097 (1) - It's a bit overlaped, so make it like this:
1st point - 397;330
2nd point - 257;196
3rd point - 115;330
(fix overlap and better blanket) hmm, it does make it somewhat asymmetrical. changed it though
00:48:635 (5) - You could make some art in your map. So let's follow the song. And make this:
-Make slider instead of (5) and (6) until 00:48:635 since 00:49:212
-Add 1st point (start) on 184;161
-Add 2nd point (white) on 242;175
-Add 3rd point (red) on 293;129
-Add 4th point (red) on 283;138
-Add 5th point (white) on 329;138
-Add 6th point (end) on 373;157
Now I'll explain it:
-On 00:48:635 is something like squeaking sound and it ends on 00:48:924, where is a drum too, so red point adds nice bump on it so it looks like something new starts here, so it's like there is starting new slider so it flows perfectly. It will look like this http://puu.sh/1DUeF woah, that's really cool! Thank you!
00:54:404 (1) - Move 2nd point on 337;96, this shape is more better, because flat shapes are weird when you're using bump shapes for all the time and now this flat.. okay, messed around with that part a little
01:04:356 (3) - Add 2nd point (white) on 176;311. Linear shape is weird here, because you've used linear slider in previous slider. okay

[Normal]

01:07:097 (4,5,1) - Avoid this overlap changed it

[Easy]

00:15:175 (2) - Move this on 282;308 to move it perfectly on center so it will fit with (1) done
00:22:675 (3,1) - Swap NC or you'll break consistency. okay
00:44:021 (2) - Move this on 192;31 to keep consistency with 00:40:559 (1,2) 192;31? o_O You sure about that? It means there's a 2.04x jump to the next note in an easy lol, and it doesn't keep consistency at all from what I can tell. It was a little ugly though, so I changed that section in a different way.

Not bad map. Get more high quality mods and you'll be soon able to call a MAT. Thanks! Very helpful mod

• 
  You might as well cut/fade the mp3 a bit after 01:41:711 if you're not going to use it anyway.

• 
  Nothing that I could see.

• 
  00:10:272 (1,2,3) It would probably be better if you kept it symmetrical in rhythm with 00:06:522 (1,2,3,4) Btw I think the 1,2,3 pattern is better than the 1,2,3,4 pattern. It sounds much better to me.
  00:22:675 (2) I think this would sound better as a 1 beat slider.
  00:48:059 (2) This would probably sound better if it was like 00:50:367 (2,3,4)
  01:28:441 (1) Maybe you could stack this under 5 and 6?

• 
  00:25:559 (3) You could split it into two sliders to make it more challenging.
  00:27:867 (1,1) I don't know why the hit sound is so important at 00:28:444 You could just combine the two. Besides, the auto mod needs to get at least a 300 with a 1000 bonus on a spinner. On the first one, it could only get a 300, so an average player would only be likely to get a 100.
  01:25:845 (6,7) Why are these stacked when you could have continued the zig-zag pattern you had?

CrestRising wrote:

From my modding queue. I was actually looking at this a while ago, but now I guess I have to mod it now.

[General]

• 
  You might as well cut/fade the mp3 a bit after 01:41:711 if you're not going to use it anyway. If I can find a way to do it without changing the offset, I will. Though it doesn't seem like a huge deal.

[Easy:]

• 
  Nothing that I could see.

[Normal:]

• 
  00:10:272 (1,2,3) It would probably be better if you kept it symmetrical in rhythm with 00:06:522 (1,2,3,4) Btw I think the 1,2,3 pattern is better than the 1,2,3,4 pattern. It sounds much better to me. Okay, changed the first part to mirror the second, so they both have the 1,2,3 pattern.
  00:22:675 (2) I think this would sound better as a 1 beat slider. I agree, changed
  00:48:059 (2) This would probably sound better if it was like 00:50:367 (2,3,4) changed it in a different way
  01:28:441 (1) Maybe you could stack this under 5 and 6? I'm okay with where it is, and I'd rather keep it the same as 01:26:711 (2,3)

[Hard:]

• 
  00:25:559 (3) You could split it into two sliders to make it more challenging. I think it's fine as is, I like the back-and-forthness of it.
  00:27:867 (1,1) I don't know why the hit sound is so important at 00:28:444 You could just combine the two. Besides, the auto mod needs to get at least a 300 with a 1000 bonus on a spinner. On the first one, it could only get a 300, so an average player would only be likely to get a 100. It does get 1000. http://puu.sh/1DMHG The beat on 00:28:444 is to reflect the end of 8-bit like sound in that part. But seeing as people keep bringing this up it's quite possible I'll end up giving in and changing it xD.
  01:25:845 (6,7) Why are these stacked when you could have continued the zig-zag pattern you had? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ fixed

Sorry for the small mod. Take my kudosu star. Good luck with mapping. Thanks for the mod and star!

