Ya falta poco Xin! tendras el mapa rankeado muy pronto!! ;__________;

XinCrin wrote:

-Bakari- wrote:

I told you some examples. Stop raging at everyone who's trying to help you.

Hey, Xin! Why did you uploaded so.. meh.. so newbie diff from her? She is not even going to improve it! You and this mapset broke my heart. Right here. With this rude guest mapper. :<

right now i'm going away with broken heart. And i guess that you should control guest mappers much more.

Sorry. I didn't expected shitstorm, I wanted to help and to be fair. Once more, I'm sorry. Your mapset broke my heart.

-Bakari-apologies for the attitudes of Lizellota, did not know what was noob mapping Lizellota Excuse taiko seriously, and pass to clear the diff Lizellota.

Sorry -Bakari-

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH , sorry for 'flood'

Ahhhh calm down guys, the Lize's diff is not so bad, just need a lot of tips from high-skilled taiko mappers.
I think Lize's diff is good for first try and ofc have a chance to be ranked if Xin get it back.

anyway Xin, you may put puush|mediafire link on her diff in creator's words so peoples can play another Taiko version.
stop flood and insult each other guys, you just give another peoples a bad feeling and bad impression about yourself. в конце концов вы же не хотите сала или бана, верно?

due to i don't want to see this post as a flood, I'll try to mod it asap <3

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

anyway Xin, you may put puush|mediafire link on her diff in creator's words so peoples can play another Taiko version.
stop flood and insult each other guys, you just give another peoples a bad feeling and bad impression about yourself. в конце концов вы же не хотите сала или бана, верно?

due to i don't want to see this post as a flood, I'll try to mod it asap <3

Ok Thanks

Srry for offtop.

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

anyway Xin, you may put puush|mediafire link on her diff in creator's words so peoples can play another Taiko version.
stop flood and insult each other guys, you just give another peoples a bad feeling and bad impression about yourself. в конце концов вы же не хотите сала или бана, верно?

due to i don't want to see this post as a flood, I'll try to mod it asap <3

BCI daisuki <3

Hii, sorry for the delay


[General]
I believe the offset is 1 568 And the BPM 161,855 and there's no need for a second offset then
(I'm modding with the old settings)

[Lis]
00:16:376 (3) - whistle on tail
00:17:117 (4) - whistle on head
00:40:287 (1) - finish
00:52:706 (5) - NC?
01:19:953 (8,9,1) - NC on (8) instead, looks better on a stack like this
01:22:919 (8,9,1) - ^
01:24:402 (6,7,1) - ^
01:27:368 (6,7,1) - ^
01:29:036 (1) - increase the volume to 50% and add a finish on the head
01:52:762 (3) - remove finish from repeat
01:54:245 (3) - remove finish from tail
01:56:098 (2) - remove finish
01:57:210 (1) - remove finish from tail
01:58:693 (1) - ^
02:00:547 (2) - remove finish
02:01:659 (1) - remove finish from tail
02:03:142 (4) - whistle-slide & finish on end?
02:19:456 (8) - whistle
02:16:861 - double timing section
02:16:861 (1) - finish on head
02:26:315 (2) - whistle-slide
02:28:539 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
02:31:505 (8,9,1) - ^
02:39:660 (3) - finish on tail
02:46:333 (9,10,1) - NC on (9) instead
02:51:801 (1) - 1k ninja spinner (of course it's allowed but still kinda sudden. OD7 gives it 2k)

[Hard]
AR8 feels much better with this speed imo
00:16:376 (3) - whistle on tail
00:19:898 (2) - remove whistle
00:20:083 (3) - whistle on head and remove whistle from tail
00:22:122 (1) - remove whistle
00:22:307 (3) - whistle on head
00:23:420 (5) - remove whistle
00:24:346 (8) - remove whistle from head and add whistle on tail
00:25:273 (3) - whistle on tail
00:33:429 (7,8) - soft whistles
01:09:944 (8,9,10) - make a stacking on the two last notes instead
01:35:338 (2) - remove whistle
01:35:523 (3) - whistle
01:37:562 (8) - remove whistle
01:57:025 (4) - ^
02:03:142 (4) - whistle-slide
02:04:999 (3) - finish on head
02:16:676 (6) - finish on end
02:18:159 (6) - whistle on tail
02:19:456 (7) - remove whistle
02:22:607 (3) - ^
02:24:090 (4) - whistle on tail
02:25:388 (5) - remove whistle
02:27:056 (1) - whistle
02:42:441 (7) - Ctrl+R Ctrl+G (damn new hotkeys)
02:50:596 - feels empty here, add something here

[Normal]
00:16:376 (1) - whistle on tail
00:17:488 (2) - remove whistle
00:17:859 (3) - whistle on tail
00:22:307 (1) - remove whistle on tail
00:23:049 (2) - whistle
00:23:420 (3) - remove whistle on head and add on tail instead
00:24:161 (4) - ^
00:26:015 (2) - whistle on end
00:41:585 - this part to 00:47:516 - you can remove all claps
01:29:036 (3) - finish on head
01:36:821 (4) - ? (looks unsnapped)
02:04:999 (1) - finish on head
02:04:995 - here to 02:10:930 - you can remove the claps
02:17:603 (2) - whistle on tail
02:19:086 (4) - whistle on head
02:26:129 (1) - whistle instead of finish
02:39:846 (4) - finish

[Easy]
00:22:307 (1) - whistle on tail
00:23:420 (2) - remove whistle
00:23:790 (3) - whistle on head
00:25:273 (1) - ^
00:28:239 (1) - finish
01:14:207 (1) - remove whistle
02:22:793 (1) - remove finish from head?
02:25:758 (1) - whistle
02:40:587 (1) - finish
02:50:967 (1) - kinda short spinner compared to [Normal]'s


Good luck for now /o/

Saten wrote:

Hii, sorry for the delay


[General]
I believe the offset is 1 568 And the BPM 161,855 and there's no need for a second offset then
(I'm modding with the old settings)

[Lis]
00:16:376 (3) - whistle on tail
00:17:117 (4) - whistle on head
00:40:287 (1) - finish
00:52:706 (5) - NC?
01:19:953 (8,9,1) - NC on (8) instead, looks better on a stack like this
01:22:919 (8,9,1) - ^
01:24:402 (6,7,1) - ^
01:27:368 (6,7,1) - ^
01:29:036 (1) - increase the volume to 50% and add a finish on the head
01:52:762 (3) - remove finish from repeat
01:54:245 (3) - remove finish from tail
01:56:098 (2) - remove finish
01:57:210 (1) - remove finish from tail
01:58:693 (1) - ^
02:00:547 (2) - remove finish
02:01:659 (1) - remove finish from tail
02:03:142 (4) - whistle-slide & finish on end?
02:19:456 (8) - whistle
02:16:861 - double timing section
02:16:861 (1) - finish on head
02:26:315 (2) - whistle-slide
02:28:539 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
02:31:505 (8,9,1) - ^
02:39:660 (3) - finish on tail
02:46:333 (9,10,1) - NC on (9) instead
02:51:801 (1) - 1k ninja spinner (of course it's allowed but still kinda sudden. OD7 gives it 2k)

