spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. BPM:162.015
   offset: 9364
   -> uh~fix >_<!
2. 我看了下 有些地方的tick 應該加上whistle 所以 做個slidertick.wav 然後加上去會比較好點.

Normal

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  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  [list:6c277]這個diff的hitsound也需要自己再次檢查過

1. 00:17:136 - 我想了解一下 為什麼是這個地方會加上finish? 這地方使用finish說實話給人感覺有些過重了
2. 00:30:470 (4) - & 00:34:914 (5) - 這兩個finish在我看來 下的有點奇怪 下在第1.5段與3.5段的1/1上 感覺就是有些地方也需要強調的卻沒有強調到(00:48:247 - 到00:56:025 - 又是另外一種擺法 變成了第1.5段和4段的1/1加上了finish 讓我覺得有點怪怪的)
   
   
3. 00:36:025 - 到00:43:803 - 怎麼沒有finish了?

改了~

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:36:025 (2,1) - 為什麼轉向後的位置不是對稱的@_@? 啊..沒注意到orz
   
   
2. 00:43:062 (3,4) - 擺法對換一下打起會比較好些 意思是00:43:803 - 是重音 本該有個click 但是你用了slider end就沒有了這個click 導致圖打起來會失去平衡感 嗯!感謝
   
   
3. 00:50:470 (2,3,4,5) - 就我看來 這地方是可以做出點關連性的 例如這4的之間可以做出菱形 讓note與note間有種對應的關係 嗯嗯!

Insane

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  Hitsound
  (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  

1. 這個音效比Normal聽起來好的多 實際上參考Muya的diff可以發現他沒有用上finish, 這首歌其實不用上finish也是可以做的挺好的

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:36:025 (2,3,4,5) - 提醒一下 這種正四角形(沒有任何旋轉的) 看起來死板 也會讓player難打 換另一種擺法了~
   
   
2. 00:53:433 (1) - 這地方為什麼加上了NC?? 沒有會讓人疑惑的地方 也沒有在段落上 因此這個應該拿掉會比較好 fix
   
   
3. 01:02:507 (1) - 拿掉NC 這地方NC是多餘的 fix
   
   
4. 01:03:618 (3,1) - 這兩個NC交換一下 NC下在這會比較適合 fix too
   
   
5. 01:03:988 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 這串的note之間的間距為什麼不一致 而且實話說起來 這地方比較適合做幾何 可是妳這樣做會讓人感覺有點枯燥 再加上01:04:914 (1,2,3) - 在這之中做出個反覆打擊的排列 這容易造成player的confuse. 嗯...我不想改這邊><"
   
   
6. 01:08:988 (4,5) - 打法問題 說實話slider尾不怎麼適合下在重音上 重音是給打擊點的 如果妳這樣放了打擊點就變成了不用打擊了 改了~

對於音效 Easy和Normal實在過於凌亂 這必須修過才行
GL

DaxMasterix wrote:

Hello~ Mod from my Emporium :33
I don't want a ''Merry Christmas'' ... I want a wiiU.. ._.

Normal:

1. 00:17:136 (2) - Why the finish o3o

fix now

Insane:

1. 00:29:729 (4) - Move the last SliderPoint to x:168|y:304 [Grid lvl: 4]
2. 00:38:618 (4) - Move the last SliderPoint 1 grid to the Left [Grid lvl: 4]

OKAY- That song e-e)/ Yeah.. Wanna see this map ranked the 24/25! Good luck! :3

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I goit -10 on the offset, so I want to confirm the offset with a few others. (The BPM sounds okay)

Sekai's Easy:
I really wish you made the combos follow a consistent pattern throughout the map. Since Christmas is approaching though, I can overlook this.

Normal:
00:14:544 (3) - unsnapped note fix
00:28:251 (3) - make symmetric? ok

Muya's Hard: fine

Insane:
00:14:919 (4) - tilt this more so it does not look like it should be symmetrical (or alternatively make this symmetrical)

SPOILER

00:27:140 (3,5) - make symmetrical? okay fix~
01:06:025 (1,3) - ^ fix too~

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There have been some massive improvements since I last saw this map. Just fix the unsnapped note in normal so I can bubble this xD

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 sounds nice on this song

[Easy]
00:28:241 (1) - Remove new combo
00:29:352 (2) - new combo

[Muya]
00:44:906 - Extend the start of the break to here

elinia wrote:

恭喜baka yanlu ><~~~