1. 01:52:971 - Is this red timing section necessary? You're not using them. lol
2. I don't think you need a Kiai time in this mapset. I can't seem to find a great spot and I believe the current one isn't either. You should just remove it instead. I think it would be better.

1. Bump your difficulty's Overall Difficulty, HP Drain Rate, and Approach Rate +1. The current setting is too low in my opinion.
2. 01:07:097 (1) - Remove the finish hit sound in the slider end because I think it's not necessary and it doesn't sound good.
3. 01:39:980 - I think it would be best to add a circle here to emphasize the final downbeat in this difficulty. Basically, you will have to move the spinner on 01:40:413 if you added a circle.

1. I think your diff's Overall Difficulty and HP Drain should have +1 in it.
2. 00:11:714 (2) - The spacing here is inconsistent and it doesn't look great. But I won't blame you for this problem, this probably happens because of the Grid Snapping. XD You should find a way to make the spacing consistent for better gameplay, but if you can't seem to solve it, I suggest you turn off Grid Snap instead and fix the spacing XD
3. 00:20:079 (2) - Too much reverse is happening here in my opinion. I think one reverse is enough for this slider. You should just replace a circle on the last reverse instead because I think it'll make much more sense and much more challenging for Normal players.
4. 00:46:905 (3) - Fix the spacing here. It'll be so hard to read for Normal players if you make it like this one.
5. 01:39:980 - Just like what I suggested in Easy, I think you should add a circle here too. But, you should start the spinner on 01:40:268 instead.

1. 00:27:867 (1) - This spinner is too short to be in a Hard Diff. You should just consider replacing this one with circles instead.
2. 00:35:078 (5,1) - You should fix these slider blankets to improve the visual gameplay of your map. They really look good, but It's really lacking something probably because of the inconsistent spacing in the blanket. On the other hand, I think (1) is too far away from (5) but I guess that's just me. But I'm hoping you could find a way to shorten their distance from each other. Let me know if you can't fix it so that I can help you XD
3. 00:38:540 (2) - It would be better if you'll make this one a slider blanket too like the two sliders I mentioned above.
4. 01:39:980 - Same as what I suggested in Normal. Put a circle here instead and bla bla you know what it is ~ XD

Philippines wrote:

Hi, here's a mod for you from The Hot Seat Queue

General

1. 01:52:971 - Is this red timing section necessary? You're not using them. lol Well, I don't see the harm in keeping it, and it makes the main menu flash correctly xD
2. I don't think you need a Kiai time in this mapset. I can't seem to find a great spot and I believe the current one isn't either. You should just remove it instead. I think it would be better. Yeah, I didn't have Kiai originally in this map. I'm fairly neutral on whether to keep it or not, so I'll just take your advice and remove it.

Easy

1. Bump your difficulty's Overall Difficulty, HP Drain Rate, and Approach Rate +1. The current setting is too low in my opinion. All changed
2. 01:07:097 (1) - Remove the finish hit sound in the slider end because I think it's not necessary and it doesn't sound good. okay, removed
3. 01:39:980 - I think it would be best to add a circle here to emphasize the final downbeat in this difficulty. Basically, you will have to move the spinner on 01:40:413 if you added a circle. good idea, changed

Normal

1. I think your diff's Overall Difficulty and HP Drain should have +1 in it. okay
2. 00:11:714 (2) - The spacing here is inconsistent and it doesn't look great. But I won't blame you for this problem, this probably happens because of the Grid Snapping. XD You should find a way to make the spacing consistent for better gameplay, but if you can't seem to solve it, I suggest you turn off Grid Snap instead and fix the spacing XD I fixed it, I think.
3. 00:20:079 (2) - Too much reverse is happening here in my opinion. I think one reverse is enough for this slider. You should just replace a circle on the last reverse instead because I think it'll make much more sense and much more challenging for Normal players. okay, changed
4. 00:46:905 (3) - Fix the spacing here. It'll be so hard to read for Normal players if you make it like this one. I agree, fixed
5. 01:39:980 - Just like what I suggested in Easy, I think you should add a circle here too. But, you should start the spinner on 01:40:268 instead. done!

Hard

1. 00:27:867 (1) - This spinner is too short to be in a Hard Diff. You should just consider replacing this one with circles instead. Okay, I submit! I Combined the two spinners into one, short spinner is no more.
2. 00:35:078 (5,1) - You should fix these slider blankets to improve the visual gameplay of your map. They really look good, but It's really lacking something probably because of the inconsistent spacing in the blanket. On the other hand, I think (1) is too far away from (5) but I guess that's just me. But I'm hoping you could find a way to shorten their distance from each other. Let me know if you can't fix it so that I can help you XD Yeah, I don't know what to do here I flipped a slider, which makes the spacing consistent. Not 100% sure on it though
3. 00:38:540 (2) - It would be better if you'll make this one a slider blanket too like the two sliders I mentioned above. I did this: http://puu.sh/1FsYG Is that what you meant? Because the slider is really too short to follow the same pattern as the others.
4. 01:39:980 - Same as what I suggested in Normal. Put a circle here instead and bla bla you know what it is ~ XD Yup, fixed

Pretty short map. The music feels weird cause I can't follow the right rhythm. Yeah, I know it's a weird song. As long as it's fun to play, I'm happy
Call me back for a recheck. XD To be honest, this is bubble-ready. XD Whoo! Thanks, your mod was really useful.

