1. Athena's Easy (0.9 stars, 111 notes)
2. Insane (5 stars, 526 notes)
3. jogfi2002's Hard (4.92 stars, 400 notes)
4. Normal (4.08 stars, 264 notes)
5. Pokie (5 stars, 496 notes)

Athena Tennos wrote:

Athena's Easy

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: luminous.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1037
PreviewTime: 59564
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Luminous
TitleUnicode:Luminous
Artist:Claris
ArtistUnicode:Claris
Creator:Mei_coN
Version:Athena's Easy
Source:Puella Magi Madoka Magica the Movie
Tags:mahou shoujo
BeatmapID:182299
BeatmapSetID:60911

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg1.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,88204,97662
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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1. Untick countdown in all diff.
2. Easy is different offset of red line. must change -767ms
3. offset should be changed 2000ms. Easy do not have enough time.
4. many inherited timing section is not snap. it is rankable, but XAT and some modder may say "bad"

1. 00:01:992 (2) - add whistle on start.
   00:00:605 (1) had whistle. but (2) did not have it, and seemed it was mistake.
2. 00:06:848 (2,1,2) - seemed cramped placement.
   
   
   give room is better.
3. 00:13:090 (1) - remove finish.
   This is against to the volume.
4. 01:08:582 (1,2) - suggestion of rhythm
   
   01:08:582 (1) - 3/2 slider
   01:09:449 (2) - 1/1 slider
   01:10:142 (3) - 3/2 slider
   here is able to highlight.
5. 01:14:131 (1,2,1) - this flow is bad.....
   
   
   try this.
6. 02:31:819 (1,2) - same as 01:08:582 (1,2).

1. 00:02:787 (1) - why start here? this does not follow song.
   should change 00:02:874.
2. 00:11:718 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:13:105 (1) - same as 00:13:090 (1) in Easy
4. 00:20:042 (6) - add NC
   here's combo is little long.
5. 00:21:429 (1,2,3,4,1) - suggestion of flow.
   
   
6. 00:42:238 (3,4) - dont like this flow.
   
   
   try this
7. 00:47:787 (4,3) - hit burst hide slider path. I think this is not good.
   
   
   try this
8. 00:49:695 (4) - remove reverse.
   and add 1/1 slider to 00:50:215 -
9. 00:52:469 (4) - ^
10. 02:17:961 (3,1,2) - here overlap with hitburst.
    02:19:348 (1,2,3,4) move few grid up is better.

1. 00:07:209 (3,1,2,3) - here overlap with stack
   
   
   00:07:383 (1,2,3) - you should move that is to not stack.
2. 00:23:510 - add note
   00:23:337 (6) follow music. so here have note is better
3. 00:30:273 (5,6) - change 1/2 slider.
   1/2 slider will be follow song than circle.
4. 00:39:724 - add note
   be consistent with 00:23:510.
5. 00:42:585 - ^
6. 00:46:920 (4,5,6,7) - suggestion of flow.
   
   
7. 00:59:579 (1) - this slider fit 1/4. 1/3 is little slow
8. 01:00:967 (3,4,5,6) - appearance is bad.
   
   
   try this
9. 01:10:678 (1) - same as 00:59:579 (1).
10. 01:26:631 (1) - add finish
11. 01:48:654 (1,2) - change to one slider.
    it will follow song than now.
12. 01:54:204 (6,7) - change the order of rhythm.
    will follow vocal.
13. 01:56:978 (7,8) - ^
14. 02:22:816 (1) - same as 00:59:579 (1).
15. 02:33:915 (1) - ^

1. many note is not snapped. you must check about it by AIMod
2. 00:08:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is......dirty.......
   try poligon circle (Shift + Ctrl + D) and use it.
   
   
3. 00:24:201 (3,4) - suggestion of flow
   
   
4. 01:46:744 (3) - suggestion of placement
   
   

1. fine!

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]

1. Untick countdown in all diff.
2. Easy is different offset of red line. must change -767ms
3. offset should be changed 2000ms. Easy do not have enough time.
4. many inherited timing section is not snap. it is rankable, but XAT and some modder may say "bad"

[Easy]

1. 00:01:992 (2) - add whistle on start.
   00:00:605 (1) had whistle. but (2) did not have it, and seemed it was mistake.
2. 00:06:848 (2,1,2) - seemed cramped placement.
   
   
   give room is better.
3. 00:13:090 (1) - remove finish.
   This is against to the volume.
4. 01:08:582 (1,2) - suggestion of rhythm
   
   01:08:582 (1) - 3/2 slider
   01:09:449 (2) - 1/1 slider
   01:10:142 (3) - 3/2 slider
   here is able to highlight.
5. 01:14:131 (1,2,1) - this flow is bad.....
   
   
   try this.
6. 02:31:819 (1,2) - same as 01:08:582 (1,2).

[Normal]

1. 00:02:787 (1) - why start here? this does not follow song.
   should change 00:02:874.
2. 00:11:718 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:13:105 (1) - same as 00:13:090 (1) in Easy
4. 00:20:042 (6) - add NC
   here's combo is little long.
5. 00:21:429 (1,2,3,4,1) - suggestion of flow.
   
