hi.
by the way, why you didn't post it in nightcore queue?
[General]
good luck :3/
by the way, why you didn't post it in nightcore queue?
[General]
- Please keep kiais consistent in all diffs. Or at least fix unsnapped kiai in Xin's diff.
- Use same preview time for all diffs.
- not sure if your bg is acceptable for young players. >.<
- 00:03:215 - feels a bit off. because this is new part of vocals. I'd try to follow claps and vocals and mixing them. just like this
- 00:04:604 (1) - guess what? same as above. Try to rework on similar sliders and follow vocals closer, please!
- 00:08:424 - i didn't get it. What the point? In Normal you're trying hard to follow claps in hitsounding. but in Easy youre ignoring claps at all! why?
- 00:08:772 (1) - this slider gives you example of BAD flow. i'll explain
and beginners will surely try to follow RED line because it's shorter and closer to (2) - that's why this is bad flow for easiest diff - 00:12:939 (1) - same as 00:03:215 - you're following music but please do not ignore vocals.
- 00:32:388 (6) - did you forget new combo here? It looks a bit too long without NC. so, please, add it!
- 00:57:394 (1) - same probem as at 00:12:939 (1). I really like your patterns but when you ruin great flow with WRONG rhythm i'm feeling so stressed
- 01:00:172 (1,2) - same as 00:08:772 (1). I guess patterns on [Easy] should be easy to understand. beginners will not notice approach circle. Or it'll confuse them!
- 01:02:951 (2) - same as 00:03:215. le vocaaaal1 is playing. > vocal1 ends > vocal 2 starts > BOOOM! Slider 1 ends. it's really awkward to play
- 01:30:735 (1) - spacing breaks suddenly. I think you're trying to make a good flow. But it's awkward and hard to read/play because of sudden spacing change
- 01:38:723 (5) - forgot new combo? It feels different from previous patterns! >.</
- 01:50:184 (6) - why don't you start spinner here (01:51:573 - end)
- 01:55:741 (4) - do not ignore vocals. No matter if you're doing it to make a good flow or to keep symmetrical patterns. Rhythm is more important! same as 00:03:215 lol
- 01:55:741 (4) - why skipped clap? why? it breaks your flow/patterns and plays odd
- 01:58:519 (1) - no! same as 00:03:215 D: I really HATE when you're trying to do it. it sounds off and its's confusing for beginners
- 02:06:854 (1,2,3,1,2,1) - this pattern is copy>pasted and there's same problems as i mentioned in my first four suggestions
- 02:17:274 (3,1) - just NO! Confusing for beginners. Player once clicked this circle and there's slider appears RIGHT AT THE SAME place. THis is CONFUSING for beginners.
- 00:01:826 (1,3) - nazi - your slider shape is bad and you should feel bad :< please fix it :V I'm sure you can do it!
- 00:08:424 (4,5) - ctrl+g them to follow rhythm! (don't forget to fix spacing/flow after this)
- 00:15:370 (1) - overlapped with hitburst! may confuse some players and probably unrankable! I strongly recommend you to move it somewhere else
- 00:46:280 (1) - there's a TONS of similar mistakes! Check you map and fix them all. I explained why in [Easy]. here's the same :<
- 00:51:837 (1) - this new combo is extra! remove it please, to be consistent!
- 00:57:394 (1) - make 1/1 shorter and add reverse. It will help you to avoid extra green lines/custom hitsounds and gives better effect because fits with vocals better
- 01:22:400 (3) - OH YEAH! This is [Normal]! add more 1/2s MORE! WE LOVE THEM! Add more 1/2s to make normal more interesting, seriously.
- 00:12:592 (1) - hey man, you forgot finish here! :3 It will be much better with finish hitsound
- 00:25:442 (6,6) - plays awkward because it looks like you're bored of mapping and decided to fill empty notes with something. Be more creative! For example try to replace it with antijumps o3o/
- 00:34:993 (1,1) - one of these new combos is extra! Fix i please, comboing is an important part of gameplay
- 01:07:118 (6) - replace it with spiiiiiiinner! it will fit the way better
- 01:33:513 (1,2) - don't ignore claps! You're ignoring them and putting reverse somewhere around :V i'd try this
- 01:41:849 (1) - why don't you put slowdown here? o3o or even break! I think break will fit here :3/
- 02:11:022 (5,6,7,8,9) - you can use ctrl+shift+d to make this star properly. - nazi
I like it ♥
good luck :3/