[Hard]
AR8 feels much better with this speed imo
00:16:376 (3) - whistle on tail
00:19:898 (2) - remove whistle
00:20:083 (3) - whistle on head and remove whistle from tail
00:22:122 (1) - remove whistle
00:22:307 (3) - whistle on head
00:23:420 (5) - remove whistle
00:24:346 (8) - remove whistle from head and add whistle on tail
00:25:273 (3) - whistle on tail
00:33:429 (7,8) - soft whistles
01:09:944 (8,9,10) - make a stacking on the two last notes instead
01:35:338 (2) - remove whistle
01:35:523 (3) - whistle
01:37:562 (8) - remove whistle
01:57:025 (4) - ^
02:03:142 (4) - whistle-slide
02:04:999 (3) - finish on head
02:16:676 (6) - finish on end
02:18:159 (6) - whistle on tail
02:19:456 (7) - remove whistle
02:22:607 (3) - ^
02:24:090 (4) - whistle on tail
02:25:388 (5) - remove whistle
02:27:056 (1) - whistle
02:42:441 (7) - Ctrl+R Ctrl+G (damn new hotkeys)
02:50:596 - feels empty here, add something here

[Normal]
00:16:376 (1) - whistle on tail
00:17:488 (2) - remove whistle
00:17:859 (3) - whistle on tail
00:22:307 (1) - remove whistle on tail
00:23:049 (2) - whistle
00:23:420 (3) - remove whistle on head and add on tail instead
00:24:161 (4) - ^
00:26:015 (2) - whistle on end
00:41:585 - this part to 00:47:516 - you can remove all claps
01:29:036 (3) - finish on head
01:36:821 (4) - ? (looks unsnapped)
02:04:999 (1) - finish on head
02:04:995 - here to 02:10:930 - you can remove the claps
02:17:603 (2) - whistle on tail
02:19:086 (4) - whistle on head
02:26:129 (1) - whistle instead of finish
02:39:846 (4) - finish

[Easy]
00:22:307 (1) - whistle on tail
00:23:420 (2) - remove whistle
00:23:790 (3) - whistle on head
00:25:273 (1) - ^
00:28:239 (1) - finish
01:14:207 (1) - remove whistle
02:22:793 (1) - remove finish from head?
02:25:758 (1) - whistle
02:40:587 (1) - finish
02:50:967 (1) - kinda short spinner compared to [Normal]'s


Good luck for now /o/

All Done Thanks

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,53647,63827
2,101099,111279
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\1.jpg",320,240
 M,0,1547,,320,240
 F,0,1547,16376,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\layer.jpg",320,240
 F,0,53077,53447,0,0.55
 F,0,53447,,0.55
 C,0,53447,,0,0,0
 F,0,53447,65310,0.58,1
 F,0,65310,65403,1,0
 F,0,89036,100899,0,1
 F,0,100899,101084,1
 F,0,101084,110908,1
 F,0,110908,111279,1,0
 F,0,111649,112762,0.25,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\pulse.jpg",320,240
 L,65310,16
  F,1,0,742,0.8,0
 L,77173,30
  F,1,0,371,0.8,0
 L,148724,56
  F,1,0,371,0.8,0
  S,1,0,371,0.8,0.85
 S,0,65310,,0.8
 F,0,111279,111649,1,0
 S,0,111279,111649,0.8,1.2
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\amour.jpg",320,240
 F,0,89036,89407,0,1
 M,0,89036,100713,334,229,308,229
 F,0,89407,100899,1
 F,0,100713,100899,0,1
 M,0,100713,110167,308,229,306,248
 S,0,100899,,0.8
 F,0,100899,109796,1
 F,0,109796,,1
 F,0,109796,112762,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\layer.jpg",320,240
 F,0,806,1547,0,1
 F,0,1547,2289,1,0
 F,0,14893,16376,0,1
 F,0,16376,17117,1,0
 F,0,27497,28239,0,1
 F,0,28239,28980,1,0
 F,0,40102,41585,0,1
 F,0,41585,42326,1,0
 F,0,64198,65310,0,1
 F,0,65310,66052,1,0
 F,0,76802,77173,0,1
 F,0,77173,77915,1,0
 F,0,112762,113503,1,0
 F,0,136120,136861,0,1
 F,0,136861,137603,1,0
 F,0,147241,148724,0,1
 F,0,148724,149466,1,0
 F,0,159846,160587,0,1
 F,0,160587,161328,1,0
 F,0,172450,173191,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\nyananana.png",320,240
 M,0,16283,16376,780,423,421,415
 F,0,16283,17488,1
 F,0,17488,17581,1,0
 M,0,19156,19249,-168,91,165,91
 F,0,19156,20454,1
 F,0,20454,20639,1,0
 M,0,22122,22215,-171,398,179,414
 F,0,22122,22215,1,1
 F,0,22215,23420,1
 F,0,23420,23605,1,0
 F,0,25088,25273,0,1
 M,0,25088,26385,322,-22,316,113
 F,0,25273,,1
 F,0,25273,,1
 F,0,25273,26663,1
 F,0,26663,26756,1
 S,0,26663,26756,1,2
 F,0,26756,26941,1,0
 S,0,26756,26941,2,3.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\NANANANA.png",320,240
 M,0,17674,17766,794,418,446,421
 F,0,17674,17859,1
 F,0,17859,18971,1
 F,0,18971,19156,1,0
 M,0,20639,20732,-191,176,304,161
 F,0,20639,21751,1
 F,0,21751,21937,1,0
 M,0,23698,23790,-192,410,192,410
 F,0,23698,23790,1
 F,0,23790,24902,1
 F,0,24902,25088,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

I only cleared the codes if you want something special let me know.

