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Chata - Eroiko (Short Ver.)

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Melophobia

nice BG!!!!! (´^Σ^`)

[Easy]
00:04:225 (1) - rotate by -12? looks/ flows better imo
00:25:543 (2) - curve this slider abit like this and make blanket with previous slider?
it'll look better and flow will be also better.(adjust next sliders if you want
00:34:070 (1) - considering that this diff is the easiest diff and BPM is quite fast, this slider is too fast after a spinner imo.
so end the previous spinner at 00:32:965 - instead?(following vocal) spinner length is still ok i guess
00:39:439 (1) - compared with previous slider, i might want to make this slider like this http://puu.sh/ZIEL
you have only to move the 3rd way-point upward a little.
00:41:650 (1) - this spinner appears so suddenly and it may be confusing for beginners imo(it starts before end of previous slider) hmm, but i couldnt make any suggestion for this issue. so just mentioning here
00:44:177 (1) - again, way too soon after spinner. but this one is really hard, i think it has to be changed.
01:07:232 (1) - move to x256 y156? this one would make more sense imo
http://puu.sh/ZILU
01:27:918 (2) - this is not perpendicular perfectly, is it intended?
01:28:550 (3) - this blanket can be still better
http://puu.sh/ZIP4


[Normal]
00:31:702 (1) - same as Easy, end this at 00:32:965 -
00:48:125 (2,3) - move these notes downward a bit? looks better imo~
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416150
01:10:706 - finish here for consistency with others? and sounds better imo
01:19:628 (1) - start this on whitetick please>< it's a bit sudden for Normal diff


[cRyoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo's Hard]
00:05:173 (2) - maybe like this?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416153
00:10:226 (4) - move this leftward by 1grid to make a perfect diamond
00:19:701 (2,1) - this jump makes it much harder to read the next anti jump imo (i failed to get 300 at first play
maybe stack 2 under 1? this one would be easier to read i guess QAQ
00:28:544 (4) - bad overlapping x_x i'm sure it's stil rankable but it botherd me at playing with default skin indead so consider changing pattern a bit
00:34:860 (1,2,3) - space them evenly like this? anyway i fixed for you so use this code if you like~
http://puu.sh/ZJ8X
64,224,34860,6,0,B|52:260|64:300,1,75,2|0
140,340,35176,2,0,B|177:332|204:303,1,75,2|0
203,215,35492,2,0,B|177:186|139:177,1,75,2|0
oh baka me these codes have wrong hitsounds >_> sorry but please adjust it by yourself><
00:52:704 - clap?
01:35:716 (1) - awesome \^^/

moe diff Q_Q

[Insane]
00:09:121 (5) - nazi* move this upward/rightward by 1grid to correct spacing~
00:11:252 - higher volume for this part or lower volume for previous part?
00:20:175 (1) - i can hear cymbal so add finish here? maybe it's kinda weak so lowe volume would be great ><
00:46:703 (1) - ^
00:52:704 - clap?
01:24:365 (7) - ^

nice!! have a star~
cRyo[iceeicee]

Melophobia wrote:

[cRyoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo's Hard] AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
00:05:173 (2) - maybe like this? i like how it touching next slider ww
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416153
00:10:226 (4) - move this leftward by 1grid to make a perfect diamond i should done it with starstream's mod TAT
00:19:701 (2,1) - this jump makes it much harder to read the next anti jump imo (i failed to get 300 at first play
maybe stack 2 under 1? this one would be easier to read i guess QAQ ok new placement !!!! (#4 TAT)
00:28:544 (4) - bad overlapping x_x i'm sure it's stil rankable but it botherd me at playing with default skin indead so consider changing pattern a bit ooooopsss
00:34:860 (1,2,3) - space them evenly like this? anyway i fixed for you so use this code if you like~
http://puu.sh/ZJ8X ok, AAAAAA , hitsounds gone \TAT/
64,224,34860,6,0,B|52:260|64:300,1,75,2|0
140,340,35176,2,0,B|177:332|204:303,1,75,2|0
203,215,35492,2,0,B|177:186|139:177,1,75,2|0
oh baka me these codes have wrong hitsounds >_> sorry but please adjust it by yourself>< ok~ :3
00:52:704 - clap? yeah !
01:35:716 (1) - awesome \^^/ Baka slider \^^/

moe diff Q_Q moe mod Q.Q
Thank you eromod & erostar Erophobia~ !!!

http://puu.sh/ZRhO
merchat7
Not really in the mood for replying, but guess I"ll do it anyways.

