Sun Rainbow wrote:

.......DS......
Easy:
The rhythm is fine
But DS...
I already used DS =3=
P.S. Thanks for the mod~

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Timing should be 3/4 not 4/4
Fixed all maps to 3/4 time [waltz]

Sandpig wrote:

hi

Easy

00:27:548 (2,3,4) - make the gaps even Made some changes ^^
00:39:547 (4) - nc Okay
01:51:548 (3) - nc Okay


to be honest, I don't think this map needs any mod... Really? OAO Thank you for telling me~ ♥ And Thanks for the short mod~

1. Sadly SBer shouldn't in the tags , my map's SBer is not in the tags too
2. What is Insert in the Artist :O ?
   
   Picture

   
3. Make sure last spinner end at the same time

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:46:881 (1) - My suggested you start this slider at 00:47:547 - And add a note 00:46:881 -
   2. 01:10:881 (1) - Do the same thing as above
   3. 01:22:881 (4) - Same , And I really don't like this slider's shape
   4. 01:27:548 - ~ 01:31:548 - This break isn't necessary imo
   5. 01:33:548 (2) - Ctrl+> twice can get a better flow I think :3
   6. 01:43:548 (1) - End this spinner 01:45:548 -
   7. 01:59:548 (3) - This shape is very ugly Imo try my shape ?
      
      My shape

      

      480,152,119548,2,0,B|488:224|448:260|384:276|336:264|296:240|296:240|256:212|216:240|216:240|176:264|128:276|64:260|24:224|32:152,1,600,4|4

   8. 02:28:881 (2) - Ugly shape >_<
   9. 03:05:547 (4) - Highly suggested to change this slider to something else , it is too boring and I feel strange with it , try this rhythm ?
      
   10. 03:21:547 (2,3,4) - Different spacing? make them the spacing the same?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:07:547 (3) - Remove whistle on this slider's body
   2. 01:55:548 (1) - WTF , why four finishes on this slider!!! Thay are not follow the music at all
   3. 02:21:548 (2) - Use whistle instead of finish sounds better , finish is too loud
   4. 02:55:547 (1) - Remove finish end because these is no cymbal in the music
   5. 03:01:547 (2) - Remove clap end , it's not fits the song
   6. 03:15:547 (1) - Remove finish end , same reason
   7. 03:17:547 (2) - You miss a clap on this slider's head , Consistent to add clap here

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:16:881 (4) - 1 grid right to make the spacing correct :3
   2. 01:43:548 (1,1) - I think slider1 is too far from spinner's center , Sometimes Beginners can't catch it easily , I think you can fix this issue a bit :3
      
   3. 02:23:548 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do not change spacing here
   4. 02:40:547 (4,5,6) - Put them like this can get a better flow Imo
   5. 03:07:547 (1) - End at Long white tick , follow the music well , It means end this spinner at 03:09:548 - much better in my option
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:56:881 (2) - Add clap on slider arrow like 01:01:547 (5) -
   2. Some of the claps I think you must add , I try to point out them
      
      1. 01:33:548 (5) -
      2. 01:37:548 (3) - Head
      3. 01:41:548 (5) - Head , but there is a finish , so you need to remove finish and then use clap instead
      4. 01:49:548 (5) -
      5. 01:53:548 (5) - Head
      6. 03:13:548 (5) - Start
   3. 03:15:548 (1) - You forget to add a finish here I think :3

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:41:381 (4) - Delete this note please , there is no thing in the music , 2and4 fits with the vocal but this note isn't follow anything
   2. 00:45:381 (5) - Same as above
   3. 00:46:881 (1) - Change to a 1/2 slider , same reason
   4. 00:49:047 (3,5) - Delete this two notes
   5. 01:03:547 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I can't see any reason to change slider's speed here , I hope you can change it back :3
   6. 01:09:047 (4) - Delete
   7. 01:11:047 (2) - Same
   8. 01:15:047 (2) - Delete
   9. 01:19:047 (2) - Same
   10. 01:23:048 (8) - Delete , and you can change 7,9 to a 1/2 slider too :3
   11. 01:41:548 (4) - I think you can make this slider better
   12. 01:55:548 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Same as 01:03:547 - no reason to change slider's speed
   13. 02:03:548 - ~ 02:04:381 - This very short break isn't needed , use your mouse to remove
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 03:12:881 (5) - Remove clap on slider's head

