1. 00:37:612(1) - Delete this NC and add to 00:38:412?
2. 01:42:412(1) - I don't this clap is necessary here.It sounds weird imo.
3. 02:58:212 - This green line is useless~
4. 03:32:812(2) - The finish is odd here since you have already had a finish at 03:31:212.
5. 03:48:612(1) - I think you may move this spinner to 03:48:412 since it's too short now~

1. 00:52:812(6) - Move this down by a grid here to make 4,5,6 in a line?
2. 01:25:612 - Add a note here?It sounds empty here.
3. 01:48:012(2) - Rotating this a bit may make this nicer>w<
4. 02:06:412(1) - Remove this NC?

1. 00:52:812(5) - Move this down by a grid?
2. 02:16:412(3) - Rotate this a bit?
3. 03:24:412(3) - Move this up by a grid?

Kiiwa wrote:

<3

General
Why two white combo? lol moe because im lazy to change it, and dont want two red to touch <: makes sense?

02:34:412 - Find a sound for this? Would be soooooo amazing~ yea i wanted to, just dont know what... sniff, i ll try to find something
02:58:412 - This sound could be Normal 40% 02:58:612 - Soft 5% 02:58:812 - Normal 30% useless idea ahaha mm I think im gonna mute the sliderslide here
03:48:612 (1) - Add whistle ok

Dancing
01:41:512 - Why have you got custom break end time here? Remove or add to all other diffs I dont have idea, removed
02:51:212 (3) - Add whistle for panio o.o? okss
02:49:612 (1,3,1) - Inconsistant pattern. (move 02:52:812 (1) - to the right ) got it, done

Walking
01:28:812 (1,2,3,1) - Do somthing like this? http://puu.sh/ICQj Stack can be a little confusing.. fixed
02:06:412 (1) - New combo for vocal? I don't think its needed... look at dancing diff
Sleeping
So much 1/1 lol! me loves~

Good job wife~ its sooo good~

Dark_Ai wrote:

Short mod ._.

• [Sleeping]

1. Look Fine for me

• [Walking]

1. Look Fine for me

• [Dancing]

1. 00:55:212 (6) - same here
2. 00:57:612 (1) - This slider doesn't fit with the second. Make it like this1 instead of this I think I fix it somehow
3. 02:37:812 (4) - Sound is weird. I would delete these note I agree, deleted more too
4. 02:44:212 (4) - same here same

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Hope you accept my short mod >.< But this Map looks really nice (for me) :3
If it okay, here we go for M4M

Bass wrote:

M4M

[General]

Fine.

[Sleeping]

1. 03:48:612 (1) - this might be too short for the easiest diff, extend by 1/2? extended 1 beat

[Walking]

1. 01:29:612 (1) - Move to x:88 y:192 Dont know why i'd do that, no change
2. 03:30:012 (2) - Move 3rd point to x:376 y:192

mm ok
[Dancing]

• 
  Fine.

That's all

a3272509123 wrote:

Hi~I'm here for M4M~



[General]
Seems fine~



[Sleeping]

1. 00:37:612(1) - Delete this NC and add to 00:38:412?
2. 01:42:412(1) - I don't this clap is necessary here.It sounds weird imo. true, it was a mistake, fixed
3. 02:58:212 - This green line is useless~ fixed
4. 03:32:812(2) - The finish is odd here since you have already had a finish at 03:31:212. removed both
5. 03:48:612(1) - I think you may move this spinner to 03:48:412 since it's too short now~ fixed

[Walking]

1. 00:52:812(6) - Move this down by a grid here to make 4,5,6 in a line? I see them aligned o-o
2. 01:25:612 - Add a note here?It sounds empty here. wanna follow only vacals here
3. 01:48:012(2) - Rotating this a bit may make this nicer>w< eem i dont want to >":
4. 02:06:412(1) - Remove this NC?

see dancing




[Dancing]

1. 00:52:812(5) - Move this down by a grid? ok
2. 02:16:412(3) - Rotate this a bit? done
3. 03:24:412(3) - Move this up by a grid? done

That's all~!Very nice song and map~Good luck with ranking~

Barney Stinson wrote:

m4m time here
General: Avoid copy pasta


Sleeping



00:16:012 (1) - Meh, Stack shouldn't belong on easies. It's a bit ugly to see 'cause it's a slow rhythm too Changed
00:34:412 (1) - Remove new combo No change
00:35:212 (2) - Add nc
00:37:612 (1) - Remove nc
00:38:412 (2) - Add nc
01:50:412 (1) - Remove nc
02:20:012 (1) - ^
02:20:812 (5) - Add new combo
03:11:212 (1) - Remove nc
03:12:012 (5) - Add nc
I checked the whole diff and didnt change nay of the new combo suggestions, Im okay with how they are now



