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Silver Crow
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Silver Crow
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年10月21日 at 下午 06:20:11

Artist: Kawada Mami
Title: For our days
Source: Soshite ashita no sekai yori
Tags: Soshite ashita no sekai yori OP Sun Rainbow
BPM: 156
Filesize: 3063kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.75 stars, 198 notes)
  2. Rainbow's Normal (2.98 stars, 103 notes)
Download: Kawada Mami - For our days
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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そして明日の世界より OP - For our Days
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgoa953yCyQ

Hard - made by me (Done)
Rainbow's Normal - made by Sun Rainbow (Done)

Ready for MOD!

Thank you For Mod!
SPOILER
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
yanlu
l1106188 SAMA
lkx_shore
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
Bass

2012.09.15 Change Background - thank you for Sun Rainbow
Last edited by Silver Crow , edited 20 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


General

  1. offset+6吧大概, 听着早了点
  2. 另外最后那个地方有个渐慢的效果, 不知道需不需要再加红线变速0.0
Hard

  1. 00:32:576 (1) - 这是1/2拍吧..
  2. 00:33:538 (3) - 这样怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421089
  3. 00:44:307 (5) - 这里用这种reverse slider好像比较符合那个音0.0? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421090
  4. 00:50:845 (2) - 这里节奏有点诡异, 放转盘吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421094
  5. 00:55:461 (1) - 放这里好看点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421095
  6. 00:58:730 (4) - 这里的音感觉是1/2, 红线上面0.0 这样加个转向? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421098
  7. 01:09:499 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421099 大概吧...
  8. 01:11:614 (8) - 好像直接放slider效果好点... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421102
  9. 01:20:461 (1) - 容易看成中间有空拍...
  10. 01:32:961 (8) - 没必要new combo..
  11. 01:46:614 (1) - 加个5%绿线消音0.0
感觉图做得挺好, 不过有些节奏比较怪异;_;

加油0.0
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
yanlu
Hi~因為你有幫我mod所以我來了 :D

[Hard]

*kiai可以從 01:14:883 - 到 01:36:421 -

*聲音可以不用這麼小聲...
大概30-50%吧 不然打擊的聲音會都聽不到"

~自己的diff數量要比guess diff的數量多喔

00:32:961 (2) - 這裡來回有點怪
00:34:884 (5) - 改成不用來回的silder(?
00:35:652 (1,2,3) - 這邊這樣下..有點不和音樂
00:41:999 (1) - 改成不來回的silder..?
00:44:307 (5) - 換成note+silder..?
00:47:961 (5) - 來回的silder(?
00:48:729 (1) - spin移到白線上(往後一格)並延長到 00:49:883 - 或00:50:267 - ?
00:55:653 (2) - snap
01:01:422 (1) - 放這裡hd會比較不好打 要不要換個位置?(只是建議
01:20:267 - 不要這個note
01:43:153 (4,5,6,7) - snap
00:17:190 - 我覺得從這裡開始比較好><?(只是建議~

大概就這樣~這次做得很不錯耶>w<
銀鴨加油~!
Silver Crow
113 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Silver Crow

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~


General

  1. offset+6吧大概, 听着早了点
    會嗎?我沒改
  2. 另外最后那个地方有个渐慢的效果, 不知道需不需要再加红线变速0.0
Hard

  1. 00:32:576 (1) - 这是1/2拍吧..
    覺得沒問題
  2. 00:33:538 (3) - 这样怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421089
    還是維持原樣
  3. 00:44:307 (5) - 这里用这种reverse slider好像比较符合那个音0.0? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421090
    OK
  4. 00:50:845 (2) - 这里节奏有点诡异, 放转盘吧 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421094
    OK
  5. 00:55:461 (1) - 放这里好看点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421095
    OK
  6. 00:58:730 (4) - 这里的音感觉是1/2, 红线上面0.0 这样加个转向? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421098
    OK
  7. 01:09:499 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421099 大概吧...
    OK
  8. 01:11:614 (8) - 好像直接放slider效果好点... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/421102
    覺得原本的比較好~
  9. 01:20:461 (1) - 容易看成中间有空拍...
    故意的
  10. 01:32:961 (8) - 没必要new combo..
    OK
  11. 01:46:614 (1) - 加个5%绿线消音0.0
OK