Hysteresis wrote:

Hi~Royston ! From my queue^^
Thank you Request !

Easy

00:23:252 - add note?
How is arrangement for such touch?

SPOILER

okay, added!

Normal

00:44:020 (4) It moves under 3 grids?
00:44:597 (5) It moves under 1 grids?
00:45:174 (6) It moves under 1 grids?
As an overall image, it is such touch.

SPOILER

I'm not sure I like this, since it makes the fact that the slider ends don't align with the grid more apparent. So I left it as is, sorry!

Hard

00:31:905~00:33:059 - add note? I added a slider to this part

Sorry for the small mod >.< nice mapset! Good luck No problem, every mod is helpful. Thanks!

mebins wrote:

ADD A KAI TIME lol, it seems as if I have kiai I'm being told to remove it and if I don't I'm being told to add it. xD I'm not sure myself. I'll leave as is for now and listen to more suggestions.
EASY
lol no probs
good diff!

NORMAL

00:55:517(2,4) move (4) to x 136? and then 3 to x 200 y 200 I prefer how (4) is posistioned at the moment as it achieves more consistent spacing, but I can see your suggestion working too. but x200 y200 seems like a really random place for (3), lol o_O

HARD
00:44:501(7,1) (1) doesnt look like its covering 7 that well I see what you mean, fixed!
01:32:288(6,7) just stack them under (5,6)? Oh, why? I think it's more fun to play as is
Got my star! Thanks!

1. 00:44:020 (2) - The spacing here is too large for an Easy Difficulty O.O Please reduce it and make the spacing consistent so the flow of this difficulty would be much better.

1. 00:23:540 (1,2,3,1) - There's an obvious inconsistency in the spacing here. As you can see (1,2,3) have the correct spacing but the last one isn't. Better fix this up for better flow of gameplay.
2. 00:45:174 (6,1) - I think the combo flow would be better if these circles would switch new combos. I think (6) must have the new combo because it starts on a downbeat and the rhythm kind of changed during that part so I guess it would really be better to put the new combo on (6) instead.
3. 01:24:403 (2,3,4) - This pattern is okay but not for a Normal Difficulty. Do not stack (4) because it would be very Hard to read especially for Normal players. You must change this into something that is way readable for better gameplay performance.
   
   I honestly think that you should fix some of the inconsistent spacing you have throughout your whole difficulty especially on [Easy] and [Normal]. To be honest, they don't look good. No matter how small the difference is in the spacing, they somehow affect the gameplay because it would give beginners a hard time to learn how the spacing works here in osu! I won't point them out because I know you yourself can see those.

1. This map is best played I believe with AR 8. Bump your AR +1 and see it for yourself (:
2. 00:27:867 (1) - This looks weirder than the previous one o_O I think this kind of spinner fits more in Normal. I would highly suggest you do this kind of spinner instead in Normal than in Hard. Meanwhile, I think you should still follow my previous suggestion on this part. I think it would be better.
3. 00:35:078 (5,1,2) - You still don't get my point here. lol. You should make these sliders a blanket instead XD Try doing something like below. As you can see, the distance of the curves around those sliders are equal which results to a better gameplay not just in performance but also in the visuals. If you still have problems doing this thing. You can call me up again and I'll be glad to help you XD
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:06:087 (3) - This slider is kind of off for me and doesn't somehow flow with the music well. Why not do this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:12:000 (1) - This new combo doesn't make much sense to me. D: I prefer you remove it instead to maintain the combo count consistent of the difficulty.

Kokatsu wrote:

Hey there, as requested in Koka's Modding Queue!

General

unused file: pause-overlay.jpg; remove it. nope, it's used. pause the map and you'll see :3
maybe uncheck "letterbox during breaks"? it looks ugly to me. sure, don't see why not
add to tags: wii luigi princess peach bowser I added wii, not sure the others are really related to the song though and I can't see people searching them to find it
sure you don't want to use Kiai? maybe use 00:28:444 - 00:45:174 and/or 01:03:635 - 01:12:288 I'm still thinking about Kiai, thanks for your input though. I hadn't considered using the 01:03:635 part as kiai.
SliderTickRate = 1? Definitely not, lol. The sliderticks are used in a lot of places to accent otherwise unaccented beats. for example 00:40:559 onwards in easy, 00:48:635 (5) in hard etc.

Easy

1,05 is very unusual as SV, but I think it's ok. I honestly don't remember why I chose that, lol. But it worked out fine.