00:04:225 (1) - Done
00:25:543 (2) - This is something I tend to do when mapping easier diffs, I change the slider shape around like if I used curve sliders and all the notes follow vocal, when I decide to follow instrument, I will probably use a straight slider or red points instead. Same idea here (piano).
00:34:070 (1) - I really think that spinner length is too short, I find the current break after the spinner sufficient. I feel more uncomfortable with a short spinner than with a short break time after the spinner basically.
00:39:439 (1) - I almost didn't notice what you want me to do here, but I think I fix/improve this.
00:41:650 (1) - I don't agree with this, mainly because I find it extremely hard to believe how a beginner could mess this part up. To be a bit more clear "hey a slider, WTA46#^ spinner *fail song* considering how long the spinner is, the hp drain/od etc. I really don't think a "sudden" spinner can cause something like this to happen.
00:44:177 (1) - Fixed earlier mod
01:07:232 (1) - I don't like how it feel in term of flow, so I blanket the previous slider instead.
01:27:918 (2) - Don't think this is intended, but it looks better than having it vertically align.
01:28:550 (3) - Maybe improve, hard for me to make/fix blanket today.

Thanks for mod, http://puu.sh/ZXY1
LKs
[timing]

BPM 190 offest 126

why 190? because when composing a song you won't set the BPM such a confusing decimal. The reason one use .9X bpm should be considered as a bad compression but I think it's rare

also fix the final slowdown part. although the piano and the drum don't sound simultaneously but I think it's ok to just fix BPM

[title]

is the (Short Ver.) in the original song name? or you cut the song and added the lable? If there isn't an offical version that named Erokio (Short Ver.) you'd probably remove it from title

[cRyo's Hard]

00:34:860 (1,2,3) - circle is not really well encircled. you know how to fix the sliders right?
00:47:177 (2) - bigger curve? http://puu.sh/14Utz
00:53:651 (3) - http://puu.sh/14Uu2 do like this
01:30:287 (2,2) - looks oblique. a slight fix helps http://puu.sh/14Uvz

[easy]

00:13:700 (1) -
0,160,13700,6,0,B|-36:280|48:344,1,200,8|10
cRyo[iceeicee]

LKs wrote:

[cRyo's Hard]

00:34:860 (1,2,3) - circle is not really well encircled. you know how to fix the sliders right? waaaa bakasoup didnt update previous diff o:
00:47:177 (2) - bigger curve? http://puu.sh/14Utz umm ok
00:53:651 (3) - http://puu.sh/14Uu2 you mean more wavy x.x?, cause i dont see any difference ^^, made it more wavy
01:30:287 (2,2) - looks oblique. a slight fix helps http://puu.sh/14Uvz changed angle little bit but its still looks more like previous then urs, so i guess i will keep mine x:
http://puu.sh/14UYY
Thx for mod LKs~ !
Topic Starter
hoLysoup
/me eats cRyo

LKs wrote:

[timing]

BPM 190 offest 126

why 190? because when composing a song you won't set the BPM such a confusing decimal. The reason one use .9X bpm should be considered as a bad compression but I think it's rare

also fix the final slowdown part. although the piano and the drum don't sound simultaneously but I think it's ok to just fix BPM
恩 第一條紅線我修好了 可是之後的我沒有動 因為感覺上沒有問題? 不過還是請檢查一下, 可以的話in game PM 跟我直接說
[title]

is the (Short Ver.) in the original song name? or you cut the song and added the lable? If there isn't an offical version that named Erokio (Short Ver.) you'd probably remove it from title
恩對啊 是在album裡面這樣寫的
http://vgmdb.net/album/33930
謝啦! LKs :>
LKs

hoLysoup wrote:

/me eats cRyo

LKs wrote:

[timing]

BPM 190 offest 126

why 190? because when composing a song you won't set the BPM such a confusing decimal. The reason one use .9X bpm should be considered as a bad compression but I think it's rare

also fix the final slowdown part. although the piano and the drum don't sound simultaneously but I think it's ok to just fix BPM
恩 第一條紅線我修好了 可是之後的我沒有動 因為感覺上沒有問題? 不過還是請檢查一下, 可以的話in game PM 跟我直接說
[title]
改的原因不是因为错了 而是因为改了后完全没有区别 就像我说的没人会故意做.9X bpm 所以改成整数肯定不会错
其实那里我比较犹豫 钢琴和鼓直接分的太大 明显你的节奏是跟钢琴的 但01:32:660 (1,3,4) - 这里明显钢琴比note快太多了 但那里还有鼓可以压得准 所以很蛋疼
merchat7
http://puu.sh/15li1

I adjust some patterns including 00:13:700 so I didn't use your code, sorry.
And sorry for delay
Topic Starter
hoLysoup

LKs wrote:

改的原因不是因为错了 而是因为改了后完全没有区别 就像我说的没人会故意做.9X bpm 所以改成整数肯定不会错
其实那里我比较犹豫 钢琴和鼓直接分的太大 明显你的节奏是跟钢琴的 但01:32:660 (1,3,4) - 这里明显钢琴比note快太多了 但那里还有鼓可以压得准 所以很蛋疼
恩 我都改好了 可以幫我recheck嗎?
LKs
bubbled

to MAT/BAT: the slowdown part is fine to me but if you think it's not precisely timed go say it
Andrea
Fine to me.

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S o r d a
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Topic Starter
hoLysoup
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:D thanks LKs + Andrea
and thankyou everyone!!
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恭喜啦~ :>
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