h-728 wrote:

Hi (hey )
[General]

1. The image of BG doesn't match with the melody of this song at all. This is a lonely/sentimental song and you should chose the image that we can feel like that. I think this is an important element of map, but finally this is up to you. (its a valid argument, i'll change bg if i find something good)

[Hard]

• 00:18:330 - From here, you turn up the volume to 50%, but it's a bit noisy for me. Generally, in like this part, the most strong sound comes on 00:17:965 and along starting vocal, it becomes a bit quiet. Use 30 or 35% here. It will become more natural imo. ( x )
  00:54:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm, there is a border clearly in the song between 5 and 6, so this placement and pattern of NC feel something strange.
  I think you should distinguish 1~5 and 6~8 more clearly. (fixed)
  01:00:404 (1,2) - This rhythm is not so bad, but I think it will be more kind if you add a circle at 01:00:770.(maybe, i'll use this sugestion if enough people complain)

Overall, there is no problem with ranking, but too passable.
You know, this map has so low BPM, so you can make a jump in 1/4 rhythm. Consider to add 1/4 rhythm jumps especially in Kiai Time. ( hmm. i dont want it to be difficult at all, just like this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14418 )

[Normal]

• 00:32:233 (3,1) - A bit long this distance is. Make them more closer.(i think i know what you mean, but i prefer to keep the ds as much as possible)

[Easy]

• 01:03:696 (1) - This note is actually rankable, but I don't recommend you to put a note at the corner of the screen in these diff since approach circle is out of screen and newbie player may miss the timing of this note. Consider to move this note to other place.(hm, thats a valid argument but i seriously need this note where it currentlly is, or i would need to change the previous notes a lot)

niceplayer wrote:

[Normal]
01:19:428 (3) - In fact , vocal is in 3/4. But I just suggest to remove this. (x i think this note is important)

[Hard]
00:43:026 (5,6) - Why changed? As a result ,there two beat be in 5. Make it same as 1,2,3,4,and make the combo tag to 8. (i dont get it ;_;)
01:00:952 (2) - 1/4 beat and it start from the second. There's a drum sound, but slider start from here can be a miss.(i think its easy to read for the hardest diff in the mapset)

DakeDekaane wrote:

/o/ Mod time~ \o\

[General]
Nice mapset, All these are only suggestions about hitsounds and aesthetics.

[Easy]
00:51:257 (1) - This normal finish doesn't fit very well, keep using soft hitsounds (i like the normal finish here)
01:00:770 (1) - Remove finish here (fixed)

[Normal]
00:51:440 (1) - Soft Finish. (x)
00:29:306 (1,1,2) - Maybe put it like this. (yes)

00:29:306 (1) - x:32 y:196
00:30:038 (1) - x:88 y:136
00:31:135 (2) - Actual position.

01:00:404 (1,2) - If you're looking for a better blanket here (i prefer my blanket ^^)

01:00:404 (1) - x:384 y:96; x:392 y:140; x:432,y:156
01:01:501 (2) - x:368 y:16; x:324 y:24; x:308 y:68
01:19:428 (3) - Unstack this, and put a note in 01:19:611 (unstack, but i'll keep it where it is in the timeline)

[Panic!]
Nothing found

That's all, good luck c:

BeatofIke wrote:

As requested In-Game. Here is your mod!

[General]
-> It would be better if you add the video for this map. If you have troble fing one, I can find one for you. (Yes, I can edit videos and mp3's) ( thank you, but the video itself is just staff credits with black background, no point in adding it ^^ )

[Easy]
00:59:306 (2) - Remove this finish at the head of the slider. You don't hear any finish here. (fixed)
01:16:867 (4,1) - Add a new combo here and remove the combo at 01:18:330. (fixed)

[Normal]
00:26:745 (3,1,2) - It will be nice if this pattern was symmetical. Somethind Like this: (maybe, i'll decide asap)

SPOILER

[Panic!]
-> Pretty good! ( )

Good Luck with you map. Your map should get a bubble. (thank you :'))

thank you a lot for accepting my request

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket ( )

[General]
the soft-hitclap sounds a bit quiet to me, hope you can make the file's volume up a bit (i checked with audacity 1.3 and its as so loud as possible, if i try to make it louder it will lose quality)

[skin]
add custom pause-back, pause-continue and pause-retry please, or remove pause-overlay and fail-background (i thought they were not important, i'm removing the pause and fail this time)

[Easy]
HD-1 OD-1 AR+1, or the setting is really odd imo (i gess i'll keep my settings)

[Normal]
00:46:501 (4,1,2,3) - try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen (i can't move 4 because i would need to move all notes before it too, but moved 1,2,3 up a bit)

call me back then (okay \o/ )

pimpG wrote:

btw how did i get this ticket, i dont remember it

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

pimpG wrote:

btw how did i get this ticket, i dont remember it

You should say thanks to azu-nyan14 because he/she posted your map in wcx's queue (/p/1931867) :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

fine now
bubbled

pimpG wrote:

why 0_o

BeatofIke wrote:

Ah Sweet!

Gabe wrote:

I told you! Congratulation on getting a bubble!

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
OD-1 and HP-1 for consistency with stats in other diffs

Timing
offset 761 (-9 from yours)

that's all orz

1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line.
2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.

1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion.
2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5%

1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle
2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff
3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1)
4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy

1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above
2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo
3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound

Chewin wrote:

~General~

1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line. (fixed)
2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.(i like it)

~Easy~

1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion. (x)
2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5% (fixed)

~Normal~

1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle (i think it fits better as stack : ()
2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff (x)
3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1) (fixed)
4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy(fixed)

~Panic!~

1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above (x)
2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo (fixed ??)
3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound (fixed)

That's it (thank you a lot for mod )

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Gratz owo/

Faust wrote:

FMP \:D/

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG

pimpG wrote:

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG

brigadao
mas voce é a heroina aki <3

Gabe wrote:

Omg, congratulation! You got it ranked this year!

Aoriki wrote:

A FMP map!

Congratz on getting it ranked.