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GiNa
Byakugan249's Mod

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alrighty let's get started :). mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun :P

[General]
How about an orange/reddish, combo color to match the background of the characters? I thought of that too, but no change for now
If you have it, add a soft-sliderslide file where it's silent. you can't hear the sound of the sliderslide. if you don't have that file, take this one. I already got one, thanks !
hmm re-snap the green lines. they're off by 1ms. Fixed

[Normal]
The settings look like it'd be in an easy diff. Increase everything except the CS by 1. if this was an easy diff, i'd let it go. Fixed
00:04:040 (2,3) - make these notes curved sliders. for (2), you'll make a border for the previous and for (3), you'll blanket the previous slider. I think it flows a lot smoother during gameplay. Fixed
00:08:988 (1,2,3,4) - Instead of a square, how about a diamond? i think it'll be fun for beginners. i think the square pattern looks boring for the introduction to the song IMO. Fixed
00:21:359 (1) - add a whistle at the repeat arrow to match the piano. i'm guessing the whistles are not only for consistency, but it's to follow the piano. Fixed
00:23:834 (1) - same as above but at the end. Fixed
00:26:617 (2) - same as 00:21:359. Fixed
00:36:205 (1,2,3,4) - when i reached this pattern, i felt uncomfortable because of the direction it's taking. The way (2) is slanted in that direction made me feel uncomfortable. i don't feel the flow in this part at all. make this part curved sliders like this. it'll flow a lot smoother to the song, and i feel comfortable with the curved sliders in effect. Fixed
00:52:287 (3) - the finish seems too loud for me. add a timing point and reduce the volume to 35%. Fixed
01:25:844 (1) - extend the slider till 01:28:782. the long pause ends here. Fixed
hmm i think that if you can add a few more whistles, it'll go really nicely with the piano. go back to the song and add whistles to where the tone of the piano changes. I added some more.

[Hard]
Maybe increase the HP and OD by 1 to put a bit of a challenge for players? No change for HP
00:20:431 (5) - since you have a whistle at the end, extend the slider 1/4 more to follow the piano. Fixed
01:02:339 (4,5,6,7) - I think it'd be easier if you can replace the circles for 1/4 sliders to make it easier? No, due to the BPM, this shouldn't be hard to play
01:12:700 (5) - add a clap at the beginning for consistency purposes. Fixed
01:25:689 (6) - why did the spacing increase for this note? i doesn't make sense and this jump might surprise players. follow the DS for (3-5) and form a parallelogram so that it'd flow smoother during gameplay. Fixed
same comment about the whistles. Done

[TuInsane]
same as Hard about the diff settings. No change here for HP too
00:36:205 (1) - the finish is too loud and I find it unfitting to the song. reduce the volume to either 20% or 30%. so that it wouldn't be that much of a distraction during gameplay/ I decreased to 35%
00:24:761 (5) - make this slider look like the previous slider and Ctrl+R. i think it'll flow smoother during gameplay. Fixed
01:11:772 (4) - i see that you're blanketing the next slider, but make it symmetrical so that it'd blanket the next slider nicely. Fixed
01:15:483 (2) - hmm how about Ctrl+R and move the 2nd point to the left side? it should be like this. since this is an insane, it wouldn't hurt to add a jump here to challenge players. Fixed
same comment about the whistles, and do Ctrl+R on some parts of the 1/4 sliders like the one at 00:24:761. I think that it'll make the diff fun for players. Done again

I guess that's it. Overall the custom claps before the kiai sound too loud for me. i highly suggest that you reduce the volume so that it doesn't cuase that much of a distraction for me and other players. anyways GL :D Thank you !
22 is a lazy ass, so I fix things for her.
Leorda
Hiii


[General]
* I don't think 2nd kiai time is fit to the song
* Remove OSB files, duh....


[Normal]
01:16:411 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are unable to see the path


[Hard]
* AR -1?

