1. Easy (1.61 stars, 145 notes)
2. Hard (4.78 stars, 353 notes)
3. Jumping (5 stars, 502 notes)
4. Normal (4.03 stars, 222 notes)

phonic wrote:

この譜面のゲスト作りたい！と思ったのだが・・・
初音ミクの方まだ終わってない( ﾟдﾟ )

banvi wrote:

phonic wrote:

この譜面のゲスト作りたい！と思ったのだが・・・
初音ミクの方まだ終わってない( ﾟдﾟ )

大歓迎！両方作っても良いよ～
それにまだJumping完成するのに時間かかりそうだしあまり急がなくても良いです(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Lundlerol wrote:

これの太鼓譜面って作っていいですか；w；?
よかったら参加したいです

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from ??? lol again
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[General]
- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:06:946, ends on 00:07:053
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:06:946, ends on 01:07:053
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:20:660, ends on 02:20:767
- [Jumping!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:06:946, ends on 00:07:053
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:06:946, ends on 01:07:053
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:20:660, ends on 02:20:767
Kiai #4: Starts on 02:54:946, ends on 02:55:053
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:06:946, ends on 00:07:053
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:06:946, ends on 01:07:053
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:20:660, ends on 02:20:767

wait, it's still wip. I'll fix after all diffs were done.


[Jumping!!]
00:32:446 (1) - spacing did Ctrl+R
01:20:231 (6) - remove NC
01:20:660 (10) - and then NC here nah because it's cleaner than yours I think. But if other modder said this, I may change :p
02:03:517 (1) - stack with 02:01:803 (1) completely may do a better effect yep, however I don't care this for now :p
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> < KOTOKO nice song
Perfect Mapset for "Jumping!!" diff. WoW
Star!~☆

Yusura Sakurae wrote:

のおおお！　DLしたいのに　なんか正確にupdateされてないとか出てきて　できないよおおおお！！！　TwT

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of Lucky mod.

So moe the song is! I like it.

[General]

1. Suggestion of Kiai time
   #1 Kiai:00:06:946 - to 00:20:660 -
   #2 Kiai:01:06:946 - to 01:20:231 -
   #3 Kiai:01:20:660 - to 01:34:374 -
   #4 Kiai:02:20:660 - to 02:48:089 -
   ok, I realized better to use kiai
   02:54:946 (2) - remove Kiai

nah, I think this effect is good for last.

[Easy]

1. 01:20:231 - I perfer to add a note hmm, no. I don't want to add anything here
2. 00:06:517 (1) - finish
3. 01:06:517 (1) - ^
4. 02:20:231 (1) - ^

Hmmmm, it sounds loud for me. I think this backsound plays instead of the hitsound enough, so I don't want to add hitsounds here...

[Normal]

1. Same as Easy to add finish.
2. 00:48:089 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner. ok~

[Hard]

1. Same as Easy to add finish.

[Jumping]

1. Same as Easy to add finish.
2. 00:11:660 (9,1) - blacket better hmm, I really like this formation, so I wanna keep this.
3. 00:36:731 (3,4) - ctrl+g sounds odd jump, I wanna keep the distance in this part.
4. 00:38:874 (3,4) - ^ nice, changed!
5. 01:20:231 (1) - remove NC and NC here:01:20:660 (5) - Hmm, I wanna keep this because it's looks cleaner than yours...

Good luck~!

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

Forget to add fav
added and stared!

S o r d a wrote:

ranked期待してます！！ファイトー！！

hoLysoup wrote:

S o r d a wrote:

ranked期待してます！！ファイトー！！

banvi! my idoL : )!!

KSHR wrote:

無期限osu!復帰!?

Satellite wrote:

banviさんお帰りなさい(?)
ranked期待してます><　★

-Gamu- wrote:

こんばんは～＼( 'ω')／
mod requestありがとうございます :3/ :3/

[General]

●tagsについて：　"giga"　を追加しませんか？　こちらの曲は　戯画制作のゲームの主題歌として使われているので、必要なのではないかと思いました。ok

●タイトルについて：　「さくらんぼキッス 〜爆発だも〜ん〜」が正しいのではないでしょうか？　
こちらのウィキサイトでは、そう書かれていました。
そうすると、　Romanised Title は　「Sakuranbo Kiss ~Bakuhatsu Damo~n~」 みたいな感じになるんですかね。
実は昔のrankedのやつ参考にしてたのでこのままでいっかとか思ってましたがやはり正しいタイトルにした方が良いですね（汗） changed