00:10:272 (1,2) - copy/paste the previous pattern and flip it. done
00:33:348 (1,2,3) - ^ done
00:48:636 (3,1,2) - line them up. fixed
00:52:097 (1) - move 2cnd sliderpoint to be in the middle of the slider (just move it on the slidertick and you're fine). um, okay
00:56:713 (1) - ^ ^
01:01:328 (1,2) - just my feel, but I prefer both sliders aiming away from each other. okay, changed

somewhat like this

01:05:367 (4) - It looks kinda boring without a shape. Suggest to use a red sliderpoint like you did in previous sliders. increased funkiness level by 50%
01:38:826 (3,4) - I prefer the claps on both sliderstarts, as you did b4. I wasn't sure about this, but I did notice the clock ticking in the background continues here so it probably makes more sense
01:40:413 (1) - use 10% vol. for the whole spinner? okay

Normal

OD +1 okay

00:17:771 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - this irregular movement plays weird for a normal. If you swap the placement of 00:18:636 (1,2) this two notes, you'll get a better flow here. okay
01:23:826 (1,2) - remove NC from (1), add NC on (2) (same goes for the following part) what's your reasoning for this? I'm trying to be consistent with new combos on the big white ticks
01:25:557 (4) - it's quiet hard to realize that this is a slider, since it's mainly the sliderhead that is visible, the rest is covered from the prev. (2)'s hitburst. Consider moving it. redid this part
01:38:826 (4,5,6) - again, I would prefer the claps here. done
01:40:268 (1) - same as in easy. yup

Hard

00:20:078 (2,3,4) - use a slider instead. I'd like to keep it as is, for reasons expressed in a previous mod.
00:25:559 (3) - 2cnd reverse is hidden for a great part of the time because of (2)'s hitburst. Consider moving (2) or shorten (3). shortened 3 and added a new slider
00:43:154 (2,3,4) - use a slider instead. same
00:48:635 (5) - the slidermovement is really awkward and the ball moves back at some point (00:48:996) which is not allowed. Please shape it in a way it still is easy readable. made it not go back on itself
01:00:462 (3,4) - This looks weird in playmode, since the stack causes a "jump" (it's small but noticable). To avoid that, create a customstack on (4)'s position. I'm not sure what you mean by that, sorry, I'm a noob. :3
01:25:845 (6) - remove clap. okay
01:30:172 (4) - remove clap from sliderend. ^
01:30:749 (1,2) - remove NC from (1), add NC on (2). (same for following.) again, don't really want to do this
01:38:826 (3,4) - claps again yup
01:40:268 (1) - you know what. uhuh

That's it, good luck. Thanks very much!

Philippines wrote:

Recheck ~

Easy

1. 00:44:020 (2) - The spacing here is too large for an Easy Difficulty O.O Please reduce it and make the spacing consistent so the flow of this difficulty would be much better. whoops, fixed

Normal

1. 00:23:540 (1,2,3,1) - There's an obvious inconsistency in the spacing here. As you can see (1,2,3) have the correct spacing but the last one isn't. Better fix this up for better flow of gameplay. wut. but the distance snap I'm using in Normal is x1.06, (1) is fine ._.
2. 00:45:174 (6,1) - I think the combo flow would be better if these circles would switch new combos. I think (6) must have the new combo because it starts on a downbeat and the rhythm kind of changed during that part so I guess it would really be better to put the new combo on (6) instead. good point, fixed
3. 01:24:403 (2,3,4) - This pattern is okay but not for a Normal Difficulty. Do not stack (4) because it would be very Hard to read especially for Normal players. You must change this into something that is way readable for better gameplay performance. Already fixed in previous mod
   
   I honestly think that you should fix some of the inconsistent spacing you have throughout your whole difficulty especially on [Easy] and [Normal]. To be honest, they don't look good. No matter how small the difference is in the spacing, they somehow affect the gameplay because it would give beginners a hard time to learn how the spacing works here in osu! I won't point them out because I know you yourself can see those.

Could you give some examples please? x_x I used distance snap virtually the whole time in both easy and normal... and I had an average friend play through my normal difficulty and he had no problems dealing with the spacing. I've already been through normal before and adjusted a lot of spacing, I'm not really sure what you want me to do.