   
6. 00:42:238 (3,4) - dont like this flow.
   
   
   try this
7. 00:47:787 (4,3) - hit burst hide slider path. I think this is not good.
   
   
   try this
8. 00:49:695 (4) - remove reverse.
   and add 1/1 slider to 00:50:215 -
9. 00:52:469 (4) - ^
10. 02:17:961 (3,1,2) - here overlap with hitburst.
    02:19:348 (1,2,3,4) move few grid up is better.

[jogfi2002's Hard]

1. 00:07:209 (3,1,2,3) - here overlap with stack
   
   
   00:07:383 (1,2,3) - you should move that is to not stack.
2. 00:23:510 - add note
   00:23:337 (6) follow music. so here have note is better
3. 00:30:273 (5,6) - change 1/2 slider.
   1/2 slider will be follow song than circle.
4. 00:39:724 - add note
   be consistent with 00:23:510.
5. 00:42:585 - ^
6. 00:46:920 (4,5,6,7) - suggestion of flow.
   
   
7. 00:59:579 (1) - this slider fit 1/4. 1/3 is little slow
8. 01:00:967 (3,4,5,6) - appearance is bad.
   
   
   try this
9. 01:10:678 (1) - same as 00:59:579 (1).
10. 01:26:631 (1) - add finish
11. 01:48:654 (1,2) - change to one slider.
    it will follow song than now.
12. 01:54:204 (6,7) - change the order of rhythm.
    will follow vocal.
13. 01:56:978 (7,8) - ^
14. 02:22:816 (1) - same as 00:59:579 (1).
15. 02:33:915 (1) - ^

This is simple mod. this diff need more mod....orz

[Insane]

1. many note is not snapped. you must check about it by AIMod
2. 00:08:940 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this is......dirty.......
   try poligon circle (Shift + Ctrl + D) and use it.
   
   
3. 00:24:201 (3,4) - suggestion of flow
   
   
4. 01:46:744 (3) - suggestion of placement
   
   

[Pokie]

1. fine!

gl

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from Mei_coN

[General]
01:47:180 - 这里好像有一个噪音...? 歌曲本来就有还是怎样...

[Athena's Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.500000005960464 0 0????
unsnapped timing line and note, check AiMod please ww

SPOILER

谱面的话应该是没问题ww不过总觉得缺少点什么...


[Normal]
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999 0 0????
也是unsnap..
有点单一...不过normal的话嘛啊...也没办法呢...


[Kagamisama's Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:39:637 ~ 00:39:984 - 突然没有note感觉怪怪的...
00:42:412 ~ 00:42:759 - ^
00:42:759 - add a note here and remove 00:55:938 (1) like this ww

SPOILER

00:59:579 (1) - 四分拍在这里表现好像不是很好...换成没有折回的慢速slider试试看
01:10:678 (1) - 这里虽然和上面一样，但是感觉稍微好一点，不过还是有点怪..
副歌部分的clap音效不是很喜欢...
01:22:296 (1) - start here 01:22:469
01:26:631 (1) - start here 01:26:371
02:45:533 (1) - 也是调整一下起始点
02:47:441 (1,2,3) - 好吵...



[Insane]
-Beatmap-
00:02:701 (1) - start here 00:02:874
00:08:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 这里可以做一个音量从小到大渐变的效果ww
00:56:978 (1) - 去掉折返吧..
01:25:244 (1) - ❤


[Pokie]
Nice~


[Overall]
_(:3」∠)_其实不会mod了...
快rank~☆

y u c a wrote:

pokie

00:09:984 (4) - clap (最初and最後too!)
00:55:244 (2) - use finish instead of whistle
01:04:088 (4) - try this?

SPOILER

insane

00:05:996 (6) - clap
00:07:036 (3) - ^(center of slider)
00:08:597 (3) - ^(end of slider)
00:32:527 (3) - try this?

SPOILER

01:19:695 (1) - finish
02:42:932 (1) - finish

hard

00:35:302 (1) - should end at 00:37:036
00:38:076 (3) - finish
01:55:071 (1) ~ why didnt you use slow slider here? you used earlier part...
02:01:313 (3) - finish

normal

00:20:042 (1) - touch hp bar?
00:49:175 (3) - missed finish
00:57:498 (2) - you should map after this xD
02:12:412 (2) - missed finish
02:20:735 (4) - here too go map~

easy

01:47:441 (1) - try this?

SPOILER

加油~

y u c a wrote:

pokie

00:09:984 (4) - clap (最初and最後too!) 　(5)のclap外し、(4)に追加しました
00:55:244 (2) - use finish instead of whistle　いい提案
01:04:088 (4) - try this?　うーん、ここの優先度はリズム＞ヴォーカルですから(´･ω･`) ごめんね

SPOILER

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

easy/normal:
fine 233
话说normal有些地方可以做的对称点

hard:
00:12:585 (2,3) - what is this间距呢
00:31:140 (8) - 感觉是人
变速太坑..
00:44:320 (3) - 拉长1/2拍..
02:19:175 (1,2) - spacing
02:47:441 (1,2,3,1) - clap别连着放啊233
新人吧233 滑条比较缺乏美感啊, 用00:51:256 (1,2,3) - 这种形状就好点了

insane:
00:00:620 (1,1,1,1,1) - 同pokie http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/515506
00:52:123 (4) - 这里方块o.o http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/515529
02:37:903 (6) - 叠到7上面..
感觉最后一个kiai段整体间距应该增加一些.. 有点不给力

pokie:
00:00:620 (1,1,1,1,1) - i think it's better to arrange the colors like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/515506 to match the costumes
01:08:943 (2) - 这里的3/4打着有点别扭, 建议1/2比较好, 嗯, 大约 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/515509
01:44:666 (1) - 不好打啊233 会看成1/2
02:01:140 (1,2,3) - 有点远;w;