感觉图做得挺好, 不过有些节奏比较怪异;_;

加油0.0

謝謝>w<
Silver Crow
113 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Silver Crow

yanlu wrote:

Hi~因為你有幫我mod所以我來了 :D

[Hard]

*kiai可以從 01:14:883 - 到 01:36:421 -

*聲音可以不用這麼小聲...
大概30-50%吧 不然打擊的聲音會都聽不到"

~自己的diff數量要比guess diff的數量多喔

00:32:961 (2) - 這裡來回有點怪
00:34:884 (5) - 改成不用來回的silder(?
00:35:652 (1,2,3) - 這邊這樣下..有點不和音樂 覺得還好
00:41:999 (1) - 改成不來回的silder..?
00:44:307 (5) - 換成note+silder..?
00:47:961 (5) - 來回的silder(?
00:48:729 (1) - spin移到白線上(往後一格)並延長到 00:49:883 - 或00:50:267 - ? 這裡我貌似沒放轉盤?
00:55:653 (2) - snap 好得~
01:01:422 (1) - 放這裡hd會比較不好打 要不要換個位置?(只是建議
01:20:267 - 不要這個note
01:43:153 (4,5,6,7) - snap 刻意的:3
00:17:190 - 我覺得從這裡開始比較好><?(只是建議~

大概就這樣~這次做得很不錯耶>w< 謝卸Lulu >w<
銀鴨加油~![/color]
嗯嗯, 謝卸mod~
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
hi~请tag加上我的ID。不要无视我的存在~
Quilt
1,476 posts
Joined May 2010
Quilt
good song xD
Silver Crow
113 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Silver Crow

Quilt wrote:

good song xD
Yeah!
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
早灣 >w<
Request from in-game PM .



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是要討論的問題
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. 請注意~您家的綠線沒對到線噢XD!
  2. 被咱找到咱可以吐槽的bookmark了 , 雖然用於表示開始,但感覺沒意義...
  3. 對於音效,可以在調高音量,似乎有點小聲

[Rainbow's Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:37:768 -
    00:45:461 -
    00:51:614 -
    00:58:152 -
    01:02:672 -
    01:08:345 -
    01:14:980 -
    01:15:076 -
    01:15:172 -
    01:15:268 -
    01:15:461 -
    01:38:730 -
    01:39:499 -
    01:43:345 -
    01:43:730 -
    01:44:114 -
    01:44:499 -

  2. 00:50:267 (1) - 不是很建議這種來回2次slider放在要當最簡單難度的Normal ,改成1個note+1個來回1次slider?~
  3. 00:52:960 (3) - 這旋律怪怪的...不如這樣?!
  4. 00:56:421 (1) - 這裡的NC意義是?~ 刪掉NC吧
  5. 01:05:267 (4,5) - 不如改成3個note 然後NC放在01:05:652 - 的note吧
  6. 01:27:190 (1) - 其實..這裡聽不出來有whistle的聲音 ..乾脆別放了

[Hard]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    00:45:653 - 你都用靜音了 這邊為何還加個30%音量的綠線..
    01:08:345 -
    01:38:730 -
    01:39:499 -
    01:43:345 -
    01:43:730 -
    01:44:114 -
    01:44:499 -

  2. 00:32:480 (1) - 開頭的overmap不太好聽..
  3. 00:32:961 (2) - 這個好獨特...迴轉那邊對到了什麼QAQ?
  4. 01:11:807 (9) - NC
  5. 01:14:884 (1) - 這個..你不覺得怪怪的嘛 OTZ 如果你是要對前面那個鐳聲 , 感覺慢了半拍
  6. 01:26:037 - 這條綠線改成kiai time 然後在 01:27:287 - 加個沒kiai time的綠線
  7. 01:27:767 (1) - re NC
  8. 01:31:807 (7) - NC
  9. 01:39:884 (7) - ^
  10. 01:45:653 (3,4,5) - 咱怎麼聽這旋律都覺得奇怪...OTZ
good song , 音效方面打起來感覺沒什麼聲音..有種似乎沒按到的感覺 看要不要調高音量,
然後~..overmap最好別使用太多 OTZ , 咱只點出咱覺得奇怪的overmap~
加油~
Shirahane_Suoh
61 posts
Joined October 2010
Shirahane_Suoh
YO 彩虹 又開GD
我也要求個GD
nice song
XDD :)
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
明日的世界=
明日的（阿卡琳！）
哇P神！
lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
General
渣Mod from my queue :)
其实红线不用插这么前

Hard
00:45:461 (2) - 不适合的fin
01:14:884 (1) - 这个打着莫名的不舒服
01:16:614 (3) - 听起来不太好
01:27:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - 打起来不舒服
01:31:134 (5) - 我觉得这歌不太适合用二连...

