Melophobia wrote:

[kosiga's Normal]
00:08:308 (1) - 音付けが少し寂しい＆音っぽいのがあるので折り返しにwhistleつけてもいいかなって思いました fixed~
00:45:054 (1) - downbeatがあるので次の白線から始める方が好きです ^
00:53:397 - ちょっと音量を下げてみるとか？00:53:752 - と比べるとやや大げさに感じました ^
00:55:172 (2) - 終点のclapあってないです、もし置くなら00:56:060 - 。 ^
00:58:012 (4) - whistleのかわりに折り返しにfinish? 音聞く感じだとそっちの方が合うと思います ^
00:59:077 - このclapあんまりあってない気がします、drumの音も他と比べると小さいですし要らないのでは ^
01:01:918 (4,6) - このoverlapが凄い気になりました 保留 :3
01:17:894 (5) - このpartではスネアが1/1間隔で鳴ってるので始点clapの方が合うのでは？ fixed~
01:27:835 (1) - 折り返しにfinish? finish音が少し大きいと思ったのでwhistle使います!
01:27:835 (1) - 拾うにしても小さすぎてわかりにくい音なのでspinner or sliderに変更した方が良い気もします 考え中 :33

1. There's an .osb file in your folder. Feel free to delete it and full submit,since you aren't using any SB at the moment.

1. 00:25:350 (1) - A whistle at the end of the slider would fit with the singer's voice alteration (that goes in high pitch). If you do this,remember to put a whistle at the end of the slider 00:26:770 (2) - !
2. 00:36:710 (1,2) - The suggestion above applies for these sliders,too!
3. 00:53:397 - Add a note here with a clap? This would make a bit more consistent the clap pattern with 00:50:557 (3) - and it plays pretty good there!
4. 00:59:432 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider? It fits and again this makes the whistle pattern with 01:00:852 (2,3) - more consistent
5. 01:10:793 (1) - ^
6. 01:34:225 (1) - Move this note at x:140 y:172 to make a pretty blanket with 01:32:805 (3) - ?

1. 00:32:805 (1) - Move this new combo on 00:31:740 (4) - ?

1. From AIBat:
   
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   • Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:

   1. 00:12:217 (snap to 00:12:213)
      
   2. 00:25:176 (snap to 00:25:172)
      
   3. 00:30:768 (snap to 00:30:764)
      
   4. 00:31:212 (snap to 00:31:208)
      
   5. 00:31:478 (snap to 00:31:474)
      
   6. 00:33:785 (snap to 00:33:781)
      
   7. 00:34:407 (snap to 00:34:403)
      
   8. 00:36:626 (snap to 00:36:622)
      
   9. 00:36:803 (snap to 00:36:799)
      
   10. 00:42:306 (snap to 00:42:302)
2. 00:10:261 - Add a note here to follow the guitar in the background?
3. 00:26:592 (6) - The whistle at the end of this slider sounds a bit strange,since there aren't any other whistles other than this and since the pattern is entirely done using claps. Delete it,since you aren't going to use this in the following pattern too?
4. 00:28:012 (1) - The blanket with 00:27:657 (9) - is a bit wrong. Move this 1 grid down to fix that?
5. 00:39:373 (7) - Since you have used this in the previous pattern,put a new combo here,too?
6. 00:55:527 (1) - Pretty useless New combo... Delete it or move it to 00:54:994 (5) -
7. 01:17:184 (3) - Add a clap at the beginning? It would follow the drums and it would fit with the 1/1 clap pattern you're using at 01:17:184 (3,1) -
8. 01:36:355 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Well,it would be better if you use a pattern like this in this part... If you want to use this new pattern I have done for you,just copy the following code replacing the older ones:
   
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   424,308,96355,6,0,B|409:346|370:363,2,80,4|0|0
   355,239,96888,2,0,B|317:256|278:240,2,80,8|0|0
   352,140,97421,2,0,B|313:125|296:86,2,80,4|0|0
   436,92,97953,2,0,B|419:54|435:15,2,80,12|0|0
   464,204,98486,5,8
   464,204,98841,1,8

1. 00:44:521 (3) - move this in x:304 y:304 to make it equidistant with 00:43:811 (1,2) - ?

S o r d a wrote:

moe moe Mythol sama!

inaba-tan wrote:

may i make taiko diff ?

BeatofIke wrote:

Map so pro!

alacat wrote:

Hi :3 moe Mythol

Sorry for the delay.

[Easy]
●00:30:320 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse? clap better o.o
●00:34:935 - add note ? and add S:C1 clap. follow drum sound ? i think there should be clap sounds here . ok
●00:39:551 (1) - remove whistle? ok
●00:43:101 (1) - add finish on the slider's reverse? I hear cymbal o.o keep clap
●00:48:071 (1) - volume down for 40% 00:48:071 - ~ 00:53:752 - ok
●00:56:592 (1) - add finish at the head instead of whistle? hear stronger sound . theres almost nothing in music o.o so keep whistle
●00:58:012 - ^ same,above.
●01:02:273 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse? ok
●01:20:024 - volume down for 40%. finish is too large >.< change to 50%

[Insane]
●01:33:160 (6) - move to x:88 y:204? equal spacing better imo o.o fixed

good diff!Sry that I can't find any suggestion.