Pokie wrote:

All fixed
http://puu.sh/1xuNw

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi

[General]

1. Untick countdown in all diff.
2. Easy is different offset of red line. must change -767ms
3. offset should be changed 2000ms. Easy do not have enough time.
4. many inherited timing section is not snap. it is rankable, but XAT and some modder may say "bad"

[jogfi2002's Hard]

1. 00:07:209 (3,1,2,3) - here overlap with stack
   
   
   00:07:383 (1,2,3) - you should move that is to not stack. Sorry I just can't catch your meaning...Aren't they stacked well?
2. 00:23:510 - add note But the music is blank here...
   00:23:337 (6) follow music. so here have note is better Actually it has note here...
3. 00:30:273 (5,6) - change 1/2 slider. Fixed.
   1/2 slider will be follow song than circle.
4. 00:39:724 - add note Fixed.
   be consistent with 00:23:510.
5. 00:42:585 - ^ Fixed.
6. 00:46:920 (4,5,6,7) - suggestion of flow. Fixed.
   
   
7. 00:59:579 (1) - this slider fit 1/4. 1/3 is little slow I tried 1/4 and think 1/3 is better...
8. 01:00:967 (3,4,5,6) - appearance is bad. Fix it later...
   
   
   try this
9. 01:10:678 (1) - same as 00:59:579 (1). ^
10. 01:26:631 (1) - add finish Fixed.
11. 01:48:654 (1,2) - change to one slider. Fixed.
    it will follow song than now.
12. 01:54:204 (6,7) - change the order of rhythm.will follow vocal. Fixed.
13. 01:56:978 (7,8) - ^ Fixed.
14. 02:22:816 (1) - same as 00:59:579 (1). ^
15. 02:33:915 (1) - ^

^

This is simple mod. this diff need more mod....orz

kyuten wrote:

Hi~Request from Mei_coN

[General]
01:47:180 - 这里好像有一个噪音...? 歌曲本来就有还是怎样...

[Kagamisama's Hard]
-Beatmap-
00:39:637 ~ 00:39:984 - 突然没有note感觉怪怪的... 加了~
00:42:412 ~ 00:42:759 - ^ 加了~
00:42:759 - add a note here and remove 00:55:938 (1) like this ww 删了后面的，不过前面的因为加了一个NOTE就不再加了~

SPOILER

00:59:579 (1) - 四分拍在这里表现好像不是很好...换成没有折回的慢速slider试试看 其实是1/3，但不知道有没有更好的解决办法……
01:10:678 (1) - 这里虽然和上面一样，但是感觉稍微好一点，不过还是有点怪..
副歌部分的clap音效不是很喜欢... Pokie也说她不喜欢;w;
01:22:296 (1) - start here 01:22:469 改了~
01:26:631 (1) - start here 01:26:371 改了~
02:45:533 (1) - 也是调整一下起始点 改了~
02:47:441 (1,2,3) - 好吵... 减少了CLAP，音效还要大厦修嗯……


[Overall]
_(:3」∠)_其实不会mod了...
快rank~☆

y u c a wrote:

pokie

hard

00:35:302 (1) - should end at 00:37:036 fixed.
00:38:076 (3) - finish fixed.
01:55:071 (1) ~ why didnt you use slow slider here? you used earlier part... Now no slow down slider anymore~
02:01:313 (3) - finish fixed.


加油~

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hard:
00:12:585 (2,3) - what is this间距呢 为了好看所以……不按间距也就这一处orz
00:31:140 (8) - 感觉是人 你们都吐槽这个……于是改掉好了
变速太坑..
00:44:320 (3) - 拉长1/2拍.. fixed.
02:19:175 (1,2) - spacing fixed.
02:47:441 (1,2,3,1) - clap别连着放啊233 音效之后再re一下好了……
新人吧233 滑条比较缺乏美感啊, 用00:51:256 (1,2,3) - 这种形状就好点了 确实是新人orz还请多多指教

• Letterbox during breaks 貌似要去掉

• 01:49:001、01:49:175、01:49:348、01:49:695、01:49:868、01:50:042 无用的绿线
  02:00:273、02:00:446 无用的绿线
  绿线和Normal一样不要紧么？
  其他的也没找到什么问题

• 没找到什么问题

• 00:04:782 (1) - 开头finish
  00:09:637 (1,2,3) - 这么排列不是太好看
  试试这样
  SPOILER

  
  00:43:279 (1) - 没有必要NC
  00:59:579 (1) - 建议用1/4，虽然1/3也可以，但是1/4能使节奏更具紧张感，毕竟马上就是kiai段了
  01:00:273 - 01:26:285 不建议用Normal的clap音效，不考虑用soft的自定义音效么？
  01:00:273 (1) - 开头finish
  01:10:678 (1) - 用1/4，理由同上
  01:11:371 (1) - 开头finish
  02:23:510 - 02:49:175 同上
  finish可以再多点，可以参考一下其他diff