Hard

1. This map is best played I believe with AR 8. Bump your AR +1 and see it for yourself (: It was originally AR8, I lowered due to the low BPM though. But you're right, AR 8 plays a lot better.
2. 00:27:867 (1) - This looks weirder than the previous one o_O I think this kind of spinner fits more in Normal. I would highly suggest you do this kind of spinner instead in Normal than in Hard. Meanwhile, I think you should still follow my previous suggestion on this part. I think it would be better. Lol, this part seems really difficult to map, there's a lot of consecutive quick rhythms that would be difficult for the player to follow. I honestly think the spinner here is okay, but I'm open to suggestions.
3. 00:35:078 (5,1,2) - You still don't get my point here. lol. You should make these sliders a blanket instead XD Try doing something like below. As you can see, the distance of the curves around those sliders are equal which results to a better gameplay not just in performance but also in the visuals. If you still have problems doing this thing. You can call me up again and I'll be glad to help you XD
   SPOILER

   
   kindly give me co-ordinates to that blanket you created pl0x. ;_; I mean, I tried to fix it, but I suck at this sort of thing.
4. 01:06:087 (3) - This slider is kind of off for me and doesn't somehow flow with the music well. Why not do this instead:
   
   SPOILER

   
   I agree completely, fixed.
5. 01:12:000 (1) - This new combo doesn't make much sense to me. D: I prefer you remove it instead to maintain the combo count consistent of the difficulty. Eh? It's identical to 01:09:836 (1), 01:07:674 (1), 01:05:510 (1)

For now, I think I take back what I said about your map being bubble-ready. Why must you break my heart like that. ;_; Consider getting some more mods so your map would be better. XD But don't worry, I won't leave this one out. Fix my suggestions and I'll do another recheck. Okay, thank you very much for rechecking! Very much appreciated

Royston wrote:

Kokatsu wrote:

Hey there, as requested in Koka's Modding Queue!

Normal

01:23:826 (1,2) - remove NC from (1), add NC on (2) (same goes for the following part) what's your reasoning for this? I'm trying to be consistent with new combos on the big white ticks It may be consistent with your white-tick NC's, but since the song has a lot of breaks (parts you didn't map), it's really not that outstanding, that you use NC's every white tick. However, these notes clearly belong to the previous combo, for example: 01:21:518 (1,2,3,4,1) : the last (1) is clearly part of (1,2,3,4), because of the music. Therefore, it should belong to that combo. Same goes for the other NC-things I mentioned.

Hard

01:00:462 (3,4) - This looks weird in playmode, since the stack causes a "jump" (it's small but noticable). To avoid that, create a customstack on (4)'s position. I'm not sure what you mean by that, sorry, I'm a noob. :3 Try out that:

SPOILER

To achieve this, turn off gridsnap, set distancesnap to 0,1 and line them up diagonal downwards as in the picture. Afterwards, set the snap back and reposition the following note(s) to match the new distancechange (because they are now a bit lower/more to the right).

Kokatsu wrote:

Hey there, as requested in Koka's Modding Queue!

Normal

01:23:826 (1,2) - remove NC from (1), add NC on (2) (same goes for the following part) what's your reasoning for this? I'm trying to be consistent with new combos on the big white ticks It may be consistent with your white-tick NC's, but since the song has a lot of breaks (parts you didn't map), it's really not that outstanding, that you use NC's every white tick. However, these notes clearly belong to the previous combo, for example: 01:21:518 (1,2,3,4,1) : the last (1) is clearly part of (1,2,3,4), because of the music. Therefore, it should belong to that combo. Same goes for the other NC-things I mentioned.

Hard

01:00:462 (3,4) - This looks weird in playmode, since the stack causes a "jump" (it's small but noticable). To avoid that, create a customstack on (4)'s position. I'm not sure what you mean by that, sorry, I'm a noob. :3 Try out that:

SPOILER

To achieve this, turn off gridsnap, set distancesnap to 0,1 and line them up diagonal downwards as in the picture. Afterwards, set the snap back and reposition the following note(s) to match the new distancechange (because they are now a bit lower/more to the right).

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

Hi Royston! Hello!, From This Queue.


[Easy]

00:46:328 (2) - Delete clap. Hmm? I have clap here to go with the clock ticking in the music. It sounds okay without it, but I'd rather keep it consistent

01:02:482 (2) - Delete start clap. ^

01:40:413 (1) - spin is 01:40:124 ~ 01:41:711 ?? okay, I moved it to the same spot as the other diffs.

[Normal]
AR -1..? I think it's fine, since there's a lot of 1/2 streams AR5 makes it read better. Also AR4 would make it only 1 more than Easy, and would make the difference between hard too big imo.

00:31:328 (3) - x:256 y:160 But where it is now keeps the gap between notes the same as 00:30:751 (1,2) and looks better imo. :v

00:35:078 (4) - x:256 y:192 ^

00:46:328 (3) - Delete clap. Same reason as in Easy

[Hard]

00:41:135 (5) - NC huh? seems like an odd place for a NC

Wolf wrote:

Woof~
From my Modding Queue. (Thanks for your mod!)
I never managed to beat this game ;w;I am... mildly disappointed in you

General
Good job with hitsounds!
Not much to add here, well done.

