This map is good and fun :3
I have some suggestions here that I think can improve the map
[General]
- try to unify kiai-times? It's not hard to do.
- Good hitsound, but I think they're a bit silent, hard to catch. I sightly increase the volume. Try it if you agree http://puu.sh/E1X9
- set preview time 82476, which can prevent loss of the first word from vocal
[Easy]
01:02:923 (1) - use slidertick to fill the missing clap(and the likes)? It could prevent hitsound blank
01:10:423 (2) - I find note2 is not on the centre of the curve made by sldier1, here is code for tiny adjuesment
184,203,70423,1,2
104,147,70780,1,2
160,67,71137,1,2
240,123,71494,6,0,B|316:147|400:139,1,160,4|0
461,320,72923,2,0,B|385:296|301:304,1,160,2|2
01:22:923 (1) - no hitsound here? it sounds not bad though (you used clap on insane)
01:47:209 (3) -
http://puu.sh/E22502:02:566 (5) - no whistle
[suirenn's Normal]
also, add some clap to the kiai time?
01:57:209 (1) -
http://puu.sh/E24l02:01:851 (4) - no whshitle, it feels bad blended with finish
[Rare's Hard]
00:30:780 (7) - a bit too close to the previous slider. do like this
http://puu.sh/E25C00:52:387 (2) - clap? just saying
[Insane]
00:45:691 (7) - nazi. spacing different
00:46:316 (3) - ^ not really necessary one
00:47:209 (6) - sharp jump, NC at least. also move to x342 y347
00:54:352 (1) - I'm not sure with the sldier. It's hidden by note and hitburst so a stack might not that fits here. It'll be good if you move this slider a bit away
01:07:923 (4,5,6,7,1) - pentagon fix
232,196,67923,1,2
332,96,68102,1,0
457,161,68280,1,8
432,299,68459,1,0
295,324,68637,6,0,B|251:352|251:352|195:296|115:332,2,200,2|2|2
01:25:780 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - hidoi 1/4 jump. how about do some changes to make it easier. like this 01:37:923 (7,8,9) -
01:40:780 (4) - asymmetric, reshape it plz
01:57:387 (2) - move it a big right?
lol I wrote too many. Don't force yourself to fix things, call me reb if you don't change anything. also call me back if you update