Rainbow's Normal
00:47:190 (1) - 听起来不太好
01:07:190 (2) - 打着不舒服
01:44:883 (3) - 滑条静音就好,不然显得略吵

祝早日rank
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
Looks like you have the bpm doubled. It should be 78.
Silver Crow
113 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Silver Crow

lkx_shore wrote:

General
渣Mod from my queue :)
其实红线不用插这么前

Hard
00:45:461 (2) - 不适合的fin k
01:14:884 (1) - 这个打着莫名的不舒服[/color]
01:16:614 (3) - 听起来不太好k
01:27:384 (1,2,3,4,5) - 打起来不舒服k
01:31:134 (5) - 我觉得这歌不太适合用二连...
沒變, 覺得還可以


祝早日rank
Thank ^_^
Silver Crow
113 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Silver Crow

those wrote:

Looks like you have the bpm doubled. It should be 78.
I think it is OK to be 156 :/
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Helloww ~


[General]
- Remove " Soshite ashita no sekai yori " from the tags because it is already the source.
- Add " Etude " into the tags.
- Make all diffs end at the same time ?
- Notes sound a bit too low, raise the volume.


[Rainbow's Normal]
- Add some more hitsounds.
- Slider blankets and circle placements can be better ~
00:39:113 (2) - Placement, move this a bit farther, its too close.
00:45:652 (1) - Slider can look better.
00:58:729 (3) - ^
01:31:037 (2) - Stack.



[Hard]
01:34:691 (4) - Stack sliders end properly ~


Nice map ~
Good luck! >w<
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
[General]
  1. Tags are inconsistent(add "sun rainbow" to tags in Hard too)
  2. I downloaded "with video" but there is no video in map. Either you forgot to upload it or you removed it. Please full resubmit map after fixes.
  3. Kiai time sections are inconsistent trough diffs.
  4. Is there any reason to keep BPM doubled? If not then please don't do it.
  5. Slidertick and sliderslide are silenced which is unrankable.
  6. It makes no sense to silence slidertick and it's rare. Better make slider tick rate 0.5.
  7. If you are going to silence sliderslide, then take this http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav rename to soft-sliderslide.wav and replace because each .wav file must be at least 100ms long and if you want to silenced sound then you must use that blank file.


[Rainbow's Normal]
Seems like background is missing, it's because it was replaced and in .osu it's wrtten "BG1". Same with video. Just remove "Video,0,"SS.flv"' from .osu file if you aren't going to use video. Drag current background to this map, make sure to full resubmit later.

  1. 00:24:113 (3) - this slider shouldn't be overlapped by (1) , and it's partially hidden by hitburst(kinda unrankable), move it away
  2. 00:33:344 (3) - improve this blanket by moving 2nd anchor 2 ticks left
  3. 00:37:575 (4) - again note being overlapped by sliderway
  4. 00:39:113 (2) - again overlap and I am not sure 00:37:960 (1,2,3) - if this pattern should be in Normal, might be confusing
  5. 00:47:190 (1) - remove NC, there is no need for it
  6. 00:53:344 (5) - move it away so it will not be overlapped by slider
  7. 01:05:267 (4,5,1) - since it's easiest diff it might cause problem for newbie players, either change it into slider with repeat or remove (5)
  8. 01:15:652 (1) - this note is being covered by spinner's hitburst which is unrankable, please move it away from center
  9. 01:15:652 (1,2,3,4) - while playing this, i found it confusing, transition there isn't good . Maybe try this
  10. 01:18:729 (1) - this slider will look nicer if done like that http://puu.sh/1cklj
  11. 01:24:113 (5) - move 1 tick right
  12. 01:24:113 (5,1,2) - that might be confusing and that (5) blanket doesn't look nice, also (2) slider could have be done better. (5) looks much better if done like that http://puu.sh/1ckBH
  13. 01:25:267 (1) - remove NC
  14. 01:33:344 (2) - move 2nd anchor to the center, looks nicer
  15. 01:34:883 (1) - also this blanket could look better
  16. 01:41:806 (4,5) - I can't hear such rhythm in music, just remove (4), sounds better imo
  17. 01:42:960 (6,1,2,3) - this rhythm doesn't sound well, this would be better

