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Guriri - -ERROR

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Topic Starter
HanzeR
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, August 19, 2014 at 3:46:28 PM

Artist: Guriri
Title: -ERROR
Tags: liiraye lily namine ritsu vocaloid niki
BPM: 200
Filesize: 10203kb
Play Time: 03:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (5.12 stars, 859 notes)
  2. Liiraye's Hard (2.66 stars, 377 notes)
  3. Normal (1.89 stars, 234 notes)
  4. shhh (3.73 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Guriri - -ERROR
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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君に見えてたの
夢のように最後の
言葉も詰まるよ
-「ERROR」

Please redownload 1/18/2014
Mikarunoel131_DELETED
Beautiful song and the voice actor guriri is so great x33
I know Error from an Utauloid and another vocal but Guriri is the best vocal for this song x33

Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
HanzeR
Yes! guriri is amazing, the song is so pretty :) . Thankyou!!
Mikarunoel131_DELETED

HanzeR wrote:

Yes! guriri is amazing, the song is so pretty :) . Thankyou!!
:3 Thank you for making a beatmap to it xD
Tenshichan
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Your mp3 file has a bitrate of 320 kbps, this is unrankable, the maximum is 192 kbps! Remember when you add a new mp3 file the offset CAN change!
[Moe~]

I am a noob in timing, so I don't know if the 3/4 beat and the timing is correct.
  1. 00:02:964 (4) - Slider should end at 00:03:264
  2. 00:28:164 (2) - Straight slider looks off in this pattern, better give it a slight curve
  3. 00:32:514 (2) - I think you should delete this note and let the slider end there instead
  4. 00:32:964 (4) - ^
  5. 00:45:714 (1,2) - Make them not overlap
  6. 00:50:214 - Unneeded green line
  7. 01:02:214 (2) - Delete note and let slider end there
  8. 01:02:664 (4) - ^
  9. 01:10:914 (6,7) - this is better
  10. 01:15:864 (11) - Fix this notes spacing because you end this pattern with a little stream
  11. 01:19:914 (1) - The slider begins exactly when the spinner ends, which is unrankable. To fix, just let the spinner end 1 tick earlier
  12. 01:30:714 (1) - Move this a bit away from (2), just for aesthetic reasons
  13. 01:32:514 (1) - ^
  14. 01:44:964 (6,7) - I think it is better when they make a straight line
  15. 01:46:614 (5) - Perhaps move this note under (4)
  16. 01:51:714 (1) - Should end at 01:52:014
  17. 01:53:814 (8,9) - CTRL + G
  18. 02:02:514 (4) - Delete and let (3) end there
  19. 02:12:114 (6) - Let this slider end at 02:12:414
  20. 02:12:414 (7) - Begin at 02:12:564
  21. 02:21:114 (1) - Unrankable note again
  22. 02:49:164 (8) - Imply it in the stream before else it is confusing
  23. 03:07:014 (5) - Make this slider parallel to (6) and (7)
  24. 03:35:664 (3) - Delete note and let (2) end there
  25. 03:37:914 (4) - Move it a bit up so it is not so close to 3, it looks better this way
Let me know when there are more difficulties, I like this song :3
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Tenshichan wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Your mp3 file has a bitrate of 320 kbps, this is unrankable, the maximum is 192 kbps! Remember when you add a new mp3 file the offset CAN change!
[Moe~]