Easy
Nothing much I can add here too, you already have improved a lot here from previous mods I can see.
00:23:540 (1,2) - Look fine to me, but could have been improved a bit more in terms of visual. Could look better if you move (2) a grid up to side with (1) Moved it a grid down instead because I'm feeling rebellious (and I feel it fits with my map better)
00:28:444 (1) - I'd totally use a pattern like this here. The reverse arrow on that slider won't fit well imo, it's already a considerable "long" slider itself, so I wouldn't mind to reducing it. Okay, changed it to your pattern. ^^
01:09:692 (3) - Could have made a straight slider on this one. It's a bit off in the grid imo. refined this section

Normal
00:17:771 (1) - Since previous object ends in a timing section, why not new combo here? good point, fixed
00:18:636 (1) - New Combo here won't fit well for the song imo, the music it's still "going" on, I would let the combo flow a bit more then. now that I've changed the other combo, agree
01:05:799 (1) - Could have improved a bit more in terms of shaping. I don't see any issues, but I have no eye for detail. changed it so the shape is the same as the one later on. Let me know if there's still any issues
01:31:326 (1) - Well, this one is really bugging me. I know you placed there so it won't overlap with 01:30:172 (4) - , but I'd totally consider placing the entire slider to fit on the grid. eh, it's not going off-screen in gameplay. I'm cool with it I did adjust it though to make it a bit neater and now it doesn't go out as much.

Hard
00:33:348 (1,2) - Overlap looks bad imo, would be better to align (2) with (1) http://puu.sh/1I3Bp much better, thanks!
01:00:750 (4,5,6,7,1) - Hmm, I think a simple stack could have worked better imo, this is the first time you use something like this on the diff. noo all my minutes of work ;_; well okay then, changed
01:30:749 (1) - Highly suggest a whistle here to keep your patterns. I think the finish fits better since the note in the music is quite strong there. And it's what I have in my other difficulties besides

I can consider this almost perfect to me.
Good luck in ranking!

Edit: You earned my star on this one, good job!

Thanks for the star and mod, very much appreciated.

Crok425 wrote:

Hi. from oddin queue... I'll make your map odd . Sorry for the delay, I forgot. No problem

[General]
00:29:598 to 00:45:174 - Kiai mode would go excelent there, believe me it would look very good. Okay, the majority opinion on Kiai seems to be for it rather than against. So back in it goes.

[Easy]
00:44:020 Put that slider in 00:43:732, it sounds good to me. If you do it, put a circle in 00:45:174... although I'm not sure about this one, you can do whatever you want with it. Actually in the music I'm following the simpler 1/1 pattern you can hear. I actually like your suggestion though
01:03:347 Circle with the clap sound.
01:06:809 Circle.
01:11:135 ^ Yeah, all these suggestions make sense with the music (though not sure about the clap on {01:03:347}), I'm just worried this would make it too difficult for an easy.
Done.

[Normal]
01:03:347 Circle. added
01:40:268 instead of the spinner replace it with 01:39:980 being a slider that ends 01:41:134. huh, interesting suggestion. I sort of like it, but I'd rather finish with a spinner like the other difficulties
Short mod but I'm done.

[Hard]
Why is the Snap Divisor at 1/12? because there are 1/6 and 1/4 rhythms utilized. :3
Put the HP Drain to 5 (maybe). seeing as there's a lot of breaks in the song, I might actually do that, I don't want to frustrate players.
The approach rate put it at 7 instead of 8, it's more balanced with the speed of the sliders and it's not an extreme change from Normal. personally I feel AR8 plays better. I know it's a slightly bigger jump from Normal, but it makes the streams easier to read.
00:40:414 This thing here confuses me a lot and I keep getting a 50 or a 100. Try to do something different. Not sure what the problem is here, seems fine to me. I'm trying to follow the music closely
One last thing. Make the jumps from circles a little bit less long, make them be 1 or 2 grids closer. Seems okay to me. If there's anything specific you think is too difficult though let me know.
The other things are fine so I'm done with this diff.
_________________________

I hope the mod helps. Good luck getting it ranked. Thanks very much! Also I'll keep the suggestions I rejected in mind and may end up changing some stuff anyway (I've done that before).

1. Looks fine to me.

• - 01:05:366 (4) - This slider sounds strange in my opinion, try something like this
  - 01:09:692 (3) - Same ^
  - 01:39:980 (1) - I would like to see if you add a soft-finish here

• - 00:20:944 (3) - Much better if you stack this note with (6) in 00:19:502
  - 00:38:251 (1) - Delete this finish, sounds good only with the whistle
  - 01:39:980 (1) - Same suggestion in Easy

• - 00:35:078 (5,1) - Arcs <3, Nice job here
  - 01:34:788 (5) - The object (3) and (4) have the same spacing and (5) not, maybe make the spacing consistent?
  - 01:39:980 (1) - Same suggestion in Easy

MoodyRPG wrote:

Random mod for you. <3

General

1. Looks fine to me.

Easy

• - 01:05:366 (4) - This slider sounds strange in my opinion, try something like this Aww, in my opinion it fits the offbeat rhythm perfectly. D: listen to it at 50% and see for yourself, notice that in my other difficulties I have a beat at 01:05:799 (where the repeat on this slider is)
  - 01:09:692 (3) - Same ^
  - 01:39:980 (1) - I would like to see if you add a soft-finish here okay!

