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B2IN

B2IN 2012-06-03T13:04:42+00:00

Hi ~ Melophobia

[General]
fine :3
[Normal]
00:43:558 (3) - make curve slider.

Normal is no longer a need to fix it imo

[Kitsuneko's Hard]
00:26:819 (4) - try stack at the note number 4. it is better.
01:21:601 (9) - add note. It sounds good
[Insane]
00:23:123 (3) - I think it should overlapped perfectly 00:22:253 (5) at the end
00:53:123 (4) - remove nc ? it is nc for triangular patterns?
00:53:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try this :d

SPOILER

00:54:862 (3) - neatly stack to 00:53:340 (2) .
01:07:036 (5) - nc
01:18:775 (1) - Consider moving.01:17:471 (3,4,5) - this stack touches it
01:22:688 (5) - nc
01:22:253 (3) - down a bit.

Good luck for rank.

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-03T13:26:41+00:00

B2IN wrote:
Hi ~ Melophobia

[General]
fine :3
[Normal]
00:43:558 (3) - make curve slider. good suggestion, fixed!
SPOILER
Normal is no longer a need to fix it imo

[Insane]
00:23:123 (3) - I think it should overlapped perfectly 00:22:253 (5) at the end oops, fixed
00:53:123 (4) - remove nc ? it is nc for triangular patterns? hmm, okay. it seems pointless
00:53:993 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try this :d it's fine because of Stack Leniency
SPOILER
00:54:862 (3) - neatly stack to 00:53:340 (2) . it's fine, i think (1,2,3) should be triangle
01:07:036 (5) - nc no need imo
01:18:775 (1) - Consider moving.01:17:471 (3,4,5) - this stack touches it it's fine
01:22:688 (5) - nc no need imo
01:22:253 (3) - down a bit. why?

Good luck for rank.

thank you for modding

B2IN

B2IN 2012-06-03T13:39:06+00:00

01:22:253 (3) - ただoverlapが気になった w w
あなたの言葉通り、問題なることはありません

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-04T06:10:20+00:00

B2IN wrote:
01:22:253 (3) - ただoverlapが気になった w w
あなたの言葉通り、問題なることはありません

hmm i still think it's fine... thanks anyways.

Kitsuneko

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Kitsuneko 2012-06-04T09:23:18+00:00

all done

http://puu.sh/yKFI

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-06-04T15:39:43+00:00

updated~

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-06-06T05:03:00+00:00

from challenge queue

[Insane]
00:25:297 - I suggest add newcombo here to make the random jumps easier to read
01:07:036 - ^
01:22:688 - ^

others are fine, really nice map
call me back after this :3

edit: rechecked and bubbled

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abalee 2012-07-07T10:01:59+00:00

add a silenced soft-sliderslide2 for [normal] will be better. call me if you are willing to change it.

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-07-07T10:08:44+00:00