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Topic Starter
Melophobia
thanks wcx!
kanpakyin
Hi. I'm checking this bubble map. Mod here.

All my words are suggestion only. Feel free to ignore them except the black blod.

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:674 (3) - I would add a new combo here to follow the music and the accent point if I were you. This is not really significant though. :S
  2. 00:10:453 - How about considering a note here? I just heard a drum sound here and the drum sounds would be more prominent if you could add it and then add a clap sound at that note with 30% volume if you want.
  3. 01:04:328 (2) - A suggestion here, I would place a whistle at the beginning of the slider because it is a low pitch part, a whistle there sounds cool to me~
  4. 01:07:632 (1,2,3) - I would place the new combo here instead of drum sound, so the vocal can be prominent. I would add a new combo on 01:08:648 (2) - and then remove the new combo on 01:07:632 (1) - . Just my opinion only.
  5. 01:59:728 (2) - A whistle at the beginning of the slider? Listening to music and you can find that it fits the music very well and it can show a good effect in gameplay.
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:143 (6) - (Design) Probably remove the stack here to make it more beautiful?
  2. 00:41:965 ~ 00:42:473 (x) - How about placing something here, notes or sliders because this part is quite empty compare to the whole difficulty.
  3. 00:50:605 (6) - Same as 00:22:143.
  4. 01:34:569 (2) - I would remove this 1/4 jump if I were you because this is the only 1/4 jump in this map. So remove that can make the map looks more consistency.
  5. 01:40:669 (2) - How about considering a jump here? It can fit the accent point and it will give more fun to player.
  6. 01:59:982 (3) - A whistle here? Listening to music and you can find that it fits the music very well and it can show a good effect in gameplay.
[tTaiko]
  1. The 1/6 were done intentionally? Some of them sounds weird to me. I was just wondering it was a wrong snap or you did that deliberately.
  2. 00:07:911 (3) - How about a kat here?
  3. 00:09:817 (1) - I think it would be nice if you can change it to don.
  4. 00:11:469 (1,2,1,2,1) - kkddk here?
  5. 00:17:314 (1) - I would remove this note if I were you because there are no any vocal , drum sounds, instrument to fit/support the note. So, I feel weird about it.
  6. 00:18:331 (2) - ^
  7. 00:36:374 (3,4,5,1,1,1,1,2) - I feel really awkward of this 1/6 + 1/4 stream when I testplay it.
  8. 01:07:632 (4) - kat here?
  9. 01:40:414 (1) - I think don is much better here.
  10. 01:42:193 (3) - don here?
  11. 01:58:839 (2) - ^Same.
  12. 01:59:728 (1) - How about changing this back to small don?
Call me back.
Or you can find some modder to check this map before calling me back.
Topic Starter
Melophobia

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi. I'm checking this bubble map. Mod here.

All my words are suggestion only. Feel free to ignore them except the black blod.

[Normal]
  1. 00:08:674 (3) - I would add a new combo here to follow the music and the accent point if I were you. This is not really significant though. :S no change because i'd like to keep my newcombo pattern(2 downbeats) in the whole diff.
  2. 00:10:453 - How about considering a note here? I just heard a drum sound here and the drum sounds would be more prominent if you could add it and then add a clap sound at that note with 30% volume if you want. nah, that 1/2 rhythm would be kinda hard for the easiest diff. and i dont think it sounds that good. i wanted a note at 00:10:325 - rather than that. lol
  3. 01:04:328 (2) - A suggestion here, I would place a whistle at the beginning of the slider because it is a low pitch part, a whistle there sounds cool to me~ yeah fixed~
  4. 01:07:632 (1,2,3) - I would place the new combo here instead of drum sound, so the vocal can be prominent. I would add a new combo on 01:08:648 (2) - and then remove the new combo on 01:07:632 (1) - . Just my opinion only. agreed and fixed~
  5. 01:59:728 (2) - A whistle at the beginning of the slider? Listening to music and you can find that it fits the music very well and it can show a good effect in gameplay. added it to the repeat of the slider. because you mentioned a whistle at 01:59:982 - in Hard diff and i think this way is better.
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:143 (6) - (Design) Probably remove the stack here to make it more beautiful? i want to match these with the next slider and it looks nice to me, so i'd keep it~
  2. 00:41:965 ~ 00:42:473 (x) - How about placing something here, notes or sliders because this part is quite empty compare to the whole difficulty. there're already 2 sliders. i think they should be enough for the part~
  3. 00:50:605 (6) - Same as 00:22:143. ok, changed this one
  4. 01:34:569 (2) - I would remove this 1/4 jump if I were you because this is the only 1/4 jump in this map. So remove that can make the map looks more consistency. fixed!
  5. 01:40:669 (2) - How about considering a jump here? It can fit the accent point and it will give more fun to player. ^
  6. 01:59:982 (3) - A whistle here? Listening to music and you can find that it fits the music very well and it can show a good effect in gameplay. ^
Call me back.
Or you can find some modder before calling me back.
i'l try to find some more mods beforehand. thanks very much for the mod and stars!
Saten
ducaaaaaaaaaaaa.mp3

yo Hentai mapper :3


[Hard]
00:15:916 (5) - remove the clap on the end, sounds better
00:33:578 - a clap here doesn't really fit. Maybe a whistle here instead?
00:50:097 (4) - finish on beginning
00:58:610 (6) - clap here
01:48:038 (4,5,1) - NC on (4) instead? looks better in a stacked triple imo
01:58:839 - is the 30% really necessary here? just follow what you did in [Normal]

[Normal]
00:49:334 (3) - Finish on repeat?


