kirinoimouto22 wrote:

#modreqs

Já faz tanto tempo que eu não ouço essa música...boa escolha (valew )

General

1. Não é muito importante (acho eu), mas adicione Natsumi Kobayashi (Lyricist) e ab:fly (Arranger) nas tags. Ah adicione "tomorrow" também, single de onde Karenai Hana faz parte:
   (Tirado da wiki japonesa)
   (Site de compra japonês, 2ª track é a Karenai Hana)
   Embora esta seja a ost não o single...é bom dar uma olhada nisso porque aí também diz algumas informações sobre essa música (Na parte "Notes", M-24)
   http://vgmdb.net/album/30569
   
2. Vai pra tags também: Gonzo (Estúdio que produziu o primeiro anime) e Gatoh Shouji (Autor original de Full Metal Panic).

(acho que só vou adicionar Gatoh Shouji mas todas as sugestoes de tags sao validas, apenas nao quero deixar tao cheio de tags)

Easy

1. 00:18:330 (1): Mova o 2º ponto desse slider para x:416 y:176
2. 00:56:379 (3): Remove o whistle e mantenha só a clap no final do slider, porque soa um pouco estranho.
3. 01:08:881 (1): Mesma coisa que eu falei em 00:56:379, só que agora é em um circle.
4. 01:14:672 (2): ^ , agora no começo do slider.
   
   all fixed na easy

Normal

1. 00:20:526 (2): Acho que se você mover esse circle para x:398 y:120, a posição dele ficaria bem melhor imo. Se bem que não vai fazer diferença nenhuma se você não fizer isso, o circle ficou legal aquí mas na minha opinião ele ficando nessa posição seria bem melhor. (faria mais sentido aonde voce sugeriu msm ^^, mas minha intençao era fazer esse circulo ficar alinhado com o começo do slider anterior)
2. 00:35:891 (3): Mova esse slider para x:304 y:96, só pra ficar com um aspecto melhor. (entendo, mas a forma como eu fiz é como se fosse pra alinhar os circle como uma previa do começo do slider)
3. 01:13:209 (5): Ajeite um pouco este slider, tipo desse jeito: http://puu.sh/1m2AW (eu nao posso mexer nesse slider porque ele é espelho do 01:16:135 (4) ai teria que mudar os dois ^^)

Panic!

1. 00:43:026 (6): Eu até entendo o que você tá tentando fazer aquí, mas o rítimo fica estranho assim. Pra mim esse rítimo fita melhor com a música: http://puu.sh/1m2OJ (o puush nao ta pegando aki, no momento. mas imagino que esta sugerindo a mesma coisa que o modder anterior, mas eu ainda prefiro manter o estilo atual, mas vou considerar mudar se mais pessoas apontarem)
2. 00:59:306 (6): Remova o finish no final do slider e mantenha só o clap aquí. (fixed)

Por enquanto é só isso, tou sem kd então não posso dar star agora. Mas a sua map merece ser ranked. (valew, é bom saber que o map ta agradando aos fãs de fmp )

Boa sorte~

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. re 00:41:745 - 00:53:452's kiai time? I think there don't need add >~<

[Easy]

1. 00:23:452 - why let here empty? I look your Hard dosen't empty, also, it empty let me feel strange, add a whistle note :3
2. 00:47:599 (1) - x:316 y:124? let 00:46:135 (3,4,1) 's movement routes get a bit carved, also, much pretty for me
3. 00:56:379 (3,1) - swap NC? if is me, kiai time's start I am used to NC
4. 01:02:233 (3,1) - ^

[Normal]

1. 00:23:452 - same as Easy
2. 00:56:379 (6,1) - same as Easy :3
3. 01:02:233 (3,1) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:34:062 (4) - get it don't stack, because it a little same as 00:35:891 (3,4), also, I think move it will be more suitable for music
2. 00:56:379 (6,1) - same as Easy
3. 01:02:233 (3,1) - ^
4. 01:07:355 (4) - NC, I just think same as 01:06:623 (1)'s sound, so 01:06:623 (1) have NC, why not get here have NC? >w<

l1106188 wrote:

Hi~ pimpG <3 (hey o/ )
so i late so much ... in fact, i forget (lol)
Request from In-game.

• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion ~OAO , if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. re 00:41:745 - 00:53:452's kiai time? I think there don't need add >~<
   i like the current kiai ^^

[Easy]

1. 00:23:452 - why let here empty? I look your Hard dosen't empty, also, it empty let me feel strange, add a whistle note :3 (there is no music here, better let it empy, i just added a note here in hard to keep the flow )
2. 00:47:599 (1) - x:316 y:124? let 00:46:135 (3,4,1) 's movement routes get a bit carved, also, much pretty for me (agree, fixed)
3. 00:56:379 (3,1) - swap NC? if is me, kiai time's start I am used to NC ( x , i'm following vocal with nc, it does not calls for a nc here )
4. 01:02:233 (3,1) - ^ ( x )

[Normal]

1. 00:23:452 - same as Easy ( x )
2. 00:56:379 (6,1) - same as Easy :3 ( x )
3. 01:02:233 (3,1) - ^ ( x )

[Hard]

1. 00:34:062 (4) - get it don't stack, because it a little same as 00:35:891 (3,4), also, I think move it will be more suitable for music ( x , i think it fits what i'm following in this part, also the current combo shape would be ruined if i move this note to any other place )
2. 00:56:379 (6,1) - same as Easy ( x )
3. 01:02:233 (3,1) - ^ ( x )
4. 01:07:355 (4) - NC, I just think same as 01:06:623 (1)'s sound, so 01:06:623 (1) have NC, why not get here have NC? >w< ( x , i'm following instrumental here,does not calls for a nc imo )

go~go~ pimpG :3 ( )
good song & good luck~ star~
and sorry to my poor English (thanks for star, and your english is fine )

1. The image of BG doesn't match with the melody of this song at all. This is a lonely/sentimental song and you should chose the image that we can feel like that. I think this is an important element of map, but finally this is up to you.

• 00:18:330 - From here, you turn up the volume to 50%, but it's a bit noisy for me. Generally, in like this part, the most strong sound comes on 00:17:965 and along starting vocal, it becomes a bit quiet. Use 30 or 35% here. It will become more natural imo.
  00:54:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm, there is a border clearly in the song between 5 and 6, so this placement and pattern of NC feel something strange.
  I think you should distinguish 1~5 and 6~8 more clearly.
  01:00:404 (1,2) - This rhythm is not so bad, but I think it will be more kind if you add a circle at 01:00:770.

• 00:32:233 (3,1) - A bit long this distance is. Make them more closer.

• 01:03:696 (1) - This note is actually rankable, but I don't recommend you to put a note at the corner of the screen in these diff since approach circle is out of screen and newbie player may miss the timing of this note. Consider to move this note to other place.

h-728 wrote:

Hi (hey )
[General]

1. The image of BG doesn't match with the melody of this song at all. This is a lonely/sentimental song and you should chose the image that we can feel like that. I think this is an important element of map, but finally this is up to you. (its a valid argument, i'll change bg if i find something good)

[Hard]

• 00:18:330 - From here, you turn up the volume to 50%, but it's a bit noisy for me. Generally, in like this part, the most strong sound comes on 00:17:965 and along starting vocal, it becomes a bit quiet. Use 30 or 35% here. It will become more natural imo. ( x )
  00:54:550 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hm, there is a border clearly in the song between 5 and 6, so this placement and pattern of NC feel something strange.
  I think you should distinguish 1~5 and 6~8 more clearly. (fixed)
  01:00:404 (1,2) - This rhythm is not so bad, but I think it will be more kind if you add a circle at 01:00:770.(maybe, i'll use this sugestion if enough people complain)

Overall, there is no problem with ranking, but too passable.
You know, this map has so low BPM, so you can make a jump in 1/4 rhythm. Consider to add 1/4 rhythm jumps especially in Kiai Time. ( hmm. i dont want it to be difficult at all, just like this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/14418 )

[Normal]

• 00:32:233 (3,1) - A bit long this distance is. Make them more closer.(i think i know what you mean, but i prefer to keep the ds as much as possible)

[Easy]

• 01:03:696 (1) - This note is actually rankable, but I don't recommend you to put a note at the corner of the screen in these diff since approach circle is out of screen and newbie player may miss the timing of this note. Consider to move this note to other place.(hm, thats a valid argument but i seriously need this note where it currentlly is, or i would need to change the previous notes a lot)

niceplayer wrote:

[Normal]
01:19:428 (3) - In fact , vocal is in 3/4. But I just suggest to remove this. (x i think this note is important)

[Hard]
00:43:026 (5,6) - Why changed? As a result ,there two beat be in 5. Make it same as 1,2,3,4,and make the combo tag to 8. (i dont get it ;_;)
01:00:952 (2) - 1/4 beat and it start from the second. There's a drum sound, but slider start from here can be a miss.(i think its easy to read for the hardest diff in the mapset)

DakeDekaane wrote:

/o/ Mod time~ \o\

[General]
Nice mapset, All these are only suggestions about hitsounds and aesthetics.

[Easy]
00:51:257 (1) - This normal finish doesn't fit very well, keep using soft hitsounds (i like the normal finish here)
01:00:770 (1) - Remove finish here (fixed)

[Normal]
00:51:440 (1) - Soft Finish. (x)
00:29:306 (1,1,2) - Maybe put it like this. (yes)

00:29:306 (1) - x:32 y:196
00:30:038 (1) - x:88 y:136
00:31:135 (2) - Actual position.