• 02:06:689 (6) - （208,156）

• 00:53:683 (2) - （356,296），放到00:54:030 (1,2) - 的中间位置会更好看一点
  00:55:938 不考虑在这里加一个note么？
  01:44:666 (1) - （216,208） 这样看着美观，而且也能使2到1和3的距离相等
  02:17:614 (3) - Sampleset-Normal
  02:26:631 (2) - （308,188）
  02:48:221 这里加个note如何？

thou bad wrote:

[General]

• Letterbox during breaks 貌似要去掉

[Athena's Easy]

• 01:49:001、01:49:175、01:49:348、01:49:695、01:49:868、01:50:042 无用的绿线
  02:00:273、02:00:446 无用的绿线
  绿线和Normal一样不要紧么？
  其他的也没找到什么问题

[Normal]

• 没找到什么问题

[jogfi2002's Hard]

• 00:04:782 (1) - 开头finish
  00:09:637 (1,2,3) - 这么排列不是太好看
  试试这样
  SPOILER

  
  00:43:279 (1) - 没有必要NC
  00:59:579 (1) - 建议用1/4，虽然1/3也可以，但是1/4能使节奏更具紧张感，毕竟马上就是kiai段了
  01:00:273 - 01:26:285 不建议用Normal的clap音效，不考虑用soft的自定义音效么？
  01:00:273 (1) - 开头finish
  01:10:678 (1) - 用1/4，理由同上
  01:11:371 (1) - 开头finish
  02:23:510 - 02:49:175 同上
  finish可以再多点，可以参考一下其他diff

[Insane]

• 02:06:689 (6) - （208,156）

[Pokie]

• 00:53:683 (2) - （356,296），放到00:54:030 (1,2) - 的中间位置会更好看一点
  00:55:938 不考虑在这里加一个note么？
  01:44:666 (1) - （216,208） 这样看着美观，而且也能使2到1和3的距离相等
  02:17:614 (3) - Sampleset-Normal
  02:26:631 (2) - （308,188）
  02:48:221 这里加个note如何？

只能找到这些了，好歌好图，加油rank~

thou bad wrote:

[Pokie]

• 00:53:683 (2) - （356,296），放到00:54:030 (1,2) - 的中间位置会更好看一点　改了, 位置不太一樣
  00:55:938 不考虑在这里加一个note么？　嗯, 不打算加
  01:44:666 (1) - （216,208） 这样看着美观，而且也能使2到1和3的距离相等　Done
  02:17:614 (3) - Sampleset-Normal　Done, 後一個去normal了
  02:26:631 (2) - （308,188）　Done
  02:48:221 这里加个note如何？　Done

alacat wrote:

Hi~ As requested. from Mei chan :3

[General]
●offset +2~4?

[Athena's Easy]
●OD +1 fixed
●00:02:874 (1) - add finish fixed
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head. fixed
●00:18:654 (1) - add whistle on the slider's end. fixed
●00:17:267 (2) - 1 grid left ? perfect stack here.00:20:735 (2) - look better imo :3 fixed
●00:45:706 (3) - this slider isnt fit here . I hope you remove this and try making another pattern. fixed
my suggestion ↓

●00:54:724 (1,2) - try to make the spacing equal here ? wakaranai0 0
●01:05:822 (1) - add finish on the slider's head. fixed
●01:08:597 (1) - ^ fixed
●01:09:464 (2) - ^ slider's end fixed
●01:10:157 (3) - remove slider ? and add note here.01:10:678 - fixed
●01:22:469 (3) - try to bend slider to the opposite direction ? the flow is good fixed
●02:31:834 (1,2,3) - same as above. fixed
●02:40:157 (1) - add clap at the end instead of finish ? since it follows nothing. fixed

[Normal]
●00:04:782 (1) - add finish on the slider's head. fixed
●00:10:331 (1) - ^ fixed
●00:13:105 (1) - remove finish ? it is loud imo >_< and add whistle . fixed
●00:46:920 (2) - try this ? fixed

●00:54:724 (3) - add clap on the slider's end fixed
●00:56:111 (1) - ^ fixed
●01:05:822 (3) - add finish on the slider's head. fixed
●01:21:082 (4) - add clap on the slider's end fixed
●01:22:469 (1) - reduce spacing ? >.< here is hard to take a little. fixed
●01:24:550 (4) - add clap instead of finish ? fixed
●02:09:290 (3) - hmm , I think one note is better to here.02:09:290 - fixed
●02:20:389 (3) - move above ? the flow is good ~ fixed
●02:29:059 (3) - add finish on the slider's head. fixed
●02:47:787 (4) - same as here.01:24:550 (4) - fixed

[jogfi2002's Hard]
●00:06:863 (1,2,3) - try to make the spacing equal here ? look better imo
●00:12:759 (3) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.same as previous notes
●00:15:880 (1) - add whistle
●00:30:620 (6) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:33:741 (6) - add new combo.because you changed slider speed
●00:39:811 (8) - add clap around 50% volume
●00:42:585 (8) - ^
●00:44:320 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●00:59:579 (1) - try to put 1/8 slider?
●01:00:273 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:10:678 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●01:11:371 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●01:39:117 (1) - add whistle
●01:39:117 - use lower volume? since the melody is calmer than previous part.
●01:44:666 (1) - add whistle
●02:17:961 (5) - add whistle on the slider's repeat and end.
●02:19:348 (2) - add finish on the slider's repeat and end.
●02:22:816 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●02:23:510 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●02:33:915 (1) - same as here.00:59:579 (1) -
●02:49:522 (1) - add finish

clap sound ...