00:23:834 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider
00:28:782 (5) - ^
00:31:875 (3) - Add whistle


I can't find something wrong, I'm strongly sorry
Topic Starter
GiNa

Leorda wrote:

Hiii Hello ~


[General]
* I don't think 2nd kiai time is fit to the song I think it fits the vocal, but I just make it shorter so it will make more sense
* Remove OSB files, duh.... Okay


[Normal]
01:16:411 (1) - The sliderbody is overlapped by spinner-osu, so beginners are unable to see the path I changed the position of it


[Hard]
* AR -1? mmm ... maybe no, perhaps the OD is 6 already

00:23:834 (3) - Add whistle at tail slider Fixed
00:28:782 (5) - ^ Fixed
00:31:875 (3) - Add whistle Fixed


I can't find something wrong, I'm strongly sorry Thank you !
bossandy
Yo GiNai~ Request from Forums PM~
 
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
 
[ General]
 
  1. soft-hitclap2的音效配這首聽起來怪怪的 試試這個 感覺百分百增加!! xD
  2. 01:18:267 ~ 01:23:215 - 其實這段kiai time沒什麼必要 有些多餘
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. SV1.4的Normal好少見 xD
  2. AR跟OD-1?
  3. 00:17:030 (3) - 這個sliderCtrl+J? 前面的12是從上往下 23是從下往上 所以slider用Ctrl+J會有更好的flow
  4. 00:19:504 (2) - 看你/妳的whistle下法是在每個white tick上面 所以這裡加個whistle
  5. 00:31:875 (3) - ^
  6. 00:34:349 (2) - ^
  7. 00:52:287 (3) - 這裡用finish聽起來總怪怪的 試試clap加whistle ( clap換過之後 )
  8. 01:08:679 (2) - 把著個circle移動到01:08:061 - 打起來比較順暢 但是其實沒差多少 只是把自己的feeling說出來而已
  9. 01:10:535 (2) - 如果上面的mod有改的話 把這個note刪除吧 也是單純覺得比較順暢
  10. 01:24:452 (2,3) - 2去掉一個repeat 把3刪除 做一個slider從01:25:071 ~ 01:25:689
 
[ Hard]
 
  1. 00:18:885 (1,2,3) - ( Nazi ) 沒stack好
  2. 00:23:524 (1) - 這裡刪除New Combo 然後在00:23:834 (3) - 加個New Combo , like 00:18:576 (6,1) -
  3. 00:28:782 (5,1) - Swap New Combo , Same reason as above
  4. 00:33:112 (1,2) - Swap New Combo
  5. 00:39:916 (2,3) - 中間也空的拍子變大但是spacing沒有變會讓人混淆,confusion 把spacing用大
  6. 00:52:287 (3) - Same as Normal
  7. 01:01:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這打起來不是很順暢 而且容易Miss 尤其是這種大spacing 節奏改成這樣吧
  8. 01:25:071 (4) - 如果要跟著音樂的話這個clap刪除比較好
 
[ TuInsane]
 
  1. 音量30%太小聲了 我只聽的到有加whistle的objects 40%開始才聽的清楚 建議加10%音量
  2. 看不出什麼東西 就是結尾不跟其他難度統一嗎?
 
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好歌阿好歌 這歌感覺真好 我喜歡!!! ( 順便再次謝謝妳幫我翻譯 xD )
給你很多星星s xDD Sorry for my poor mod!
Good Luck GiNa :3
Topic Starter
GiNa
bossandy's Mod

bossandy wrote:

Yo GiNai~ Request from Forums PM~ My name is GiNa ... lol
 
  1. Red : I think you must to fix.
  2. Blue : Need to discuss.
  3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
 
[ General]
 
  1. soft-hitclap2的音效配這首聽起來怪怪的 試試這個 感覺百分百增加!! xD Okay, done
  2. 01:18:267 ~ 01:23:215 - 其實這段kiai time沒什麼必要 有些多餘 I made the kiai longer instead
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. SV1.4的Normal好少見 xD
  2. AR跟OD-1? Nope
  3. 00:17:030 (3) - 這個sliderCtrl+J? 前面的12是從上往下 23是從下往上 所以slider用Ctrl+J會有更好的flow Fixed
  4. 00:19:504 (2) - 看你/妳的whistle下法是在每個white tick上面 所以這裡加個whistle Fixed
  5. 00:31:875 (3) - ^ Fixed
  6. 00:34:349 (2) - ^ Fixed
  7. 00:52:287 (3) - 這裡用finish聽起來總怪怪的 試試clap加whistle ( clap換過之後 ) Fixed
  8. 01:08:679 (2) - 把著個circle移動到01:08:061 - 打起來比較順暢 但是其實沒差多少 只是把自己的feeling說出來而已 No change
  9. 01:10:535 (2) - 如果上面的mod有改的話 把這個note刪除吧 也是單純覺得比較順暢 ^
  10. 01:24:452 (2,3) - 2去掉一個repeat 把3刪除 做一個slider從01:25:071 ~ 01:25:689 Fixed
 