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ Sorry for very huge lelay >_< It's alright xD
　　
[ General]
　

1. Sadly SBer shouldn't in the tags , my map's SBer is not in the tags too But, most of the maps have the SBer's name... Like this map : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50745 Please confirm.
2. What is Insert in the Artist :O ? It is an 'Insert' song in Guilty Crown, not an OST/Opening/Ending track.
   
   Picture

   
3. Make sure last spinner end at the same time

Is it that necessary? All of the diffs end the spinner at a different time ;w;
　
[ Easy]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   Yey~ xD
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:46:881 (1) - My suggested you start this slider at 00:47:547 - And add a note 00:46:881 - Okay.
   2. 01:10:881 (1) - Do the same thing as above Okay.
   3. 01:22:881 (4) - Same , And I really don't like this slider's shape Okay, no change in shape and deleted 1 note [after, 3rd]
   4. 01:27:548 - ~ 01:31:548 - This break isn't necessary imo No change xD It looks fine to me.
   5. 01:33:548 (2) - Ctrl+> twice can get a better flow I think :3 no change.
   6. 01:43:548 (1) - End this spinner 01:45:548 - Okay.
   7. 01:59:548 (3) - This shape is very ugly Imo try my shape ?
      
      My shape

      

      480,152,119548,2,0,B|488:224|448:260|384:276|336:264|296:240|296:240|256:212|216:240|216:240|176:264|128:276|64:260|24:224|32:152,1,600,4|4

      i tried my best to make it look like it OAO I don't know how to use the code, so please help ;w; Fixed.
   8. 02:28:881 (2) - Ugly shape >_< It's okay xD
   9. 03:05:547 (4) - Highly suggested to change this slider to something else , it is too boring and I feel strange with it , try this rhythm ?
      Fixed.
   10. 03:21:547 (2,3,4) - Different spacing? make them the spacing the same?
   Fixed. 1.4 Distance here.
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 01:07:547 (3) - Remove whistle on this slider's body Ok.
   2. 01:55:548 (1) - WTF , why four finishes on this slider!!! Thay are not follow the music at all Made some changes.
   3. 02:21:548 (2) - Use whistle instead of finish sounds better , finish is too loud Okay
   4. 02:55:547 (1) - Remove finish end because these is no cymbal in the music Eto, no change. It sounds okay to me...
   5. 03:01:547 (2) - Remove clap end , it's not fits the song I don't know how remove it on at the end, when I click, the beginning clap is also gone ;w;
   6. 03:15:547 (1) - Remove finish end , same reason Still no change.
   7. 03:17:547 (2) - You miss a clap on this slider's head , Consistent to add clap here Clap was also added at the end ;w; But fixed.

　

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Not bad on your first map ~ You should learn more about map xD
Good Begin , So I shoot star for you ! Sorry for my poor mod ~
Good Luck :3
Thank you for the mod and star ♥♥ It helped me modify my map~ x3

Easy

Normal

Hard

Milkshake wrote:

Easy

00:26:214- you said to add note here right? done~
00:26:881- add two notes here. u can put them on 10% vol. done
00:42:881- this note overlaps a bit. move it a bit upper. done
00:43:547- you know, i wonder why you did a spinner here. you could map it like this-
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473052 [spinner came after 00:42:881- ] done, made some changes here
00:59:548- this slider looks ugly to me, and too long.
make it shorter to 01:02:881 and add note on 01:03:548. done, made some changes here too
01:07:548- RNC done
01:10:881- ^ nope
01:11:548- NC ^
01:14:881- RNC done
01:59:548- looks kinda ugly..? looks okay to me
01:34:811- finish done
01:35:548- remove finish done
01:42:214- this clap feels random, change to whistle or just remove it i like its sound, so no
01:47:548- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473065 make better shape like this. copy paste it for the next one,
both looks kinda weird
^also finish on the spinner after that done
01:56:881- remove finish done
01:57:548- finish done
01:59:548- finish here and in the end of the slider done
02:22:881- add note. done
02:34:881- RNC done
02:35:548- NC done
02:39:548- finish okay
02:42:881- feels kinda early for me. try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/473075
1 is stacked with 2 it's okay to me ;w; no change
02:56:881- clap ok
02:57:548- remove clap ok
03:00:881- clap done
03:01:548- remove clap done
03:06:881- clap done
03:16:881- remove finish put clap done
03:17:548- put finish okay i guess
03:21:548- ^ okay
03:27:548- the fuck is that long spinner. end it here. OMG what happened here done fixed

gl.
Thanks for the mod! Made a lot of changes on my diff <3 Kds to you~

Saten wrote:

owo

[General]
I think you can do a better job on the edges on the comboburst~


I couldn't find a better one and I think it looks okay ;w; It's part of the render. If it look so bad then.. I'll try my best to find a person who can render off the edges of the comboburst.
o.o

[Easy]
like the other diffs, you should lower the volume to 10-15% fixed
00:29:548 (6) - move it to x:256 y:212 aka middle-line moved to x:256 y:216 if it's fine, still middle-line part
00:32:881 (1) - stack this with previous object fixed and made some changes
01:31:548 (1) - remove the finish from the end fixed
01:33:548 (2) - ^ this one has no finish?
01:35:548 (3) - add finish on start fixed
01:55:548 (1) - remove the finish from the first repeat and add finish on the beginning as well okay
01:59:548 (3) - not completely symmetric. But then again, no one would notice that while playing Sorry about that xD If could make it more symmetric, please help me then ;w;
02:55:547 (1) - add finish on start removed clap and changed to finish
03:07:548 (5) - whistle on tail done
03:13:547 (4,1) - try avoid letting them touch each-other fixed
03:15:547 (1) - finish on start removed clap and changed to finish
03:17:547 (2) - remove finish from both sides fixed


calm song~

good luck♪ Thank you Saten <3

• General ~

• • Add "Departures" in your tag. (This album)

• • Need more Hitsound and sound volume orz

• Unrankable ~

• • Silence "soft-sliderslide" is Unrankable from Ranking Criteria.

SPOILER

R e v i v e wrote:

Hi from my FB modding queue ~

• General ~

• • Add "Departures" in your tag. (This album) Fixed~

• • Need more Hitsound and sound volume orz Easy diff has now 25% volume, thanks to your mod. xD Idk with the other diffs.

• Unrankable ~

• • Silence "soft-sliderslide" is Unrankable from Ranking Criteria. OMG ;w; If it's really unrankable for this map, i'll find a sliderslide that is softer and has a sound. The slider would really sounds bad if it has sounds =w=

My suggestion ~

Easy ~

• I'll focus only this diff because other diff it's fine okay ? (but need more hitsound) Okay sure, it would help me improve my skills since I'm still a newbie mapper >w<

• I highly recommend use all "25% Hitsound volume" in this difficulty, coz it's easy to listen for new player. (Some note Finish and Whistle sound it's look silence) Okay fixed, except for one part only 10% volume bec. it is like an extra note. It wouldn't sound good if it's too loud.

00:27:548 (4) - Remove whistle. No. It has a bg sound and sounds like whistle at that part.
00:29:548 (6) - Add whistle start. It sounds weird? So no.
00:43:547 (3) - ^ Okay.
00:47:547 (6) - Add whistle start & end. Fixed
00:58:214 (1) - Feel weird end finish, I suggest you remove it. Okay
00:59:548 (2) - Add whistle end. done
01:22:881 (3) - Add whistle. okay
01:26:881 (1,2) - Feel weird again, it's miss 01:26:214 (x) note, maybe move spinner end to 01:26:214 i'm just following the beat of the song. If i move the spinner to 01:26:214, it doesn't make sense and doesn't follow the rhythm so no. If I also add a note there, the newbie players will find it hard to readjust their cursors and stuff.
01:31:548 (1,2,3) - Add whistle end all these slider.okay
01:40:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe arrange this note like this ?