[Insane]
●00:15:013 (1) - remove whistle ? it follows nothing. fixed
●00:37:556 (3) - more spacing here ? fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526725
●00:54:724 (3) - move to x:248 y:232 looks better imo fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/526728
●01:05:822 (3) - add finish on the slider's head. fixed
●01:25:244 (1) - <3 ?0 0
●01:50:128 - add note ? fixed
●02:05:475 (1) - try to put 3/4 slider ? :3 fixed

●02:35:128 (3) - i want jump here >_< lol

nice ! ♪

[Pokie]
(「・ω・)「 poke pokie
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.
●00:40:851 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:43:626 (1,3) - ^
●00:58:886 (4) - add new combo ?same as here.02:22:123 (1) -
●01:41:891 (3) - more spacing ? i want jump here ! same as here.01:47:441 (1) -
●01:56:978 (1,2) -try this ? following vocal is better to here.

●02:45:013 (5) - add whistle or finish on the slider's head.it needs strong sound imo :3

いいね！言うことないです>.<

good luck ~

alacat wrote:

[Pokie]
(「・ω・)「 poke pokie　Σ(ﾟ∀ﾟﾉ)ﾉｷｬｰ
●00:10:331 (1) - add finish on the slider's head.　Done
●00:40:851 (3) - add whistle on the slider's head.　ここはNoかな・・確かにwhistle少ないだけど入れたくない(;´д｀)
●00:43:626 (1,3) - ^　同じ
●00:58:886 (4) - add new combo ?same as here.02:22:123 (1) - 　あれはスライダー連打が原因で、new comboしないとダメだから・・ここはたぶん必要ないかな(´･ω･`)
●01:41:891 (3) - more spacing ? i want jump here ! same as here.01:47:441 (1) - 　Done
●01:56:978 (1,2) -try this ? following vocal is better to here. 　あまり3/4の変更したくない(´；ω；｀)ううっ
●02:45:013 (5) - add whistle or finish on the slider's head.it needs strong sound imo :3　Done

いいね！言うことないです>.<

good luck ~

1. 01:08:597 (1,2) - 对照了下前后节奏都很简单 我的话会舍弃那个短slider这么摆 跟那个拖长的だ很合拍 http://puu.sh/1CJFR
2. 02:17:961 (1,2) - 规则是不是改过我不知道...我还存在的那个时代哪怕在insane塞这种slider都会被枪毙的(´Д` )
3. 02:31:834 (1,2) - 跟上面上面一样一样

1. 00:19:175 (4,5,1) - 这边听着怪怪的 试试这样? http://puu.sh/1CJMv

1. 00:37:036 (2,3,4) - 00:37:383有很明显的vocal 而且从音轨来看00:37:730 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这边完全没有连打的必要啊 所以试试这样的节奏? http://puu.sh/1CJSS
2. 00:42:065 (4) - あああああ！我最讨厌的note出现的位置..经常眼残看不到 我的话宁愿跳在一个看得清楚的地方 (T ^ T)
3. 01:17:961 (7,8,9,3,4,5) - 不喜欢这里的3连！感觉overmap了！(´・ω・｀)
4. 01:55:417 (4,5,1) - 考虑缩小间距吧！这是个如假包换的坑！(´Д` )
5. 01:59:232 (3) - 来一发new combo 不然眼残的会看不见4...
6. 02:01:660 (2,3) - 这也是个坑！这里好多坑！作为沙包我表示僕第一遍玩肯定会把3按早..这种地方适合移动不适合叠啊真心(´；ω；｀)
7. 02:21:429 (3,4,5) - 第一遍玩时没听过这歌的众人说道:魂淡还我combo！我要跟你拼命！(>_<)
8. 02:37:383 (3) - 别突然跳来跳去啊馬鹿！考虑来一发new combo吧骚年( ﾟ,_ゝﾟ)

1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - 这间距不科学啊！突然跳一下肯定不会增加好感度的！(´Д` )
2. 00:26:631 (1,2) - 考虑一下不要叠在一起 视野窄的玩家会分不清是note在前还是折返slider在前的哟~
3. 01:41:198 (5) - 别这样...放在别的随便什么地方都比这儿好..>_>
4. 02:22:816 (1) - 这节奏不对,修正 还有02:33:915 (1)也是 怎么回事 鼓点怎么听都不是1/3啊..00:59:579 (1) - 这样的就可以.