[ Hard]
 
  1. 00:18:885 (1,2,3) - ( Nazi ) 沒stack好 Fixed
  2. 00:23:524 (1) - 這裡刪除New Combo 然後在00:23:834 (3) - 加個New Combo , like 00:18:576 (6,1) -  Fixed
  3. 00:28:782 (5,1) - Swap New Combo , Same reason as above Fixed
  4. 00:33:112 (1,2) - Swap New Combo Fixed
  5. 00:39:916 (2,3) - 中間也空的拍子變大但是spacing沒有變會讓人混淆,confusion 把spacing用大 Anti-jump, so I made the spacing even smaller
  6. 00:52:287 (3) - Same as Normal
  7. 01:01:875 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這打起來不是很順暢 而且容易Miss 尤其是這種大spacing 節奏改成這樣吧 No, but I made it easier
  8. 01:25:071 (4) - 如果要跟著音樂的話這個clap刪除比較好 Nope
 
[ TuInsane]
 
  1. 音量30%太小聲了 我只聽的到有加whistle的objects 40%開始才聽的清楚 建議加10%音量 Fixed
  2. 看不出什麼東西 就是結尾不跟其他難度統一嗎? It's alright, 22 is a guest, so no problem imo
 
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好歌阿好歌 這歌感覺真好 我喜歡!!! ( 順便再次謝謝妳幫我翻譯 xD )
給你很多星星s xDD Sorry for my poor mod!
Good Luck GiNa :3
 Thanks for so many stars <3333 and no problem, just call me when you need me to translate something ! Btw, you mod isn't poor 8-)
No_Gu
request from my queue
太抱歉了拖了一个月T.T

[Normal]
00:07:751 (2,1) - 这个稍微有点overlap
00:10:844 (4) - 尾whistle?
00:31:256 (1,2,3) - 看起来不够圆润
01:24:452 (2) - 我觉得这个可以降点音量然后和后面的听起来有点层次感

[Hard]
00:05:277 (1,2,3) - 这个三连听起来真不怎样。。
00:10:844 (5) - 你把这个放到和三水平对称的地方再改下形状应该会好点
00:16:411 - 00:35:586这段whistle太多了感觉有点吵了

[2ha]
01:08:215 (1,2,3,4) - 你想干啥
kiai那几个clap还不如不加
你真的没因为做着爽而overlap么.
Lizbeth
Hi~

[TuInsane]
00:06:978 (4) - I think sounds better if you replace this by a single circle, fits better with the vocals.
01:00:947 (1) - add a repeat deleting 01:01:566 (2)
01:03:885 (2) - extend till next red tick deleting 01:04:349 (3)
01:06:359 (2) - same as above

[Hard]
01:02:803 (5) - start a slider here that end it at 01:03:112

[Normal]
Everything seems fine

Aww would be such a solid mapset with an Easy diff... >:

That's all for now

Consider adding an easy diff *runs*
Topic Starter
GiNa

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
太抱歉了拖了一个月T.T

[Normal]
00:07:751 (2,1) - 这个稍微有点overlap I moved 1, 1 grid down
00:10:844 (4) - 尾whistle? Fixed
00:31:256 (1,2,3) - 看起来不够圆润 Fixed
01:24:452 (2) - 我觉得这个可以降点音量然后和后面的听起来有点层次感 Fixed

[Hard]
00:05:277 (1,2,3) - 这个三连听起来真不怎样。。 I followed vocal, so no change
00:10:844 (5) - 你把这个放到和三水平对称的地方再改下形状应该会好点 Fixed
00:16:411 - 00:35:586这段whistle太多了感觉有点吵了 Same structure as Normal, so no change

[2ha]
01:08:215 (1,2,3,4) - 你想干啥 我也不知道22想幹啥,no change
kiai那几个clap还不如不加 這個幾乎沒有modder指出,所以先keep著
你真的没因为做着爽而overlap么. 誰知道呢(聳肩)

