Hi hi~ Sorry for very huge lelay >_<
[ General]
[ Easy]
[ Starry's Normal]
[ Crystal's Hard]
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Not bad on your first map ~ You should learn more about map xD
Good Begin , So I shoot star for you ! Sorry for my poor mod ~
Good Luck :3
[ General]
- Sadly SBer shouldn't in the tags , my map's SBer is not in the tags too
- What is Insert in the Artist :O ?
- Make sure last spinner end at the same time
[ Easy]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )- 00:46:881 (1) - My suggested you start this slider at 00:47:547 - And add a note 00:46:881 -
- 01:10:881 (1) - Do the same thing as above
- 01:22:881 (4) - Same , And I really don't like this slider's shape
- 01:27:548 - ~ 01:31:548 - This break isn't necessary imo
- 01:33:548 (2) - Ctrl+> twice can get a better flow I think :3
- 01:43:548 (1) - End this spinner 01:45:548 -
- 01:59:548 (3) - This shape is very ugly Imo try my shape ?
480,152,119548,2,0,B|488:224|448:260|384:276|336:264|296:240|296:240|256:212|216:240|216:240|176:264|128:276|64:260|24:224|32:152,1,600,4|4
- 02:28:881 (2) - Ugly shape >_<
- 03:05:547 (4) - Highly suggested to change this slider to something else , it is too boring and I feel strange with it , try this rhythm ?
- 03:21:547 (2,3,4) - Different spacing? make them the spacing the same?
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )- 01:07:547 (3) - Remove whistle on this slider's body
- 01:55:548 (1) - WTF , why four finishes on this slider!!! Thay are not follow the music at all
- 02:21:548 (2) - Use whistle instead of finish sounds better , finish is too loud
- 02:55:547 (1) - Remove finish end because these is no cymbal in the music
- 03:01:547 (2) - Remove clap end , it's not fits the song
- 03:15:547 (1) - Remove finish end , same reason
- 03:17:547 (2) - You miss a clap on this slider's head , Consistent to add clap here
[ Starry's Normal]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )- 01:16:881 (4) - 1 grid right to make the spacing correct :3
- 01:43:548 (1,1) - I think slider1 is too far from spinner's center , Sometimes Beginners can't catch it easily , I think you can fix this issue a bit :3
- 02:23:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do not change spacing here
- 02:40:547 (4,5,6) - Put them like this can get a better flow Imo
- 03:07:547 (1) - End at Long white tick , follow the music well , It means end this spinner at 03:09:548 - much better in my option
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )- 00:56:881 (2) - Add clap on slider arrow like 01:01:547 (5) -
- Some of the claps I think you must add , I try to point out them
- 01:33:548 (5) -
- 01:37:548 (3) - Head
- 01:41:548 (5) - Head , but there is a finish , so you need to remove finish and then use clap instead
- 01:49:548 (5) -
- 01:53:548 (5) - Head
- 03:13:548 (5) - Start
- 03:15:548 (1) - You forget to add a finish here I think :3
[ Crystal's Hard]
- Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )- None!
- Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )- 00:41:381 (4) - Delete this note please , there is no thing in the music , 2and4 fits with the vocal but this note isn't follow anything
- 00:45:381 (5) - Same as above
- 00:46:881 (1) - Change to a 1/2 slider , same reason
- 00:49:047 (3,5) - Delete this two notes
- 01:03:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't see any reason to change slider's speed here , I hope you can change it back :3
- 01:09:047 (4) - Delete
- 01:11:047 (2) - Same
- 01:15:047 (2) - Delete
- 01:19:047 (2) - Same
- 01:23:048 (8) - Delete , and you can change 7,9 to a 1/2 slider too :3
- 01:41:548 (4) - I think you can make this slider better
- 01:55:548 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:03:547 - no reason to change slider's speed
- 02:03:548 - ~ 02:04:381 - This very short break isn't needed , use your mouse to remove
- Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )- 03:12:881 (5) - Remove clap on slider's head
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Not bad on your first map ~ You should learn more about map xD
Good Begin , So I shoot star for you ! Sorry for my poor mod ~
Good Luck :3