●ソースについて：　先ほど、戯画制作のゲームの主題歌と書きました通り、この曲のソースは「カラフルキッス 〜12コの胸キュン!〜」を入れるべきだと思いました。
なので、Tagsに入っているのをソースに移動させればいいと思います。
入れようかどうか迷ってましたが入れました。多分ソースはロマライズが主流だと思うのでそっちで入れまそた

[Easy]

●AR+1してほしいです。　Normalとの差が大きいので、バランスを取るために。 ok
●00:06:946 (2) - Add new combo? ここからbackの音が新しく（？）始まりますし、kiai timeもここからなので、new comboつけるといいかもです。 HardやJumpingはつけているのですが、EasyもNormalでもつけてもいいかと思います。 easyとnormalは入れないべきかなあって思いましたが指摘通り入れることにしました！
●00:10:374 (1) - 形は00:08:660 (4)の部分を左右反転させたのにしませんか？　そのほうが見た目も良いと思いました。うーむ、なるべくスライダーの形のバリエーションとかを変えたいのでこのままで
●01:06:946 (2) - Add new combo? 理由は00:06:946と同じです。 ok
●01:53:231 (3) - Move to x:140 y:284? このほうが見た目好きです。あと、形を少し変えることによって、いい感じになると思います。 ok
　参考画像⇒　http://puu.sh/4YyQn.jpg
●02:20:660 (2) - Add new combo? 理由は00:06:946と同じです。 ok
●02:54:946 (2) - ^ 音が変わってるので入れるといいかもです。 迷いましたがこのdiffだとここもnew comboにすると違和感かんじるので保留で

[Normal]

●00:06:946 (2) - Easyと同じ。
●00:45:517 (3,4) - Move to x:184 y:136. 超細かいけど　一様・・・　綺麗な△
●00:58:374 (1) - ^ x:224 y:308. 同じく。
●01:06:946 (2) - Easyと同じ。
●02:20:660 (2) - ^
●02:54:946 (3) - ^　easyに同じく
後はすべて変えました！

[Hard]

●01:41:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - こちらのほうが好きです。　Hardでもこれくらいのジャンプなら問題ないと思います。http://puu.sh/4YzM6.jpg
nice提案！…なんですがここにいきなりjump入れるのは変かなって思うので、このパートはジャンプ入れないよう統一しているのでこのままで><
●01:48:518 (2) - Add clap. 最初。
●01:49:160 (4) - ^ 最後。
●01:49:589 (1) - 最後のclap remove.
●01:50:231 (2) - Add clap. 最初。
●01:50:874 (4) - ^ 真ん中
●01:51:946 (2) - ^
●01:52:803 (5) - ^
●01:54:089 (8) - ^ 最後。
●01:55:374 (3) - ^
●01:56:017 (6) - ^ 最後。
もしかして、付け忘れかな・・　おうおうおうおうおうI'm lazy／(^o^)＼ 入れました！

[Jumping]

●00:51:089 (3) - Additions: Drum ⇒ Auto. たぶん、ミス？　合わないと思います。ミスですね…　直しました


全然指摘するとこなかったです。綺麗で良かったです。　綺麗さが取り柄です(｀・ω・´)ｷﾘｯ
がんばってくださいー　ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi banvi~ from my Queue~

[Easy]

01:00:089 (3) - This batter yap, but I want to make more sharp patterns, so I'll keep. And I think it's not so bad...

SPOILER

01:56:446 (4) - NC? no, due to consistent combo

02:37:803 (1) - Try This? okay! arranged

SPOILER

[Normal]

OD -1? no, due to diff balance

00:45:731 (4) - delete? I don't wanna delete this ><
01:32:446 (4) - ^ ^
02:01:803 - Finish? already added o.o

[Hard]

00:49:374 (4) - Do you like jump? I wanted to keep distance... but it's really nice flow! so changed! nice suggestion!!

SPOILER

01:58:374 (1) - Try This? hmm.. no, I wanna use a smooth slider at this time

SPOILER

01:59:445 (3) - ^ ^

SPOILER

[Jumping]

00:54:946 (5) - NC?
01:11:231 (7) - ^
01:17:874 (2) - Ctrl + g nah...
01:20:874 (6) - NC?
02:24:945 (7) - ^
02:34:589 (6) - ^
Umm, I think these NC are needless ._.

Good Map banvi have this~(>^_^)> Thanks~

1. The Source should be " Colorful Kiss ~12 ko no Mune Kyun!~ ". http://vndb.org/v1472
2. Why don't you to put " opening eroge visual novel " to tag ? i often see these things on ranked map. so consider adding it.