BounceBabe wrote:

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,53647,63827
2,101099,111279
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\1.jpg",320,240
 M,0,1547,,320,240
 F,0,1547,16376,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\layer.jpg",320,240
 F,0,53077,53447,0,0.55
 F,0,53447,,0.55
 C,0,53447,,0,0,0
 F,0,53447,65310,0.58,1
 F,0,65310,65403,1,0
 F,0,89036,100899,0,1
 F,0,100899,101084,1
 F,0,101084,110908,1
 F,0,110908,111279,1,0
 F,0,111649,112762,0.25,1
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\pulse.jpg",320,240
 L,65310,16
  F,1,0,742,0.8,0
 L,77173,30
  F,1,0,371,0.8,0
 L,148724,56
  F,1,0,371,0.8,0
  S,1,0,371,0.8,0.85
 S,0,65310,,0.8
 F,0,111279,111649,1,0
 S,0,111279,111649,0.8,1.2
Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\amour.jpg",320,240
 F,0,89036,89407,0,1
 M,0,89036,100713,334,229,308,229
 F,0,89407,100899,1
 F,0,100713,100899,0,1
 M,0,100713,110167,308,229,306,248
 S,0,100899,,0.8
 F,0,100899,109796,1
 F,0,109796,,1
 F,0,109796,112762,1
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\layer.jpg",320,240
 F,0,806,1547,0,1
 F,0,1547,2289,1,0
 F,0,14893,16376,0,1
 F,0,16376,17117,1,0
 F,0,27497,28239,0,1
 F,0,28239,28980,1,0
 F,0,40102,41585,0,1
 F,0,41585,42326,1,0
 F,0,64198,65310,0,1
 F,0,65310,66052,1,0
 F,0,76802,77173,0,1
 F,0,77173,77915,1,0
 F,0,112762,113503,1,0
 F,0,136120,136861,0,1
 F,0,136861,137603,1,0
 F,0,147241,148724,0,1
 F,0,148724,149466,1,0
 F,0,159846,160587,0,1
 F,0,160587,161328,1,0
 F,0,172450,173191,1,0
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\nyananana.png",320,240
 M,0,16283,16376,780,423,421,415
 F,0,16283,17488,1
 F,0,17488,17581,1,0
 M,0,19156,19249,-168,91,165,91
 F,0,19156,20454,1
 F,0,20454,20639,1,0
 M,0,22122,22215,-171,398,179,414
 F,0,22122,22215,1,1
 F,0,22215,23420,1
 F,0,23420,23605,1,0
 F,0,25088,25273,0,1
 M,0,25088,26385,322,-22,316,113
 F,0,25273,,1
 F,0,25273,,1
 F,0,25273,26663,1
 F,0,26663,26756,1
 S,0,26663,26756,1,2
 F,0,26756,26941,1,0
 S,0,26756,26941,2,3.5
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\NANANANA.png",320,240
 M,0,17674,17766,794,418,446,421
 F,0,17674,17859,1
 F,0,17859,18971,1
 F,0,18971,19156,1,0
 M,0,20639,20732,-191,176,304,161
 F,0,20639,21751,1
 F,0,21751,21937,1,0
 M,0,23698,23790,-192,410,192,410
 F,0,23698,23790,1
 F,0,23790,24902,1
 F,0,24902,25088,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

I only cleared the codes if you want something special let me know.

Thanks for Mod the SB

Continue~ Ready for more Mods

My 1st mod. Sorry it's too short but i'll try to improve my modding-skill.

cared wrote:

My 1st mod. Sorry it's too short but i'll try to improve my modding-skill.

SPOILER

00:40 XinCrin: Hi!
00:40 XinCrin: excuse me you aceppting a mod request?
01:01 cared: oh
01:01 cared: yeah sure
01:01 XinCrin: this is my map
01:01 *XinCrin is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/167495 MAK & SAK feat. XANA - Em Poses A 100 (Nightcore Mix)]
01:02 XinCrin: Thanks
01:03 cared: oh, already so many mods, i think it will be hard for me, i'm a noob-modder
01:03 XinCrin: o.o
01:03 XinCrin: NO problem
01:04 cared: but i can tell you in chat what i think about it, ok?
01:04 XinCrin: ok
01:04 cared: ok, let me play it
01:04 XinCrin: ok
01:05 XinCrin: i spectating
01:06 cared: nice sb
01:06 XinCrin: is me
01:07 XinCrin:
01:07 XinCrin: is by me
01:09 cared: 02:18:159 (6) -
01:09 cared: i don't like this slider
01:09 XinCrin: ok i making more beatiful
01:10 XinCrin: ok Done
01:11 cared: nice, maybe i'll find something else
01:11 XinCrin:
01:11 XinCrin: no problem
01:13 cared: modding maps with +69 is hard for me, they are almost perfect
01:13 XinCrin: ah
01:17 cared: 02:35:397 (2,3) -
01:17 cared: nazi in easy lol
01:17 XinCrin: D:
01:18 XinCrin: ok Done
01:22 cared: can't find anything
01:22 cared: for me, your map is perfect
01:22 XinCrin: D:
01:22 XinCrin: Thanks
01:22 XinCrin:
01:22 XinCrin: post this IRCMOD in the thread Thanks
01:24 cared: ok, sorry for my noob-mod, i'm a player, not a mapper
01:24 XinCrin: no problem thanks

thanks

I still need to mod this map lol.
I'm so lazy XD.

BeatofIke wrote:

I still need to mod this map lol.
I'm so lazy XD.

no problem

CONTINUE ~ More mods Please


a New page

I got halfway through my mod until I accidentally hit the back button on my mouse and lost all my suggesitons aurururuguhhgghh

so here you go

General Notes
oh boy another nightcore map with unrelated anime girl backgrounds and pulsing storyboards
I really dislike pulse storyboards. They're lazy and distracting. I absolutely hate disabling storyboards and removing content from the folder but pulsing storyboards are legitimately the only storyboards I would ever disable.
Slider tick rate 2?
No comments on the storyboard because it's fine but you could probably convert pulse.png into a compressed .jpg and reduce the file size.
Also, amour.png should be 640x480.

Lissette's Insane
00:31:205 (1) - Flip this vertically by selection. I keep going for the end of the slider because that's what's closest to the previous note and it will be far less confusing if you have the beginning of the slider closest.
00:48:999 (1) - Remove new combo. Keep your combo lengths even (in terms of time length).
00:52:706 - New combo.
01:06:978 - New note.
01:09:944 - New note. Make sure with both of these you keep the distance spacing even, you don't want to create 3x jumps by adding those new notes under the current stack of notes you have
02:15:008 - This combo is a bit too long at 13, so you should put a new combo here to avoid that. You can put it anywhere but reduce the length of the combo.
01:30:148 (4,5,6) - Either line these up or move (5) down a few grids to create a curved pattern.
02:26:315 (2,3,1) - I don't really like the overlap these notes have...
02:48:743 - Remove new combo

Hard
This is very difficult for a Hard and very similar to your guest Insane. 4.93 is 0.07 points lower than the Insane. I don't recommend placing triple stacks 1/4 because the BPM is too quick, and they're pretty tough to hit for Hard. I mean, distance spacing between the two is a 0.2x difference, even though the slider velocities are the same. At 0.8x, the distance spacing and slider velocity are even unlike spacing at 1.2x where the slider speed and spacing are uneven. Nothing is unrankable, (maybe) but you should ease up this difficulty a bit.
00:27:868 - New note.
00:28:980 (5,7) - The overlap here is too great, move (7) somewhere else. (5) ends on (7)'s beginning but it's not the next note, and it's obscuring (7) too much as a short slider.
00:41:214 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing.
01:06:793 - New combo.
01:12:539 - New combo.
01:23:104 (3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of dumb and breaks flow.
02:12:413 (1,2,3,4,5) - This placement is extremely confusing and there's no readability to it, as I have no idea what note comes next. Move these around.
02:49:299 (1,2,3) - Stack these or get rid of them if you're removing the 1/4 stacks, having these separated is waayyy too hard.