JoJo wrote:

お誕生日おめでとうございます！(´・ω・｀) 谢谢jojo> <

好久没mod已经不会了耶,就扔点排列/节奏的小建议吧.(*´д｀*)

[Easy]

1. 01:08:597 (1,2) - 对照了下前后节奏都很简单 我的话会舍弃那个短slider这么摆 跟那个拖长的だ很合拍 http://puu.sh/1CJFR fixed
2. 02:17:961 (1,2) - 规则是不是改过我不知道...我还存在的那个时代哪怕在insane塞这种slider都会被枪毙的(´Д` ) 被挑了再改(逃...
3. 02:31:834 (1,2) - 跟上面上面一样一样

fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:19:175 (4,5,1) - 这边听着怪怪的 试试这样? http://puu.sh/1CJMv

fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:37:036 (2,3,4) - 00:37:383有很明显的vocal 而且从音轨来看00:37:730 (4,5,6,7,1) - 这边完全没有连打的必要啊 所以试试这样的节奏? http://puu.sh/1CJSS fixed
2. 00:42:065 (4) - あああああ！我最讨厌的note出现的位置..经常眼残看不到 我的话宁愿跳在一个看得清楚的地方 (T ^ T) 2333
3. 01:17:961 (7,8,9,3,4,5) - 不喜欢这里的3连！感觉overmap了！(´・ω・｀) 应该不会吧0 0
4. 01:55:417 (4,5,1) - 考虑缩小间距吧！这是个如假包换的坑！(´Д` ) fixed
5. 01:59:232 (3) - 来一发new combo 不然眼残的会看不见4... 感觉NC太多会乱
6. 02:01:660 (2,3) - 这也是个坑！这里好多坑！作为沙包我表示僕第一遍玩肯定会把3按早..这种地方适合移动不适合叠啊真心(´；ω；｀) fixed
7. 02:21:429 (3,4,5) - 第一遍玩时没听过这歌的众人说道:魂淡还我combo！我要跟你拼命！(>_<)23333
8. 02:37:383 (3) - 别突然跳来跳去啊馬鹿！考虑来一发new combo吧骚年( ﾟ,_ゝﾟ)

fixed

[Jogfi2002's Hard]

1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - 这间距不科学啊！突然跳一下肯定不会增加好感度的！(´Д` )
2. 00:26:631 (1,2) - 考虑一下不要叠在一起 视野窄的玩家会分不清是note在前还是折返slider在前的哟~
3. 01:41:198 (5) - 别这样...放在别的随便什么地方都比这儿好..>_>
4. 02:22:816 (1) - 这节奏不对,修正 还有02:33:915 (1)也是 怎么回事 鼓点怎么听都不是1/3啊..00:59:579 (1) - 这样的就可以.

pokie姐的难度好评~(｡･ ω<)ゞてへぺろ♡ pokie说被萌妹子好评了很开心2333

好结束！耳机挂了音效不看了！(懒
ClariS 10分 圆神 10分 妹控 10分 给星！
嗯 你看我都quit了还来帮你mod图 记得请我吃满汉全席 (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o))) 就当你给我的生日礼物啦233

JoJo wrote:

お誕生日おめでとうございます！(´・ω・｀)

好久没mod已经不会了耶,就扔点排列/节奏的小建议吧.(*´д｀*)

[Jogfi2002's Hard]

1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - 这间距不科学啊！突然跳一下肯定不会增加好感度的！(´Д` ) 0 0但是全图也没几个跳的~这里觉得对称会好看一点
2. 00:26:631 (1,2) - 考虑一下不要叠在一起 视野窄的玩家会分不清是note在前还是折返slider在前的哟~ 还是叠吧~因为这两个靠得近，分开来放可能会造成读图困难？
3. 01:41:198 (5) - 别这样...放在别的随便什么地方都比这儿好..>_> 调整了~
4. 02:22:816 (1) - 这节奏不对,修正 还有02:33:915 (1)也是 怎么回事 鼓点怎么听都不是1/3啊..00:59:579 (1) - 这样的就可以. OK~

DarknessAngel wrote:

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sorry for HUGE delay ... orz
其實至今都沒mod心情，但是實在拖太久我就來了-.- 还以为你忘记了,有点惊喜XD

Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General

1. 每個難度Audio Lead-In調到2秒或以上。這是必須的，開頭要有足夠時間讓玩家準備好

fixed

Pokie

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  (These are just what I thought,it's up to you whether you fix them or not.)

1. 00:20:735 (4) - 這slider換成2個重疊1/1拍的notes比較有打擊感。 slider對我而言感覺不大對:O
2. 00:55:244 (2) - slider尾巴跟00:54:550 (4)疊上。 這會好看一些，當然00:55:764 (3)也要稍微調整下位置 (如果改了的話)
3. 00:59:579 (5) - 如果是我的話，我會用1.5x的slider速度並在這物件上放NC。 為的是增加更多氣勢 (slider動的好激烈LOL)，
   也營造些進入KIAI的感覺，這只是我個人的idea，其實原本的完全沒問題xD
4. 01:39:117 ~ 02:01:140 - 實在不應該這麼跳的。 明明是歌曲中很柔和的部分，感覺卻像在打KIAI (說的是跳的部分)，
   這也造成進入02:01:313的反差變小，跟01:39:117的映襯效果達不到，這是有點可惜的地方
   不改也不是大問題，不過我是比較希望把各個跳弄小一點，對契合度來說更好
5. 01:50:215 (1) - 加finish。 對我而言是必須的，不僅音樂中有鑼聲，加上之後也比較有感覺
6. 02:22:816 (2) - 同00:59:579 (5)。 看來我真的滿中意這個的xD
7. 02:46:747 (4) - 頭上再來個clap。 clap和finish組成的2倍氣勢更神猛
8. slider跳的典範。 這是看了你各種圖之後的感想，不愧是波奇姊><