1. 00:15:841 - , 00:32:762 - ,02:08:924 - These are unsnapped green sections, please resnap on 1/4 line.
2. 00:35:874 (2,3) - Rhythm suggestion : this part would not fit well with this kind of music. i agree your #2 part at here 01:49:589 (2,3,1) - .it will be able to follow the vocal , also you can add a clap to the tail of the slider. so please try my suggestion like this
   
   at last, If you follow my suggestions, don't forget to remove green sections of this part.
3. 00:58:374 (1) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note down like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally.
   
   img

   
4. 01:01:374 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here.
5. 01:41:231 (1,2) - As you can see here, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural flow. i recommend you to use ctrl + G like this
   
   img

   
6. 02:04:803 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard, i hope you remove it and remake some sliders.
7. 02:15:089 - same as here. 01:01:374 -
8. 02:54:946 (2) - a bit nazi mod, how about adding a new combo here ? Because you put kiai time to here. Try comparing this to the other diffs :3 and you should put more volume around 65~75% for the climax!

1. HP Drain rate -1. I think " 4 " is a little difficult for beginners
2. 00:18:731 (4) - ,00:19:589 (2) - missing clap here.
3. 00:33:517 (3) - ,01:47:446 (3) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum.
4. 00:37:374 - i want to add a clap here, so why don't you extend previous slider ?
5. 01:18:731 (4) - ,01:19:589 (2) - same as here. If you follow my suggestions, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part.
6. 01:53:874 - you should follow the vocal "pun pun" lol because this voice feels so sweet. so consider adding a note here.
7. 01:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - remove drum sound to this part since it follows nothing.
8. 02:47:231 (3) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider right for the flow ? so the slider repeat will flow more naturally and beautifully.
   
   img

   
9. 02:54:946 (3) - Same as Easy diff.

• /me eats this girl :3

1. 00:19:803 (3) - hmm... this repeat is same as normal diff. it is better to put more sound on this difficulty imo. so why don't you put 3 hits ? like this
   
2. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:445 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.)
3. 01:33:517 (3) - same as here.00:19:803 (3) -
4. 01:54:089 (8) - i expect something related to previous slider. i recommend you to use a curve slider in place of straight slider. it looks better to me.
5. 01:59:446 (3) - it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you can put a clap to the tail of the slider. try my suggestion like this
   

1. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:446 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.)
2. 00:46:803 (4) - i want to put a new combo on this stream, like your previous part 00:40:160 (1) -
3. 01:06:946 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: i recommend you to put more jump at (3) -> (4) , try my suggestion like this
   
   img

   
4. 01:13:803 (1,2,3) - ^
5. 02:02:660 (1) - i feel it doesn't need new combo here. so consider removing it like your previous part. 00:48:088 (1,2,3,4) -
6. 02:54:303 (1,2) - ctrl + G, As you can see here, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. The jumps will flow more naturally.
   
   img

   

alacat wrote:

Hi, banvi san :3　:333

[General]

1. The Source should be " Colorful Kiss ~12 ko no Mune Kyun!~ ". http://vndb.org/v1472 fixed
2. Why don't you to put " opening eroge visual novel " to tag ? i often see these things on ranked map. so consider adding it. oh, I didn't know that, added

[Easy]

1. 00:15:841 - , 00:32:762 - ,02:08:924 - These are unsnapped green sections, please resnap on 1/4 line. fixed
2. 00:35:874 (2,3) - Rhythm suggestion : this part would not fit well with this kind of music. i agree your #2 part at here 01:49:589 (2,3,1) - .it will be able to follow the vocal , also you can add a clap to the tail of the slider. so please try my suggestion like this
   
   at last, If you follow my suggestions, don't forget to remove green sections of this part. okay, arrenged
3. 00:58:374 (1) - i feel this part looks crowded so try to move this note down like this my suggestion ,it will flow more naturally. ok
   
   img

   
4. 01:01:374 - i feel kinda empty here, it is better to use 1/1 rhythm for playing also i can hear sound of a bass drum. so consider adding a note here. hmm, I don't want to add a note here. This empty is needed as easy diff imo
5. 01:41:231 (1,2) - As you can see here, the transition from this to the next slider almost feels like unnatural flow. i recommend you to use ctrl + G like this ok
   
   img

   
6. 02:04:803 (4,1,2,3,4) - This part feels too hard, i hope you remove it and remake some sliders. oh really? well... changed to a slider at 02:06:089 (3,4)
7. 02:15:089 - same as here. 01:01:374 - same as
8. 02:54:946 (2) - a bit nazi mod, how about adding a new combo here ? Because you put kiai time to here. Try comparing this to the other diffs :3 and you should put more volume around 65~75% for the climax! I was hesitant to put a new combo here. ok, added :3 and raised a volume to 70%

