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Yousei Teikoku - Kyouki Chinden (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Saten
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 20 november 2013 at 04:50:29

Artist: Yousei Teikoku
Title: Kyouki Chinden (TV Size)
Source: Mirai Nikki
Tags: Saten-san alternative opening satona kurousagi OnosakiHito
BPM: 280
Filesize: 9940kb
Play Time: 01:33
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,93 stars, 219 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 412 notes)
  3. Insanity (5 stars, 443 notes)
  4. Lunaticy (5 stars, 434 notes)
  5. Madness Precipitation (5 stars, 458 notes)
  6. Normal (2,27 stars, 91 notes)
  7. Ono's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 572 notes)
  8. Taikosaki (4,89 stars, 843 notes)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kyouki Chinden (TV Size)
Download: Yousei Teikoku - Kyouki Chinden (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mirai Nikki~
LiSA x_old
#1
Wishy
SATEN I LOVE YOU AND I THINK IS MAP IS EXCELLENT, HAVEN'T EVEN PLAYED IT YET.
meiikyuu
yay nice op ^^ good luck! star~
Aqo

Wishy22 wrote:

SATEN I LOVE YOU AND I THINK IS MAP IS EXCELLENT, HAVEN'T EVEN PLAYED IT YET.
ditto to that OMG THE SUSPENSION CAN'T WAIT

Topic Starter
Saten
This is going to be a 50/50 rank/app mapset~

cake
Verdisphena
Great work here <3
Jenny
140 BPM.
Topic Starter
Saten

Jenny wrote:

140 BPM.
No.
Kawayi Rika
Checked map for Queue ~

Nothing found issue, amazing map and song ~

Have a star fight ~
:)
Sanae Kochiya
I hope this map get ranked :D Star~
Topic Starter
Saten
I hope so too

Thanks for the stars :oops:


If only people would mod this map~
meiikyuu
meiikyuu mod ww

Normal
  1. 00:06:351 (2,3) - line up with 00:04:637 (4,1) - ?
  2. 00:41:494 (1) - remove NC, because the next combo after this (00:43:208 (1,2,3,4) - ) is a similar part with all one color combo
  3. 01:08:923 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern is alright if you want to keep, but maybe to follow the rhythm a little more, try :
  4. 01:23:923 (1) - (nazi) not perfect symmetry. you can ignore if you dont care xD
Hard
  1. 00:08:923 (1) - consider making this blanket with 00:08:494 (4) - somehow like you did with 00:06:780 (4,1) - ...
  2. 00:13:637 (1) - don't let it touch the reverse? it stands out oddly since it is the only slider that does this
  3. 00:50:923 (3) - make neater blanket around 2 (theres a code in the spoiler if you need)
    SPOILER

    424,140,50923,2,0,B|480:152|516:196|516:260|480:296,1,200
    388,328,51565,1,8,0:0:0
  4. 01:03:994 (1) - same deal with this if u want
Insane
  1. 00:16:637 (1) - looks very..at the edge xD i guess its ok but just pointing it out
  2. 00:18:994 (4) - optional, but maybe u can ctrl+J (vertical flip) to form diamond pattern
  3. 00:35:280 (3) - make slider end stack with 00:35:923 (2) - & 00:36:351 (1) - together
  4. 01:07:208 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern might suit better (having the triplet stack on the end of the first orange slider rather than on top of the second slider):
  5. 01:34:101 (1) - NC might not be necessary (if you decide to remove NC, u should do it for the diffs that have it also)
Insanity
  1. 00:10:637 (1) - lol epic
  2. 00:17:601 (2) - stack with 00:18:030 (4) - (not sure if it was intentional tho)
  3. 00:21:780 (4) - NC here and then remove NC on next sliderin 00:22:208 -
  4. 01:09:565 (3) - make more balanced? as in move third point to x:328 y:100 or something
Lunaticy
  1. 00:49:637 (3) - make a little less curvy so that it flows with 00:49:208 (1,2) -
  2. 00:57:565 (3) - how about flipping this horizontally and make it face the other way so that it doesnt fly too close to the edge
Madness Precipitation
  1. 00:30:780 (3) - move down a bit so that its not so close to 00:30:137 (1,2) -
  2. 01:04:637 (1,2,3) - don't make them touch each other? space them out a little (similar to what you did at 01:00:351 (1,2,3,4) - ) . Just move the middle slider (01:04:958 (2) - ) 5 grids up ~ (and it will also run over 01:03:673 (2) - neatly ^^)
nice job ♥
Topic Starter
Saten

meiikyuu wrote:

meiikyuu mod ww

Normal
  1. 00:06:351 (2,3) - line up with 00:04:637 (4,1) - ? done
  2. 00:41:494 (1) - remove NC, because the next combo after this (00:43:208 (1,2,3,4) - ) is a similar part with all one color combo done
  3. 01:08:923 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern is alright if you want to keep, but maybe to follow the rhythm a little more, try :
    did something similar
  4. 01:23:923 (1) - (nazi) not perfect symmetry. you can ignore if you dont care xD lol ok
Hard
  1. 00:08:923 (1) - consider making this blanket with 00:08:494 (4) - somehow like you did with 00:06:780 (4,1) - ... ok
  2. 00:13:637 (1) - don't let it touch the reverse? it stands out oddly since it is the only slider that does this kinda hard to avoid that in this situation
  3. 00:50:923 (3) - make neater blanket around 2 (theres a code in the spoiler if you need) I think I did it right
    SPOILER

    424,140,50923,2,0,B|480:152|516:196|516:260|480:296,1,200
    388,328,51565,1,8,0:0:0
  4. 01:03:994 (1) - same deal with this if u want ^
Insane
  1. 00:16:637 (1) - looks very..at the edge xD i guess its ok but just pointing it out
  2. 00:18:994 (4) - optional, but maybe u can ctrl+J (vertical flip) to form diamond pattern
  3. 00:35:280 (3) - make slider end stack with 00:35:923 (2) - & 00:36:351 (1) - together done
  4. 01:07:208 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern might suit better (having the triplet stack on the end of the first orange slider rather than on top of the second slider):
    I usually don't do such patterns unless there's a chain of objects
  5. 01:34:101 (1) - NC might not be necessary (if you decide to remove NC, u should do it for the diffs that have it also) gonna keep it I guess
Insanity
  1. 00:10:637 (1) - lol epic :3
  2. 00:17:601 (2) - stack with 00:18:030 (4) - (not sure if it was intentional tho) intentional~
  3. 00:21:780 (4) - NC here and then remove NC on next sliderin 00:22:208 - done
  4. 01:09:565 (3) - make more balanced? as in move third point to x:328 y:100 or something I'm pretty sure it a rotated slider of the previous one
Lunaticy
  1. 00:49:637 (3) - make a little less curvy so that it flows with 00:49:208 (1,2) - done
  2. 00:57:565 (3) - how about flipping this horizontally and make it face the other way so that it doesnt fly too close to the edge done
Madness Precipitation
  1. 00:30:780 (3) - move down a bit so that its not so close to 00:30:137 (1,2) - I used 1,0x spacing tho, but ok
  2. 01:04:637 (1,2,3) - don't make them touch each other? space them out a little (similar to what you did at 01:00:351 (1,2,3,4) - ) . Just move the middle slider (01:04:958 (2) - ) 5 grids up ~ (and it will also run over 01:03:673 (2) - neatly ^^) ok
nice job ♥
thanks ♥
KinomiCandy
where is that ono
Topic Starter
Saten

KinomiCandy wrote:

where is that ono
You should poke him
He needs motivation~
OnosakiHito
I need motivation for gods sake. haha
Wimzie
I really love this beatmap, I hope to see it ranked in the future! :3
PrivatHansi1
You cant mod stuff thats nearly perfect >.<
nice maps braw :-*
jdtorres1995
i love you :o :o :o :o :o
Verdisphena
ghahgaghahg

Damn you Ono, this is so hard ):
KindSoul
I love this and I can't wait to see it ranked! You did a really nice job; I'm playing it nonstop.

Just a suggestion: In the Hard difficulty, at 00:10:637 wouldn't that look prettier if you used a curve slider? Like so:

LQA20Ans
I'm a newbie modder...

But I love this map(especially Lunaticy), I do some novice mod...

(And VEEEEEEEERRRRYYYYY short mod lol)


[Normal]

-00:25:637 (2) - Add finish like 00:15:780 (1,2,1) -

-00:55:208 (1) - Add clap on middle of slider.

-01:08:923 (2,3) - How about this one? It's quite fit to vocal line.



-01:11:923 (2) - Add clap

-01:13:637 (2) - ^

-01:16:637 (4) - ^

[Hard]

-00:10:637 (1) - This shape looks not good imo. Please change to better shape.

-01:20:923 ~ 01:27:565 - This part needs clap sound like other diffs.

Add clap on Big white tick and the middle of two big white tick sounds nice imo.

[Lunaticy]

-00:10:637 (1) - I got some idea form 'Forgotten'(made by Blue Dragon)


Like this repeat slider, give a variation to volume will be good imo.

Here is an example.

Example
10851,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
11065,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
11280,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
11494,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
11708,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
11923,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
12030,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
12137,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
12244,-100,4,2,1,95,0,0

It will emphasize four clap sounds.

