Harez wrote:

Not used Green Line

SPOILER

MaledictusXVII wrote:

Hmm, DaRRi, good job in boring diff ^^

little fixes:

00:18:478 (1,2,3) - maybe move them slightly to the right? fixed
00:28:933 (2,2) - maybe not here? wha
03:00:296 (1,2,3) - not to hard for normal diff? it is?
03:18:478 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

1. 00:40:296 (1) - 不加个Finish?

1. 03:16:887 - 这里的break不要感觉更好吧, 这么短真的没必要, 加了break四角还会出现那个箭头看起来不是特别合适

1. 00:31:205 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不加whistle么? 其他难度这里都是加了哨音的:/
2. 00:40:296 (1) - Slider头加个finish?
3. 00:45:751 (3) slider尾, 00:46:205 (1), 00:46:660 (2) slider头, 00:47:114 (3) slider头 - 不加whistle?
4. 01:53:023 (1,2), 01:53:933 (3,4) slider头- ^
5. 02:02:114 (1) - slider头, Finish?
6. 03:16:887 - 也是觉得这个break不太必要, 我觉得自然掉血的感觉最适合这种只有声音没有背景乐的地方

1. 03:16:887 - 和前两个难度一样的建议啦

Breeze wrote:

[orz]

1. 00:40:296 (1) - 不加个Finish?

[Boring]

1. 03:16:887 - 这里的break不要感觉更好吧, 这么短真的没必要, 加了break四角还会出现那个箭头看起来不是特别合适

[Relaxing]

1. 00:31:205 (1,2,3,4) - 这里不加whistle么? 其他难度这里都是加了哨音的:/
2. 00:40:296 (1) - Slider头加个finish?
3. 00:45:751 (3) slider尾, 00:46:205 (1), 00:46:660 (2) slider头, 00:47:114 (3) slider头 - 不加whistle?
4. 01:53:023 (1,2), 01:53:933 (3,4) slider头- ^
5. 02:02:114 (1) - slider头, Finish?
6. 03:16:887 - 也是觉得这个break不太必要, 我觉得自然掉血的感觉最适合这种只有声音没有背景乐的地方

[DaRRi sTyLE]

1. 03:16:887 - 和前两个难度一样的建议啦

Timing, music file and background img and VIDEO are taken from yeahyeahyeahhh's ranked one.

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Chewin wrote:

Timing, music file and background img and VIDEO are taken from yeahyeahyeahhh's ranked one.

This doesn't mean that you have to put yeahyeahyeahhh in the tags.
Remove it, please.

kanpakyin wrote:

我覺得offset: 3926比較適合...你可以看看yyy的thread, rank了之後也有關於timing的討論

Chewin wrote:

Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.

EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P

DaRRi MIx wrote:

Chewin wrote:

Furthermore I have to tell you that silenced notes are unrankable.
Then you need to increase the volume of these 3 green lines: 01:09:387 / 02:31:205 / 03:34:842 till at least 20%.

EDIT: You also should give kpy kudosu for timing help ;P

not sure if 5% volume is unrankable or not, but changed them for now

1. okay

1. Please resnap all notes in this diff. There are tons of unsnapped notes.
2. 00:43:814 (5) - Could you remove this note so that it can be consistent with previous part(00:36:539 - and 00:40:176 - )
3. 01:33:018 (7) - hum...I would say increase the spacing here would be nice because there is a accent which is suitable for a jump.
4. 02:07:903 - A rhythmic suggestion here. How about adding a note at 02:07:903 - and 02:08:244 - ,so that it can follow the drum sound and the instrument at the same time : )
5. 02:20:291 (3) - , 02:22:109 (5) - Probably you can use the new type style slider to remake it to a better shape.
6. 02:40:062 - Add a note here?

1. 00:38:471 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, better to fix this though.
2. 02:01:198 (2,3,1) - ^
3. 02:23:471 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits the music here because the vocal is still singing at this time. I suppose that a spinner should be used at protraction. The spinner could start at 02:25:744 - if you want.
4. 02:34:380 (4) - This didn't stack at slider(3)-'s end properly. Please stack it again.

1. 02:23:471 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這對有點難度...加上這種pattern和AR,導致整個佈局就不太好. 建議重新排一次
2. 03:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同難讀.求換成slider
3. 03:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - 這個是低難度, 然後這裡都是疊, 節奏又不同, 加上低AR, 結果就變得巨難讀
4. 03:22:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^
5. 03:23:926 (1,2,3,4) - ^ +spacing
6. 03:25:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^
7. 03:36:426 - Unused green line. Remove it?

1. 01:02:107 (1) - I would like to move this spinner to 01:03:926 - and then map the part before the spinner.
2. 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - 最低難度, 不建議在間距上動手腳
3. 02:23:925 (1) - Same as 01:02:107-
4. 02:33:016 ~ 02:47:107 - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -. Also copy and paste沒關係?
5. 03:32:107 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -

kanpakyin wrote:

ok, let's go.

[General]

1. okay

[DaRRi sTyLE]

1. Please resnap all notes in this diff. There are tons of unsnapped notes. FIXED
2. 00:43:814 (5) - Could you remove this note so that it can be consistent with previous part(00:36:539 - and 00:40:176 - ) VOCAL IS DIFFERENT HERE
3. 01:33:018 (7) - hum...I would say increase the spacing here would be nice because there is a accent which is suitable for a jump. IT'S OK IMO
4. 02:07:903 - A rhythmic suggestion here. How about adding a note at 02:07:903 - and 02:08:244 - ,so that it can follow the drum sound and the instrument at the same time : ) WOULD BE MONOTONOUS
5. 02:20:291 (3) - , 02:22:109 (5) - Probably you can use the new type style slider to remake it to a better shape. YES ACCEPTED
6. 02:40:062 - Add a note here? NOT REALLY

[Realxing]

1. 00:38:471 (1,2,1,2) - Inconsistent spacing, better to fix this though.FIXED
2. 02:01:198 (2,3,1) - ^ FIXED
3. 02:23:471 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits the music here because the vocal is still singing at this time. I suppose that a spinner should be used at protraction. The spinner could start at 02:25:744 - if you want. I THINK IT'S OK IN THIS DIFF,01:01:653 (1) - SAME HERE
4. 02:34:380 (4) - This didn't stack at slider(3)-'s end properly. Please stack it again. FIXED

[Boring]

1. 02:23:471 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - 這對有點難度...加上這種pattern和AR,導致整個佈局就不太好. 建議重新排一次 REPATTERNED
2. 03:18:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 同難讀.求換成slider FIXED
3. 03:20:289 (1,2,3,4) - 這個是低難度, 然後這裡都是疊, 節奏又不同, 加上低AR, 結果就變得巨難讀 FOLLOW THE MUSIC PLS
4. 03:22:107 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
5. 03:23:926 (1,2,3,4) - ^ +spacing FIXED SPACING
6. 03:25:744 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
7. 03:36:426 - Unused green line. Remove it? FIXED

[Orz]

1. 01:02:107 (1) - I would like to move this spinner to 01:03:926 - and then map the part before the spinner. IT'S FINE
2. 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - 最低難度, 不建議在間距上動手腳 ACCEPTABLE IMO
3. 02:23:925 (1) - Same as 01:02:107- IT'S FINE
4. 02:33:016 ~ 02:47:107 - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 -. Also copy and paste沒關係? ^
5. 03:32:107 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 01:11:198 ~ 01:25:289 - MADE THEM CLOSER

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