Insane

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1. HP -1。 我知道HP7在Insane是很正常的設定，只是因為如果在00:08:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)掉了幾個的話，
   進入00:15:880的時候怎麼打HP都升不上去，瀕臨死亡的時候進入這段很是刺激lol
   HP-1也是有助於改善難度層遞性的，所以我認為OD6算是比較好的選擇，但是不改問題也不大，由你決定 感觉现在这样也行
2. 00:15:880 (1) - 頭上finish。 明顯必須有的，加上去好聽很多 added
3. 00:26:978 (8) - 跪求finish。 拜託加上orz added
4. 01:26:285 - 加上一條音量30%的綠線。 音樂的音量從這裡開始急遽變小，也因為這樣slidertick音就明顯了出來，
   聽起來不是很舒服，所以我建議加上 加了20%的绿线...
5. 01:39:117 (1) - 頭上finish。 finish有助於"歌曲開始"的強調 added
6. 01:49:868 (3,1) - (3)和(1)的頭上都能加上finish。除強調外還契合音樂中鑼聲，不中意(3)，至少加在(1)頭上 added
7. 02:28:886 (4) - 移到(200,148)。如果想要02:28:712 (3,4,1)等間距的話並且變好看的話，這麼做能達成目的 fixed
8. 02:40:157 (5) - 移動這個slider到(196)。 這麼做是為了讓02:39:464 (1,2,3,4,5)變得"更像星形"，
   如果想要做出一個漂亮星形就要各note間等間距，但是感覺你沒有追求這樣的，至少還是移動一下slider讓它漂亮點吧 fixed
9. 好好善用finish。絕不可忽略finish的重要性，只要某些地方沒有它聽覺上就會失色
   這歌有滿多地方可以加，你可以自己適當的加一些

Hard

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  (Most of advices are important to me,plaese consider them seriously.)

1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + g。 這間距的確不會增加好感度(´Д` )，首先是00:11:371 (4,1)的間距實在太短，
   會造成一些不善判斷的玩家失誤(以為是1/2拍而早按)；再來是00:11:718 (1,2)的間距，如果玩家沒有掉前面那段，
   這段很可能也造成誤判(讓人以為是1/1拍)，感覺就像是佈滿陷阱的怎麼個增加好感呢 (何況之前還有1/1拍slider尾部重疊..)\´Д`/
   ctrl+g就都解決了，試試看
2. 00:15:880 (1) - 加上finish。 這裡沒有是件非常奇怪的事，可是Insane也發生了...lol
3. 00:26:978 (2) - finish。 依照你的設定，這裡不是至少會有個whistle嗎 .. ? 算了不管，finish加上更合音樂
4. 00:39:811 (8) - 綠線音量.....。 你要這樣還不如別加clap了，意義不明啊完全的 囧
5. 00:49:175 (3) - 頭上finish加上。 使段落分明以及鑼聲契合
6. 01:06:516 (3) - NC去掉。 看起來沒有道理，既沒有跳也沒有音樂轉換，這裡不需要NC
7. 01:39:117 (1) - 加上finish。 同00:15:880 (1)
8. 01:50:215 (1) - 頭上finish。 為的是段落的需要
9. 02:34:608 (1) - 同上。 同上
10. 好好善用finish。 絕不可忽略finish的重要性，它有助於段落分明和充當歌曲的醍醐味的角色，
    只要某些地方沒有它聽覺上就會失色，其實whistle可有可無，重要的是clap和finish下對點就能下出有味道的音效

Normal

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  (Some things looks not pretty good,but just tingy things,fix them to make patterns prettier.)

1. 01:47:441 (1,2) - (1)移到(156,176)；(2)移到(308,92)。 它們沒有真正對稱，此舉能修改這問題 fixed
2. 01:48:828 (1,2,3,4) - 關掉grid後，選取整體並一舉移到(307,260)。 原因同上 fixed
3. finish對照我mod Insane的地方。 再次提出這些我覺得有點多此一舉、占用篇幅，所以就這樣囉 ~

finish也加上了

Easy

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  (intend to skip this diff since I'm tired now...I just mention a thing here.)

1. 02:17:961 (1,2) - 就換個slider造型吧 ? 是不是會被槍斃我不清楚，只是這種hold住的效果並不適用於這邊
   (或者該說奇怪lol)，用個正常的替代即可

fixed



換了個新的排版感覺像是在寫rules O_o
oh my god神曲，好久沒聽到這麼好聽的歌T v T
加油快rank吧 ~
star.
gl ~ 感谢mod,finish的意见很不错,hard和pokie等他们自己查看,kudo送上

DarknessAngel wrote:

as your request via in-game PM

Hard

• 
  
  (Most of advices are important to me,plaese consider them seriously.)