Duca <3

good luck ~~

10:04 Roddie: : hi
10:04 Mythol: : hi
10:05 Roddie: : there is a couple of things I'd like to discuss about your map
10:05 Roddie: : do you have the time to go through irc modding?
10:05 Mythol: : i have time~
10:05 Roddie: : okay
10:06 Roddie: : its for this map
10:06 : *Roddie is editing (Duca - Ashita Tenki ni Naare)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/53158]
10:06 Mythol: : yeah
10:06 Roddie: : 00:27:835-
10:06 Roddie: : this timing point here
10:07 Roddie: : why is it necessary on this easy diff but not your insane diff?'
10:07 Mythol: : eh
10:07 Mythol: : i feel the clap is too loud in easy
10:07 Mythol: : but theres a triple there on insane so its not as noticeable
10:08 Mythol: : i can remove though i dont mind
10:08 Roddie: : okay
10:08 Roddie: : 00:29:610 (3)-
10:09 Roddie: : I think you forgot to add a clap on the end of that slider
10:09 Mythol: : yeah
10:10 Roddie: : 00:30:320 (1)-
10:10 Roddie: : you forgot to add a clap on the repeat
10:10 Mythol: : yup
10:13 Roddie: : your easy is all set
10:14 Roddie: : jumping to insane now
10:14 Mythol: : k
10:20 Roddie: : 00:58:989 (x)-
10:20 Roddie: : consider adding a note here
10:21 Roddie: : this will be formed part of a note triple (:
10:21 Roddie: : this actually sounds and plays well imo
10:22 Roddie: : its something like this
10:22 Roddie: : http://puu.sh/HE6q
10:22 Mythol: : yeah... i hear it in the song
10:22 Mythol: : but idk..
10:22 Roddie: : experiment with this and see o:
10:26 Mythol: : i dont want to add it ;_;
10:26 Roddie: : okay
10:27 Roddie: : any reason why?
10:28 Mythol: : it feels really out of place 
10:28 Mythol: : music's pretty quiet here o.o
10:28 Mythol: : and also it would be the only double triplet in the map
10:28 Mythol: : 01:09:373 (1,2) - and this wouldn't have it
10:29 Roddie: : okay

1. as we discussed in-game, the source is from a video game and its classified as an eroge game, as well as a visual novel. So, both eroge and visual can be added to the tags.

1. 00:53:752 (1)-A finish on the beginning sounds better than a clap. You can replace that clap with a finish or have both!

alacat wrote:

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[kosiga's Normal]
●AR -1?　Easyとの差があり、少し早いと思います。 このまま様子を見ます:3
●00:04:048 (2) - 終点にwhistle追加 fixed
●00:48:071 (1) - 折り返しにwhistle追加 ^
●00:58:012 (4) - 始点のwhistleをFinishに変更?サビの前なのでfinishの方がいいと思います sorry, no change ><
●01:34:225 (2,3) - spacingは (0.90x)と一定ですが狭くかんじました。少しだけ間をあけてみてはどうでしょうか change it~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/367625

Roddie wrote:

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kosiga's Normal

1. 00:53:752 (1)-A finish on the beginning sounds better than a clap. You can replace that clap with a finish or have both! change to finish

Byakugan249 wrote:

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[kosiga's Normal]
00:04:048 (2) - add a whistle at the beginning. it'll keep the consistency pattern going from the slider, and the vocals tone is still the same from the 1st note. I put a whistle for the sound effects. so put whistle to end of the slider
00:13:989 - same as easy. sorry, no change ><
00:22:509 - how about adding a spinner here? it'll be consistent with the easy and insane diff, and it goes along with the guitar for this part. ok~ added
00:38:131 (3) - hmm how about making this a curved slider? if you do, then this note would blanket the next slider in this combo, and i think that would flow smoother during gameplay. sorry, no change ==
00:41:681 (1) - add a clap at the beginning. it matches the drums in the song. it just sounds empty without that clap to cover it up.　I did not put this intentionally. because anteroposterior volume is different. but I put clap different in volume here~
00:56:947 (2) - try making a curved slider here. it'll blanket the 1st half of that wave slider which would be nicer and for flow to the next note. sorry, no change ==
01:02:983 (6) - you forgot to add a whistle at the beginning. add it there to keep the whistle pattern going because it suddenly stops and it keeps going. This is intentional. Because I put a whistle for the sound effects, I think it is not necessary
01:04:758 (4) - this repeat slider sounds unfitting because it shows no flow in the vocals. to make it flow to the vocals a lot accurate, do this. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this. I think this is not a problem x.x
01:07:953 (2) - the whistle isn't loud enough to match the cymbals, so replace it for a finish. ok. fixed~
01:16:119 (4) - same as 01:04:758.
01:27:835 (1) - same as 01:07:953 but at the repeat arrow. no change.
01:40:616 (1) - extend this spinner by 1/4 because that's where the guitar really ends. I felt that now was correct ><!

Frostmourne wrote:

kosiga's Normal
01:16:119 (4) - if you did the rhythm like this. It would be better a lot because it does exactly follow the vocal and doesn't sound odd It is a very good idea. but sorry, no change =x= I think that even the present rhythm matches　

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01:20:912 (2) - add clap both start and tail , I think it sounds better than only tail..　　ok~ fixed
01:37:953 (3) - add clap at the end , it will be combined with next note and will sound better a lot too ^

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