[Normal]

1. HP Drain rate -1. I think " 4 " is a little difficult for beginners ok
2. 00:18:731 (4) - ,00:19:589 (2) - missing clap here. missing? hmm, it sounds weird a bit for me...
3. 00:33:517 (3) - ,01:47:446 (3) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. a soft whistle sounds weird for me, so added custom clap
4. 00:37:374 - i want to add a clap here, so why don't you extend previous slider ? Hmm, I know but if I extended this slider, it sounds really weird for me. anyway I want to follow the vocal at this part, so didn't change sorry ><
5. 01:18:731 (4) - ,01:19:589 (2) - same as here. If you follow my suggestions, you should be able to apply my suggestion for the rest of the part. same as
6. 01:53:874 - you should follow the vocal "pun pun" lol because this voice feels so sweet. so consider adding a note here. lol I agree, changed!
7. 01:58:374 (1,2,3,4) - remove drum sound to this part since it follows nothing. it's just my mistake, fixed
8. 02:47:231 (3) - flow suggestion: how about moving this slider right for the flow ? so the slider repeat will flow more naturally and beautifully. ok
   
   img

   
9. 02:54:946 (3) - Same as Easy diff. ok

[Hard]

• /me eats this girl :3 I ate =3=

1. 00:19:803 (3) - hmm... this repeat is same as normal diff. it is better to put more sound on this difficulty imo. so why don't you put 3 hits ? like this okay, but used a slider instead of 3 notes because I think 3 hits are a little hard at this part for hard diff.
   
2. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:445 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.) ok, same as normal diff
3. 01:33:517 (3) - same as here.00:19:803 (3) - ok
4. 01:54:089 (8) - i expect something related to previous slider. i recommend you to use a curve slider in place of straight slider. it looks better to me.
   I want to a straight slider here. It's just my feelings, sorry ><
5. 01:59:446 (3) - it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also you can put a clap to the tail of the slider. try my suggestion like this I like this pattern at this time. I really don't want to change ><
   

[Insane]

1. 00:33:731 (1) - ,01:47:446 (1) - add a soft whistle to the repeat of the slider here to follow the vocal, or add a clap to follow the bass drum. (same as normal diff.) ok
2. 00:46:803 (4) - i want to put a new combo on this stream, like your previous part 00:40:160 (1) - ok
3. 01:06:946 (1,2,3) - flow suggestion: i recommend you to put more jump at (3) -> (4) , try my suggestion like this Really nice suggestion!! changed
   
   img

   
4. 01:13:803 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
5. 02:02:660 (1) - i feel it doesn't need new combo here. so consider removing it like your previous part. 00:48:088 (1,2,3,4) - ok
6. 02:54:303 (1,2) - ctrl + G, As you can see here, the transition from this to the next note almost feels like unnatural jump. The jumps will flow more naturally. ok
   
   img

   

anyway, almost all patterns is excellent =3= Thanks!! kiss me~ >3<

Call me back for recheck when you are ready I sent form-PM ;)

1. 02:13:803 (3,4) - ちょっと見難かったのでこんな配置はいかがでしょう？
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:44:660 (1) - Ctrl+Gした方がプレイしやすかったです
2. 01:55:589 (1,2,3) - DSを01:54:946 (1,2,3) - とそろえて正六角形～
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   116,212,115589,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   237,123,115803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   100,62,116018,1,0,0:0:0:0:

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

all good! 少しの提案ですが...
[Normal]

1. 02:13:803 (3,4) - ちょっと見難かったのでこんな配置はいかがでしょう？ タイトルやここの歌詞のキッスと合わせてると言う私のどうでもいいこだわりがありますので変えませんでした>< まあノーマルなのでこの配置でも大丈夫だと思います
   
   SPOILER

   

[Jumping]

1. 00:44:660 (1) - Ctrl+Gした方がプレイしやすかったです　確かに、前後の流れが良くなったように感じました！changed!
2. 01:55:589 (1,2,3) - DSを01:54:946 (1,2,3) - とそろえて正六角形～ うーむ、ここはわざとスペーシングを大きくしたいので変えませんでした><
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   116,212,115589,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   237,123,115803,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   100,62,116018,1,0,0:0:0:0:

"Jumping"楽しかった～
こういう譜面大好きです☆ ありがとうございます！私も大好きです☆
~Good Luck for Ranked~

-No Kds-　あらら、ここ見逃していてkdsあげてしまいました... 1つですが参考になった所がありますので受け取ってくれると幸いです