rekka!get the regret over!
Thank you timing checkpopner wrote:
Your timing is right. You can try +1~3 offset if you wish.
NewRulerN mod ありがとうございましたNewRulerNA wrote:
hi
[General]
"alicesoft"をtagに追加 ok
[Determination]
ApprovalとするならばODは8にしてしまっても良いように思えます 保留で
00:14:753 - なぜここの緑線がデフォルトのヒットサウンド?
normal-sliderslide.wavを使っているのでカスタムにするべきなのではないでしょうか この後のスライダーのtickは鳴らした方がいいと思ったので
00:15:897 - この緑線の必要性は? ないですね消し忘れ
00:32:931 - ^ ^
00:46:533 (2) - 1~2grid程度下に移動? ok
00:45:897 (1) の延長線上に綺麗に配置できていないように思えました ok
01:17:168 (3,4,1) - (3)のスライダーから(4,1)と綺麗に一直線に並んでおらず、私には汚く思えました
(3)のスライダーの傾きを調節してみては?ok
01:20:092 (3) - このスライダーに1/6を使った理由はなぜ?
どこの音を拾ったのか私には分からず、また01:20:092 (3,4) の部分だけが極端に難易度が上がるという2つの理由から1/4のスライダーでここは作っていくほうが良いように思えます 私には01:20:092 ~ 01:20:346の間で4回音がなっているように感じます。なのでやっぱり1/6であってると私は思います
01:21:617 (3,4) - (4)が延長線上に綺麗に置かれていないように思えました
サークルをx184 y133に置くと綺麗に見えるのではないでしょうか? ok
02:02:295 - 同タイミングに緑線が2つありUnrankableです 消した
02:33:312 (3) - 01:20:092 (3)と同じ
02:34:965 - この緑線の必要性は? 消し忘れ
04:44:880 - ^ ^
04:48:948 - この緑線はスピナー終了にあわせて04:49:075で良いのでは? ok
gl
Thank you mod Fight69Fight69 wrote:
Hi !
[General]
Is your map finished ? It's still in the WIP forum lol
Don't forget to select "Pending" when uploading your map. I can't move Pending. Because this map have one diff only ><
Use 1.5s for the Lead-In, 1s is a bit too short. fixed
[Determination]
Well, your combos placement seems to be a bit random, there is a lot of "one circle combo" for no reason too... I think
Also, the Determination difficulty is really, really hard. I thought newcombo is easy to understand the difference rhythm (1/6, slowly slider etc...). but it was wrong. I deleted new combo
I know it's for approval, but don't you think it's a bit too much ? Probably most players can't clear it (like me).
I recommend you to make at least one easier diff, at least a standard Insane or Hard to make this map playable by more people. I don't think. This map is so difficult for most players but only one diff http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37292
00:39:795 (1) - No new combo ok
00:44:245 (1) - No new combo ok
00:54:033 (1) - No new combo ok
01:03:821 (1) - Watch out, it's a bit off-screen nope
01:14:753 (1) - No new combo ok
01:32:677 (1) - No new combo ok
01:36:872 (9) - New combo ok
01:57:465 (1) - No new combo ok
02:07:253 (1) - No new combo ok
02:10:939 (3) - This slider is a bit off-screen, behind the hp bar ok
02:16:151 (9) - New combo ok
02:16:278 (1) - No new combo ok
02:17:041 (1) - No new combo ok
02:45:007 (1) - No new combo ok
02:45:897 (1) - No new combo ok
02:51:999 (1) - No new combo ok
03:32:931 (1) - This circle is a bit too high too ok
03:48:058 (1) - No new combo ok
04:05:473 (5) - Another off-screen circle nope
To be honest, I don't really like this map, sorry :/
Good luck !
If you're not planning on adding more difficulty, move it to pending, even if you have only one difficulty.rui wrote:
Fight69 wrote:
Hi !
Is your map finished ? It's still in the WIP forum lol
Don't forget to select "Pending" when uploading your map. I can't move Pending. Because this map have one diff only ><
Thank you mod Gabe :3Gabe wrote:
If you're not planning on adding more difficulty, move it to pending, even if you have only one difficulty. I can't move to pending :< http://puu.sh/ExbTDetermination
00:03:185 - Delete the slider and add a circle at 00:03:312. Do the same for 00:05:219. fixed, 00:05:219 move note
00:40:431 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency. fixed
That's all I have... Sorry for the little mod.
Good luck ~
THE DIFF:Gabe wrote:
Ask a BAT to move it to Pending.
Thank you mod CDFACDFA wrote:
movedGabe wrote:
Ask a BAT to move it to Pending.
THE DIFF:
00:22:507 (10) - Really random jump o3o no fixed
00:45:897 (1) - Weird slider ;~;. Probably just make it a normal arc fixed?
00:49:075 (1) - Maybe make look more like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/356657 nice better good imo
01:20:346 (4,5,6,7) - This plays kind of weird o-o. I think (3) might be the issue here difficult this part is difficult. but it is not obstacle to the play imo...
01:50:092 (2) - Make this curve more notable fixed
01:53:778 (3) - ^ fixed
02:16:024 (8) - Touches HP bar fixed
02:33:567 (4,5,6,7) - Same as before
03:29:499 (3) - MAke this into a pretty triangle shape with (1) and (2)? no fixed
04:03:185 (10) - Add NC fixed
desu~
Thank you mod KiyoshiX101KiyoshiX101 wrote:
Hello! From my Queue
[General]
Maybe get a bigger picture? o: 1024x768 is nice o: no changed
[Determination]
02:26:193 (1,2,3,4) - Make thsi stream with less distance :c it's hard to notice that is a stream no fixed. Those note is wide jump. same to 01:12:973 (1,2,3,4,1) -
02:53:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Impossibru!! :c Hard to read D: changed slider jump
03:05:346 - Inherited Point at 10% Volume changed 40% Volume. 10% Volume is too small imo
03:13:609 - Make this 30% and then normal Turning up the volume is nice idea. 50% Volume
04:45:092 (1) - Fade out and finish with 10% Volume - 5% is unrankable I think :c ok, changed
The map is AWESOME *-*! Thank you :3
Good luck! :3
Thank you mod & star pieguy1372 >w</pieguy1372 wrote:
hi, free mod here cause I love this song Yay!
02:39:668 - add note? this pause confused me a little bit no fixed
03:19:584 (6) - (nazi) move 2nd and 3rd points down 1 grid so it blankets (5) better? http://puu.sh/M1uK ok
03:53:016 (4,5) - space this like the others? might look a bit better IMO ok
03:59:117 (6) - end this 1/4 later? ok
04:22:634 (5) - add NC to emphasize vocal? ok
nice map, good luck =w=
Snowy Dream thank you modSnowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Audio Lead-In is not enough ,try to extend a bit. (2000ms) changed
[Determination]
00:22:507 (10) - ctrl+r nope
00:22:761 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - why so close?.. I think that it is 1/8 stream at the first time. This stream is brake for flow of next note. changed 1/8 first note.
04:36:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ ^
00:49:838 (2) - add a note here ok
01:26:448 (5) - ^ ok
02:23:397 (2) - 2 grids left ok
02:35:600 (2) - move to x:156 y:112 (best place imo) I think too
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No big problems :3
Great Mapset
Good Luck