Hi:3 from My queue.
[General]
●ok
[Normal]
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it is unnecessary >.<
●HPDrain Rate-1. it's too hard ><
●00:01:845 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think looks better
●00:02:462 - mm... move to this line at here? 00:02:366 -
●00:05:497 - put on dwonbeat ? 00:06:018 -
●00:10:975 (2) - 1 grid up(tiny). Because you should make the spacing equal here00:10:192 (1,2,3) -
●00:12:279 (4) - hmm...change in shape clean ?
●00:15:410 (2) - add slider's reverse ? I think it needs sound here.00:15:931 -
●00:23:497 (2) - remove note? overmap here >_<
●00:35:236 (1,1) - I still think the following notes appear too early considering the level of this difficulty.and you should move to center this note of next spinner
●00:51:931 (4) - I want a sound here.00:52:453 - and add finish or whistle .so remove one slider , and add some slider and note :3
●00:57:149 (1) - add whistle at the end instead of clap? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●01:06:279 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern?
●01:08:627 (3) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing.
●01:10:714 (1) - remove clap from the head .put applause with constant rhythm >_<
●01:12:801 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ?
●01:27:671 (2) - remove note? overmap here
●01:34:714 (5,1,2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:236 (1) - try this ?
●01:56:627 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●02:49:062 (2) - move to slider start to here.02:49:323 -
●03:01:062 - add note here ?
●03:01:323 - hmm it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●03:20:105 (3,4) - maybe confusing many beginners.. try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/478994
●03:25:323 (5) - move to x:364 y:168 it's looks better and spacing equal
●03:54:540 (7) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? Aim for the start of 03:55:584 (1) -
●03:56:366 (2) - remove note? overmap here
●04:07:062 (5) - hmm... make more spacing..?
●04:21:671 (3) - 1 grid dwon(tiny).
[Hard]
●00:06:018 - start to break at here ? same as Normal diff
●00:18:018 (8) - 1 grid right.
●01:20:627 (6) - move to x:256 y:320 ?
●01:30:540 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make more the spacing equal here.it looks better :3
●01:41:236 (2) - add new combo ? like this your pattern at here.03:10:975 (1,2,3) -
●02:03:931 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G ? you should turn to the left a little more, the flow is good :3
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479006
●02:21:671 - I think dont need kiai here ._.
●02:59:366 (2) - 1 grid up. make a straight line here
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479011
●03:03:931 - add note ? I think need clap sound here !
●03:50:366 (6) - add new combo ?
●04:01:845 (1) - ctrl+G ?
nice diff :3
good luck ~
[General]
●ok
[Normal]
●
it is unnecessary >.<
●HPDrain Rate-1. it's too hard ><
●00:01:845 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think looks better
●00:02:462 - mm... move to this line at here? 00:02:366 -
●00:05:497 - put on dwonbeat ? 00:06:018 -
●00:10:975 (2) - 1 grid up(tiny). Because you should make the spacing equal here00:10:192 (1,2,3) -
●00:12:279 (4) - hmm...change in shape clean ?
●00:15:410 (2) - add slider's reverse ? I think it needs sound here.00:15:931 -
●00:23:497 (2) - remove note? overmap here >_<
●00:35:236 (1,1) - I still think the following notes appear too early considering the level of this difficulty.and you should move to center this note of next spinner
●00:51:931 (4) - I want a sound here.00:52:453 - and add finish or whistle .so remove one slider , and add some slider and note :3
●00:57:149 (1) - add whistle at the end instead of clap? it needs stronger sound imo o.o
●01:06:279 (5,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern?
●01:08:627 (3) - remove clap from the head since it follows nothing.
●01:10:714 (1) - remove clap from the head .put applause with constant rhythm >_<
●01:12:801 (3) - add clap on the slider's head ?
●01:27:671 (2) - remove note? overmap here
●01:34:714 (5,1,2) - Make the spacing equal here
●01:41:236 (1) - try this ?
●01:56:627 (1) - add finish on the slider's head ?
●02:49:062 (2) - move to slider start to here.02:49:323 -
●03:01:062 - add note here ?
●03:01:323 - hmm it doesn't follow the music well. I hope you remove this and try making another pattern.
●03:20:105 (3,4) - maybe confusing many beginners.. try this ?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/478994
●03:25:323 (5) - move to x:364 y:168 it's looks better and spacing equal
●03:54:540 (7) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? Aim for the start of 03:55:584 (1) -
●03:56:366 (2) - remove note? overmap here
●04:07:062 (5) - hmm... make more spacing..?
●04:21:671 (3) - 1 grid dwon(tiny).
[Hard]
●00:06:018 - start to break at here ? same as Normal diff
●00:18:018 (8) - 1 grid right.
●01:20:627 (6) - move to x:256 y:320 ?
●01:30:540 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make more the spacing equal here.it looks better :3
●01:41:236 (2) - add new combo ? like this your pattern at here.03:10:975 (1,2,3) -
●02:03:931 (1,2,3) - ctrl+G ? you should turn to the left a little more, the flow is good :3
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479006
●02:21:671 - I think dont need kiai here ._.
●02:59:366 (2) - 1 grid up. make a straight line here
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/479011
●03:03:931 - add note ? I think need clap sound here !
●03:50:366 (6) - add new combo ?
●04:01:845 (1) - ctrl+G ?
nice diff :3
good luck ~