Walking

01:23:012 (2) - Meh, try to make a pattern This is a pattern...
01:26:212 (2) -
02:06:412 (1) - Remove nc check insane
02:27:012 (2,2) - Try to make pattern Again, this is a pattern...
03:18:212 (2,2) - ^
03:29:612 (1) - remove nc I dont think they belong together
03:36:012 (1) - ^ same
03:42:412 (1) - ^ ^
03:47:212 (1) - ^ ^


Dancing
00:35:212 (4,6,8) - Those overlaps are bad looking I find them good for playing <:

Nothing more

Good luck!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi Lizbeth Sorry for delay :C

General

1. Sorry but i really dislike the BG isn't because of them, some looks ugly in the picture xD eeemm I like the BG, and you cant imagine how hard was to find, so keeping it.
   
   
   NSFW

   xD

Sleeping

1. 00:25:612 (1) - Put a whistle at the end, i think it fits perfectly whit the song oops, not whistle, i added the custom hitsound it was missing
2. 01:23:212 (1) - Add a whistle at the begin at the begin, i think it sounds good whit the high vocal of the singer done
3. 02:08:012 (1) - Add finish at the begin, sounds good because there starts the chorus yep, it was missing
4. 02:24:012 (1) - Add NC IMO since you're following NC whit vocals so there should keep some consistency at NC I want all those slider in the same combo
5. 02:56:412 (2) - I think that this slider will confuse some new players, since you stacked it whit 02:56:012 (1) i think they won't notice that that slider starts in red tick (My solution, just use distance snap and unstack them) good solution, done, thanks

Walking

1. 00:52:812 (6) - IMO put a NC there and remove it in the next note 00:53:612 (1) i think it follows better the vocals No, I prefer as it is, also fixed a new combo that was missing there, maybe now it make more sense
2. 01:23:012 (2) - I think that so many repeats doesn't work over here, try to separate that slider in 2 sliders Fits the song perfectly imo, and too many sliders starting on blue ticks are just awkward to play, at least for me
3. 01:26:212 (2) - ^ same as above
4. 01:28:812 (1) - Add a clap, i think it sounds good whit the instrumental done
5. 02:10:412 (4) - Add clap at the begin, it follows the instrumental and keep the consistency at hitsounds it has a clap, it was missing thenormal hit, added
6. 02:27:012 (2) - Same as 01:23:012 (2) i think that separating that slider in 2 sliders will play better wont, already explained above
7. 02:30:212 (2) - ^ ^
8. 03:18:212 (2) - ^ ^
9. 03:21:412 (2) - ^ ^

Dancing

1. 00:25:012 (5) - Remove that NC and add it in the next slider 00:25:612 (2) it really looks better done, lol i've change the combo of this sliders so many times.
2. 00:33:612 (4) - Can be a better blanket to 00:34:212 (1) http://puu.sh/J8nf I like the soft curve, no change
3. 02:08:812 (2) - Add a whistle and clap at the begin, it really fits whit the instrumental yep, it was missing, ddeerrp, added
   
   Nice

Really Great mapset, Well Done !!, Hope it was Helpful

Good Luck! And Star!

Kenezz wrote:

Herrow Moe Girl
Kenezz's Bakamod~

[General]
01:16:812 - The first kiai time don't should end up here? or here 01:15:212 ? well in a downbeat. The same for the others kiai time. I dont think it affect anything in the wrong way.. I end it on a note thou, so it wouldn't look bad on the taiko mode
03:40:612 - In this part I can hear the change of volumen in the voice, you can use some inherited timing sections to reduce the volumen and fits it with the voice. http://puu.sh/KABB http://puu.sh/KAC1 Done~

[Dancing]
00:32:612 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with the following combos. Done
01:55:212 - The patterns of the new combos here don't should be are something like this?
Starts in the slider repeat and etc, etc. I'd like to keep it as it is.. it fits with this new combo I placed in the start of this section:01:54:412 (1) -

Really I can't see any problem or give you other suggestion in your mapset, good!
Good luck Liz ♥

Gabe wrote:

Lizbeth wrote:

*Rolls on Gabe* wii~~

Baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no moreee.~ ♫

;RUUUUUUUUUUUN.