Normal

• - 00:20:944 (3) - Much better if you stack this note with (6) in 00:19:502 agreed, thanks!
  - 00:38:251 (1) - Delete this finish, sounds good only with the whistle fixed
  - 01:39:980 (1) - Same suggestion in Easy yup

Hard

• - 00:35:078 (5,1) - Arcs <3, Nice job here I <3 arcs
  - 01:34:788 (5) - The object (3) and (4) have the same spacing and (5) not, maybe make the spacing consistent? Hmm? They all have 1.98x to each other?
  - 01:39:980 (1) - Same suggestion in Easy yup

I'm really impressed for your 1st map, keep going Thank you very much.

BounceBabe wrote:

Hi from the Queue! wut I'm not a part of your system!

Easy

00:16:618 (1) - Remove NC done
00:28:444 (1) - ^ done
00:38:251 (1) - ^ done

Normal

00:15:175 (1) - Remove NC done
00:16:618 (1) - ^ done
00:23:540 (1) - ^ done
00:27:867 (1) - ^ done
00:38:251 (1) - ^ done
01:39:980 (1) - ^ done (guess I'll do this in Easy as well)

Hard

00:16:617 (1,2) - Bit confusing, maybe delete (2) and make two 1/8 sliders, one ending here 00:16:906 - other one starting on white next tick and ending at 00:17:195 - , flows better Yeah, a few people have said this was a little confusing. I'd really rather use 1/6 though to go with the music - but I'll see what I can do here to make things flow better
00:39:693 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:27:867 (1) - Remove NC There isn't one here?
01:02:481 (1) - ^ done
01:39:980 (1) - ^ done

Fix the combos too please, good luck!

Kitagami wrote:

Hello! From ShiroiYume and Kitagami's Modding Queue!~

Really, great first map! I couldn't find anything really wrong with it, so this will be just a short mod!

General

You asked modders opinion about spinnerspin.wav, but we can't really listen to it since there's an Inheriting Point with audio 5% right before the spinner. I increased the volume just to check, and personally think it sounds pretty nice! I recommend you to change the volume of 01:40:124 to 40% so that people can clearly listen to that sound. Ahh, that should only be the case in the Easy difficulty. In Normal and Hard, there's a spinner before the Kiai at 30% volume where the sound fits better with the music imo. But I'm glad to hear that you like it!

Easy

1. 00:26:713 (1,2,3) - I think you could get these better aligned by moving 00:27:867 (2) to x:84 y:216 that's way better, thanks
2. 00:45:751 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think you could do a better choice of hitobjects. Now, it looks too monotonous since they are all single notes, in my opinion. You could, for example, turn 00:46:328 (2,3) into a slider. If you don't want to do so, please at least align 00:46:328 (2) with 00:45:751 (1,3) by moving it to the same x position as those oh, that suggestion to turn them into a slider is really good. done and rearranged things a little.
3. 00:50:944 (3,4) - Please check spacing between them, it's a bit small. fixed
4. 01:00:174 (3,4) - Please check spacing between them, it's larger. fixed
5. 01:09:692 (3,1) - ^ fixed
6. 01:33:634 (2) - Move this to x:288 y:320 so you get this kind of symmetry you wanted here. thanks! fixed
   
   

Normal

Please don't use spacing of 1.06x! The hitobjects touch each other and I think 1.1x wouldn't hurt at all, since it won't change much >.< I already changed it from 1.00x to 1.06x so they don't overlap - I know it might look that way in the editor, but that's only because of the way the approach circles are shown around it - in game it's fine.

1. 00:47:482 (1,2) - Small spacing between them I can't move it or it breaks the blanket with (3) :v
2. 00:49:790 (1,2) - ^ fixed
3. 00:48:059 (2,3) - This blanket could be better. They are actually touching! They shouldn't touch each other when making a blanket. As I said before, I know it may look that way in the editor but in game it's okay.

Hard

1. 00:13:733 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hey, how about small jumps here? I think it would look great since this is Hard and all. Maybe with spacing of 1.2x~1.4x between them? sure, okay
2. 00:16:617 (1,2) - Isn't the spacing between them a bit larger? changed this section already after thinking about the previous mod
3. 00:54:116 (5,1) - Small spacing? I think you should use 1.0x, since you didn't change the spacing on 00:51:952 (9,1) whoops, fixed

Okay, that's it!

Great map, I hope it gets ranked soon!

Good luck!~ Thank you! Very helpful mod, thanks

• --Common-- --Warning-- --Strongly recommendation-- --Emphasis--

1. be sure the file's name should be "pause-overplay.jpg", you have lost the "p" on the file's name~.