In contrast, there's a huge difference in difficulty between Hard and Normal. While Normal is very, very easy, Hard is very very difficult. There's no inbetween. That's no fun. If I can't play Hard, (though I can) but I can breeze through Normal, there's no inbetween for me to play. Ease up Hard.

Also, you can have a Hard difficulty without any 1/4 stacks but with 1/2 stacks.

Normal
01:29:036 (3) - New combo.
I don't have much to offer this difficulty but a lot of the timeline placement is awkward. Keep a consistent beat without some many odd pauses.

Easy
Nothing here.

Work on it.

Mod Request from In-Game!

General
-> Nice Storyboard! It matches with the song.

Easy
-> The main issue I found in this map is the sloppy slider blanklets. Your map could be a lot nicer just by making your slider blankets nicer.

Normal
01:29:036 (3) - New Combo.

Hard
-> You forgot to add the Artist and the Title for this Difficulty.
00:30:463 (1,2,3,4) - The whistles sounds weird to me.

Lissettte's Insane
-> Good, but I prefer Overall Difficulty to be 7 XD.

Good Nightcore Map. It's been a while since I modded a nightcore map.

Thanks a lot of mod

Recheck time ~

General

• • Nada encontrado

Easy

• - 01:15:690 (2) - Un whistle aqui por consistencia, ya que lo hicistes aqui 01:14:207
  - 01:40:713 (x) - Este timing section deberia terminar aqui 01:40:899
  - 02:04:999 (1,2) - Que paso con estos sliders? Suenan muy mal en mi opinion, deberias ponerlo 1/1

Normal

• - 01:40:713 (x) - Lo mismo que en Easy

Hard

• - 00:27:127 (3,4,5) - Has algo asi con estas notas para que de un mejor estilo
  - 01:57:210 (5) - Has este slider como hicistes con (3) 01:56:469 para que fluya mas la simetria

Lissette's Insane

• -- Sigue igual de bien

Y eso es todo, creo que el mapeo ha mejorado desde la ultima vez que le di mod, ojala consigas un MAT y te de bubbled, buena suerte

MoodyRPG wrote:

Recheck time ~

General

• • Nada encontrado

Easy

• - 01:15:690 (2) - Un whistle aqui por consistencia, ya que lo hicistes aqui 01:14:207 ok , suena bien aunque lo puse de otra manera
  - 01:40:713 (x) - Este timing section deberia terminar aqui 01:40:899 Done
  - 02:04:999 (1,2) - Que paso con estos sliders? Suenan muy mal en mi opinion, deberias ponerlo 1/1

Si tenias razon no me habia percatado del error

Normal

• - 01:40:713 (x) - Lo mismo que en Easy

Done

Hard

• - 00:27:127 (3,4,5) - Has algo asi con estas notas para que de un mejor estilo Se ve mejor Hecho
  - 01:57:210 (5) - Has este slider como hicistes con (3) 01:56:469 para que fluya mas la simetria

Se ve mas bonito y simetrico Done

Lissette's Insane

• -- Sigue igual de bien

Y eso es todo, creo que el mapeo ha mejorado desde la ultima vez que le di mod, ojala consigas un MAT y te de bubbled, buena suerte

Gracias Moody

wip post o3o

alright! recheck time!

[General]
according to AiBAt your kiais are inconsistent
add tag: remix
fix metadata? (artist/title) because it looks laggy now screenshot

[Easy]
00:42:326 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. i'd like to see this circle placed somewhere else because this overlap is surely confusing for beginners!
01:05:310 (1) - i guess you forgot finish here. because it's kiai start and this beat should be louder (check it for all diffs)
02:16:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - it might be a bit hard for beginners to click them all. try use some more sliders here? >.<
02:22:793 (1,2) - erm.. this shape doesn't really looks good. it also quite confusing because it feels like simply slowdowned slider;_; remove red dots to make easier (and more playable for beginners) slider shape
02:50:782 (1) - same for all diffs - try 60% volume because 80% feels TOO LOUD (or simply remove finish. it sounds better without finish)

[Normal]
how about AR5? it fits here quite good, imo. also it makes your slider velocity more readable
00:36:765 (6,1) - i guess it's better to do NC swap here (move NC from (1) to (7) to follow vocals and music)
00:52:891 - i;m not sure but i want you to put 1.1 slider here image. i think it follows music better and also it feels quite empty without beat at 00:53:077
02:33:173 (3) - this shape looks wrong. just saying. :/ uyou're surely free to ignore this suggestion.