I am a noob in timing, so I don't know if the 3/4 beat and the timing is correct.
  1. 00:02:964 (4) - Slider should end at 00:03:264
  2. 00:28:164 (2) - Straight slider looks off in this pattern, better give it a slight curve
  3. 00:32:514 (2) - I think you should delete this note and let the slider end there instead
  4. 00:32:964 (4) - ^
  5. 00:45:714 (1,2) - Make them not overlap
  6. 00:50:214 - Unneeded green line
  7. 01:02:214 (2) - Delete note and let slider end there
  8. 01:02:664 (4) - ^
  9. 01:10:914 (6,7) - this is better
  10. 01:15:864 (11) - Fix this notes spacing because you end this pattern with a little stream
  11. 01:19:914 (1) - The slider begins exactly when the spinner ends, which is unrankable. To fix, just let the spinner end 1 tick earlier
  12. 01:30:714 (1) - Move this a bit away from (2), just for aesthetic reasons
  13. 01:32:514 (1) - ^
  14. 01:44:964 (6,7) - I think it is better when they make a straight line
  15. 01:46:614 (5) - Perhaps move this note under (4)
  16. 01:51:714 (1) - Should end at 01:52:014
  17. 01:53:814 (8,9) - CTRL + G
  18. 02:02:514 (4) - Delete and let (3) end there
  19. 02:12:114 (6) - Let this slider end at 02:12:414
  20. 02:12:414 (7) - Begin at 02:12:564
  21. 02:21:114 (1) - Unrankable note again
  22. 02:49:164 (8) - Imply it in the stream before else it is confusing
  23. 03:07:014 (5) - Make this slider parallel to (6) and (7)
  24. 03:35:664 (3) - Delete note and let (2) end there
  25. 03:37:914 (4) - Move it a bit up so it is not so close to 3, it looks better this way
Let me know when there are more difficulties, I like this song :3
Thank you a ton for mod! made most changes except
[*]00:32:514 (2) - I think you should delete this note and let the slider end there instead

these because I like the way they play :o so i will try and keep them for now
GoreObsessed
[Moe~]
00:56:214 (6,7)
i just found this a quite annoying if you change 7 to x 472 y 352 [/quote]
just add one more diff, moar modds and it will be ranked
GoreObsessed
^ just erease that
[Moe~]
00:56:214 (6,7)
i just found this a quite annoying if you change 7 to x 472 y 352

just add one more diff, moar modds and it will be ranked
Topic Starter
HanzeR

GoreObsessed wrote:

[Moe~]
00:56:214 (6,7)
i just found this a quite annoying if you change 7 to x 472 y 352

just add one more diff, moar modds and it will be ranked[/quote]

Thanks for playing it !! I changed that pattern a little bit, im not sure , ill have to screw with it a little more.
Vmx
Made a little fail video. I really liked the song and map was good too, hope you don't mind my hitsounds and bg.
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Vmx wrote:

Made a little fail video. I really liked the song and map was good too, hope you don't mind my hitsounds and bg.
Haha wow very pro :o im glad you were able to enjoy it !
Topic Starter
HanzeR
I'll start working on this map again after christmas mapping and stuff is over. I still really love this song and would love to see it ranked but I cant find the time while im so busy :o
Topic Starter
HanzeR
Revived, going to go for real this time !
Garven
Keep an eye out for hidden repeats such as 00:33:564 (2) -
The BG during the kiai sections is blindingly bright - the light combo colors don't help this either.

Good luck!
Milkshake
uguu
Milkshake
oh god agnes why, i actually did help him
;_;
we just don't have log or so but i did
my little kds
maxmaxxx58
i love this song so much!!!!!!!!
guriri's error is best!!!!!!!!
KoTo
good~
Liiraye
70% done on my hard diff

I want to star this map so badly m8, put it up for pending xD
Negri_sk
small mod :>
22:05 Negri: 00:24:114 (1,2,3,4) -
22:05 Negri: the circles
22:05 Negri: should be under the slider
22:06 Negri: imo
22:06 Negri: because then it would be like the rest of the song
22:06 Negri: or well
22:06 Negri: theres alot of places its like that
22:06 Negri: i think you know what i mean
22:07 HanzeR: do you mean like i should extend the slider
22:08 Negri: nono
22:08 Negri: the note should just be
22:08 Negri: under the slider
22:08 HanzeR: hmm ill play with it
22:08 Negri: there are some more places its like that
22:09 HanzeR: yeah
22:09 Negri: you could change that too
22:09 Negri: but only if you want
22:10 Negri: like it makes it easier to read the map
22:10 Negri: but harder to read the map with hd
22:10 HanzeR: mm yeah
liiraye's mappu
03:18:114 (1,1,1,1) - this is prob a bit hard for a hard
CXu
Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy is this in graveyard :(
Topic Starter
HanzeR

CXu wrote:

Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy is this in graveyard :(

:O
CXu
:O
Vmx
I still like it been so long :3
thelewa


the new diff is also good
Topic Starter
HanzeR

thelewa wrote:



the new diff is also good

>>>><<<< thankyou for playing my map lewa !!
Liiraye
You should add 5 more combos and rank this shit already bro
Topic Starter
HanzeR
moved to pending, only took over a year but i think i finished everything
Garven
Ah dang, I thought this one was dead so I pushed my own forward, haha. Well, at the rate it's not moving, you'll be long ranked by the time mine is done anyway. q: Good luck!
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Garven wrote:

Ah dang, I thought this one was dead so I pushed my own forward, haha. Well, at the rate it's not moving, you'll be long ranked by the time mine is done anyway. q: Good luck!
Oh haha, yeah not quite dead just suffering from a disgusting amount of laziness xD

Thanks for the kind wishes Garven! best of luck to you as well :D
Asphyxia
modding this sometime soon :-----------------)

edit: Went through Insane and Normal quickly with HanzeR IRC

IRC Mod
20:51 Asphyxia: Hey o/
20:52 Asphyxia: Do you mind if I IRC mod with you the map you requested me to mod?
20:53 HanzeR: ohhh hey
20:53 HanzeR: yeah sure!
20:54 Asphyxia: there might be some interrupts but I hope it's kay
20:54 *Asphyxia is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/356651 Guriri - -ERROR [Insane]]
20:58 Asphyxia: Uhh, I played the hard diff too earlier today and I'm quite worried about the spread
20:59 HanzeR: oh ;;
20:59 HanzeR: is it too hard?
20:59 Asphyxia: I mean the hard difficulty itself is cool, but it seems so slow due to the 1.2 SV
20:59 Asphyxia: 1.2 SV to 1.8 is quite huge
21:00 HanzeR: ahhh yeah ic
21:00 Asphyxia: and to think of it, your insane is quite hard while Liiraye's Hard seemed more like a normal in some parts
21:00 Asphyxia: so if I were you, I'd add a bit harder difficulty between those two but
21:00 Asphyxia: you might wanna bet more opinions
21:01 Asphyxia: get*
21:01 HanzeR: yeah ill talk to liiraye about it
21:01 HanzeR: i think he wanted to cahnge a lot of it anyways
21:01 Asphyxia: cool!
21:02 Asphyxia: 00:02:514 (1,2,3,4) - So, this played quite funny, I had to make an awkward angle with my cursor and it wasn't that enjoyable so
21:02 Asphyxia: 00:02:664 (2,3) - Try to CTRL + G these two
21:02 Asphyxia: I tested it that way and it felt much better to play
21:02 Asphyxia: you should try it :3
21:03 HanzeR: oo yeah ok
21:03 Asphyxia: 00:05:214 (5,6) - Blanket is incorrect
21:04 HanzeR: fixxt
21:05 Asphyxia: 00:12:864 (6,1) - I think 00:13:314 (1) - could cover a bit more of 00:12:864 (6) - curve, like this maybe? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1261136
21:06 HanzeR: yeaaaaaa
21:06 HanzeR: looks cool ok
21:07 Asphyxia: 00:17:364 (2) - I wasn't actually against this slider at all, but 00:17:289 - starts a cool sound where you could put notes instead, so a rhythm like this could to very well with it.
21:07 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/6prVn.jpg
21:09 HanzeR: yeah i hear it
21:09 Asphyxia: 00:22:239 (10,1) - Ehh, well, this is just my opinion so I don't recommend you to change this kind things right away, but it was not that cool to play for me atleast >:
21:09 HanzeR: i put a kick slider there instead of the stream i think
21:09 HanzeR: so i can keep the blanket
21:10 HanzeR: ><><
21:10 HanzeR: theres quite a lot of them like that i think hehe
21:10 Asphyxia: the sudden spacing change is quite big but
21:10 Asphyxia: if you like it, then yeah it's cool
21:10 Asphyxia: get more opinions on it if you wanna o3o
21:11 HanzeR: haha yeah ill play with them a bit