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:07:676 (2) - move to x:203 y:137 for position is at the same line with the flow after slider(1)'s tail?~
   2. 00:11:426 (2) - same as above.~
   3. 00:28:444 (3) - will be a much better flow with (4) if you make a ctrl+gh here~ like this~(don't forget to adjust the position of (4,5,6,7) for the balance spacing~)
      Click

      
   4. 00:34:790 (2,3) - just put them like a line? looks much neater.~
      Click

      
   5. 00:51:521 (4) - sorry for always nazi position.. but really looks better if you move it to x:400 y:209.
   6. 00:52:097 (1,2) - for some suggestions~ if you followed above, also move slider(1) to x:357 y:304, and then move (2) to x:216 y:224, seems really pretty~. > .<
      Click

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. clear!~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:29:018 (2,3,4) - so croweded and looks wired.. maybe you can try to make them like this?
      Click

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:05:799 (1) - silence the sound of slidertick with at 01:06:087 .
   2. 01:10:413 - same place as above~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:02:914 (1) - add a nc here to avoid people confuse here?~
   2. 01:03:924 (2) - the nc should be set here, instead of 01:03:635 (1) imo.. :3
   3. 01:07:962 (7) - since the hitburst and you have set a finish here, i'd prefer to add the nc on 01:08:250 (3) rather than 01:07:674 (1) ..
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:39:693 (1) - i'd prefer to remove the useless clap on that slider's repeat, and also consistent as 00:16:617 (1)~

Strawberry wrote:

modding time~~
okay, let's see..

[ General]
　

1. be sure the file's name should be "pause-overplay.jpg", you have lost the "p" on the file's name~. Are you sure? o.o It shows up fine on my end when I pause, and if I change it to overplay it doesn't show up at all...

　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:07:676 (2) - move to x:203 y:137 for position is at the same line with the flow after slider(1)'s tail?~ much better, fixed!
   2. 00:11:426 (2) - same as above.~ ^
   3. 00:28:444 (3) - will be a much better flow with (4) if you make a ctrl+gh here~ like this~(don't forget to adjust the position of (4,5,6,7) for the balance spacing~) done
      Click

      
   4. 00:34:790 (2,3) - just put them like a line? looks much neater.~ done
      Click

      
   5. 00:51:521 (4) - sorry for always nazi position.. but really looks better if you move it to x:400 y:209. nah, this sort of thing is really useful to me. changed!
   6. 00:52:097 (1,2) - for some suggestions~ if you followed above, also move slider(1) to x:357 y:304, and then move (2) to x:216 y:224, seems really pretty~. > .< okay, did that but changed (2)'s shape to maintain flow.
      Click

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. clear!~

　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:29:018 (2,3,4) - so croweded and looks wired.. maybe you can try to make them like this? yeah, it looks odd at the moment. Changed to your suggestion
      Click

      
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:05:799 (1) - silence the sound of slidertick with at 01:06:087. Actually, that slider tick goes with a beat in the music, so I'll keep it
   2. 01:10:413 - same place as above~^

　
[ Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:02:914 (1) - add a nc here to avoid people confuse here?~ good idea, done
   2. 01:03:924 (2) - the nc should be set here, instead of 01:03:635 (1) imo.. :3 Nah, it's fine where it is for me
   3. 01:07:962 (7) - since the hitburst and you have set a finish here, i'd prefer to add the nc on 01:08:250 (3) rather than 01:07:674 (1) ..I can see your reasoning, but I would like to have NC on 01:07:674 (1) due to the jump and to keep consistency
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:39:693 (1) - i'd prefer to remove the useless clap on that slider's repeat, and also consistent as 00:16:617 (1)~ it feels a bit empty without it imo. but I added a clap at 00:16:167 for consistency actually on second thought I agree with you.

　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
nice map for a newbie mapper. x3 keep it and good luck with ranking!~ Thanks very much. It's a difficult process but I'm hoping I can see it through

1. 01:52:971 - Since you have not mapped here, you can just delete this red line, it's useless

1. 00:30:751 (1) - This clap sounds bad, I'd suggest remove it
2. 00:36:809 (1) - ^
3. 00:39:694 (3) - Reverse point, remove clap, add whistle to it and slider end sounds better imo
4. 01:02:482 (2) - Remove clap sounds better, soft finish with a clap sounds really bad

Breeze wrote:

Recheck

[General]

1. 01:52:971 - Since you have not mapped here, you can just delete this red line, it's useless okay, removed

[Normal]

1. 00:30:751 (1) - This clap sounds bad, I'd suggest remove it done
2. 00:36:809 (1) - ^ done
3. 00:39:694 (3) - Reverse point, remove clap, add whistle to it and slider end sounds better imo okay
4. 01:02:482 (2) - Remove clap sounds better, soft finish with a clap sounds really bad I'd like to keep clap for the clock ticking the background. But I agree that it sounds bad, so I removed finish instead

Thanks very much!