[Hard]
  1. 00:31:422 (5) - this slider with repeat makes no sense since there is no such sound in music
  2. 00:33:921 (1) - move it like that http://puu.sh/1cl90 so it will make nicer formation
  3. 00:41:999 (1) - again doesn't make sense
  4. 00:43:153 (1) - remove nc
  5. 00:46:807 (1) - remove nc
  6. 00:54:691 (3,1,2) - actually that doesn't look nice and 2 is being covered by slider's hitburst which makes it unreadable
  7. 01:02:191 (5,6,7,8) - why would you put stream for such calm song?
  8. 01:05:268 (3) - and again 1/4 slider
  9. 01:08:346 (1) - unsnapped circle
  10. 01:22:191 (1) - remove new combo
  11. 01:29:691 (1) - i dont think it's a good idea to have it hidden under slider repeat, since it's not very hard diff(not insane) it might be unrankable
  12. 01:29:884 (2) - move it away from slider so it's not overlapped
  13. 01:30:653 (4,5) - this is kinda unexceptable
  14. 01:38:730 (5) - this slider doesn't look nice

    Feels kinda overmapped.
This map needs more work, I pointed out stuff which were mostly spiking in eyes/unrankable stuff. Good luck!
Silver Crow
113 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Silver Crow

Bass wrote:

[General]
  1. Tags are inconsistent(add "sun rainbow" to tags in Hard too) K
  2. I downloaded "with video" but there is no video in map. Either you forgot to upload it or you removed it. Please full resubmit map after fixes.K
  3. Kiai time sections are inconsistent trough diffs.I thought that Guest Diff can be different in Kiai Time
  4. Is there any reason to keep BPM doubled? If not then please don't do it.It also nice in bpm156, I won't change it
  5. Slidertick and sliderslide are silenced which is unrankable. k
  6. It makes no sense to silence slidertick and it's rare. Better make slider tick rate 0.5.k
  7. If you are going to silence sliderslide, then take this http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav rename to soft-sliderslide.wav and replace because each .wav file must be at least 100ms long and if you want to silenced sound then you must use that blank file.



Hard
[*]00:31:422 (5) - this slider with repeat makes no sense since there is no such sound in musick
[*]00:33:921 (1) - move it like that http://puu.sh/1cl90 so it will make nicer formationk
[*]00:41:999 (1) - again doesn't make sensek
[*]00:43:153 (1) - remove nck
[*]00:46:807 (1) - remove nck
[*]00:54:691 (3,1,2) - actually that doesn't look nice and 2 is being covered by slider's hitburst which makes it unreadablek
[*]01:02:191 (5,6,7,8) - why would you put stream for such calm song?That streamm is short and isn't hard, for this that part going into kiai time also is a great place make me to put a short stream
[*]01:05:268 (3) - and again 1/4 sliderk
[*]01:08:346 (1) - unsnapped circleno
[*]01:22:191 (1) - remove new combok
[*]01:29:691 (1) - i dont think it's a good idea to have it hidden under slider repeat, since it's not very hard diff(not insane) it might be unrankableif it is unrankable I'll change, not now
[*]01:29:884 (2) - move it away from slider so it's not overlappedk
[*]01:30:653 (4,5) - this is kinda unexceptableno
[*]01:38:730 (5) - this slider doesn't look niceit is going to cover 01:37:961 (3) - this slider at all

Feels kinda overmapped.[/notice][/list] :/

This map needs more work, I pointed out stuff which were mostly spiking in eyes/unrankable stuff. Good luck!
Thank you for MOD!
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
01:42:960 (6,1,2,3) - this rhythm doesn't sound well, this would be better Have rhythm so no changed
http://puu.sh/1gJqw
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