SPOILER

no change, looks okay to me
01:40:881 (2,5) - Add whistle. ok
01:56:881 (1) - Add Whistle this time. Okay
01:58:881 (2) - Add whistle. okay
02:19:548 (1) - Whistle end. done
02:22:881 (3) - Add whistle. okay
02:28:881 (2) - Whistle start & end. ok
02:32:881 (5) - Whistle start. ok
02:34:881 (6) - Whistle. fixed
02:35:548 (1,2) - Whistle end. done
02:42:881 (1,2) - Whistle start. okay
02:46:881 (3) - Whistle. done
02:55:547 (1,2,1,2) - Whistle end. okay~
03:05:547 (4) - ^ okay
03:12:881 (3) - Whistle. fixed
03:13:547 (4) - Finish end. fixed
03:15:548 (1,2) - Whistle end. (If you have other finish sound remove it.) Fixed but I didn't remove the finish in (1)
03:19:547 (1,2) - Whistle end. done

Good luck >3 Thank you for the mod >w< Made a lot of changes. #whistle♫

AWtheSHiNOBi wrote:

revise

1. I was expected a better custom soft-hitclap which fit this song more, maybe you can use this
   http://puu.sh/1vYhz

1. 00:51:547 (1) - Hmm, I feel end this spinner at 00:54:881 would be better
2. 01:26:881 (2) - NC this note since it's after a spinner
3. 02:55:547 (1) - I think you can raise volume to 40% to the head of this slider

1. 03:10:547 (2) - NC due to spinner
2. 01:47:548 (1) - Slider head, 40%-50% volume better imo
3. 02:55:547 (3) - ^

1. 00:35:547 - Why here 0.5x BPM?
2. 01:41:548 (4) - Try this code for a better curve, if you change this, remember to adjust the notes after this slider
   
   SPOILER

   248,184,101548,2,0,B|124:200|88:120|160:56|232:120|196:200|72:184,1,320,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   
3. 01:58:881 (1,5) - It's weird that in a same combe, 1 is 0.5x BPM but 5 is 1x BPM, maybe just change 1 to 1x BPM?
4. 02:55:547 (1) - Slider head, 40%-50% volume maybe?
5. 03:05:547 (4) - If you changed 01:41:548 (4), change this, too

Breeze wrote:

Hi Breeze! >w< [General]

1. I was expected a better custom soft-hitclap which fit this song more, maybe you can use this
   http://puu.sh/1vYhz

I will fix this later, puush site seems to be down :/

December 3- Fixed and Added! It sound okay~ xD

[Easy]

1. 00:51:547 (1) - Hmm, I feel end this spinner at 00:54:881 would be better Okay, sure. Fixed.
2. 01:26:881 (2) - NC this note since it's after a spinner Okay Fixed~
3. 02:55:547 (1) - I think you can raise volume to 40% to the head of this slider Sure, fixed.

[Starry's Normal] I'm going to be the one to fix Starry's diff since she is hiatus at the moment~

1. 03:10:547 (2) - NC due to spinner Fixed~
2. 01:47:548 (1) - Slider head, 40%-50% volume better imo Fixed~
3. 02:55:547 (3) - ^ Fixed~

Awaiting Crystal's response for her diff~

Fixed Crystal's Diff!

Call me back when you have reply Okay! Thanks for the mod and for the ✰ <'3 Sent a reply ~ x)

MMzz wrote:

Hello MMzz~
[Easy]
01:27:548 (2) - There needs to be a break after this note. Fixed!

[Normal]
02:27:548 (2) - Put the NC here instead of 02:27:214 (1) - . Follow the downbeat like you have been. Fixed!

Just these two small things, call me back when it's fixed!
Thank you for the mod! Sent a reply ~ x)