Lizbeth wrote:

Hi~

[TuInsane]
00:06:978 (4) - I think sounds better if you replace this by a single circle, fits better with the vocals. Fixed
01:00:947 (1) - add a repeat deleting 01:01:566 (2) Fixed
01:03:885 (2) - extend till next red tick deleting 01:04:349 (3) Fixed
01:06:359 (2) - same as above Fixed
lazy busy 22

[Hard]
01:02:803 (5) - start a slider here that end it at 01:03:112 Fixed

[Normal]
Everything seems fine Thanks

Aww would be such a solid mapset with an Easy diff... >: I actually thought of this before xD

That's all for now

Consider adding an easy diff *runs* Sure, I asked my dear friend to make a guest diff for me, I probably got her diff next week ! Thanks for your suggestion too 8-)
I'll try to fetch 22 asap, sorry for waiting. I fixed stuffs for her
LunarSakuya
Hope you like it, "me"^^

http://puu.sh/DG0Y
Konei
Hello~

You wrote in my summer vacation queue but I can't find errors :|

I searched and searched but I couldnt find anything what I would have wanted to be improved.


Very nice done~

Good luck for ranking
Topic Starter
GiNa

Konei wrote:

Hello~

You wrote in my summer vacation queue but I can't find errors :|

I searched and searched but I couldnt find anything what I would have wanted to be improved.


Very nice done~

Good luck for ranking
Thank you for looking at my map ^-^
Suzully
From my modding queue. Sorry for taking long time >_<

[Sakuya's Easy]
  1. 00:36:205 (1) - Consider to add whistle to the top and middle as well as 00:38:679 (3).
  2. 01:10:844 (3) - ^ to the top.
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:916 (1,1) - I don't think new combos are necessary here. Player can read them with approach circle imo.
[TuInsane]
  1. 00:55:844 (4,1) - Compare with 01:05:895 (1,2). Make them consistent?
Sweet map. Easy diff doesn't have any issues even if not get a mod before.
Call me back after fix~
Topic Starter
GiNa

Suzully wrote:

From my modding queue. Sorry for taking long time >_<

[Sakuya's Easy]
  1. 00:36:205 (1) - Consider to add whistle to the top and middle as well as 00:38:679 (3). Fixed
  2. 01:10:844 (3) - ^ to the top. ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:39:916 (1,1) - I don't think new combos are necessary here. Player can read them with approach circle imo. Fixed
[TuInsane]
  1. 00:55:844 (4,1) - Compare with 01:05:895 (1,2). Make them consistent? Fixed
Sweet map. Easy diff doesn't have any issues even if not get a mod before.
Call me back after fix~ Arigato
Suzully
Bubbled!
Topic Starter
GiNa

Suzully wrote:

Bubbled!
Thank you Suzu-san <3
BFBQ
i like it!
Topic Starter
GiNa

BFBQ wrote:

i like it!
Thank you 8-)
Andrea
[TuInsane]

00:07:442 (5,6) - This is confusing.
01:00:947 (1) - You forgot a clap at the end of this slider.

And yeah, that's it.
Topic Starter
GiNa

Andrea wrote:

[TuInsane]

00:07:442 (5,6) - This is confusing. Fixed
01:00:947 (1) - You forgot a clap at the end of this slider. Fixed

And yeah, that's it. Thank you
Andrea
You're welcome.

Ranked~
YTYuyu
Yay gogo GiNa-chan :P...congratz on the rank ;)
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
好www
SakiK
congratz~ :3
tutuhaha
八错八错
birra
lol i DLed this from my friend when there was Nee diff in this map hahah xD
finally it's ranked. congraaats \:D/
S o r d a
gratz ranked!
bossandy
姐姐萬歲!!!
EmPao
gratz~ \:D/
hoLysoup
哇哇
GiNa~ :>
spboxer3
恭喜了~
Topic Starter
GiNa
Thanks everyone
Apparently, this got ranked when I was sleeping lol

@sacchann: I deleted it xD
Hanemi_old
I knew it will be ranked, it is a nice map ;)
LunarSakuya
Late congrats!!!
=_=
Topic Starter
GiNa
Thanks !
And no problem, me xD
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