01:00:404 (1,2) - If you're looking for a better blanket here (i prefer my blanket ^^)

01:00:404 (1) - x:384 y:96; x:392 y:140; x:432,y:156
01:01:501 (2) - x:368 y:16; x:324 y:24; x:308 y:68
01:19:428 (3) - Unstack this, and put a note in 01:19:611 (unstack, but i'll keep it where it is in the timeline)

[Panic!]
Nothing found

That's all, good luck c:

BeatofIke wrote:

As requested In-Game. Here is your mod!

[General]
-> It would be better if you add the video for this map. If you have troble fing one, I can find one for you. (Yes, I can edit videos and mp3's) ( thank you, but the video itself is just staff credits with black background, no point in adding it ^^ )

[Easy]
00:59:306 (2) - Remove this finish at the head of the slider. You don't hear any finish here. (fixed)
01:16:867 (4,1) - Add a new combo here and remove the combo at 01:18:330. (fixed)

[Normal]
00:26:745 (3,1,2) - It will be nice if this pattern was symmetical. Somethind Like this: (maybe, i'll decide asap)

SPOILER

[Panic!]
-> Pretty good! ( )

Good Luck with you map. Your map should get a bubble. (thank you :'))

thank you a lot for accepting my request

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket ( )

[General]
the soft-hitclap sounds a bit quiet to me, hope you can make the file's volume up a bit (i checked with audacity 1.3 and its as so loud as possible, if i try to make it louder it will lose quality)

[skin]
add custom pause-back, pause-continue and pause-retry please, or remove pause-overlay and fail-background (i thought they were not important, i'm removing the pause and fail this time)

[Easy]
HD-1 OD-1 AR+1, or the setting is really odd imo (i gess i'll keep my settings)

[Normal]
00:46:501 (4,1,2,3) - try to move them up a bit, they're nearly out of the screen (i can't move 4 because i would need to move all notes before it too, but moved 1,2,3 up a bit)

call me back then (okay \o/ )

pimpG wrote:

btw how did i get this ticket, i dont remember it

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

pimpG wrote:

btw how did i get this ticket, i dont remember it

You should say thanks to azu-nyan14 because he/she posted your map in wcx's queue (/p/1931867) :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

fine now
bubbled

pimpG wrote:

why 0_o

BeatofIke wrote:

Ah Sweet!

Gabe wrote:

I told you! Congratulation on getting a bubble!

Aleks719 wrote:

Easy
OD-1 and HP-1 for consistency with stats in other diffs

Timing
offset 761 (-9 from yours)

that's all orz

1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line.
2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.

1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion.
2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5%

1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle
2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff
3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1)
4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy

1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above
2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo
3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound

Chewin wrote:

~General~

1. Timing: a new red line is needed on 01:19:091 because all slider ends in all diffs are totally off with vocal/rhythm, same for the circle that is placed on 01:19:419. Fix this problem just adding that red line. (fixed)
2. Maybe rename the "Panic!" diff to "Hard"? I don't see a reason to use a different difficult name just for a one diff of the mapset, to be honest.(i like it)

~Easy~

1. 00:54:907 (1,2,3) - why don't you use increase the finishes volume till 50% so that the finish that starts the kiai time is emphasized? I mean: 00:54:907 (1) <- 30% volume; 00:55:639 (2) <- 40% volume 00:56:370 (3) <- 50% volume (the actual one with kiai time). It would be a nice idea, in my opinion. (x)
2. 01:19:785 (1) - the end of this spinner would fit better with song if decreased till 5% (fixed)

~Normal~

1. 00:35:151 (4) - don't stack this circle with the previous slider, it could easily confuse novice players especially because the 00:34:419 (3) is an 1/4 short slider. To avoid this stack you can overlap it with 00:34:054 (2) or just move it to x:416 y:176 to make a symmetric triangular pattern 00:34:054 (2,3,4) without to fix the spacing with next circle (i think it fits better as stack : ()
2. 00:54:907 (2,4) - I suggest you the same idea about those finishes, read above in the easy diff (x)
3. 00:56:370 (6) - I would set new combo on this slider to start the kiai time removing it from the following slider 00:57:468 (1) (fixed)
4. 01:19:785 (1) - same of easy(fixed)

~Panic!~

1. 00:54:907 (2,4) - you know, same above (x)
2. 00:57:651 (2) - improve this slider curve, this shape is really ugly.. it breaks the flow map imo (fixed ??)
3. 01:02:224 (4) - set new combo here removing it from 01:03:321 (1) instead, it fits better according to finish hitsound (fixed)

That's it (thank you a lot for mod )

Sekai-nyan wrote:

Gratz owo/

Faust wrote:

FMP \:D/

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG

pimpG wrote:

azu-nyan14 wrote:

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Parabéns pimpG

brigadao
mas voce é a heroina aki <3

Gabe wrote:

Omg, congratulation! You got it ranked this year!