[Hard]
00:22:122 (1,2) - 00:25:088 (1,2) - they're cute but keep in mind that they might be hard to read/understand with hidden. i suggest you to stack/unstack them completly >.</
01:32:928 (8,1) - Swap New combo (move from (1) to (8) to make (8) easier to read and to follow music and your combo pattern (01:35:338 (5) - also put new combo here if you'll aply this suggestion)
02:25:758 (1,1) - double spinners may annoy some players and also looks a bit outdated. try to replace them with one spinner? it won't hurt rhythm at all
02:37:251 - since you have a flash here, you should put here circle also! ecause it's confusing to have BRIGHT flash and click note 1/2 later :< (simple circle at 02:37:251 - would be enough, imo)
02:40:031 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - how about 3/4 slider here?
[Lissette's Insane]
this diff looks good to me. it got enough mods and looks cute.
00:51:223 (3) - why don't you just copy and paste (2) to make parallel and symmetrical sliders o3o
02:03:883 (1) - how about ending this slider at 02:03:790 - and adding slow-downed slider at 02:03:883 to follow vocals? o3o example

~~~~~~~~~~~~
Looks much better!

Now I'm glad to give you well-earned bubble star! ~

-Bakari- wrote:

wip post o3o

alright! recheck time!

[General]
according to AiBAt your kiais are inconsistent
add tag: remix
fix metadata? (artist/title) because it looks laggy now screenshot

[Easy]
00:42:326 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. i'd like to see this circle placed somewhere else because this overlap is surely confusing for beginners!
01:05:310 (1) - i guess you forgot finish here. because it's kiai start and this beat should be louder (check it for all diffs)
02:16:861 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - it might be a bit hard for beginners to click them all. try use some more sliders here? >.<
02:22:793 (1,2) - erm.. this shape doesn't really looks good. it also quite confusing because it feels like simply slowdowned slider;_; remove red dots to make easier (and more playable for beginners) slider shape
02:50:782 (1) - same for all diffs - try 60% volume because 80% feels TOO LOUD (or simply remove finish. it sounds better without finish)

[Normal]
how about AR5? it fits here quite good, imo. also it makes your slider velocity more readable
00:36:765 (6,1) - i guess it's better to do NC swap here (move NC from (1) to (7) to follow vocals and music)
00:52:891 - i;m not sure but i want you to put 1.1 slider here image. i think it follows music better and also it feels quite empty without beat at 00:53:077
02:33:173 (3) - this shape looks wrong. just saying. :/ uyou're surely free to ignore this suggestion.

[Hard]
00:22:122 (1,2) - 00:25:088 (1,2) - they're cute but keep in mind that they might be hard to read/understand with hidden. i suggest you to stack/unstack them completly >.</
01:32:928 (8,1) - Swap New combo (move from (1) to (8) to make (8) easier to read and to follow music and your combo pattern (01:35:338 (5) - also put new combo here if you'll aply this suggestion)
02:25:758 (1,1) - double spinners may annoy some players and also looks a bit outdated. try to replace them with one spinner? it won't hurt rhythm at all
02:37:251 - since you have a flash here, you should put here circle also! ecause it's confusing to have BRIGHT flash and click note 1/2 later :< (simple circle at 02:37:251 - would be enough, imo)
02:40:031 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - how about 3/4 slider here?

example (without code)

[Lissette's Insane]
this diff looks good to me. it got enough mods and looks cute.
00:51:223 (3) - why don't you just copy and paste (2) to make parallel and symmetrical sliders o3o
02:03:883 (1) - how about ending this slider at 02:03:790 - and adding slow-downed slider at 02:03:883 to follow vocals? o3o example

~~~~~~~~~~~~
Looks much better!

Now I'm glad to give you well-earned bubble star! ~

All Done -Bakari- Much Thanks

Hi there

[Storyboarding]
* nyananana.png and NANANANA.png seems useless for me, since they're few lyric are appear..... Remove it?


[Easy]
00:42:322 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)


[Normal]
00:53:443 (5) - Move to X:284 and Y:96 for allign the pattern (nazi)
01:30:140 (2) - Small spacing for normal diff are worthless. Perhaps, fix this spacing instead having a small spacing here?
02:00:165 (4) - Little spacing error here
02:22:791 (3) - New combo should be here
02:23:162 (1) - New combo here shouldn't be needed, anyway


[Hard]
00:28:792 (4) - Spacing error here
00:44:546 (3) - ^
01:54:234 (6,7) - Because the circle is stack at tail slider, it feels like this slider have 2 repeating slider.... Perhaps, remove the circle and then add 1 repeating slider for this slider?
02:32:058 (3,4) - ^


[Lissette's Insane]
02:51:889 (1) - This ninja spinner can be bad gameplay, perhaps change it into short slider?


[Kuri's Taiko Oni]
* 2nd kiai time seems doesn't fit to the song, is this intentional?

00:51:404 - Add kat here?
01:04:569 - This should be snap at 01:05:026. Otherwise, the triplets from 01:05:119 (228,229,230) are having a different speed. (228) are slow, but (229,230) are fast
01:05:218 (229,230) - Unsnapped.....
02:28:537 - Same issue as 01:04:569 and it should be snap at 02:28:444


Good luck~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Storyboarding]
* nyananana.png and NANANANA.png seems useless for me, since they're few lyric are appear..... Remove it?


[Easy]
00:42:322 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)


[Normal]
00:53:443 (5) - Move to X:284 and Y:96 for allign the pattern (nazi)
01:30:140 (2) - Small spacing for normal diff are worthless. Perhaps, fix this spacing instead having a small spacing here?
02:00:165 (4) - Little spacing error here
02:22:791 (3) - New combo should be here
02:23:162 (1) - New combo here shouldn't be needed, anyway


[Hard]
00:28:792 (4) - Spacing error here
00:44:546 (3) - ^
01:54:234 (6,7) - Because the circle is stack at tail slider, it feels like this slider have 2 repeating slider.... Perhaps, remove the circle and then add 1 repeating slider for this slider?
02:32:058 (3,4) - ^


[Lissette's Insane]
02:51:889 (1) - This ninja spinner can be bad gameplay, perhaps change it into short slider?


[Kuri's Taiko Oni]
* 2nd kiai time seems doesn't fit to the song, is this intentional?

00:51:404 - Add kat here?
01:04:569 - This should be snap at 01:05:026. Otherwise, the triplets from 01:05:119 (228,229,230) are having a different speed. (228) are slow, but (229,230) are fast
01:05:218 (229,230) - Unsnapped.....
02:28:537 - Same issue as 01:04:569 and it should be snap at 02:28:444


Good luck~

All Done Leorda Thanks

READY FOR MORE MODS PLEASE

[*][Hard]

1. [Rhythm]
   
   1. 00:17:487 (5) - Remove this note? it's not a na
   2. 00:22:213 (x) - Add a note here? that na
   3. 00:23:418 (5) - Remove this note? it's not a na
   4. 00:25:178 (x) - Add a note here? that na
   5. 00:26:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - it isn't so consistent... try (at least add the circle)
      
      SPOILER

      
   6. 00:34:075 (x) - Add a note here? that na

[Graphic]

1. 00:19:340 (1) - Curve it?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:28:978 (5) - Curve it like 00:28:239 (3) - but on the other way
   
   SPOILER

   

[Combo]

1. 00:30:460 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:534 (6) -

should continue the Hard ~

Thanks for mod HakuNoKaemi All Done

MAT MOD THIS MAP PLEASE

Continue~

hi~ :3

m4m request

[General]

●All diff: Resnap All Notes. http://puu.sh/1f51e
●Would be good to put in the sound of the clap to Slidertick. This will be useful in Easy and Normal diff. http://puu.sh/1f54q
For example,Add the sound of the clap to 00:31:573 and 00:32:314 (Easy diff). I think very good

[Easy]

●00:33:055 (2) - Move (x:364 y:148). Will be in the middle of the slider[00:31:202 (1)].
●00:39:357 (2) - Move (x:256 y:284). I like it here.
●00:43:064 (3) - Let's change the shape a little. http://puu.sh/1f58V
●01:14:201 (1,2) - "whistle" is heard strange. remove?
●01:24:209 (3) - Move (x:204 y:80). Become symmetrical with 01:23:097 (1).
●01:25:321 (4) - Superimposed on 01:23:838 (2)? Perhaps, would be okay.
●01:33:476 (1,3) - Symmetric slider would be better.