1. 00:11:718 (1,2,3) - Ctrl + g。 這間距的確不會增加好感度(´Д` )，首先是00:11:371 (4,1)的間距實在太短，
   會造成一些不善判斷的玩家失誤(以為是1/2拍而早按)；再來是00:11:718 (1,2)的間距，如果玩家沒有掉前面那段，
   這段很可能也造成誤判(讓人以為是1/1拍)，感覺就像是佈滿陷阱的怎麼個增加好感呢 (何況之前還有1/1拍slider尾部重疊..)\´Д`/
   ctrl+g就都解決了，試試看
2. 00:15:880 (1) - 加上finish。 這裡沒有是件非常奇怪的事，可是Insane也發生了...lol
3. 00:26:978 (2) - finish。 依照你的設定，這裡不是至少會有個whistle嗎 .. ? 算了不管，finish加上更合音樂
4. 00:39:811 (8) - 綠線音量.....。 你要這樣還不如別加clap了，意義不明啊完全的 囧
5. 00:49:175 (3) - 頭上finish加上。 使段落分明以及鑼聲契合
6. 01:06:516 (3) - NC去掉。 看起來沒有道理，既沒有跳也沒有音樂轉換，這裡不需要NC
7. 01:39:117 (1) - 加上finish。 同00:15:880 (1)
8. 01:50:215 (1) - 頭上finish。 為的是段落的需要
9. 02:34:608 (1) - 同上。 同上
10. 好好善用finish。 絕不可忽略finish的重要性，它有助於段落分明和充當歌曲的醍醐味的角色，
    只要某些地方沒有它聽覺上就會失色，其實whistle可有可無，重要的是clap和finish下對點就能下出有味道的音效

Autumn wrote:

Hi~ Mod from 火星
BG有淫兽QB 必须换掉

Kiai不一样大丈夫？我觉得开头那段kiai可以不要。

[Athena's Easy]
01:03:048 - 试试finish 感觉没啥必要
02:26:285 - ^ ^

[Normal]
00:10:331 (1,2) - 整个转过来，别挡到00:08:943 (3) 了： fixed

SPOILER

[jogfi2002's Hard]
总的来看kiai time的clap稍微有点混乱..试试先放好2，4clap再在这个基础上变化

另外其它部分可以加clap的地方很多，例如从00:37:383 一直到00:59:233 都可以一路2，4clap

最后kiai time里绿线好多...我发现你的音效里C1和C3只有clap不同，为何不试试去掉一个音效，把两种clap变成一种音效里的clap和whistle呢？毕竟默认音效都可以从左上角的sampleset里拿

00:04:782 (1) - 刚转完转盘一下子跑到边缘有点累，考虑往中间放一点：

SPOILER

flow没问题不过节奏上有点overmap的感觉..多试试长滑条！

[Insane]
00:11:371 (3,4) - 似乎没stack好 fixed
00:45:533 (6) - 对准： fixed

SPOILER

01:19:348 (3,4,5) - 对准： fixed

SPOILER

01:23:857 (2,1,1,1) - 最后一个note挡住了后面心形的滑条。有点影响美观..考虑缩小一点四方跳把它摆进来：换了另一种排列

SPOILER

（前三个是挡不到啦）
01:44:666 - 可加finish（背景音中能听到） added
02:33:915 - ^ added
02:39:117 (7) - 有点挡到02:39:811 (3) 了，考虑往旁边放一点： fixed

SPOILER

[Pokie]
00:08:076 (4,5) - 有點太靠邊了..這樣如何？

SPOILER

（我覺得能打這個難度的玩家應該不會被spacing迷惑）
00:48:481 (1,2) - 試試這樣跳，感覺更爽：

SPOILER

00:55:938 - 可以Add..能聽到Vocal：

SPOILER

00:59:579 (5) - 第一次打的時候嚇了一跳..orz 我覺得用慢滑條比快滑條好（像I難度）
01:10:851 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 對齊後面的滑條，對HR玩家很善良ww：

SPOILER

02:34:175 (4,5,6,7,8) - ^（可以稍微逆時針轉一點，好讓後面兩個滑條不至於太靠下）
02:12:065 (3) - 在02:12:325能聽到鼓點，建議加個note：

SPOILER

02:44:319 (1) - 對準02:44:666 (2)

01:10:678 (3) -可以加個Finish 烘托一下氣氛
02:33:915 - ^

That's all~好歌好图~加油！

(之前第一遍Mod写好了忘了备份，结果点preview之后浏览器崩溃了...怒删chrome。所以你看到的是第二个版本的mod...累感不爱_(:3 」∠ )_）
有空的话来看看我的新图把~玻璃の空需要大家的支持~ 噗,我也是chrome,hard和pokie难度等他们自己查看,thx for modding,裤兜送上

Autumn wrote:

Hi~ Mod from 火星
BG有淫兽QB 必须换掉

Kiai不一样大丈夫？我觉得开头那段kiai可以不要。


[jogfi2002's Hard]
总的来看kiai time的clap稍微有点混乱..试试先放好2，4clap再在这个基础上变化 好0 0音效我找时间再重头改一次……

另外其它部分可以加clap的地方很多，例如从00:37:383 一直到00:59:233 都可以一路2，4clap ^

最后kiai time里绿线好多...我发现你的音效里C1和C3只有clap不同，为何不试试去掉一个音效，把两种clap变成一种音效里的clap和whistle呢？毕竟默认音效都可以从左上角的sampleset里拿 问题是C1的CLAP太重不适合加太多……只好弄个C3换一种比较轻的CLAP= =而C1的CLAP是其他难度要用的……

00:04:782 (1) - 刚转完转盘一下子跑到边缘有点累，考虑往中间放一点： fixed

SPOILER

flow没问题不过节奏上有点overmap的感觉..多试试长滑条！