21:12 Asphyxia: 00:48:864 (1) - I think you could start this 1/4 earlier because 00:48:939 - the ''iiiiii'' or whatever it is starts there
21:13 Asphyxia: dunno
21:13 HanzeR: uuuu i didnt even notice that lol
21:13 HanzeR: okk
21:14 Asphyxia: 01:03:414 (7) - This slider was a big surprise to me at first, you could move it a bit to the left / right so people can detect it much better
21:15 Asphyxia: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1261156
21:15 Asphyxia: like that
21:15 Asphyxia: or whatever you prefer
21:15 HanzeR: ok
21:17 Asphyxia: 01:30:714 (5) - I think you could add a nc here
21:17 Asphyxia: 01:36:114 (1,2) - Blanket
21:17 HanzeR: sure
21:19 Asphyxia: 02:01:314 (6) - Uhh, did you miss a NC here? I felt like you did
21:19 HanzeR: oops ><
21:20 Asphyxia: 02:08:514 (6) - I think the NC should starts here instead of 02:08:964 (1) -
21:21 HanzeR: yeah
21:22 Asphyxia: 02:30:114 (1) - I liked how you gradually decreased the spacing
21:22 Asphyxia: nice touch
21:23 HanzeR: haha 8)
21:23 HanzeR: yeah thats one of the parts i havent touched since 2012 hehe
21:24 Asphyxia: other than that it was nice
21:25 HanzeR: thankyou <3
21:25 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/6pt5U.png
21:25 Asphyxia: dunno about this though
21:26 HanzeR: theres something wrong with the way it detects animated storyboard objects
21:26 HanzeR: no idea what thats about lol
21:27 Asphyxia: do you want me to mod your normal diff or do you think you'll be fine with that?
21:27 HanzeR: you dont have to haha
21:27 HanzeR: youve already helped a ton <3
21:27 Asphyxia: well
21:27 Asphyxia: lemme help you a bit more
21:27 Asphyxia: so you dont call me too lazy
21:28 HanzeR: xxxxD
21:28 Asphyxia: 00:02:514 (1,2) - 0.08 DS error
21:28 *Asphyxia is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252693 Guriri - -ERROR [Normal]]
21:28 Asphyxia: 00:11:514 (1,2) - 0.16 ds error
21:29 Asphyxia: Because this seems to be your easiest difficulty, try to avoid stacks like 00:53:814 (3) - this
21:29 Asphyxia: it can be rather confusing to newbies
21:30 Asphyxia: 00:56:214 (1,2) - Dat blanket
21:30 HanzeR: okk
21:30 HanzeR: ><
21:30 Asphyxia: 01:01:914 (2,3) - 0.04 ds error such nazi fix plz
21:30 Asphyxia: 01:06:414 (1,2) - ds error again
21:30 HanzeR: orzzz the symettryyy hahah
21:31 HanzeR: okk
21:31 Asphyxia: pls distance over symmtery
21:31 Asphyxia: ok
21:31 Asphyxia: plllllllz
21:31 HanzeR: yehhhh ><
21:31 Asphyxia: 01:12:414 (2,1) - ^
21:32 Asphyxia: 01:37:014 (2,1) - It would be cool to have a correct parallel between these two
21:32 Asphyxia: 01:47:814 (2,1) - 0.1 ds error, this might be not that bad though but you might wanna take a look at it
21:33 Asphyxia: 01:53:214 (2,1) - These two could be parallel also
21:33 HanzeR: yeee fixed them
21:34 Asphyxia: 02:52:614 (3) - Stack :D
21:34 Asphyxia: 02:55:014 (1,2) - Blankettos
21:34 Asphyxia: 03:08:814 (3,1) - These could be parallel also.
21:35 Asphyxia: 03:29:214 (3) - Dat ds error
21:35 HanzeR: fixxxt
21:35 Asphyxia: 03:33:114 (2,3) - This could be a parallel also if you want to :P
21:36 Asphyxia: Other than that, the diffs were pretty good (I just went through the normal quickly) but you really should care about the distance more in the easiest difficulty though
21:36 HanzeR: hehe fixt
21:37 Asphyxia: yeah it might be cool to have some symmetry there and there, and few DS errors are okay but still >:
21:37 HanzeR: yeah ill keep that in mind ><
21:37 HanzeR: wooo
21:37 HanzeR: thank you so much haha <3333
21:37 Asphyxia: and there was some blankets that could be better
21:37 Asphyxia: hard + Insane but
21:38 Asphyxia: I mean normal****

So yeah, have a star also. I liked your style a lot, cool blankets (although some of them could be more polished LOL).

GL ~ 8-)
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