[Normal]

●00:39:727 (6) - Move (x:132 y:60). It will be in the middle of 00:38:986 (5).
●00:52:887 (4) - I feel a little strange. remove slider. 00:53:072 - Add circle?
●01:31:252 (4,5) - 1 grid down. It will be in a straight line to clean.[(3),(4),(5)]
●01:52:381 (1) - Add finish (end)
●02:28:722 (1) - Slider is not symmetrical D: Should fix.02:29:093 - 1grid down.

[Hard]

I felt strange new combo D:

I think if I do this, will be better :3
ah.."new combo only" sorry

[Lissette's Insane]

●00:18:043 (2) - Move (x:344 y:64).
●00:18:228 (3) - Move (x:256 y:104)
●00:18:413 (4) - Move (x:168 y:64)
●00:18:599 (5) - Move (x:88 y:120)
　　Become beautiful!
●00:23:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should make it more beautiful D:
●00:46:029 (4) - Add new combo?
●00:51:960 (4) - ^
●01:30:511 (6) - ^
●01:34:959 (4) - ^
●01:39:407 (3) - ^
●02:09:076 (5) - ^
●02:12:412 (5) - ^
●02:15:007 (5) - ^
●02:20:382 (2) - Delete the whistle of the entire
●02:42:808 (6) - Add new combo
●02:45:773 (6) - ^
●02:51:889 (1) - Too short! Remove spinner. 02:52:445 - Add circle (x:256 y:192). Add new combo.



good luck :3

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~ :3

m4m request

[General]

●All diff: Resnap All Notes. http://puu.sh/1f51e
●Would be good to put in the sound of the clap to Slidertick. This will be useful in Easy and Normal diff. http://puu.sh/1f54q
For example,Add the sound of the clap to 00:31:573 and 00:32:314 (Easy diff). I think very good

[Easy]

●00:33:055 (2) - Move (x:364 y:148). Will be in the middle of the slider[00:31:202 (1)].
●00:39:357 (2) - Move (x:256 y:284). I like it here.
●00:43:064 (3) - Let's change the shape a little. http://puu.sh/1f58V
●01:14:201 (1,2) - "whistle" is heard strange. remove?
●01:24:209 (3) - Move (x:204 y:80). Become symmetrical with 01:23:097 (1).
●01:25:321 (4) - Superimposed on 01:23:838 (2)? Perhaps, would be okay.
●01:33:476 (1,3) - Symmetric slider would be better.

[Normal]

●00:39:727 (6) - Move (x:132 y:60). It will be in the middle of 00:38:986 (5).
●00:52:887 (4) - I feel a little strange. remove slider. 00:53:072 - Add circle?
●01:31:252 (4,5) - 1 grid down. It will be in a straight line to clean.[(3),(4),(5)]
●01:52:381 (1) - Add finish (end)
●02:28:722 (1) - Slider is not symmetrical D: Should fix.02:29:093 - 1grid down.

[Hard]

I felt strange new combo D:

SPOILER

●00:29:719 (7) - Add new combo.
●00:30:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
●00:32:685 (5) - Add new combo.
●00:35:650 (5) - ^
●00:38:615 (5) - ^
●00:43:064 (7) - ^
●01:09:752 (6) - ^
●01:12:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
●01:12:718 (2) - Add new combo.
●01:15:683 (5) - ^
●01:18:649 (7) - ^
●01:21:614 (6) - ^
●01:24:580 (6) - ^
●01:27:545 (5) - ^
●02:06:481 (6) - ^
●02:39:101 (6) - ^
●02:42:066 (6) - ^
●02:45:032 (4) - ^

I think if I do this, will be better :3
ah.."new combo only" sorry

[Lissette's Insane]

●00:18:043 (2) - Move (x:344 y:64).
●00:18:228 (3) - Move (x:256 y:104)
●00:18:413 (4) - Move (x:168 y:64)
●00:18:599 (5) - Move (x:88 y:120)
　　Become beautiful!
●00:23:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should make it more beautiful D:
●00:46:029 (4) - Add new combo?
●00:51:960 (4) - ^
●01:30:511 (6) - ^
●01:34:959 (4) - ^
●01:39:407 (3) - ^
●02:09:076 (5) - ^
●02:12:412 (5) - ^
●02:15:007 (5) - ^
●02:20:382 (2) - Delete the whistle of the entire
●02:42:808 (6) - Add new combo
●02:45:773 (6) - ^
●02:51:889 (1) - Too short! Remove spinner. 02:52:445 - Add circle (x:256 y:192). Add new combo.



good luck :3

Thanks for mod All Done

EDIT : nEW pAGE

Mod request from PM Req
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[General]
Offset: 1578
BPM:161.800

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oh Good Job!
Wonderful Mapset
I could only find the timing issue.Others are good.

Hi:3 As requested

[General]
●delete to (Thumbs) file in SB?

There must not be any unused files in the map's folder except for the map's .osb file (since they sometimes get added even if the map doesn't have a storyboard) and storyboard .thumb files (since they are automatically created in image directories). Unused files add extra file size which is unnecessary.

[Easy]
●00:19:361 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse.put applause with constant rhythm
●00:41:597 - This green line is unnecessary.
●00:44:191 (4) - Make the spacing equal here.spacing too close (1.05x) it is better to use DS0.98x ~ DS1.02x
●00:44:562 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think the flow is good :3
●00:53:456 (3) - try to put a Normal sound ?it is better to use it.same as here.00:41:597 - 00:26:773 -
●01:09:763 (1) - remove new combo .
●02:09:078 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. try to make some sliders?
●02:13:896 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ?
●02:24:273 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●02:50:770 (1) - as the synth's phrase should begin here.02:50:956 -

[Normal]
●01:31:999 (6,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●02:17:602 (2) - spacing too close (1.24x) it is better to use DS1.0x
●02:23:161 (2) - try this ?
you should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good :3

[Hard]
●00:16:211 (1) - move to x:288 y:40 and 00:16:304 (2) - move to x:280 y56
Aim for the start of here.00:16:396 (3) -
●00:22:233 - add note ? follow the vocal.and same as here.00:28:163 -
●00:22:326 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:38:447 (4) - remove clap.it follows nothing.
●00:49:750 (5) - 1 grid down.
●01:27:551 (5,6) - more spacing here.
maybe hidden repeat...
●02:45:026 (4,5) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.

[Lissette's Insane]
●02:24:087 (5,6) - try this ? follow the vocal.