-01:03:780 (3) - Stack with 01:02:387 (2) - (just give little more jump)



So fun map! (and 'diabolique' map to me T.T)

I wish it would be rank.


PS : Double star! :3
Topic Starter
Saten

KindSoul wrote:

I love this and I can't wait to see it ranked! You did a really nice job; I'm playing it nonstop.

Just a suggestion: In the Hard difficulty, at 00:10:637 wouldn't that look prettier if you used a curve slider? Like so:

I would like to have the circle going inwards, but you can't do it with that method :(

LQA20Ans wrote:

I'm a newbie modder...

But I love this map(especially Lunaticy), I do some novice mod...

(And VEEEEEEEERRRRYYYYY short mod lol)


[Normal]

-00:25:637 (2) - Add finish like 00:15:780 (1,2,1) - The pattern I use is somewhat different, and I can't hear any cymbal sound in the background either

-00:55:208 (1) - Add clap on middle of slider. There's no drum sound on this beat though

-01:08:923 (2,3) - How about this one? It's quite fit to vocal line. Yeah, fixed



-01:11:923 (2) - Add clap The drum sound goes on the downbeats, which is the white before and after in that pattern

-01:13:637 (2) - ^ Same as above

-01:16:637 (4) - ^ ^

[Hard]

-00:10:637 (1) - This shape looks not good imo. Please change to better shape. I suck at making sliders, I don't know how to do it lol. I don't want a complete circle though, I want it to go inwards like I did it

-01:20:923 ~ 01:27:565 - This part needs clap sound like other diffs.

Add clap on Big white tick and the middle of two big white tick sounds nice imo. It was intended though, but I added them

[Lunaticy]

-00:10:637 (1) - I got some idea form 'Forgotten'(made by Blue Dragon)


Like this repeat slider, give a variation to volume will be good imo.

Here is an example.

Example
10851,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
11065,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
11280,-100,4,2,1,10,0,0
11494,-100,4,2,1,20,0,0
11708,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
11923,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
12030,-100,4,2,1,85,0,0
12137,-100,4,2,1,90,0,0
12244,-100,4,2,1,95,0,0

It will emphasize four clap sounds.
I tried it, but I prefer the way it already was

-01:03:780 (3) - Stack with 01:02:387 (2) - (just give little more jump) sure, done



So fun map! (and 'diabolique' map to me T.T)

I wish it would be rank.


PS : Double star! :3
Thanks :3
justin-chan
LOVE THIS MAP. PLS RANK THIS! >:( :D :)
St-Zemon
DoKuNu
Very good map ! I can't wait for the ranking ><

EDIT : I'm a newbie in the domain of mapping, i want to give you a star but I don't know how xD
justin-chan
I love the difficulties and they are awesome :). I want to contribute too. I have a skinning for this and it is not yet finished. tell me what Am I missing with ok?
try it youself guys. LINK: http://puu.sh/1QrD0 :o
wolfinak
I really liked this map. Should be approved :D
Aoko
Oh Saten ♥
Jaavier
Aprovve it, excelent beatmap :DDDDDDDDDDD :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
minghojai
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
mathis72700
i can't wait for ranked --'
Keila
the map is fine, but I think you have to put more sound to hitcircles (hitclap, hitwhistle)
Rizumu Tenshi
Oh well, yet another Saten map I love, I was shocked when I saw that it was a TV Size, so...?
Kyouki Chinden redefined the words "TV Size map"!

I felt like something bothers me, so I decided to show it off to you to see if it's an issue or not...
[Madness Precipitation]
01:34:101 (1) - This one doesn't need to be a new combo imo, the one before it is an NC already, and this time, unlike Kuraki Sekai no Doukoku, there's a ton of 1/2s before both items! Also seen in Insanity, Insane and Lunaticy.

You may want to get some mods, or an MAT if this map is fine and doesn't need mods!
Aqo
Glad to see this revived from graveyard! please please rank <3 (and good luck on fast rank, unrank, and re-rank :b )

Can't mod since I think Saten mapset is all perfect, instead I collected some random stars, here you go (ノ゚-゚)ノ☆☆
Midnaait
This map is perfect *0*

I really enjoy your maps :3

Hope it gets ranked soon

And taiko diffs are great too, but Taikosaki is overmapped xD

Good luck! :)

Also a little taiko mod, all are suggestions, and don't be harsh on me Ono :?

Taikosaki

00:24:673 (2,3,1,2,1) - kkdkd?
00:38:708 (1,1) - add clap on the first and remove it on the second, I think it sounds better
00:58:315 (1) - remove clap?
01:28:101 (1,1) - add a note between those beats, and add a clap on 01:28:208 (1) - if you did that
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