Everything is fine, unless you're a nitpicker :P

That's all =w=/
Topic Starter
Melophobia
> Saten
A nice mod! all fixed ><
thanks very much :)

EDIT:
i fixed some stuff in Normal diff by myself
00:14:773 (1) - added a finish since Hard diff had it
01:17:797 (1,3) - added whistles to the end of both because felt empty due to the lack of clap
01:34:061 (1,3) - ^
01:38:127 (1) - replaced the whistle at the beginning with a finish for consistency with Hard diff
Suimya
Melo o.o remove the Short Ver from the title because of the new rule~
those
http://www.cuffs-sphere.jp/haruka/download/index.php

"主題歌short" translates to "OP short". It's an extension given by the producer themselves, so it doesn't need to be removed.
Shohei Ohtani
THIS IS MORE HENTAI ISN'T IT

ALL OF THIS HENTAI

TOO MUCH HENTAI

Hard:
00:42:981 (5) - NAZI: The spacing is a TINY bit off here, notable to make (5) look too close to (6)
01:08:648 (2) - NC?

Normal:
This map is amazing.

o333333333333333o

now go get this bubbled, this map is too kawaii
Topic Starter
Melophobia

CDFA wrote:

THIS IS MORE HENTAI ISN'T IT

ALL OF THIS HENTAI

TOO MUCH HENTAI

Hard:
00:42:981 (5) - NAZI: The spacing is a TINY bit off here, notable to make (5) look too close to (6)
01:08:648 (2) - NC?

Normal:
This map is amazing.

o333333333333333o

now go get this bubbled, this map is too kawaii
fixed both! thanks so much for hentai mod and stars! :D
Topic Starter
Melophobia

-Sekai- wrote:

Melo o.o remove the Short Ver from the title because of the new rule~

it's including "ショートバージョン" (short version), i think i shouldn't remove it~
thanks anyways
aabc271
As requested by Melophobia, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Well, as the map's bubble is popped, I can now finish this 1-month-old request. Sry for late > <
Anyway, let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

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[tTaiko]

The whole diff is filled with quite a lot of 1/4s ( and also 1/6 + 1/4 ). I don't oppose the use of 1/4s & 1/6s in this diff, but I think it's better to make this diff easier as this is a relaxing song ( 8+* -> 7* ? ). I suggest adding more 1/2 rests & deleting some 1/4s & 1/6s so that the diff fits the song more ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:04:862 ( 1 ) - Red note ? As ddk sounds better to me ( To fit the ddk at 00:06:895 )

00:32:308 ( 1~3, 1, 1~2, 1 ) - oooo (1/6) ooo (1/4) ? As you can hear that the pitch of vocal goes up instead of down ~

00:40:694 ( 1~3, 1~2 ) - oooo (1/6) o ? This pattern fits the music more, with the same reason as above ~

01:07:632 ( 4 ) - Blue note ? imo this sounds better for this section ~

01:08:648 ( 1 ) - Red note ? imo this fits the 1/6 + 1/4 ( after this note ) better ~

01:57:441 ( 4 ) - Blue note ? As it has a higher pitch than 3 ( previous note ) ~

The map is OK overall ~

I can see that you're trying to map by fitting the drum, but it'll be better if more 1/2 rests and fewer 1/6s & 1/4s are used

This will have a better overall feeling as the song is soft, and a softer diff will fit well :3

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : Hitsounds )

Star and good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
Melophobia
thank you aabc for taiko mod! :D
those
How do we like these changes? http://puu.sh/Gk9p
kanpakyin
Rechecking...

[Hard]
  1. 00:16:806 (1,2) - Sorry but this is unrankable because the sliderend is silent. We can't silence the sliderend (make it inaudible) nowsady. Please change it to 20% at least.
Fix it and I will rebubble
Topic Starter
Melophobia

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecking...

[Hard]
  1. 00:16:806 (1,2) - Sorry but this is unrankable because the sliderend is silent. We can't silence the sliderend (make it inaudible) nowsady. Please change it to 20% at least.
Fix it and I will rebubble
fixed, although i just wonder if it's unrankable or not because of this
The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent,
kanpakyin
The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent,

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Hitsounds from hitcircles and sliders must be audible. These provide feedback for the player, and having them silent in a rhythm game doesn't make much sense. If you don't like the default sounds, then find replacements rather than silencing notes. You can use hitsounds from the Custom Hitsound Library or easily find others online. Lowering the volume of a few notes to provide a dampened effect is usually fine, but complete silence is always unacceptable. The end of a spinner (or even the entire spinner) the sliding sound of a slider, and the end of a slider can be silent, but only do it if it makes sense. Finally, you cannot silence both slider ticks and slider slides together.
Hope this can explain your confusion.

Anyway, your bubble is returned.

Rebubbled~
Andrea
This is a pretty good map! Nothing to say.

Ranked~
mancuso_JM_
Congratulations, Melo :3
YTYuyu
well well congratz on the rank Melo-chan ;)
Nyquill
poot yes
merchat7
Wow, Duca's voice is really different from the songs I normally hear from her, grats!
Mythol
hentaiiiiiiiiigratz~
Ryafuka
congratz :)
そらちゃんそらちゃんそらちゃんうわああああ
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
reconstruction of
S o r d a
おめ!
Topic Starter
Melophobia
thanks everyone >a<
Nymph
sora~
Thite
omedeto~ :)
xsrsbsns
omedetou :)
JoJo
melo-chan ome!! =v=
cRyo[iceeicee]
Grats (◕‿◕✿)
DarknessAngel
omedeto,Melo ! :)
NewRulerNA
congratz!
alacat
おめでとー :oops:
terametis
いええええええええええええ
Lundlerol
んんwwwwwww
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