Hope you fine this helpful :3

Haii ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- You seem to have some unsnapped timing points in some sections of each diff ? owo


[Easy]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~
00:36:409 (5) - Line with the previous note.
01:58:682 (1) - ^
02:00:905 (4) - Line with (2)
02:07:225 (5) - Line with (3)
02:37:614 (1) - Make this blanket look better, try 3rd point at x:372 y:268 and 4th point at x:380 y:212
02:38:726 (2) - Fix the spacing if you do this ^
02:50:770 (1) - Move to 02:50:956 and end at the same place.


[Hard]
00:29:738 (1) - Stack properly.
00:49:194 (2,3) - Make a better triangle shape.
01:18:472 (6) - New combo here or at (7)
02:42:061 (6) - New combo.
02:45:397 (5) - Make this mirror the previous slider.


[Lissette's Insane]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~
00:52:900 (6) - New combo.
02:16:119 (9) - ^



Well mapped ~
Good luck! >w<

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 As requested

[General]
●delete to (Thumbs) file in SB?

There must not be any unused files in the map's folder except for the map's .osb file (since they sometimes get added even if the map doesn't have a storyboard) and storyboard .thumb files (since they are automatically created in image directories). Unused files add extra file size which is unnecessary.

[Easy]
●00:19:361 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse.put applause with constant rhythm
●00:41:597 - This green line is unnecessary.
●00:44:191 (4) - Make the spacing equal here.spacing too close (1.05x) it is better to use DS0.98x ~ DS1.02x
●00:44:562 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think the flow is good :3
●00:53:456 (3) - try to put a Normal sound ?it is better to use it.same as here.00:41:597 - 00:26:773 -
●01:09:763 (1) - remove new combo .
●02:09:078 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. try to make some sliders?
●02:13:896 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ?
●02:24:273 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●02:50:770 (1) - as the synth's phrase should begin here.02:50:956 -

[Normal]
●01:31:999 (6,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●02:17:602 (2) - spacing too close (1.24x) it is better to use DS1.0x
●02:23:161 (2) - try this ?

you should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good :3

[Hard]
●00:16:211 (1) - move to x:288 y:40 and 00:16:304 (2) - move to x:280 y56
Aim for the start of here.00:16:396 (3) -
●00:22:233 - add note ? follow the vocal.and same as here.00:28:163 -
●00:22:326 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:38:447 (4) - remove clap.it follows nothing.
●00:49:750 (5) - 1 grid down.
●01:27:551 (5,6) - more spacing here.

maybe hidden repeat...
●02:45:026 (4,5) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.

[Lissette's Insane]
●02:24:087 (5,6) - try this ? follow the vocal.

Hope you fine this helpful :3

I Done All Thanks

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- You seem to have some unsnapped timing points in some sections of each diff ? owo


[Easy]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~
00:36:409 (5) - Line with the previous note.
01:58:682 (1) - ^
02:00:905 (4) - Line with (2)
02:07:225 (5) - Line with (3)
02:37:614 (1) - Make this blanket look better, try 3rd point at x:372 y:268 and 4th point at x:380 y:212
02:38:726 (2) - Fix the spacing if you do this ^
02:50:770 (1) - Move to 02:50:956 and end at the same place.


[Hard]
00:29:738 (1) - Stack properly.
00:49:194 (2,3) - Make a better triangle shape.
01:18:472 (6) - New combo here or at (7)
02:42:061 (6) - New combo.
02:45:397 (5) - Make this mirror the previous slider.


[Lissette's Insane]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~
00:52:900 (6) - New combo.
02:16:119 (9) - ^



Well mapped ~
Good luck! >w<

I Done all Thanks

XinCrin~

sorry, for late

here my mod~ ( just normal,hard )

[General]
[*]Timing - Inherited Points(green line) - most are not put on a line. Kiai time it is put on the line at least ↓

[Normal]

1. 00:30:479 (5,6) - The movement of note is monotonous. i suggest: http://puu.sh/1gH7I
   

   160,192,30479,1,0,0:0:0
   172,84,30850,1,8,0:0:0

2. 00:36:779 (6) - add NC and 00:36:965 (1) - remove NC is better. This makes a look better.
3. 00:44:377 (6) - This note does not make much sense. ( 00:41:597~00:53:456 - During this time, 1/2rhythm is used for only here. I think that you should increase them more if you want to really put it. for ex: 00:45:859 etc ) If you do not want to increase it, I think that this note is unnecessary
4. 00:49:380 (4) - why not clap? You should put clap here~
5. 00:51:974 (3,4) - I think these are normalsound matches than softsound. so 00:52:706(green line) - move to 00:53:456. and 00:53:086 (4) - add clap instead to whistle. is better imo.
6. 01:08:280 (1) - do not overlap with 01:07:169 (5) end ? Rotate by -4° ( Origin Selection Centre )
7. 01:52:382 (1) - slider start is a little noisy. change to sampleset (soft) is better imo
8. 01:52:752~02:03:870 - finishsound placed randomly. ( 01:56:829 (2) - 02:01:647 (1) - Why not put here o.o? ) if a constant ↓ better to change this
   01:54:235 (4) - finish is unnecessary.
   02:00:164 (4) - ^
   02:01:647 (1) - add finish
9. 02:13:525 (1,2) - Is there a reason to use the stack just here? I recommend that you do not use the stack here. This is not difficult. but overall balance is bad. You should use it moderately if you use it　
10. 02:41:135 (3) - same as 00:44:377 (6). ex: 02:47:065 etc
11. 02:50:215 (2) - Form a little boring. try use 02:49:473 (1) - copy form. http://puu.sh/1gHSJ

[Hard]

1. 00:19:917 (2) - remove whistle and 00:20:102 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider
2. 00:23:994 (7) - nazi spacing: try http://puu.sh/1gHWF
   

   392,160,23994,2,0,B|368:196|328:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   352,280,24364,2,0,B|412:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

3. 00:27:514 (5) - nazi. 1grid left
4. 00:34:093 (x) - add note. 00:28:163 (2) - Because it is here and the same rhythm.
5. 02:17:417 (2) - remove note. calm rhythm, I prefer not to put it here~
6. 02:25:755 (1) - use a whistle like normal diff. finish are little noisy><
7. 02:50:585 (x)~ - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1gI72 ( 02:50:215~02:50:956 - As for the blank here, some rhythm are lonely for hard diff )

Your map has been improved so

Good job~ Star☆

Good luck~

Done All Thanks

Let me do a recheck on a old mod by myself
And this is my first mod as a MAT

[Easy:]

• 00:16:396 (1): As you did on the Other difficulties, the Finish on the beginning should be Normal Finish instead of Soft finish. So, replace it for consistency
• 00:25:191 (1): You are missing a Whistle on the Slider end, following your hitsound placing the only note without Whistle it is on the White tick after the downbeat, also fit fine with the Vocal
• 00:28:997 (3): This 1/1 Slider fit with the Instrumental, but it doesn't look very benefit with the Rhythm to an Easy diff to be sincere. You can simplify more doing a 2/1 Slider. So, your Slider should start here and finish on 00:29:738 without the Reverse Arrow.
• 00:30:109 (4): (I know, I'm nazi sometimes xD)- Move this Note x:184 y:180 to put this Note at the same place of (3) on 00:27:514
• 00:35:668 (4,5): To follow better the Rhythm change these Notes on a Slider instead. The Slider Tick in the middle will follow exactly the Vocal. Without it, you can listen a blank space on the Rhythm
• 00:53:456 (3): The Soft Finish sounds a bit loud to me, try to replace it on a Whistle or reduce the Volume on it
• 01:14:210 (1): The Clap sounds bad on the Slider end, since it is not following your Clap pattern. You always added Claps on the 2nd and 4th white tick, and this one it is on the 3rd. So, remove this Clap
• 01:21:251 (3): I would like to see a stop here, like you did it before. I would like to you just follow the Vocal, to do that Remove this Note
• 01:26:069 (1): Well, I didn't want to say anything about Sliders.. I also see another one like this but meh... Anyways, the curve looks forced, it is very big in my opinion. Try to reduce the curve making something like this: (Simple but efficient )
• 01:33:481 (1): A whistle on the beginning fit properly with the Vocal
• 01:33:481 (1,2,3,4): You could rearrange a bit this pattern to follow better the Vocal, try to do something like this
• 01:40:893 (T): You could reduce the Volume a bit on this Inherited timing point because it sounds a bit loud to me. Try to reduce the Volume by 10%
• 01:57:199 (2): Hmm.. This Slider can looks better, just this
• 02:18:714 (3,4,1): I found a better thing to follow the lyrics, try to do something like this:
• 02:21:308 (2): A Whistle on the Slider end sounds unnecesary to me. It is better if you delete it
• 02:25:755 (Spin): Try a Whistle here, it sounds fitting with the effect in the Vocal
• 02:47:991 (1,2): Again, this stop it doesn't look really benefit to the music. As I said before, replace these Notes on a Slider

[Normal:]

• 00:16:396 (1,2,3): Let me fix the hitsounding on these Objects for a better follow to the music. In (1) add a Whistle on the Slider end, Remove the Whistle on (2), and add a Whistle on the Slider end in (3). Sound much better, really
• 00:19:361 (1,2): Same reason as above, add a Whistle on the Slider end in (1), and Remove the Whistle on (2)
• 00:27:514: And add a Whistle here
• 00:28:812 (2): The sound here is not really noticable, so this note sounds unnecesary. In my opinion would be better if you delete it
• 00:30:294 (x): But.. In this case a Note sounds preety well following the Vocal
• 00:37:521 (4): This is Slider is preety long and it is not covering all the things on the music. In my opinion, it's better if you make this Slider 1/1 shorter (should finish on 00:37:891) and then add a Note on 00:38:262
• 00:38:632 (6): If you did the above suggestion, this combo will be a bit long for this diff. So, add a New combo on this Note
• 00:47:527 (1): Add a Finish on the Slider beginning... Fit well, and you also did that on Easy and Hard
• 00:53:456 (5): Same as Easy in this timing
• 01:05:871 (2): This is note it doesn't sound really benefit to the Rhythm, the 1/2 is not necesary here. I'd suggest you to remove this Note from here
• 01:06:983 (x): Instead of above thing, add a Note here
• 01:08:466 (1,2): This pattern don't remark very well the long Vocal. I prefer something like this, work better imo (I just did ctrl+g selecting both objects)
• 01:29:034 (1): You definitley need a Finish on the Slider beginning, it is on the music and this Slider sounds empty without it
• 01:58:682 (1,2): You can be neater with your Sliders, try to fix them. Simple Sliders with just 3 Sliderway points can make it the life easier
• 02:13:155 (6,1): Fit better with the Vocal if you replace these Notes on a Slider instead.
• 02:19:825: Try a Whistle here
• 02:21:308: (^)
• 02:30:573 (4): Flow better and it is more esthetic if you do a Flip Horizontally on this Slider (Ctrl+H) and then, after that move the Slider to x:344 y:284

[Hard:]

• 00:25:198 (x): Keep your 3-plet pattern in this section, to do that add a Note here
• 00:26:959 (x): I really expected a Note here, you have a Nice sound to add a beat in this place. Try it please :3
• 00:37:057 (x): And, another Note here too.
• 00:38:362 (1,2): These Sliders don't sound really fitting here, it sounds a lot of blank spaces to a hard diff. Try to cover these blanks with this pattern
• 00:51:047 (4): This pattern flow better if you move this Note 'out' of the Sliders. To be concrete, move this Note to x:256 y:44
• 01:22:178 (2,3,4,5): To be sincere, I didn't understood this Spacing change, it doesn't fit with the song and flows bad. It is better if you keep the Spacing here
• 01:31:813 (6,7): You are not following the lyrics properly. Delete (6) and move the Slider (7) to this place, after that you will not have any beat (because it doesn't appear anything important on the music) in 01:32:740
• 02:16:675 (6): The usage of 1/4 is unnecesary here, you don't have anything in the music, really (listen the music in 25% of speed). Instead to do that, replace the kick Slider to a Simple 1/2 Slider
• 02:28:627 (x): Add a Note here


- Definetly this is the best difficulty made by yourself, xin. Nice job with it :3

[Lissette's Insane:]

• 00:39:559 (x): Try adding a Note here, the Rhythm will become more exciting xD. Follow the Instrumental well in my opinion
• 00:39:930 (x): (^)
• 00:53:271 (9,10,11): The 3-plet is unnecesary here, it is not following anything in the song. I'd replace this 3-plet on a 1/2 Slider, follow better the song if you listen with a Slow velocity the map (25/50%)
• 01:29:034 (1,2): Sorry, but what is this??, is it a bug? because sounds awful really. The best way to make this pattern comfortable is Removing (2,3) and moving the end of this Slider to 01:29:775
• 02:52:438 (7): A New Combo looks find to finish with the map, try to add it in this Note

- Great Job Liss :3

[Kuri's Taiko Oni:]

• (Spanish): A grandes rasgos se ve bien! , pero la chequearemos a fondo mas a futuro...

Listo, me canse del ingles xD
Tenia planeado darle bubble como te dije antes pero Easy y Normal pueden trabajar mejor aun, asi que deberias buscar algun mod mas principalmente para estas dificultades.
Star Icon por Hard, Insane y Taiko :3
Suerte xin (volvere en un futuro )